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PostSubject: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 3:02 pm

General Information:
Name: Daichi Hanako

Nickname/Alias: Legendary Mind Sage, Konoha's Emotion Eraser

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Looks:
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Daichi stands at 6 feet tall and weights approximately 170lbs. Daichi is naturally attractive with long, silky blue hair which comes down to his back. He usually ties his hair in a pony tail at the back with two long strands of hair that come down the sides of his face. Daichi has fine features; his dark blue eyes are quite memorising and make you feel quite uneasy as they are powerful looking. He has a small nose and a wide mouth which when he smiles his perfect, white teeth shine when you look at them, almost having their own tinkle to them. He has quite a pale complexion but when he is on the sun for a while at a time he tans quite easily, so in the summer he usually has more of a brownish tinge to his skin. Daichi has a lean body shape but is also very muscular. He takes great pride in his body making sure that he is fit and healthy all the time.

You will usually see Daichi wearing only two kinds of clothing. One set is his training gear which consists of a plain, white, long V-necked top with a pair of simple black trousers and ninja footwear. But the most common outfit that you would see Daichi in would be his main clothing which he wears into battle and casually around the village and when he travels. This outfit has a custard yellow long kimono like top which has long arms which go past his arms and flair outwards. This kimono style top has a lighter yellow rim around the V of his neck. Over this he wears a simple dark brown, baggy shirt which is short sleeved and comes to about his elbows. This is tied up with his ninja headband which he has turned into a simple belt, and underneath that is his special ninja belt which was design especially for his to use in battle. This belt has more compartment that can hold ninja gear such as weapons, scrolls etc. On his lower body wears plain black pants which come up just above his ankle with the normal ninja footwear, especially designed with his colours of his clothing and a thicker sole.

Daichi wears glasses almost all the time as his eye sight is quite bad. Due to kekkei Genkai he has very poor vision and needs glasses to see when his Ryougan is not activated. His pair of glasses is plain black with a thick rim to them. They were especially made for him and fit around his ears perfectly. On the side of them they have his name inscribed with silver. His pair of glasses is kind of his trademark and you don’t see him anywhere without them unless he is fighting and activates his Ryougan.

Personality: If you had to describe Daichi’s personality with one word it would be impossible. His personality is probably the most complex subject in the world of ninja today. Due to his kekkei Genkai he has tapped into a part of his brain where his emotions and feelings are stored. He has a more vast knowledge of this area of the brain than any specialist alive and this makes his own personality quite a complex one. Daichi feels more emotions at a single moment in time than a normal person would in a week. He has to process through his brain to figure out which are his and are others and how he is actually feeling at the time. The level of the emotions that he feels is a lot stronger as well, for example if he was feeling happy he would be very happy, if he was feeling sad he would be very sad. His range of emotion is a lot more dramatic than the normal person so people can make a quick a judgement on him easily. But with years of meditation and practice controlling his ability he has refined his mind to act as simply as possible and can control his emotion quite well. But at times of stress, anxiousness, pain or danger his emotions will get the better of his and he will become the definition of unpredictable.

But generally Daichi is a happy, go-lucky guy who would do anything and everything for the people he loved and respected in the world. He is the type of guy that when you meet him you can’t help but become friends with him. He seems to get respect from people the others usually wouldn’t just through the stature and personality of the guy. Though he does no how to play on people’s emotions and make them feel differently but he doesn’t seem to need to force this it just happens. He isn’t selfish or self-centred but the complete opposite, he would also doing anything and everything for someone who he valued as a friend, and most people he meets he likes to make friends with as he’s not one to make enemies unless as a last resort. Daichi has a brilliant mind and is said to be a genius. Because of his brain power he sees situations differently than other people and can step back to choose the right decision, he seldom get flustered in whatever he is doing. Daichi has a pure and kind heart, something that makes his quite appealing to young children. He likes children a lot, especially because he like how they think, simple and to the point and this makes him good with the young ones.

