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Sothe
Sand Genin
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PostSubject: Pathetic Strength   Pathetic Strength EmptyWed Jul 29, 2009 7:35 am

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General Information:
Name: Uchiwa, Ijirashi Ryouku ''Sothe''
Nickname/Alias: -
Age: 15
Gender: Male

Looks:
Wild. Bushy. Untammeable. Strong. His body is nicely muscled, tan skin looking flawless nearly, but still with the odd mark here and there. He's thin, but not enough to be blown in by the wind, but just enough to be wiry and very agile. He seems to have a sort of energy, a strong like aura around him, encasing him with a strong sort of movement. His hair is long edged spikes, midnight black in color, almost like an abyssial tital wave, ready to swallow his head, combs, birds, pennies and almost anything else you can think off, for good. His eyes are stark black, with a penchant for turning red, a birth defect. He seems to be quite the opponent, almost scaringly so.

His clothing tends to fall on the rather exposed or simple side. Often, his shirt is open, or it is a simple t-shirt, the color varying on the day. His pants are jogging, a bit skin tighter when on a mission, and he wears jeans otherwise. His shoes are as simple as can be, and his ninja equipment is also in pouches around him. His main look is rather like a ruffian, but he carries this air of loyalty as well.

Personality:
He looks wild, bushy and almost strong and rough. He gives off that impression, as he walks towards someone, with a habit of starring straight at them with his eyes. Those eyes change color periodically, mostly each time when he concentrates on something, or feels a negative emotion. He seems to be serious all the time, until he opens his mouth and speaks to people. Sothe's whole life is orientated around respect, honor and lack of strength. He's extremely loyal to the few people he actually lets himself trust, and would follow them onto death, which is scaringly closer then anything else.

He is the total opposite of his looks. He's very clumsy for one, always tripping everywhere and dropping everything. He's a scaredy-cat, always afraid of everything, simply because he is unable to be stronger then them. He considers himself unlucky, but he seems to be very lucky, for Sothe had pretty much escaped being severely injured, even with his patheticness. He has low self esteem, and tends to be a little bit shy around new people, keeping quiet and staying in the corner. However, once he relaxes, he becomes quite goofy, encouraging and very fun oriented, even thought he can't do anything. He's kind and helpful as well, even though he fails more then he succeeds. He's very perceptive however, and hates being lied to.

Often mistaken for a Uchiha, he tends to burst out saying 'UchiWA not UchiHA!''

Personality Trait's:
Sothe, for his patheticness, has traits which he keeps hidden from all. He has a rather engrossive obssession with death and cats, more particularly circling the myths of the Nekomatas, two-tailed cats. This obssession has made him go as far as to search for a way to gain cat traits, but he has failed so far. He's also a ritualist, loving to cast spells and rituals, althought they never effect the world.. at least, in the way he expects them to and notices.
Catch Phrase:
Doushite ware? (Why me?) : Doushite uso, tsunokana? (Why do you lie to me?) : Uso da. (Liar.)



Clan Information
Clan Name: -
Kekkei Genkai: -
Clan Symbol: -
Clan History: -


Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure no Sato

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Medical Ninja

Elemental Affinity:
Main: To be discovered [Katon]
Sub: To be discovered [Suiton]

Special Characteristics:
Sothe has a beserker mode, althought he cannot enter it of his own will. He cannot control it as of yet, and does not know of specific triggers >(those he cares for getting hurt, he injured gravely). This ''mode'' makes his eyes turn red, and he suddenly seems able to do the current technique, or weapon wielding, at his strength level. That means, instead of being a pathetic, a bit lower then Academy Student powered strike, he shall be able to use a normal Genin leveled attack. (the last action he preformed before going berserk.) He has great chakra control, which is the only thing that allowed him to pass the academy. He has weak chakra reserves, and his natural perceptiveness allows him to place his fingers on disruptancies much more then usual. He also has two weapons, which are, surprisingly, the only thing he can semi do well.


Background Information:

Child ~
Born in a small border town between Ame no Kuni and Kaze no Kuni, Sothe was a unwanted child. His parents already had two other children, and hated the fact that Sothe was in fact, a rape child. Within two weeks of his birth, the man that was linked to his birth mother, went to a caravan, and placed the child in their care. From there, he grew up until the age of six, very sickly and barely able to do anything. His life was a schedule, for the caravan had sold him to a circus, and his lack of talent made him assistant to several of the members. All he wanted, was to make someone proud, which is when he ran away from the circus, traveling the large desert of Kaze no Kuni. Eventually, he found his way to the outskirts of Sunagakure no Sato.. where a guard took him up and simply placed him within the academy.

Academy ~
Under her watchful eye and care, he slowly began to learn the shinobi way.. although his childhood weaknesses always made him an easy target for bullies. He was barely able to figure out Academy jutsu and just in time to graduate.

Genin ~
Since then, he has basically tried to accomplish many missions, failing most.. he was without a tea, the whole duration, simply because no one wanted the ''bumbling idiot'' on their team. So he waits.. for someone to show him a kindness.. and to get stronger.

RP Sample:

Hot.

Wet.

