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Karen_6275
| Subject: Onjuun-Tame Clan (WIP) Thu May 07, 2009 4:49 am | |
| Clan Name: Onjuun-tame Location- Spoiler:
Country: Konohagakure (Leaf Country) Household: Located on the southeastern edges of Konohagakure Description: The household looks like a simple two-story manor. There's two floors, the top floor the bedrooms, the second floor the office and living appliances. The entire building is surrounded by elven foot electric fences that are ultimatly disguised as tall, perfectly trimmed hedges. There's one entrance, and that's the north entrance.
~The North Entrance~ The N. Entrance is an eleven foot wooden, two foot thick door that is always guarded by Teishi Onjuun-Tame, two guarding at day, three at night, and is arched at the top. The door itself is completly engraved with long scratches and japanese letterings rising from the borders that read: Onjuun-Tame Household. Written over and over to complete the bordering. The wood is dark and shined, glossy almost. Giving it a plastic sheen to the door.
~The Front Yard~ The front yard isn't very large as most householders' would appeal for. Its simply ten by seven feet large and covered completly in green, dew dripped grass. The path to the four stairs to the front door are engraved, round, greyed stones that bare the clan symbol. Seven stepping stones that curve like a snake to the steps. To the right, there is a patch of multi colored flowers. Brilliantly displayed ferns and petals of miraculous beauty kept up by the Master Onjuun-Tame Leader's wife. There's quite the variety in the enormous bush sized bundle of growing plants. Possibly over a hundred that bring the right splash of color to the simple yard.
~First Floor~ Heading from the yard to the steps, the steps are simply old wood that look like they would creak by a pin drop (That actually don't) and are intentionally antiquied in a greyed blue paint. The stairs then lead you to a tall, ten foot, double door. Detailed glass bears a crystaline twist with the curls of the iced flowers in the window glass. Above the door is the clan symbol, engraved directly into the greyed blue wood. Entering the doors, you are led into a simple, ballet studio wood floored room that's the average sized living room. Six paces to your right, against the right wall, is a brown teacher's desk where a computer and file cabinents surround the Front Desk Assisstant in her black rolling, leather chair. Straight ahead, there's a winding black copper stair case that winds up to the second floor. Its railing is a twisted vine, the steps simple dimond criss crossed metal sheets of the black copper. Just behind the stair case, lies an arch entry in the cream colored walls. This entry leads into the kitchen where there are still the glossy wooden floors.
The counters are simple sand papered wood that has been painted black to accent the white walls and white appliances. The counter covers the wall next to the door, the walll to the left and the wall across. There's an oval window above the sink in the counter across. The counters, each a cubborad underneath that are painted white, and above a couple, seperated by three feet, a white cupboard a wall. In the middle of the room sits a long table with fifteen chairs. The kitchen also sits as the dining hall. Above the table, a glass chandelier that is completly out of character for the room.
~Second Floor~ Up the black copper, winding stair case leads to a long hallway that takes two directions. One to the left and one to the right from the rising out of the stair case. Down each hallway is four doors, two on each wall that lead to a specific room. Every room looks almost exactly the same, except for maybe a few accomadations for the occupants. Entering into the door down the left hallway, the first, this is the Teishi Room. Against every wall is a bunk bed. Every bed is neatly dressed with white sheets and a cream colored blanket. The barings on the bunk beds are black copper against the cream colored walls. On the left wall is a simple brown teachers desk with a three comparted, gray filing cabinet to the right. This is where the Teishi do their paper work or whatever studies they wish. On the right wall, next to the bunk bed, is a book shelf. The book shelf is loaded with books from histories of the leaf and their clan, to fantasy books for pleasure. Also, against each bunk bed, on eaither side, are wooden trunks. This is where personal belongings are kept. The entire room is a simple size of a bedroom and kept neat and tidy at all times. There are eight rooms. One for each level of the clan (Shishou, Teishi, Shoshinsha, Ro-Myou, and the Master Onjuun-Tame Leader), one simple library the size of a baby's bedroom, a storage room, and a guest room. Also one tiny closet (That doesn't count as a room) that's the bathroom. One sink, rug, toilet and shower.