In battle Daichi likes to be assertive when getting the job done. He is cool, cal and collected nearly all the time, finding that it’s better to keep your head and access the situation instead of charging full-boar into it. He usually takes mercy on his opponents and doesn’t kill them unless they are an actually threat to anyone who cannot defend themselves or are innocent. He believes in the ninja way and the will of fire, and tries to bring this mentality into battle every time. Though when his emotions get the better of him in battle, he can somewhat becoming a raging monster. His lust for blood and pain will be too much for him to passively control and he can get over the top. Due to this he tries not to push his brain so far into that state or he could hurt himself permanently or the people he loves, such as friends or family.

Personality Trait's: Daichi is a very kind, considerate human being who would do anything to help the village or the people he valued as friends and family. He is centred on the way of the ninja and loves the feeling of justice and good prevailing or evil. Daichi loves money. This is something that seems to be genetically programmed into his brain as even with his brain power he can not fight the felling for money and will always try to find some easy cash. This is probably due to his obsession with material things.

Catch Phrase: “I’ll turn you so far left, that you will think death is right.”


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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 3:04 pm

Clan Information

Clan Name: Hanako

Kekkei Genkai:
Ryougan: Surpassing Eye
The Kekkei Genkai Ryougan is a powerful bloodline which uses the users mind to a whole other level. When activated the users eye glows a deep red colour throughout the whole eye. Ryougan grants Hanako clan members the ability to sense the feelings and emotions within themselves and another people freely. This almost requires no chakra to use and and is in some ways a passive ability. When sensing the emotions of others they give off a coloured aura which the user can look at to determine how the target truely is feeling, so no matter how someone may say they are to them they can see the truth. The range of emotions that the user can sense is quite great going from anger and sadness to sleepiness, happiness, drunkenness, wild, timid, excited, passionate, scared, angry, untrustworhty etc. Ryougan also has the effect of trying to scramble the targets emotions. The user can sent out a pulse from their mind which is mixed with their chakra. This pulse when passes through the target can scramble with their emotions causing confusion within their mind. While their mind is scrambled they become very disorientated losing self control, For example if they were previously confident then they would go back to a kind of blank state where they don't really feel anything in particular. Ryougan users cannot control the targets emotions but they can influence them. By releasing a certain emotional aura they can trying influence certain emotions onto the target. Though this isn't a gauranteed thing as they may not accept the emotion into their mind as their willpower may be too strong. Ryougan focuses on the targets mind like a taijutsu user focuses on a targets body. This means that Ryougan users can easily infultrate the mind of others tapping into their emotions and feelings making the clans genjutsu very powerful.

Ryougan being a powerful technique which grants the user a fuller access to their own mind grants them the ability to create a barrier which hides thoughts and emotions of the user from other people. These barriers are passively stuck within the users mind, the user just chooses what to place within the barrier and what outside. The barrier cannot be broken, destroyed, removed by anyone else other than the user but others who have the ability to see or enter the mind through their own specific Kekkei genkai will know that the barrier is there but could not break through it. It protects the user from others reading their thoughts and emotions even if within their body, only the mind of a clan member can actually control this ability, so if someone were to send their mind into theirs, they wouldn't be able to move things out of the barrier. This barrier aslo hides the colour and scent of the users chakra so even byakugan users find it diffcult to read their charka networks. Ryougan also allows the user to create a barrier around their body similar to the one in their mind, except this one is physical. This barrier though isn't passive and requires chakra to keep it in action, it can only be broken by ninjutsu as taijutsu (Other than the 8 gates) have no effect through the barrier, and genjutsu are worthless against the mind barrier. The barriers can only be used around themselves but if someone else was to appear within the physical barrier they would be protected aswell, the barrier can’t be projected onto someone else. It only uses a little chakra to hold up though and can be held for indefinite amounts of time.

Ryougan being such a powerful bloodline ability which taps into the endless power of the mind also has downsides which is to be expected. Users who are born with ability are also born with bad eye sight. They are born with being both long and short sighted with normal vision becoming blurry at nearly all times and day-to-day activities becomevery difficult, this is why all clan member who have the ability are usually seen wearing glasses. But when the doujutsu is activated their sight becomes even better than the average human’s. They have a longer range of sight than the normal person and have a penetrating eye which means they can see through solid objects such as walls of buildings and trees etc. This penetrating eye also gives them the ability to penetrate the skin and see a general outline of the chakra networks of a human, though not to the detail of that of the byakugan. Also his eyes allow to to see a kind of emotion aura around people which is coloured, for example redish for anger and white for happiness etc. But another downside to the technique is that if the user doesn’t gain control of their own emotions while using this technique they can slowly loss their mind. To be able to use Ryougan successfully the user has to have complete control over their emotions or they will slowly die from the inside out. One of the only mind infultrating clans that can effect this clan is the Yamanaka clan. They are capable of effecting this clan, capable of getting into their mind, if unprotected, but they are unable to search through their mind and are incapable of seeing their thoughts/etc while inside the mind.

