New Spirits

Name: Ghost Bats

Nickname: Batties

Species: Spirit Bats

Rank: D

Looks: A bat but un seeable to anyone but the Kisai clan.

Personality: These bats have no personality and are simply used to send and recieve information between spirits to relay back to a Kisai member. However what is unique are that these bats can speak normally because their souls were too weak to become human spirits they became a bat.

Age:10+

History: The bats are introduced to Kisai clan members at a pretty young age as an attempt to get Kisai members used to seeing ghosts. The bats themselves have no recollection of their past and are meant to endlessely wander the plane between earth and heaven. However they take great pleasure in knowing that a group of people can actually see them and thus they hand around the members of the Kisai clan. In the past Haeichi has used them to do simple scouting missions and have them report back to him once they find or dont find anything. He has also used them to specifically travel to a ghost he knows in a certain location or one of the ones that follows him to acquire information they have recieved.

I see no problem with this.

EXCEPT.

History. for a C rank summon, it needs to be about 1.5 to 2 good paragraphs

Edited and edited it to D rank.

For a D rank pet you need a good 1 to 1.5 paragraphs.

a good paragraph is 7 sentences or more.

edited

Approved