New Water Jutsus

Suiton Goshokuzame
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. Kisame will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water below.

RP Sample:Sheekoe watched as his opponent ran and jumped in the water."Dumb move."Sheekoe sprinted down to the water and did a quick string of handseals."Suiton: Goshokuzame."Suddenly 5 sharks made out of water appeared in the water.They all zoomed at the person in the water.Sheekoe watched the violent feeding frenzy of the sharks."Wow, thats messy."

Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.

RP Sample:Sheekoe had a mission to capture a missing ninja.He was following him through a thick forest.Sheekoe made sure he was silent as he jumped from branch to branch.Finally the ninja stopped,so did Sheekoe.He quickly did a string of handseals and whispered,"Kirigakure No Jutsu."Suddenly the area was covered with thick fog around the opponent,Sheekoe made sure he was on higher ground so he could still see.Thinking quickly Sheekoe turned on his Hansaro eyes (which made him 20% faster),and sprinted through the heavy fog. In a flash he had his opponent on the ground tied up."Success."Sheekoe smiled and laughed a little

Training:Sheekoe was walking to the training grounds to train some new jutsu,The day was hot and humid,so Sheekoe didnt have his robe on just his black pants,And a black muscle shirt.Sheekoe walked slowly beacause of the heat heat didn't wanna get winded.About 10 minutes later sheekoe arrived at the training grounds.It had a large pond and a field of dirt."I guess i better get to work."Sheekoe did a string of handsigns and said."Mizu Bunshin no jutsu."He created one clone and sent it in the water.The clone used the water breathing jutsu so it didn't need to worry.Sheekoe walked over to the pond and did a long string of handseals."Suiton: Goshokuzame."Sheekoe placed his hand on the water and little sharks appeared."Damn i messed up."Sheekoe released the justu and kept his clone under water.Then he did the same handseals again."Suiton: Goshokuzame."Then larger sharks came,and they zoomed towards Sheekoe's clone.Sheekoe's clone pulled out his Katana and slashed all the sharks.They all disappeared into bubbles in the water.Sheekoe watched in dissapointment."Damn they were supposed to regenerate."Sheekoe sighed and tried again.He did the handseals and yelled out the justu,This time the sharks were smaller then the last,and sheekoe knew this wouldn't work,So he released them.Then he took a break.He sent his clone up from the water for a rest as well.Sheekoe was quite frustrated with this jutsu it would not work."Damn Jutsu."Sheekoe said frustrated,even though he was mad he was still in his mellow state that he always seemed to be in.Sheekoe laid back on a tree next to his clone for awhile,He thought maybe if he relaxed he would get it next time.After a while Sheekoe rose to his feet."clone,water,now."The clone obeyed and cannon balled in the water while using the water breathing jutsu.Sheekoe laughed at his replica."ok,let's try this again."Sheekoe walked over to the pond and did the needed handseals for the jutsu."Suiton: Goshokuzame."Suddenly The sharks appeared they were the right size,but were they the right kind.they went fast at sheekoe's clone,The clone kileed one,And it regenerated."It worked!"Sheekoe's clone came up from the water as sheekoe released the jutsu."Good job clone."Sheekoe smiled at the clone as it smiled back.Then the clone transformed into a puddle of water.Sheekoe smiled as he begin walking home.
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Sheekoe was at the training grounds again for another jutsu,This one was alot easier.The day was windy and hot but the wind cooled it down a little.Sheekoe had his robe on this time and he didnt have his katana with him."well i better get to work i guess."Sheekoe stood there on the ground and did a string of handseals."Kirigakure No Jutsu."Mist appeared around the whole training area.It wasn't very thick though.Sheekoe knew that cause he could still see very well."ok i know that was a failure."Sheekoe released the mist and did the handseals again."Kirigakure No Jutsu."The mist was thicker this time but sheekoe could see through it still.He sighed again and did it again.This time sheekoe focused a lot more,and soon the mist was very thick,thick enough for him to not see anything."Woah it worked."Sheekoe walked forward a bit and ran into a tree."Ouch."Sheekoe laughed as he picked himself off the ground while rubbing his nose.

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Name:Suiton: Goshokuzame - Water Style: Eating 5 Shark Frenzy
Type:ninjutsu
Rank:A
Element:Suiton
Description: User makes 5 sharks of water that attack opponent and can not be destroyed while in water any damage to the sharks is regenerated as long as there in water.

RP Sample:

Give a much better description, its lacking anything useful for the most part. How long do the sharks last, how much chakra is put into them, how far can the sharks travel range wise how big are the sharks, can you move while you are controlling the sharks, how much water is needed for this jutsu to work. Also add an rp sample thats what it is there for.

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Name:(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank:D
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:suiton
Description: Covers area in a mist that can be thick.

Add the actual description, not your little one that describes nothing.

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5 Sharks:

Suiton Goshokuzame
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. Kisame will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water below.


Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.


Just use these descriptions, they are from Leafninja.

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