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Clan Symbol:
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Clan History: The Hanako clan history is a complex one which started back many years ago in the River Country. The Hanako clan was founded and lived in the River Country for its entire life and was a prosperous and powerful clan on the country. It was widely respected as was known as the “Uchiha Clan” of the River Country, the clan that had the mighty Ryougan and as in a way the ‘chosen’ clan. Though this title proved to be more of a curse than a blessing as the country mainly their Daiymo believed that they were too powerful for their own good. So as the years went on they were slowly pushed out of the main village and to the outskirts of the country. This annoyed them as they had been such influential members of the village and believed that just because of their gifts that they were being treated badly.

As the years went by the River Country soon found themselves in a war with the Rain country which lies on the boarder towards the north. The leaders were reluctant to use the Hanako Clan ninja even though their doujutsu the Ryougan was the most powerful in the land. As the war raged on and more and more River Country shinobi were dying their grip on this ugly war was soon fading so they had to act fast. So the leaders decided that they had to ask the Hanako Clan ninja for help which was something they did not like doing at all. The Hanako Clan were at first disgusted by the war and these people as they had treated them so badly and now they wished for their help! But the Hanako ninja knew that it would be the innocent villages would be the ones to suffer so reluctantly they agreed to take part in the war. Daichi was only a child when this was happening and his father and all the other Hanako clan ninja joined the others and won the war after a long hard year.

There was know doubting that it was them that made the vital difference and wont he country the war but as Daichi stood there waiting for his father, but he never came back. The whole clan was destroyed by a war that they didn’t even want to be in from the start and they sacrificed themselves for the cause to help the innocent of the country that they loved so dearly. Daichi is the last remaining Hanako Clan member who has the Ryougan as the clan split up many years ago. He wishes to restore the once proud clan and the numbers which have the ability of the Ryougan.


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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 3:07 pm

Rank Information:
Rank: Sannin
Village: Konohgakure

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Genjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Doton [Earth]
Sub: Suiton [Water]

Special Characteristics:

Body & Mind – Daichi is a young fit male who trains and works hard on his physical body everyday. This shows as he is quite muscular. Daichi is very fast as he works on his speed everyday; feeling that with speed comes weight. He is very athletic in an all round kind of way being fast, quite strong and flexible. Daichi is considered to a genius by some having an IQ of nearly 200. This is due to him tapping into the potential of his mind with his kekkei genkai. He is very good at using his mind in battle and is great with strategies and thinking quickly on his feet. Daichi finds that he seems to learn jutsu techniques quicker than the average shinobi due to his smart mind.

Elementalist - Daichi has worked his whole life in mastering the element earth. He has done this with many, many year’s hard training and practice working with Doton element masters and training under them. This means that all earth jutsu for Daichi cost one rank of chakra less e.g S-Ranks cost A-rank amounts of chakra. He has also mastered the mud jutsu which are a combination of both his elements Earth + Water = Mud. This took him more than 4 years to do with hard, aggressive training but the results have paid off.

Chakra- Daichi has approximately a slightly larger chakra reserve than the normal ninja, nothing too special to brag about. But it’s not how much chakra Daichi has it’s how he uses it, he has brilliant chakra control and finds that using chakra more efficiently is better then having a large about of chakra in the first place. If you know how to control your chakra and use only as much as you need to, it can be life and death in battle.


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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 3:09 pm

Background Information:
Childhood Arc- Daichi was not born in Konohagakure but he migrated there at a young age. Daichi was born in the small medical clinic in the River Country on a stormy and cold night. He was the apple of his parents eyes, both being clan members of the Hanako Clan. Daichi’s father possessed the ability of the Ryougan which wasn’t such a rare ability within the clan in though’s days. Daichi was born into the Hanako Clan a clan which was feared by other countries and adored by the River Country. He felt proud to be apart of the clan and the clan loved that he had joined their ranks. The clan was small and there weren’t many new children born into the clan so any new arrival was treated to a joyous celebration in their honour.

