Yamato Update

Subject: Yamato Update Fri Sep 04, 2009 4:31 pm

Name:Yamato
Appearance:
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Rank: A
Special Abilities:This sword, due to his ancestral powers and the materials used to create it, has one of the most unique abilitys.The techniques executed by this sword won't be able to be seen at human eyes.For example, a gennin wouldn't be able to keep up with Yamato, but of course, all of this speed, is also part of Vergil's body.Although, a normal ANBU would probably see it, but of course ANBU will see it, and perhaps some special jounins.Kekkei Genkais allow this sword to be seen of course, but the sharigan can't preview some of it's techniques.Although, if Vergil powers grows, so does Yamato, due to their connection.The sword has also another technique, which is also good.If someone else holds this sword, their speed will be able to be seen at human eyes, since it only works with Vergil.And another, non-human forms can see this sword.After fusing the sword with the new material, the sword became changed.Now, at certain points, Vergil achieved new forms.Now, after holding it for all of this time, Vergil, has implanted a seal on the sword's hilt, it's quite small but seenable, and when he activates the seal, the sword may change to the first form, and for the know able, second form.This sword now also requires Sharingan tomoe 3 + to be seen, and for non-uchihas, only some A-Ranked or S-Ranked.

Origin: Vergil had heard the tales of Kisame, which inspired him to create his own sword, with his own materials.He was only 6 when he started working on it, probably this is the reason that gave him alot of muscules.Vergil collected the materials, when he was left alone, he went to Kiri city, he worked during that time, and after he had money, he started buying the required materials.The sword was compused by iron, one of the best, a small piece of meteor, which provokes the ability to be unseen by humans, and nothing more actually.He stole the materials needed to create it.He putted together a small blacksmith shop in a alley and worked during the night, putting his sword together.When he was 8, he was finally finished with it.After becoming a missing-nin, his quest became harder of course.But then, some time after, Vergil found some weird rock, and he used it to improve Yamato.It was a white rock, strange, yet it greatly improved Yamato.Until one day, Vergil was training and he suddently changed his whole form.The sword materials, or atleast the new material, created new forms for Vergil, chaging his looks and strenghts.

Name: 1st State --> Kousen Deba [ War Knife ]
Rank: A
State: Discovered
Looks:
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Vergil's hair grows longer and becomes blond.He has red eyes, matching all of his entire outfit.He has a brown undershirt, and a red jacket.He has brown jeans, but they almost hide, since the red jacket goes to his feet, like his blue one.He has some white lines across his jackets.He has a pair of brown small boots.He wears a pair of brown gloves too.Despite the white wings, he has black wings.
Improvements: Vergil's speed is increased at the level of a ANBU, despite his strenght he isn't stronger then an ANBU too.His strenght is increased just a little bit.but combining his speed, his agility that was also increased at a level of a elite Jounin, and his bether Swordsmanship, he is really strong.He also receives a pair of wings.His sword is really small in this state, beeing a small dagger, used for quick attacks.This level is the easiest one yet, it damages his inner organs, or atleast some, and it causes some permanent damage if not healed.Vergil can only be in this state for 6 posts.

Name: 2nd State --> Raiton Yari [ Lighting Spear ]
Rank: A
State: Discovered
Looks:
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In this state Vergil’s appearence changes again, like in all states.His hair becomes a little smaller, and it becomes black.He has a black outfit, with some red marks on right side of it.He wears a pair of long brown gloves, and a white diamond ring on his neck.He wears a brown belt, and a pair of black jeans too.He has a pair of brown boots.His wings are black too, and he has a crest on his right arm of the outfit. Yamato becomes big as a spear and with a sharp edge.
Improvements:In this level, reverse to the first state, his strenght increases at ANBU.His speed increases even more at a level of a ANBU Captain.Using the wings he receives, he can even go faster, even beeing able to fly.There is not much improvements except that, Yamato becomes even bigger just like a spear and sharper in the end.This state, causes the blood to stop sometimes after it ends, making him cogh blood too, making his blood circulation slower.Medical attention needed right away.Vergil can only be in this state for 6 posts.

