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PostSubject: Cheshire Morbid   Cheshire Morbid EmptySun Apr 26, 2009 3:28 am

Name:Morbid, Cheshire

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Village: Sunagakure
Rank:Genin

Physical Appearance: Cheshire Morbid Girl-1-1
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Element:Wind

Weapon of Choice:Neko Gauntlets


Fighting Type:Taijutsu, Ijutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Cheshire Morbid   Cheshire Morbid EmptySun Apr 26, 2009 11:14 am

A few things.
1) Genin cannot be 18. please no older than 14 or 15
2) What is Ijutsu? if it is Eye techniques, it's called doujutsu.
3) I assume this isnt finished, it only has one technique.
4) History needs to be in arcs (I.e, childhood, academy, genin, etc)
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PostSubject: Re: Cheshire Morbid   Cheshire Morbid EmptySun Apr 26, 2009 4:24 pm

The history doesn't HAVE to be in Arcs its just recommended. Second, Genin can be older than 15 we have 16 year old ones here but if your gonna be a 18 year old genin you must have a reason why your so old and such a low rank..

This is why we don't usually allow it.

Nate you gotta remember people like Kabuto are older than 15 and they are genin. The main characters are only young true, but they are the rookies in the Chuunin Exams as it states..
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Maruko~San





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PostSubject: Re: Cheshire Morbid   Cheshire Morbid EmptySun Apr 26, 2009 11:22 pm

It isn't finished, but thanks for taking the time to look it over.

Ijutsu is medical jutsu.

I thought she should be 18 for the fact that she left Otogakure in the middle of her genin training and traveled for a few years as a missing-nin before settling at Sunagakure.

But if it'll be a big problem, the I suppose I could change it?

EDIT: I added the jutsu....I think there might be too many, but i'd like to check with you people.
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PostSubject: Re: Cheshire Morbid   Cheshire Morbid EmptyMon Apr 27, 2009 12:32 am

I did consider asking you to lower your age but the reason's fine. Approved
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