Daichi loved being part of the clan but when they started to get slowly moved out the village he was saddened by the leaders and the people, that they could do this. So Daichi grew up in a life of moving constantly never staying in a single place for a long time. He learnt to deal with it and kept telling himself it wasn’t a big deal, but deep down he disliked it. When the war came the ninja from the Hanako Clan were asked to take part for the River Country, Daichi was confident that his father would prevail and come back to them, as well as the other ninja from his clan. But when the time came for them to show and they never did, Daichi cried for his father as he missed him and wanted to see him one more time.

By this time the clan had disbanded and Daichi was a young boy. It was only him and his mother left now and they decided to more to Konohagakure to start a new life. Daichi would do whatever his mother did though he wanted to stay back in the River Country back in the village. But his mother could never forgive the leaders and the people of that country for disbanding her clan and sending all of them to their own deaths. Konohagakure was a safe place, places were Daichi could grow up safely without having to move to a new place and his mother loved this about the place. They arrived and set their life up; they owned a small house on the corner of the east side of the village close to the forest which Daichi loved.

Academy Arc- When it was the right time Daichi’s mother enrolled her son into the ninja academy in Konohagakure. Daichi was very excited about this opportunity and was eager to get going and start his journey to becoming a ninja. He did not know that he had the amazing ability of the Ryougan yet, he and his mother were not sure if he had received the amazing bloodline ability of his clan yet. Daichi’s father possessed it and Daichi one day want to become as powerful as he did and fight for his village and protect his mother.

Daichi enjoyed his time at the academy as he got the chance to make new friends to get along with people his own age. Because he was constantly moving from country to country he never really had friends his own age. So when he joined the academy being with others his age made him feel happy, happier than he has been for a long time. Daichi learnt genjutsu, ninjutsu and taijutsu and was quite talented at all of them. Where most of the ninja failed at the basic genjutsu’s Daichi found himself quite accomplished in that area. He trained and trained perfecting his kunai throwing technique and his basic ninjutsu and genjutsu skills.

The time came for him to sit his final exam and Daichi was more nervous that he had ever been before in his life. This test would prove that he was truly strong enough to be a ninja for Konoha and he had the ability to protect the innocent from harm. He sat his team and passed with flying colours. Daichi’s mother was so proud of him and he was proud of himself. He only wished that his father was there to see him succeed and live on the legacy of the Hanako Clan within him.

Genin Arc- Daichi was now a genin and he began to start missions for the village. He was assigned a team with another male ninja and a female one. He was also assigned a sensei who a male man from the Hyuuga clan so he possessed the byakugan another powerful doujutsu. He had a couple of weeks before he would truly begin on missions for the village and he was eager to start his training and become more powerful. Over a couple of weeks he trained with his squad learning teamwork and combined techniques between the three of them. He enjoyed being in a squad, being a group which looked out for him and he for them. They all had their own specific abilities which made them special but Daichi had not unlocked his yet. He was proficient at genjutsu and ninjutsu and began to focus his techniques based on that, but he knew that there was something else in him ready to be untapped and released.

Finally he was sent on a mission for the village and he and his squad set out to do it. It was a success in more ways than one though, as they had succeeded in the mission target and Daichi had also unlocked the power of the Ryougan. It was his first proper battle with an older ninja and the pressure of the battle forced his true power to come out. His sensei was impressed as a fellow doujutsu user and did not know that he possessed such an ability. For the rest of the year Daichi’s sensei especially took him underneath his wing and taught him how to use a doujutsu efficiently. Daichi had now become a powerful ninja and he had unlocked the power of the mind making him surpass his fellow team mates dramatically. He was a little behind but now he was leading from the front and he loved it!

