Shinjirin Clan [0/3]

Name: Shinjirin

Kekkei Genkai:Clan's members eyes allow him to predict and copy any Taijutsu attack coming from an opponent.(Cannot copy no Ninjutsu or Genjutsu) When activated the star like pupil on his eyes gets bigger and the surroundings gets color grey. The second part of this kekkei genkai is that it will make you go faster for a few senconds, but it will take more chakra than an usual jutsu.This second part was passed on to Maverick from his mother. This second part only last for about 15 seconds.(2 posts)



Secret Clan Jutsu: (2 Posts)
Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Name: Great Phoenix of Hell
Rank:C-rank
Element:Fire
Description:
The user first creates any handsign neccesary. Then he inhales hair and then breathes out a Phoenix form of fire. The Phoenix can be atleast 5'0 tall.The Phoenix's temperature is about of 100' degrees so by just standing next to it, might make you sweat.


History:
Not much about this clan, it is mostly know for his uniqueness, and similarity to the Sharigan. This clan is also called the strangers. Most people in this clan live on mountains away from the village where they can't be seen practicing at all.
Maverick got his eyes from his father, his mother wasn't part of the clan and didn't had the Kekkei Genkai but luckily Maverick got it from his father which was the only, not only but the last one to have this skill. His father when he died he past his eyes to another child so they reproduce afterwards.

For now there's only three clan members, all their goals is too reproduce their clan members with another woman(Ya know what i mean,hehe),The second part of this kekkei genkai is that it will make you go faster for a few seconds, but it will take more chakra than an usual jutsu.

Maverick found out that he had this Kekkei Genkai when he graduated from the Ninja Academy. He also found out that he had part of his Kekkei Genkai from his mother, which nobody knew she had one. This part of his kekkei genkai is mostly like a second part for him.His mother's clan was mostly unknown, and nobody knew they existed but her husband.Her kekkei genkai made her go as fast as 30 to 45 mph.

The three members left are under cover, they are living hidden. Only one of them is an adult and the other two are siblings. They hide for certain reasons, first people want to anihilate them for being one of the strongest clan in the cloud village,furthermore people outside the clan want this power for their themself, A way of taking their power is by taking their eyes.

It's done

Kekei Genkai:
"allow him to predict any Taijutsu attack coming from an opponent.(Cannot copy no Ninjutsu or Genjutsu)" Does the kekei genkai predict or copy the taijutsu decide.
"The side effect of this kekkei genkai is that it will make you go faster for a few senconds" How is that a side effect

Clan jutsu
"Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Name: Great Phoenix of Hell
Rank:C-rank
Element:Fire
Description:
The opponent first creates any handsign neccesary then, he inhales hair and then breathes out a Phoenix form of figher. The Phoenix can be atleast 5'0 tall.The Phoenix temperature is about of 500' degrees so by just standing next to it, might make you sweat."
The opponent??? How does it last? If it is that warm, you might also take damage put in a radius for an area who is affected.

Write some more on the clan history.

Watch your grammar and spelling!!!

Added a little bit more in the clan history, and explained how Maverick got the side effect. I decreased the jutsus temperature. And i fixed any mispelled words.

How long the jutsu last 1 post or more, if you don't specify it, it will only last one post.

Done

changed the keekei genkei, good.


approved.

Thanks