Name: 3rd State --> Joukai Gifuto [ Heaven Gift ]
Rank: A
State: Hidden
Looks:
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He has bigger hair here, and it becomes greyer.His clothing changes into a black jacket like.He has some golden crests on it, and a green undershirt, filled with draws.He has red eyes, which are probably the reason why he is blood thirsty.He has a pair of black jeans, and a pair of black boots too.On this state, Yamato sword size and weight increases drasticly, beeing a berseker type of word, It begins weighting even more, but Vergil is able to hold it one handed, despite beeing slim.
Improvements: There is no wings on this state.Strangely, it stoped the continous line of wings, but of course it has to have a catch.His strenght is the most strongest in all the states, beeing able to hold Yamato berseker type with one hand.It is the ANBU type of power..His speed lowers to Jounin, but his agility remains the same.In this state, there are possible ways of blowing part of the muscules of Vergil, maybe even causing death.Vergil can only be in this state for 5 posts.

Name: 4th State --> Kuro Mikoto [ Dark Prince ]
Rank: S
State: The last known hidden state
Looks:
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In this level his hair becomes even bigger, having some small part of hair covering his left eye.He has blond hair on this state too.His body is shirtless, only having a small cape to cover it, and it’s ripped off, showing his muscules, and his body is filled with scars and draws on this state.He has black jeans and a pair of black boots.He has dark wings bigger then the others, and has bandages on his hands like Rock Lee.His sword grows normal, but it’s power increases and so does it’s blade.
Improvements: On this level, the most strongest level known, all of his attributes increase, but the one coming out of the others is his speed and flying skills and speed.He can fly at a speed of 50 miles per hour, and his normal speed is of x3 times then average..Although, together with his sword, the speed lowers a little.And in the end of this state, Vergil will faint, or go into coma, depends on the time he used it.Vergil can only be in this state for 3 posts.

Added:
Now, after holding it for all of this time, Vergil, has implanted a seal on the sword's hilt, it's quite small but seenable, and when he activates the seal, the sword may change to the first form, and for the know able, second form.This sword now also requires Sharingan tomoe 3 + to be seen, and for non-uchihas, only some A-Ranked or S-Ranked.

And opened second state.

Subject: Re: Yamato Update Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:13 pm

~ Bump. ~

Subject: Re: Yamato Update Sun Sep 06, 2009 2:17 pm

~ Bump. ~

Subject: Re: Yamato Update Wed Sep 09, 2009 4:29 am

~ Bump. ~

Leaf ANBU

If your 4th state is S-ranked than the sword overall will have to be S-ranked so please change that. Also are you able to have a S-ranked weapon due to your rank? if not then please get rid of your 4th state.

Quote :: He can fly at a speed of 120 miles per hour, and his normal speed is of 50 km per second.

120 is incredibly fast an a little OP please decrease your speed level.

Also do you have a fuuinjutsu speciality due ot the seal on the bottom of te sword?

Subject: Re: Yamato Update Wed Sep 09, 2009 1:57 pm

Quote :: If your 4th state is S-ranked than the sword overall will have to be S-ranked so please change that. Also are you able to have a S-ranked weapon due to your rank? if not then please get rid of your 4th state.

The state it hidden yet, and Vergil doesn't know it exists at all, when I arrive S-Rank classification, I'll open that and the third.Since I'm only A-Ranked, I have two.

Quote :: He can fly at a speed of 120 miles per hour, and his normal speed is of 50 km per second.
120 is incredibly fast an a little OP please decrease your speed level.

Changed.

Quote :: Also do you have a fuuinjutsu speciality due ot the seal on the bottom of te sword?

No, I got someone to make it, and to activate it I just have to touch it, like Explosive Tags.

Leaf ANBU

OH sorry i didn't know about the unlocking part, amke sure you are not tempted to use it until you reach S-rank. Approved ^^

Leaf ANBU

Unapproved. Mainly for the S Ranks wording still being OP

A Rank form: 'It is the ANBU Root type of power'

Anbu Root do not exist in US so this term is misleading please change it

S Rank form: 'his normal speed is of 5 km per second'

Still way too fast reduce to something like x3 times faster then average. 5km per second is akin to Flying Thunder God Technique which is prohibited.

Subject: Re: Yamato Update Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:35 am

Edited.

Leaf ANBU

Approved

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