Chuunin Arc- Daichi was promoted to chuunin a young ages and by this time had begun to make in roads into the power of the Ryougan. Daichi’s mother naturally gave him any information on it that she knew, seeing other clan members use it and her husband, Daichi’s father having it also helped in that area. In the spare time between missions for the village Daichi trained intensively trying to master and unlock the secrets of his eyes. He also trained in the earth element and was beginning to use powerful earth techniques. His ability to learn jutsu a lot faster than the normal ninja helped in him this department and he cut his training time down by half of what he should really have been doing. What he could do in an hour was what a normal ninja would do in two and this became an apparent advantage which was seen by the strong ninja in the village.

Daichi was beginning to make a name for himself in the village notching successful mission numbers on his belt, one on which he participated in and ones which he lead. He was showing natural skill, ability and leadership and the right people were beginning to look at him asking themselves if he should be promoted to jounin. He was still young and had a lot to learn but influential people were beginning to think that he could do the job successfully. So one day they sent him to lead an important mission for the village, one which a jounin squad would usually be sent to do, but they sent him to test him and see if he was ready. The mission was a success and he was promoted to the level of jounin within the village. Daichi’s mother as incredibly proud him, he grown into a very talented young man and the excited and love on her face could not be hidden.

Jounin/ANBU Arc- So at the age of 15 Daichi was promoted to position of jounin within Konohagakure and he began to become an important part of the core ninja that protected the village. He was not assigned a squad as he was a shoe-in to get the opportunity to become apart of the ANBU. Daichi stuck to his intensive training and was beginning to learn the secrets of the Ryougan. He was now successfully able to use his bloodline ability dangerously causing mind force fields and the ability to tap into others emotions. He went on a lot of mission on which he always came back successful. He was powerful even at his young age. He was promoted into the ranks of ANBU to learn the secret art of true stealth and assassination.

Though Daichi was good enough to become an ANBU more than good enough, he did not enjoy this style of becoming a ninja. He stayed in ANBU for a short while learning some techniques and doing some missions for the village. But his true calling was being a jounin, teaching the younger ninja of the village and blossoming the youth within the village. But in the back of his mind he always wondered how his home country was and if the village was prospering. He hadn’t been sent on a mission that area before and wanted to go back and see the place for himself. So after a couple of missions for the ANBU he opted out and was granted to go back to the jounin but become a special jounin one which he was sent on dangerous missions.

So for years he stayed at this position in the ranking of ninja in Konoha going to dangerous missions, each time his life was not guaranteed but he liked it this way. But one day he was sent on a mission that would be the most dangerous he would ever encounter. For months he had be staking out the criminal organization known as akatsuki and he was finally tracking them, clinging to their trails. On this mission he finally encountered two akatsuki members both of them incredibly powerful. They had killed the other ninja with him and it was only him by himself. He had to protect the village and destroy these ninja, only having himself to back him up. After a long fight he succeeded but at a toll. His ability took him over and he raged out of control uncapping a new part of his ability. Though he was incredibly strong in this state he was out of control and it did irreparable damage to his brain and his emotions. From then on he fought his earges and meditated everyday.

Promotion to Sannin Arc-
When he returned to the village everyone had heard of his success and his power in defeating two akatsuki members by himself. He went straight to the Hokage who granted him the title of Sannin, Sannin of the Hidden Leaf. His mother was so proud of him, she never thought that he would make it this level of ninja; he was now one of the strongest ninja in the village, country and even the world. He was as strong as the kages themselves but he never let it get to his head. He was now not a man who had to follow the rules of the village, of course if the Hokage needed him he would be there as soon as he could but he only took orders from the Hokage, who by now was one of his closest friends.

This gave Daichi the opportunity to travel and of course he took this opportunity to travel to his home country that is the River Country. He stayed there for years working and earning money from small missions around, here and there. Everyone in the River Country knew who he was. He was the sole remains of the Ryougan, the powerful Sannin of Konohagakure, and the man who was originally the member of the village here. He stayed here and learnt the power of earth and water techniques from a master in the village. He had the ability to fuse the elements together to create mud jutsu. The River Country had large swampy area’s and it as here that Daichi learnt how to use earth jutsu to the next level and to successfully combine elements to make mud jutsu.