Hot and wet.

The male groaned and tripped, getting his head dunked in like an ostrich, stuck in the sand for moments, minutes, hours. However long it was, it was hot, and humid, just draining the life out of him. Wrenching his arms forward, he pushed against the sand, dumping his head out and rolling down the sand dune, to land on his back with a nasty crunch. Ow. That hurt, so very badly. The male gave a whimpering sigh, as he struggled to his feet. Damn his clumsiness, damn it to hell sometimes! He wanted to sob, that's how bad this whole situation was, as he began the long exercise to get back up that goddamn dune. Inch, by little inch, he crawled closer and closer to the top.. almost there! Just another step!

He did it.

He was on top!

That's when the arrow landed at his feet and panicking, he flailed backwards.. falling down.

And down.

'Dammit.' was his only thought, as he lied there. He starred up, the sun all too blinding, when a flash of red was seen.. and his eyes widened. The red landed right there, and held a shining, silver blade to his throat. Strands of wild fire flew in the wind, as tanned face peered at him with piercing green eyes. He was caught, mesmerized.. the young boy had no other want to move.


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Sothe
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PostSubject: Re: Pathetic Strength   Pathetic Strength EmptyWed Jul 29, 2009 11:29 pm

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Items/Weapons:
Name: Tsukihime
Appearence: Above picture
Rank: C
Special Abilities: -
Origin:
This scythe is precious to Sothe, since it was giving to him as a child, by someone he can't remember. He can use it semi efficiently, unlike many other things. However, this scythe takes more effort to wield and therefore is some how unable to be effected by the beserk mode.


Name: Yamichi
Appearence: A large staff, with two ovals on it. The edges of these ovals have blades and are very sharp. Can be used as a fan.
Rank: D
Special Abilities: -
Origin:
This weapon was found by Sothe on his journey from his home village to Sunagakure. Of course, the male couldn't figure it out at first, but slowly he became semi-able to wield the weapon.. although he still has a lot of trouble.


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Sothe
Sand Genin
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PostSubject: Re: Pathetic Strength   Pathetic Strength EmptyWed Jul 29, 2009 11:31 pm

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Jutsu:

Name:
Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description:
Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name:
Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description:
Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name:
Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description:
Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name:
Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description:
The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name:
Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description:
A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name:
Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description:
Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
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Fox
Sand Chuunin
Sand Chuunin
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PostSubject: Re: Pathetic Strength   Pathetic Strength EmptyThu Jul 30, 2009 2:02 am

---> You'll need to declare one elemental affinity.

---> Far more detail is needed about this "beserker mode". What triggers it, what effects it has etc.

---> Your "background information" needs to seperated into arcs ('Childhood Arc', 'Academy Arc', 'Genin Arc' etc).
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Sothe
Sand Genin
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PostSubject: Re: Pathetic Strength   Pathetic Strength EmptyThu Jul 30, 2009 9:42 am

Fox wrote:
---> You'll need to declare one elemental affinity.

---> Far more detail is needed about this "beserker mode". What triggers it, what effects it has etc.

---> Your "background information" needs to seperated into arcs ('Childhood Arc', 'Academy Arc', 'Genin Arc' etc).

1 - Done, just added them in square parentheses. He doesn't know them yet.

2 - The triggers were already there, in parentheses. Added how it's only the last battle like action he did becomes of Genin rank (as that is his current rank)

3 - I thought Arc dividing was optional - added Title ~ before each section.

Hope that works it all out.
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Fox
Sand Chuunin
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PostSubject: Re: Pathetic Strength   Pathetic Strength EmptyFri Jul 31, 2009 3:26 am

Much better.

1. Fine, no problems there.

2. Could you perhaps word this a little more clearly? I'm having trouble fully understanding this part in particular:
Quote :
he suddenly seems able to do the current technique, or weapon wielding, at his strength level. (last action before going berserk.)
Thanks.

3. Excellent.
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The Fourth Hokage
The Fourth Hokage
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PostSubject: Re: Pathetic Strength   Pathetic Strength EmptyFri Jul 31, 2009 3:39 pm

The Sytche doesnt have any special abilities no, but such a large weapon seems abit much for a genin to handle, I feel its probably above your rank.
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Sothe
Sand Genin
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PostSubject: Re: Pathetic Strength   Pathetic Strength EmptyFri Jul 31, 2009 8:43 pm

Fox wrote:
Much better.

1. Fine, no problems there.

2. Could you perhaps word this a little more clearly? I'm having trouble fully understanding this part in particular:
Quote :
he suddenly seems able to do the current technique, or weapon wielding, at his strength level. (last action before going berserk.)
Thanks.

3. Excellent.

2. Cleared it up that he's just about a mite weaker then an Academy Student.. poor fellow.

Adam wrote:
The Sytche doesnt have any special abilities no, but such a large weapon seems abit much for a genin to handle, I feel its probably above your rank.

Changed the rank to C and clarified that he cannot use it in berserk mode. Hope that satisfies?
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The Kazekage
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PostSubject: Re: Pathetic Strength   Pathetic Strength EmptyFri Jul 31, 2009 9:00 pm

Approved.
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