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Sune` Ku Sand Genin
| Subject: Sune`'s Stuff Mon Sep 28, 2009 8:01 pm | |
| ~ ! PLEASE NOTE, ANYTHING I CANNOT USE AT THE MOMENT IS BEING CREATED NOW FOR FUTURE REFERENCE ! ~ Name: Condensed Chakra Grenade Appearance: http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs45/f/2009/064/3/a/grenade_by_nighthawk101stock.jpg Rank: A Special Abilities: When thrown, it will pick up speed until detonated by Sune` Ku. Once detonated, it will unleash a torrent of predisposed and condensed chakra that had seemed to be stored inside previously. This torrent of chakra is made by channeling a large amount of wind chakra into the grenade - BEFOREHAND (Which means when the battle starts, this grenade will have already been charged). While the chakra is being condensed inside, it will replicate itself and grow to a higher level. When the chakra is unleashed, a shockwave of slicing winds will cover a mass range of 20 feet, firing winds that reach potential to slice titanium in half. Origin: Sune` Ku designed and perfected this weapon as a primary defensive attack which would cover an escape in a dangerous situation. However, thinking further she developed this grenade which could play the role of both offense, and defense.[/color]
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| | | Sune` Ku Sand Genin
| Subject: Re: Sune`'s Stuff Mon Sep 28, 2009 8:07 pm | |
| Name: Condensed Wind Kunai
Appearance: https://media.photobucket.com/image/cool%20kunai/phyreblade_blog/True%20Swords/cold_steel_kunai1.jpg
Rank: C
Special Abilities: When thrown, it will pick up speeds until detonated by Sune` Ku. It was designed as a trick-weapon, as to where the kunai itself never touches the enemy at all, but only seems like it. It will head towards the opponent, and once the enemy looks at it - An illusion will activate. It will seem as if the kunai rapidly picked up its pace and is at the enemy already, but once the enemy swings to hit it - It is no longer there, and the real kunai's effect will activate. Once this kunai is detonated, it will exert a large amount of condensed wind chakra into a 10 foot range which is fired out in a triangular path, which means anything within 90 degrees on either side of the kunai will be potentially annihilated by F-2 tornadic winds.
Origin: This was designed by Sune` Ku as a trick-weapon to kill a multiple amount of ninja at once, an assassination weapon, if you will. This is one of her most effective and primary weapons during her expulsion drills, where she will kill many within a single country or village, and take control of it for a brief amount of time. | |
| | | Jiro Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Sune`'s Stuff Mon Sep 28, 2009 11:15 pm | |
| Grenade not approved since its a free power up. It needs to cost chakra, having it ready prior is basically a way to have something for nothing
The wind kunai is too powerful, needs a chakra cost and I am not sure how you plan to use an illusion since you have not got a gen speciality | |
| | | Mr. K C ranked Missing-Ninja
| Subject: Re: Sune`'s Stuff Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:42 am | |
| The grenade is a no because this is naruto and we don't approve grenades. The Kunai is a no not only because it is op, but you made no attempt to place mechanisms in the weapon to cause the effects you listed. Kunai simply don't explode into tornadoes with illusion for no reason. | |
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