~The Back Yard~ The back yard is actually very large for its purpose. The yard is thirty by thirty one feet and completly dirt. There is no trace, besides the electric fence hedges, of plant life anywhere. Standing directly in the middle is a twenty by twelve by sixteen fenced and covered shed that serves as a sort of 'storage unit' for the Clan's Beasts. Inside, its dark, one lone lamp hanging from the ceiling is the only trace of light. There is only one door and its bolted and guarded by Shishou. The fencing that is the walls and ceilings is also electric to protect the village from escapeses. Inside, the walls are lined and stacked with cages of many sizes. Most cages are filled with a beast or animal of some sort. Each cage bears a tag of a certain color that states what habitat each beast is from.
Behind the shed is a large, humming box. In this box, locked and latched, is the generator, in which all the electricity is produced. The power comes from the turning of a four branched paddle deep in the ground that is turning from the force of the the underground stream. Hydroelectric power, very effective. In the uper right hand corner lies a scorched platform that reeks of dead and molded blood. A pole sticks out of the ground and tied to it is a chain with a large leather collar attached. This is where exterminations are performed for beasts that are of no use any longer. Symbol: - Spoiler:
Kekkei Genkai:- Spoiler:
Onjuun-Tame Metsuki Rank: D-B (Levels Below in list/spoiler under 'Rankings and Their Levels') Type: Kekki Genkai Element: Mental (Or N/A) Range: (Levels Below in list/spoiler under 'Rankings and Their Levels') Time: (Levels Below in list/spoiler under 'Rankings and Their Levels') Description: This kekki genkai of the Onjuun - Tame Clan allows the Onjuun-Tame clan member the ability to control the minds of beasts for a period of time. The user activates by the hand sign 'Onjuun-Tame Enslavement Hand Sign' (Used only by the clan; creation spoken of in the 'History') and, when the jutsu is put into use, the eyes of the member and of the beast are given slight fade to them. The user then can control any beast (On their level) and guide them by finger movements (Almost like invisible puppet strings) to attack, to defend, practically anything that the beast was capable of in a normal state, otherwise stated: to its limits. Also, when a beast has the jutsu used upon them, for a second, they fall limp as the jutsu take's over the mind. The jutsu can only be used on animal creatures; not humans. Weakness(es): If user is using maximum of beasts at a time, user must the stay still. Beasts can be killed. Secret Clan Jutsu:- Spoiler:
Meshi Pasu (Food Path) Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Element: Mental or N/A Range: Two (2) yards(YD) ((Six(6) Feet (FT) )) Time: Six minutes Maximum (One hundred twenty (120) Seconds (s) ) Description: This genjutsu allows a Onjuun Tame Member to cause the target's mind to actually believe food is a certain amount of feet away. Used to draw targets to traps. Main targets are beasts. Sometimes used on easy-to-trick, hungry opponents. Weakness(es): Not always targets will be drawn; Member using jutsu must remain still with the final hand sign.
Rinji Singai (Temporary Shock) Rank: D Typer: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Range: Must touch target Time: Ten (10) Minutes (Min.) Maximum. Description: this jutsu allows members to temporarily stun their targets for a maximum of ten minutes. Mainly used to ease targets' fight against being caged (If creature) or to decrease battle (If ninja). Also, since head will be left moving, used for interviewing struggling, troublesome targets. Weakness(es): Must touch the target; Difficult for close countering if opponent is stronger; Once ten minutes is up, and gradually towards too, movement is able to be grasped by target.
Koutai (Shift) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Mental or N/A Range: Maximum distance in apply, three (3) feet(FT) Maximum distance from body thirty(30) feet (FT) Time: Twenty(20) minutes (Min) Maximum before creature wants control Description: This jutsu allows Onjuun-Tame Member to send their mind into a creature's and gives control of creature as if the creature's body is their own. But, if creature fights, causes difficulty getting in the mind and out. Weakness(es): Human's body 'faints' (Becomes useless and vulnerable) and is able to be attacked easily. IF body is wounded, mind is hurt and jutsu is 'shut off'.
