Kohaku's summon [WIP]

Name: Shuhanutu

Nickname: Nutu

Species: Cat/Panther Summon

Rank S

Looks:
Nutu is a huge summon, that, upon being summoned, can reach hights as tall as the cannon characters: tsunade's slug summon. Nutu has vicious teeth, and long deadly claw, both of which he uses as his first weapon.

When in the rage of battle, Nutu is almost always in a snarl, showng his pearly white and rather huge teeth. His chilling eyes are most of the time all he needs to claim a victory over a victim as they are haunted with the burden of being king of the cat summons.




Personality: Being a boss summoning of Kohaku's, Nutu does not like Tammy orders, but respects that he has to. He is seldom available for the summoning, and always moans and groans when he is. Nutu however, when summoned, is a powerhouse of energy, devoting himself to beat the opponent no matter the odds. Nutu is careful, and cautious, whilehe also knows his strength, speed, and size, and knows that he has an advantage over most other things.

When Nutu gets fired up, almost no amount of injury will bring him down. Also, without underestimating anything, the only thing that Nutu has ever shown any sort od fear fighting is a summon his size. Wither way, he will stand steadfast and fight.

On the rare, very rare occasion that Kohaku nght summon him in the heat of battle, or upon visits to their deminsion, Nutu is extremely well manored, polite, being court trained as a public figure, he embraces his maturity and throws out all selfish or foolish acts. The cats seemnot to respect him simply for being their leader, but becUse he would die in an instant for his people, however still conscious of his honor.

Age: (unknown) His voice is that of someone I'm their thirties.

History:
Unlike no other cat that Kohaku can summon, save the ancient burial, has as kch respect as Nutu. When Kohaku made her first trip into the cat deminsion, she had met this cat, during her first bonding with Mika. However, that had been years ago, and then he was as small as Kohaku's cats are mostly now. He had lngpointed ears, and was still all black. Kohaku had been very fond of that handsome cat, and hoped that she could meet him agan.

Now, years later, Kohaku made another journey into the cat realm, to create a blood contract with her next summon. After that had taken place, Kohaku had started to train that summon, and although it strained her, she used it as kch as possible. However, after the blood which she had made the blood contract from started to mingle wth her own DNA, Kohaku started to have a harder time summoning her statue summon. It felt like she was having to sort through something in order to get to the ancient burial. She had felt it many times before, butnever like this.

In training alone one day, Kohaku summoned the statue summon, within the sacred grinds of the Yoru shrines, and instead of trying to sort through the barriers, she let her chakra channel into the obstacle tha shroded the path the most. The smoke exploded for the summon, however when it cleared, Kohaku saw a huge black panther standing in front of her. Kohaku at first was scared, but recognized the cats eyes.

Word had spread that Kohaku was the last Yoru, and thus the huge summon bowed his head. Kohak was still confused as to wh she had summoned this instead. Upon asking, the panther, Nutu answered that he had been the mightest of the warriors, and had earned the right to be buried in the sacred burial grounds, and thus had given some of us blood. It explained why she had summoned him, not only had she made a contract with the burial, but all the warriors who had placed their blood there.

After a long talk, they fully came to see each other as the people they had missed, and then and there became a powerful duo.

Jutsu's:

Name: Shitzuki kawarimi no jutsu - cat style substatution
Rank: B
Element: --
Description: As with all of Nutu's jutsu, this attack is not elemental, and revolves around the cats worst enemy, flees. When this jutsu is activated, Nutu can turn his entire body into swarm of flees, or simply a segment, providing a go through substance wherever he pleases. This jutsu lasts two posts before he has to repeat it. Within this time, Nutu can mutate any place of his body at will.

Name: Shitsuki daisan no Mai - partial flee swarm - leach killing
Rank: B
Element: --
Description: After this jutsu is activated, Nutu's eye will mutate into a large swarm of flees. This huge swarm of flees will charge towards the target, large enough to envelope an entire human. Once these flees are set, they will start to, instead of sucking blood, absorb chakra, at a B rank pace. This jutsu cam be blocked by a ninjutsu attack B rank or higher. In this case, the eye will simply reform at a quick pace, having wasted the chakra for the some what low costing technique.

Name: Shitsuki edo tensie no jutsu - half born sacrifise
Rank: S
Element: --
Description: Nutu rarely uses this technique as it involves him coming close to death. If Nutu is badly injured, his body will start to mutate into a huge, gargantuan swarm of flees, the swarm is the size of Nutu. In this way, this jusu is simply a larger and more pwerful version of 'partial flee swarm - leach killing,' however, after three posts of being in this form, if Nutu can gather enough chakra throgh the leaching process, the flees will reform into the huge panther, and restore him by 50% health. Nutu can only go through with this jutsu once in one summon session.

First of all have you got permission for a S-ranked summon. Your other summon was only allowed ot be A-ranked.

Longer paragraph on looks and more on personality please.

haha and whats a panther got to do with flees? lol its unique ^^

Could you fix up some grammar and spelling in the jutsus please making it easier to read.

*looks longer
*personality longer
*jutsu fixed

and to clarify, it's not that Im not allowed an S rank summon, seeing as I have one, it's that, not even at an S rank can a summon bring you back to life, so I edited it, and made the jutsu an A rank tech, and accordingly made the summon A rank to match^^

but edited this one, so can it be accepted?

fine. approved ^^