New Jutsu for Ichigo(Pending)

Name:chakra absorbing Iron maiden
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire and earth
Description: The user of this proforms hand signs and creates a iron maiden that has no spikes inside.They then step into the iron maiden and shut the door.The iron maiden then absorbs a percentage of the users chakra.This counts as a sacrafice to the iron maiden.The iron maiden then reverts the chakra to strength and speed.A genin will have an increase of twentyfive percent a chunin will have an increase of thirtythree percent and a jounin will have an increase of fifty percent.The maiden will only except a certain amount of chakra from every rank.Genin may sacrafice a maximum of one forth of thier chakra,chunin can put in one third,and jounin can put in one half.Because this takes metal manipulation genin take three post to proform this jutsu ,chunin take two post and jounin take one post.The increase in speed and strength last for ten post.The set back to this is at the end of the ten post the user will be weakened for five post.So this is really a last ditch effort jutsu.

Name: lead ball jutsu
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth and Fire
Description: The user does a series of hand signs.They then start to raise metal particals out of the ground which can be condenced to become a ball of lead.That by chakra control can be lunged at the enemy.The amount that can be created depends on the Shinobi's rank.A genin can only gather enough to create a baseball sized ball.A chunin can create a basketball sized ball and a jounin can create a recking ball sized ball.This takes a genin two post.A chunin and above can do it in one post.

Name: Metal dust controll
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: earth and fire
Description: The user proforms a series of hand signs.Like lead ball jutsu it raises metal particals from the ground to the air.But in this case the user forces the metal particals into the body of the enemy through breathing it in.After that the user can controll the enemys body for a length of time.It takes twopost to breath in enough metal dust to be frozen in place.it takes four post for the enemy to breath in enough metal dust to be controlled.A genin can controll a enemy for one post a chunin can do it for two and a jounin for three.The user cannot make the enemy kill them selves but they can freeze them or make them injure them selves but never kill.

for iron maiden, decrease it to a 5% increase.

Metal dust control, add something about it taking a few posts for the enemy to breathe in.

edited.thank you for the help.

Alrighty. I just need a second oppinion on Iron Maiden. ^_^

You cant sacrifice a bunshin...neither a kage bunshin....

First bunshins are genjutsu and doesnt exist....(in case you are talking of these)

The kage bunshins you cant because if you sacrifice them you will be dead too, its the nature, look at naruto when he looses his kage bunshins because they run out of chakra or get kicked, he will be damaged too...Thats the way so if you sacrificed them, then your body would be sacrificed too...Another example is when sandaime used that forbidden technique in orochimaru....

so should i just get rid of it?

If its from sacrificing bunshins you should take it...

If you find any other thing that you can sacrifice to make that jutsu, edit it and say then "Bump"

bump.

approved.