Shou za Kago (Call of the Caged) Rank: C-A Type: Summon Element: N/A Range: (Depending on Level of Member) (Refer to 'Rankings and Their Levels') Time: Unlimited until Death of the Beast Requires: Onjuun-Tame Metsueki/ Personal Onjuun-Tame Summons Scroll/ Certain Names and species written in the Onjuun-Tame Summons Scroll for proof of ownership Description: This summoning jutsu allows the Onjuun-Tame members to bring into battle beasts from their cages of the Onjuun-Tame Household. An ‘Onjuun-Tame Summons Scroll’ scroll must be used with the usual drop of blood and, as required by the Leader of the Onjuun-Tame Clan, beast must be returned after use. (Refer to ‘Rules Of Clan’ -Rule 6- about this jutsu if you are a member of the Onjuun-Tame Clan) Weakness(es): Beasts can loose control and attack member; Beasts can run away if the ‘Onjuun-Tame Metsueki’ is not used quick enough; Beast can be killed in battle
Bokumetsu (Extermination) Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Range: Two (2) Feet(FT) Maximum from Target Time: Usually takes Three(3) Minutes(Min) to kill target Description: This jutsu painfully uses lightning charka to the mind and body of the target. Forcefully, the jutsu, causes muscles to defiantly clench and contract so fast and tightly that muscles rip away from bones and can sometimes accidentally tear open organs or crack fragile bones. Weakness(es): If concentration isn’t kept, jutsu can be ‘cut off’ and target freed and/or alive if not dead already from the pain; User must keep hand sign held. (Refer to ‘Rules Of Clan’ for what this jutsu is used ONLY on/for)
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| | | Karen_6275
| Subject: Re: Onjuun-Tame Clan (WIP) Thu May 07, 2009 5:47 am | |
| History: - Spoiler:
The history of the Onjuun-Tame Clan begins a little over a century ago. There isn't an exact date (To be let known to the world), however a little over a century is the best guess. The clan all together is probably one of the most strict there is. Rules are specific and have always been VERY enforced; discipline utterly brutal. ( Rules can be found in ‘Rules Of Clan’ ) The clan actually runs like a military base, following rankings and respect for each ranking. (Rankings can be found in 'Rankings and Their Levels' ) Every member, too, is treated like a simple officer. Being raised to face the most frightening beasts and still remain a calm composure. The Clan, in entirety, serves their country as 'Beast Hunters'. They score the world, or have gruesome monsters brought to them, and break them. Onjuun-Tame can take almost any beast, monster, or crazed animal and train them to be obedient to the highest bidder. They bring in monsters to help protect their country or to make a living by sell. However, as said before, the clan hadn't always been this way. It’s basically a brand new clan, and a true beginning is required.
Beginning Arc/ ZutaZuta A little over a century ago, there once was a jounin born with a strange ability to control the minds of his canines. He was found, orphaned, and adopted by the Inuzuka. So, nobody seemed to pay mind to the mysterious man. This man's name was ZutaZuta Inuzuka and he was twenty three when he had finally had enough of his clan.
ZutaZuta hated with all his heart the way his clan treated everything. Everything was about friendship and happiness and going along with life with a big grin and a fluffy puppy by your side. This was NOT ZutaZuta's idea of a shinobi. His views differed. ZutaZuta believed in COMPLETE obedience. Hardcore training and not letting any feelings be realized by others. He believed, with his whole heart, that a ninja should be rid of emotions entirely in order to be of any use. And one day, a certain Inuzuka, there is no name of in histories, pushed ZutaZuta off the edge.
In the journals of ZutaZuta, he stated, "Today was sunny and bright, I was on my way to an Inuzuka Clan Meeting to present my new idea of raising the canines when HE came along.
This man, one of the worst of our clan, has been giving me a lot of issues lately. Always telling me how droll I am, how out of the family I am. Even having the nerve to call me the black sheep of the pack. Insult after insult and criticism on how I treat my pets and beasts. As if my hobby of catching monsters and breaking them was of any business to him! Today, though, he stepped out of line with a few words, 'Why can't you just let the Clan's Traditions be and get on with your life, ZutaZuta?' He stated to me. 'Why can't you stop scaring the children and be on with it? Those beasts in the cages, they've become a nuisance now. I'm sorry, but say good bye. The elders have sent me to take them out.' I turned, in fury, and proceeded to attack. All my hard work, all my years of training them and now they were to be taken from me? By a blasted Inuzuka? No more.I killed him, that day."