He loved being the River Country and it truly felt like home to him but he also loved Konohagakure and it was time to get back. The River Country village was small and didn’t have many strong shinobi. He was asked to stay and become the leader of the village, to protect the young citizens who lived there as the Rain Country was still giving them trouble. Daichi wanted to consider the offer but he still had many things he had to do for the village which loving took he and his mother in and trained and protected him for all though’s years. Though his heart was still in the River Country he had a debt to pay back to Konoha. So he told them that he would be began soon than later to retain the title of leader of the River Country and expand the power of the village and protect it people. The leader was old and was going to die in a couple of years, then and only then would Daichi stand in. So Daichi travelled back to Konoha to begin his journey as a Sannin. He had trained for years and now came back as a 23 year old man, whose power was higher than when he left. He had now arrived thought the gates and was heading to his mothers home, the same home in which he grew up in…

[To be Continued]
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 3:11 pm

RP Sample: [From NWOTN 3.0]

In the room which Raiken slept in everything was silent and no light from the outside could pierce it's way through the dark, doubled layered material that was his curtains. Raiken sat up in bed as he slowly rubbed the sleep out of his eyes. As he opened them, he could barely see in his room and sat upright in his bed beginning to think, ponder about what venture he would go on today. Ideas and thoughts shuffled through his mind about possible things and adventures that he could go on but these days he didn't really have much to do. The academy was going to officially open in a couple of weeks and in the time before that Raiken was free to do whatever he felt like in the long and arguous days that life brought him. He wasn't complaining, this would give him a chance to really explore hidden areas of the village which he wasn't allowed to before, or practice his ninja skills before the big day would arrive. All Raiken knew was that he had to find something to do today or he would be stuck at home with his mother again bored out his tree.

Raiken slowly got up out of bed like any young boy would do in the direction of the window. He was going by the bearings that his memory had of his room as he couldn't see his hand in front of him it was so dark. He slowly pulled the curtains back and a rush of sunlight pierced it's way through the window in front of him. Raikenquickly shut his eyes, and after a few minutes opened them again slowly, giving them time to adjust to the new light in the room. He looked up into the sky to see a bright blue blanket spread across it, without a cloud in site. Raiken always knew what the day was going to be like by looking at the sky. It was part of his clan heritage which he valued and respected very much. He was always intreged with the sky above him and could look at it hours on end without moving. But he wasn't going to do that today, no he was going to first have a shower and then travel into the inner city of Kumogakure to scope out something interesting to to.

After having a shower at home and eating the breakfast his mother laid out of him on the table he packed up a few things and told her he was going out for the day. Like always she said "Be careful Raiken, you never know what kind of nasty person is out there," and like always he shrugged it off. Raiken stepped out onto the walm stone path just outside his house searching which way to go, he had to find the fasted route to town as he was going on foot. On his travels he began to think of something to do for he was bored out of his mind. He scanned what was the inner city of Kumogakure a head of him, as his home was not far away from town only a couple minutes walk. He scanned over all the old buildings and shops looking for a place for his adventure to start. He passed many places all for which he ahd been before. Finally he stopped and glanced at a large building in front of him. It was very old looking like every other building in the cvillage, but enscribed on the side of the large stair case leading up to a large wooden door was the word [Library].

Raiken stopped and looked up at the building which towered over him like he was an ant. It had surprised him but he had never been here before. Such a large building and his mother never took him there. Raiken was fascinated by the large building and he slowly walked up the steps to venture inside. It was easy to say that Raiken wasn't obsessed or intreged by books and scrolls that much, but that wasn't the main reason he was here. Sure, he would give a couple a good go at reading them but it had never really interested him that much. What Raiken really wanted to do was venture through the library and find secret rooms and catacombs which no one knew about but the Raikage himself. Raiken had quite the imagination on him like any other young, curious boy his age. As he walked up to the top of the steps he began to slowly push on the large double wooden doors. Crazy ideas and thoughts rushed through his mind like a stick being swept down a rushing stream. As the large doors began to open Raiken wondered what amazing things would be inside. His adventure for the day was just beginning....

Raiken pushed the large wooden doors open with force as they were quite heavy. He wondered why it wasn't open already, it was the middle of the day and he was sure many people would pass through the place, it was just rude to have the doors shut. Raiken wasn't completely wrong either. The library wasn't exactly packed but it still had a large number of people walking around, or reading books at tables. The inside was quite elaborate and decrative. The inside of the building was as old-fashioned as the outside, and this was to be expected. Raiken walked inside slowly his eyes darting from one side of the room to the other. He had never seen so many books and scrolls in his life before, the walls being covered in them in all directions.

