Niku natio's wepion

Name: hagane ganseki (steel rock)

Appearance:
blade lenght 24" handle lenght 6.75" red dragon handle.

Special Abilities: The hagane ganseki has the ability to channel earth chakra to unlock Naito clan's earth style Kenjutsu and also has the ability to create a layer of stone over the sword. This can be used to keep the sword from cutting through people during combat, and also to protect the sword from being broken.

Origin: this is a sword passed down in the natio clan by his uncle . yet this sword was made by one of the earliest of the naito clan members Makoto Naito. makoto naito created the sword for the purpose of increseing, those earth based users in the clan's, ability to fight. Also this weapon was a principal forge, which means it was the original made compared to swords that can channel earth chakra. Also the blade was made of molten stone that was cooled just before it was forge and at times will appear to be black.

I need a hell of a lot more detail in origin and special abilities. At least a few sentences.

moved to top

Don't repost it just edit your first post.
I still need more in special abilities. Explain in what ways it enhances it, what it allows you to do, etc. A good example is my weapon:

Quote :

Name: Buin no suitton ken doton (Staff of water and earth

Appearance:
The staff is long and metalic, with a blade on each end.

Special Abilities: Near has the ability to apply the effect of either his water element or his Earth element to the staff. Thus, Near can lengthen the staff with water, turn it into a shield with earth, etc. Near carries this staff using his Kg's tattoo sealing method.

Origin: Near created this staff in the beggining of his dark arc. He started by making it with metal that reacts to his individual chakra. Near trained his kenjutsu ability a lot before making this staff, as having a weapon he did not have the ability to use would be pointless. Near trained for a long time on blending his chakra correctly into the metal. He also trained using his individual affinities in conjunction with his staff. Though he found it useful to use it with the Earth element, he found that it was much more useful to use it with his water element, which he had mastery of. Near created this weapon because he found that he could not rely on his Jutsu alone.

Is this more understandable?

Yes, approved.