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PostSubject: Tsuki, Azumi (WIP)   Tsuki, Azumi (WIP) EmptyTue Jul 28, 2009 9:17 pm

General Information:
Name: Azumi Yuuko Tsuki

Nickname/Alias: None

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Looks: Azumi stands 5"10' tall with a slim figure. She keeps her hair down at all time. Her hair has a sort of waveyness to it and is dark brown in the shade, but light brown in the light. Her hair is also very long. Reaching to the top of her hip when down. Wears only Kimonos. Usually pink, white, purple and some type of pattern. Her shoes are usually brown to black flip flops with white socks. Usually seen not wearing shoes at all. Has a black birthmark on her upper check, right under her left eye. Her lips on peach colored and small. Her cheeks and skin are light, but not pale. She has no plemishes or cuts upon her body. Her face is usually seen with no expression at all. Her voice is soft, very soft and hard to hear if you are not listening well enough. Never really seen smiling.

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Personality: When Azumi is around others she is very calm and silent. Only talks when others speak first and to her. Very rare for her to enter someone else's conversation. When alone, she is usally heard singing quietly to herself, "Aimo Aimo".
Song full: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WHpt2qikj1I

Personality Trait's: None

Catch Phrase: None

Clan Information Azumi's clan is unknown.

Clan Name: Houseki

Kekkei Genkai: Crystal Nails-
Description:
During "Crystal Nails", Azumi's nails will turn a peach color. If anyone or anything get's cut by her nails or clawed, they will begin to turn into clear crystal from the inside out until your entire body is crsytalized.
Advantages: Can not be stopped once you've begun to cystalize.
Disadvantages: Takes half a day or so to begin after you've been cut. Can be stopped so long as you've been treated by an A-ranked medical. Takes a while for my nails to go back to normal, so I might hit an ally.

Clan Symbol: Tsuki, Azumi (WIP) 2787608-3-lotus-with-crescent-moon-jewels-and-om-symbol

Clan History: The only history Azumi's clan has is that they were a small clan. Members ranging from 8 to 12 at a time that possesed a crystal like techniques they tried to hide. Also, they were killed off during Orochimaru's creation of the Sound Village. Azumi is the last of the Houseki.


Rank Information:
Rank: None
Village: Missing Nin

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty: Taijutsu and Weaponry
Main: Weaponry
Sub: Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity: Lightning and Water
Main: Lightning
Sub: Water

Special Characteristics: (What things are special about your char, this is optional. This could include special training to increase hand sign speed among many other things.)

Items/Weapons:
Name: White Lotus (sword)
Appearence: (Seen holding it in my picture.)
Rank: A
Special Abilities: Is only a sword.
Origin: This sword was given to Azumi by Orochimaru to improve her swordswomanship.

Jutsus:

Name: Charge
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: Lightning
Description: Bure-do is a jutsu that allows the White Lotus to transmit lightning from Azumi to the to the blade. At first the lighning cannot be seen. Azumi will point the blade to the sky and it will appear that nothing has happened. The lightning will transmit from the blade into the air. Once you breathe in the air that has now been electrofied your body will, unknowingly, be trapped in my jutsu. As long as my sword is not in it's holder the jutsu will not be activated. Once I place the sword into it's holder the jutsu will be activated. An electric charge will surge through your body and explode all of your organs, killing you. The jutsu is a last minute only technique. Azumi rarly uses it.

Background Information:
Azumi was born in a small village. As a child and growing up her attitude and personality have not changed. She was taught how to be a swordswoman the second she could walk. She picked up the fighting skills in mere days. Little is known about her family.

When she was 6 her village was taken over my Orochimaru and her family was killed. Azumi protected herself from Orochimaru's men very easily and Orochimaru took interest in this. He took her as an experiment to try and duplicate her abilities. Nothing he did worked. He gave up on the experimentation for a while and allowed her to live along side him and the other sound ninjas. She was 10 at that point. She grew a great loyalty to Orochimaru not really caring what he did to her or to others. She saw clearing through is kind words or caring and loving to the others, but stayed at his side anyway.

At age 14 she was one of the best swordswoman Orochimaru had. He then began to send her out to put her skills to the test. She has killed 100s on tops of 100s of innocent lives without much thought. She did not care about the lives of others, only her own life.

When she turned 16 Orochimaru sent her out scouting, but she never returned. She ran away from the Sound Village, becoming a missing nin. She travled the world not knowing where to go and killed others who tried to kill her.

RP Sample:

*climbs up the mountain and then sits on a ledge*
*sighs and looks out at the villages below*
They seem peaceful. Well for now that is.


Last edited by Azumi Tsuki on Sun Aug 02, 2009 10:23 pm; edited 3 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Tsuki, Azumi (WIP)   Tsuki, Azumi (WIP) EmptyWed Jul 29, 2009 4:30 am

An RP sample, is basically an example of how you RP, for example, copy and paste some RP from another site, or make one up.

There also isn't a sound village currently.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsuki, Azumi (WIP)   Tsuki, Azumi (WIP) EmptyWed Jul 29, 2009 5:07 am

Also, no Canon references, such as yours to deidara.

You must describe your kekkei genkai, and history is not optional ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Tsuki, Azumi (WIP)   Tsuki, Azumi (WIP) EmptyWed Jul 29, 2009 8:51 pm

Kay~ I go and try to fix now!
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PostSubject: Re: Tsuki, Azumi (WIP)   Tsuki, Azumi (WIP) EmptyWed Jul 29, 2009 10:52 pm

The RP sample should be a lot bigger than that. Atleast one or two paragraphs to be honest.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsuki, Azumi (WIP)   Tsuki, Azumi (WIP) EmptyThu Jul 30, 2009 12:27 am

Lets see if I can more completely help you out here...

Nothing is necessarily 'unknown' such as your rank.

The RP sample can be anything, and shouldn't be based on size. It should be an example of how you would post like any other RP environment. However, skill is based on completion of a post, and thus a reflection of your ability. If your RP sample is smalll or short, thats okay! but it will mean that you will be required to start at a lower rank. The default is genin.

It seems to me that you are more of a...chat based roleplayer. In a forum or formal setting, it works much more like a story, in which details are important. Keep this in mind as you post.

As for the KKG, it seems more like an ability then a KKG, and as is seems a bit 'OP' meaning that it is too powerful without reason or explaination as to the where hand how the power works.

Also, you will normally want many more jutsu, including some of the basics academy tech. Take a second to look over other, approved applications for an example of these. Assuming this is your first character, the more simple the better!

Hope that helps - Flash
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PostSubject: Re: Tsuki, Azumi (WIP)   Tsuki, Azumi (WIP) EmptySat Aug 01, 2009 5:25 am

... This is hard... :'(
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