Raiken walked up the main enterance up to a counter. There was a small, older looking lady perched in a black chair behind the large counter writing on a long scroll. "Well hello there dear, how may I help you?" she said with a kind voice. Raiken didn't really know what he wanted, he wasn't exactly sure what to look for in the his. He asked her about the place and what kinds of things he could find in here. She replied quickly and proptly, spitting out a thousand words at a time, explaining everything there is to know about books. Raiken's brain could barely handle everything she was saying so he politely ended the conversation and went to explore the area himself.

There were many corridors and rooms which people were quietly sat at reading or writing. Naturally, Raiken came across area's which he and the public were restricted to and he thought this must be the area where the hidden secrets of the village were kept or forbidden jutsu for ninja never to set their eyes on. He turned his head to the left, and then to the right. The corridor on which he stood was empty except his own two feet. He then went to turn the knob on the turn to open it, being very cautious not to set off any alarms or anything. But the door wouldn't budge so he looked around up and over it. there happened to be a couple of seals on the door which raiken had noticed. "Darn, I'm never going to be able to open the door with those things on them." But as eager as he was he tried anyway.

Suddenly a man came out from no where "Hey kid, what do you think your doing." Raiken looked up at him with a guilty look on his face, and without any hesitation he ran for the door. The man quickly followed him nipping at his heels every stride that he took. The man didn't look like a ninja, and Raiken thought that he might work here but he wasn't going to take any chances. He quickly ran in between two woman who hurtled their books up in the air in shock. Raiken turned his ehad around still running, and had a little chuckle but he didn't have time as the man was still following. Raiken then pushed through another door and finally the main exit was in his sight. He jumped over a chair and lunged himself forward for the door. He quickly pulled it open and ran down the stairs. The man stood at the door with his arms on his legs panting heavily. "If I ever catch you around here again you little brat, you will be sorry!" Raiken poked his head out from around the corner where he hid, his heart fluttering at a million miles an hour. it was only the morning but Raiken could tell the today was going to be an eventful one.
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 3:21 pm

Jutsus:


Ninjutsu

Basic Ninjutsu:
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Water Element Techniques:
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 3:21 pm

Earth Element Ninjutsu:
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 3:24 pm

Mud Element Techniques:
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 3:37 pm

Genjutsu

Genjutsu Techniques:
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySat Aug 15, 2009 3:42 pm

Hanako Clan
Clan Techiques:
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySun Aug 16, 2009 8:35 am

You have three elements, mud is a combination of water and earth yes, but it doesnt grant you all three elements.

As I promised you, I wouldn't decline your clan until I had read over its Kekkei Genkai. I know you will say you won't godmod it, but I simply cannot allow it. You can make somebody sleepy,angry or confused, which could make you easily defeat them in battle.

Somebody could be sparring you being the smartest ninja in Konoha and you have the ability to make them feel stupid, you put alot of effort into the clan which is why it hurts to decline it. But as owner I have to make sure everybody is on as much of a level battle field as possible and this gives you an amazingly huge advantage.

Also, Sannin are free to wander around the village and the world, but this doesn't make you a wanderer ninja, wanderers don't have attachments to villages. If you are asked to do a mission or such for Konoha you are accepted to do so. Therefore change your rank to purely Sannin.
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySun Aug 16, 2009 8:39 am

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Name: Suiton: Ame Yose no Jutsu [Water Release: Rain Summoning technique]
Rank: B
Requirements: None.
Description: This is for use in areas with little or no water. The object of this jutsu is to bring water to you. By performing a number of seals, and focusing ones chakra into the ground, water within a given area, depending on ones chakra strength and water control, will be condensed and begin to form clouds. Once this is complete the clouds then proceed to the selected area, causing a down pour bringing the water to the user. There must be at least some water in the immediate area, and this technique does take a while, so it is hard to bring a sufficient amount in a short time, unless one has the element of surprise.
Explain how long the rain will take place in post count. Aka how many posts will the jutsu last.