That was the end of ZutaZuta's journal of the beginning of the Onjuun-Tame Clan. During the ending of the year, ZutaZuta gathered his things and called himself Inuzuka no more. The Inuzuka clan still hates the Onjuun-Tame clan even till today.
ZutaZuta met up with seven others whom seemed to have a similar ability to his own. They too had been wishing to train the beasts their eyes could catch minds of. Coming together, they called themselves Onjuun-Tame. Soon branding themselves with the new Clan Symbol (As seen under the Clan Name ) and scored the world and created an underground base that was filled with cages and weapons and fences. This base serving even till today and located on the outskirts of their country, hidden in secret.
'Onjuun-Tame Enslavement Hand Sign' Creation
ZutaZuta, Master Onjuun-Tame Leader at this time, had at once thought that the activation of his ability was the control of the mind. However, during practice upon wild anacondas, he had to twist his hand to avoid getting bit, hit it upon a tree trunk, and his focused Chakra had activated his ability. Focusing, he ‘tamed’ the wild snakes and had them sent to unconsciousness. His assistant, one of the seven, had been observing on the sidelines and had been signing what ZutaZuta had signed. Asking later about what the sign was.
ZutaZuta hadn’t a clue on what, but he had a clue on curiosity. The following sunrise, he and the assistant were sent to practice using the hand sign to activate, instead of wasted time on concentrating without. Finding the key hand sign, the secret was given unto the others and a name that followed: Onjuun-Tame Enslavement Hand Sign. Otherwise known as the ‘Onjuun-Tame Metsuki no jutsu’ activator.
Generations Beginning
It wasn't long until two of the seven of the original Onjuun-Tame Group suddenly decided they loved each other and had a couple kids. The children, fraternal twins, each had the same abilities as their parents and were taught to behave and how to control the ‘gift’. A name, there on, was placed to the gift for future generations: ‘Onjuun-Tame Metsuki no Jutsu’. Along within the year of the birth of the twins, other children, seven others, and orphans of village wars, were found and brought to the clan. They were trained in the same as the twins and brought up to become the next generations of the dangerous Onjuun-Tame. All members now marked.
Today
Today, the Onjuun-Tame Clan stands, still, enemies of the Inuzuka but with new clan Jutsu, advancement in the ‘Onjuun-Tame Metsuki’, and have been making great profit off of the beasts and monsters they train and sell. They are one of the greatest allies to their country and have generations of ninja that could interest even Akatsuki with their strengths. There are twenty seven members ranking from the Ro-Myou to the Master Onjuun-Tame Leader. This is the Onjuun-Tame Clan. Beast Tamers. Rules of the Clan- Spoiler:
1. Onjuun-Tame WILL live for the Clan and ONLY the Clan. 2. Rankings will be followed with RESPECT. NO falling out of line. 3. EVERY Onjuun-Tame is required to keep up his/her training upon self and beast(s). 4. In any form of ‘fighting’, such as battle, sparring, training, there will NOT be any emotion. Emotion gives weakness. 5. Every Onjuun-Tame member is REQUIRED to keep ‘Onjuun-Tame Summons Scroll’ on person at ALL TIMES. NO excuses. 6. ~Using ‘Onjuun-Tame Summons Scroll’~ - Every member will ONLY have his/her amount of beast ACCORDING to level. - Every member’s beast WILL be returned back to it’s rightful cage after use or suffer punishment from the current Master Onjuun-Tame Leader. - Certain names and species of the beasts of the Onjuun-Tame member WILL be written in the Onjuun-Tame Summons Scroll for proof of ownership. -If/When a beast is killed, for a new beast to be written into the scroll, PERMISSION, APPROVAL of a chosen beast and SIGNATURE of the Master Onjuun-Tame Leader is REQUIRED. 7. ALL members WILL speak NOTHING of the secrets of the Onjuun-Tame Clan to any NON-members WITHOUT permission from Master Onjuun-Tame Leader. 8. ANY granted mission from KAGE/Master Onjuun-Tame Leader that CANNOT be finished in a day’s time and/or requires out of village leave WILL be notified directly to the Assistant-Master ( Master Onjuun-Tame Leader’s assistant ) or WILL be considered a BREAKAGE of Rule 9. 9. ALL Onjuun-Tame members will be in the base BY high moon’s last strike (midnight). 10. Rooms WILL be kept clean and chores WILL be kept up. 11.OBEIDIENCE WILL be EXPECTED. As is RESPECT. 12. Bokumetsu no jutsu WILL ONLY be used on the beasts needed for extermination. There will NOT be any of this jutsu used upon ANYONE that is NOT beast. UNLESS granted BY the Master Onjuun-Tame Leader Whom ALSO MUST have granted PERMISSION by the KAGE. 13. ALL members, when by the age of childhood’s end (ten), WILL be branded with the Onjuun-Tame Clan Symbol to bear witness and proof of membership. Also to show member’s loyalty. 'Rankings and Their Levels'- Spoiler:
Ro-Myou ~ Academy Students Controls: Animals less intelligent than a rat baby Amount: One Beast Jutsu Capabilities: E-D -Rinji Singai (Temporary Shock) -Meshi Pasu (Food Path) Obeys: Shoshinsha to Master Onjuun-Tame Leader
Shoshinsha ~ Genin Controls: Animals less intelligent than a bear Amount: Two Beasts Jutsu Capabilities: E- C -Onjuun-Tame Metsuki -Rinji Singai (Temporary Shock) -Meshi Pasu (Food Path) -Koutai (Shift) -Shou za Kago (Call of the Caged) Obeys: Teishi to Master Onjuun-Tame Leader
Teishi ~ Chuunin Controls: Animals less intelligent than a tiger Amount: Three Beasts Jutsu Capabilities: E-B -Onjuun-Tame Metsuki -Rinji Singai (Temporary Shock) -Meshi Pasu (Food Path) -Koutai (Shift) -Shou za Kago (Call of the Caged) -Bokumetsu (Extermination) Obeys: Shishou to Master Onjuun-Tame Leader
Shishou ~ Jounin Controls: Animals less intelligent than a wolf Amount: Four Jutsu Capabilities: E-A -Onjuun-Tame Metsuki -Rinji Singai (Temporary Shock) -Meshi Pasu (Food Path) -Koutai (Shift) -Shou za Kago (Call of the Caged) -Bokumetsu (Extermination) Obeys: Master Onjuun-Tame Leader
Shishou Onjuun-Tame Sousui (Master Onjuun-Tame Leader) Controls: Every animal imaginable that is less intelligent than a demon Amount: Six Jutsu Capabilities: E-S -Onjuun-Tame Metsuki -Rinji Singai (Temporary Shock) -Meshi Pasu (Food Path) -Koutai (Shift) -Shou za Kago (Call of the Caged) -Bokumetsu (Extermination) Obeys: No one besides Kage Clan Creatures/Pets
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| | | Karen_6275
| Subject: Re: Onjuun-Tame Clan (WIP) Thu May 07, 2009 5:47 am | |
| Just modified with some extra information about location and such. | |
| | | Fujimaru Timaki Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: Onjuun-Tame Clan (WIP) Thu May 07, 2009 8:32 pm | |
| The post in general is very good, and detailed, but I have a problem with the following:
Animal control: The difference between sice of animal that a Genin and a Chuunin can control.
Besides most lethal animal are smaller than whale, so there isn't a point in the mentioning the size. The ability to control should be limited by the difficulty of intelligence of the animal. An elephant is far easier to control than a tiger, eventhough the tiger is far smaller.
In other words remove the size limiter and put a intelligence or rank limiter on.
Then I'll approve this Clan | |
| | | Karen_6275
| Subject: Re: Onjuun-Tame Clan (WIP) Sun May 10, 2009 12:07 pm | |
| Fixed up and wow, I really should have thought of that. It was so very obvious on how it should have been scaled in the first place. ^_^
Also, I was wondering if, not to be rude, [:Near Oldowa could:] erase that post and/or put it somewhere elsse so the information of the clan doesn't get mixed up? I'd put it all together, but it is much too big. Trust me I've modified it at least twenty times in attempt.
One more thing, if I may, am I allowed/should create a list of creatures for the clan in the Pet section? | |
| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: Onjuun-Tame Clan (WIP) Tue May 12, 2009 5:07 am | |
| Yes you should. Do that, get them approved, post a link here and then I'll approve. | |
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