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Name: Doton: Chijoukei [Earth Release: Earth Sight]
Rank: C
Element: Doton [Earth]
Description: This is a simple Doton technique that can only be performed when the use is upon the surface of the earth, or within it. This technique does not require hand-signs, but instead words through the distribution of Doton chakra channeled within the earth around the user. In doing this, the user becomes extremely sensitive to the vibrations of the earth, allowing them to see the area around them with an alternate form of sight. This means that even if the use is blind from their normal eyes, they can gage what is happening effectively. One thing this cannot do is pick up on objects that have absolutely no connection with the earth, thusly not making any vibrations.

Describe the range of how far you are able to "feel" the vibrations.

- Also if your KKG works a lot like Genjutsu then if the person shuts off the chakra cirulatory system then your Empathy would cancel correct? Also what if the person was Emo?(had to ask it XD)

- Everything else seems o.k. in my opinion.
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySun Aug 16, 2009 10:07 am

Thank you Living Spirit for the helpful advice not just telling me that its simply not allowed, obviously you know how to check an app properly! XD

Ok ok kidding.. i have changed all recommended points of the app. I have reworked the KKG so it isnt OP and i have changed all that has been requested.

Ready for a another look now ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptySun Aug 16, 2009 4:26 pm

You didn't edit anything I said, stop picking on me, I'm telling you why not just shutting you down!

Adam wrote:
You have three elements, mud is a combination of water and earth yes, but it doesnt grant you all three elements.

As I promised you, I wouldn't decline your clan until I had read over its Kekkei Genkai. I know you will say you won't godmod it, but I simply cannot allow it. You can make somebody sleepy,angry or confused, which could make you easily defeat them in battle.

Somebody could be sparring you being the smartest ninja in Konoha and you have the ability to make them feel stupid, you put alot of effort into the clan which is why it hurts to decline it. But as owner I have to make sure everybody is on as much of a level battle field as possible and this gives you an amazingly huge advantage.

Also, Sannin are free to wander around the village and the world, but this doesn't make you a wanderer ninja, wanderers don't have attachments to villages. If you are asked to do a mission or such for Konoha you are accepted to do so. Therefore change your rank to purely Sannin.
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 10:28 am

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You didn't edit anything I said

Are you serious right now? i re-wrote the whole first paragraph of my KKG every word, changing the sections that you had a problem with. Please actually read it properly or i would like another admin/mod to check my app.

Ok i have changed my rank to sannin. I no that sannin have ties to the village but i will also be a bit fo a wanderer so i thought i should put that in ^^. But i changed it anyways.
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 11:08 am

Unfortunately, the thing about mud is correct. Mud is a combination element of water and Earth, yes. But, like Wood, you need a special KKG to have it =)

Anyways, I didn't have much of a problem with your KKG before, and now it looks absolutely perfect.

As for the Sannin bit, I dunno if you have your info correctly. The Sannin in naruto, though bearing allegiance to konoha, had no requirement to serve konoha. Or else they could've forced Tsunade to return when they were looking for her to become hokage. Also, Orochimaru retained the rank of sannin, despite the fact that he completely went against konoha. So in that Area, Adam, you are wrong.
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptyThu Aug 20, 2009 5:41 pm

Sannin is like knighthood. You are still obliged to attend to the village needs, being Konoha ninja. Orochimaru wasn't a Konoha ninja after he left.

If you read how the three became sannin its because they fought the rain leader Hanzou and received the rank. They went back and continued to work for Konoha, as that is their village.

Okay Todd, I'm sorry, I read your Kekkei Genkai wrong, just keep in mind, strong willed ninja, such as myself, your kekkei genkai probably won't have much effect. On younger less wise ninja, it would become more difficult. Pretty much the older the opponent the more trouble you will have mixing the emotions.

Other than that it seems okay.

Keep in mind, you will be a Konoha ninja none the less. Though you have more freedom then other ninja, you will not be allowed to purely, just go for a walk around the world. Things must have purpose as Sannin. Once the third Sannin is completely chosen, you will be approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Daichi Hanako [Sannin]   Daichi Hanako [Sannin] EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 1:48 pm

Coolness thank you adam.

Yeah i will just have to beat you down with insults in battle so you think your useless then it will work XD
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