Kohaku's Nagito summon! [WIP]

Name: Kichoyose no jutsu - Nagito
Rank: S
Appearance:
Largest version

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Normal version (life size)


Type of Summon: Yoru blood contract
Species: Cat/Tiger
Elemental Affinity:--
History:
Ever since Kohaku made the blod contract with the statue summons, mixing her blood with the blood pool that surounded it int a purifies river, she has had trouble summoning her statue summon, feeling that there are barriers in the way of the jutsu going through. In her training time, alone, Kohaku will try and move past these barriers and summon the statues, but even summoning a single statue was hard. Kohaku did not know why this was, seeing as the blood contract was a solid one.

Then one day, during training, when she had exuasted herself almost to the point where she could not try and summon it another time, Kohaku sealed her hands together and performed the seal, this time not avoiding the barriers, instead, ignoring them, and letting the jutsu manipulate itself. A huge blast of smoke rose, and when it cleared, Nagito the white, a white tiger summon was there, looking dazed.

Kohaku did not know what had happened, but the tiger spoke to her, telling her about the truth of the blood contract she had made, and that the blood was mixed with all the greatest warriors, and that, in short, Kohaku had made a bloos contract with hundreads of ninja summon cats. It was a scary thought, but what was worse was, until she made a seperate seal for each, she did not know which summon she would summon. So Kohaku went home, and created a seperate seal for the ninja tiger that had been summoned.

The next day, Kohaku tried using the slightly modified jutsu, but it still did not fully work, although it helped. Instead of summong randomly from the hundreads of cats, Kohaku made a summon seal that would only summon ten cats, not at once, but select one out of them, randomly, without Kohaku's control, all great warriors, and all at Kohaku's command.

(This is the same history as the others of this summon jutsu.)

Jutsu

Name dekai kasei no jutsu - huge growth jutsu
Rank C-S
Type Ninjutsu
Element--
Description After activation, Nagito can cause himself to grow to enormous hights. This is Nagito's favorite, and most used jutsu, and also one of his most powerful. This jutsu also gives Nagito a huge amount of strength depending on what level jutsu he uses. This jutsu can give him different growth sizes depending on what rank style he uses.
C - allows him to grow 30ft and increases his strength by 30%
B - allows him to grow 50ft and increases his strength by 50%
A - allows him to grow 80ft and increases his strength by 80%
S - allows him to grow 90ft and increases his strength by 100%

Name kontserun bannin - combined Guard
Rank C-S
Type Ninjutsu
Element--
Description
After activation, depending on the jutsu type used by the opponent, Nagito can stop it from happening, or stop it once it has already been activated. If the opponents jusu has to do with manipulating a large among of space, and thus calls for them to extend their chakra from their body, Nagito cam emit his chakra into the area, and cause it to mingle with other chakra, thus stopping it from coming about. If the jutsu is not a jutsu that requires chakra be emitted from the body by the opponent, Nagito has to make some sort of contact with them, injecting his chakra into them. Another way of doing this is Nagito will simply inject his chakra into the jutsu itself, if it is solid, and thus rip it apart from the inside out.
Example Of Use A:
If the opponent uses a jusu that brings forth a storm, they will extend their chakra into the area and thus create it. Nagito, using this jutsu, will send his chakrainto the area. From there, the two chakras will mingle, and the opponents chakra will not form into the jutsu, due to having his/her chakra bound to another, and thus nit able to control. After thus happened, the opponents storm would not come about, and both him/her, and Nagito lost the chakra they exerted.
Example Of Use B:
Say the opponent used a jutsu that allows snakes to shoot from their sleeve, not extending the chakra very far from your body. Nagito could not simply emit his chakra any longer, but would have to make contact with the either the person, or the jutsu, to inject his chakra into the technique, and thus, like above, cause his chakra to mingle with the opponents, not allowing the jutsu to be further controlled by the opponent, and thus the jutsu would crumble, and the snakes would fade away.
This jutsu has different levels needed to dispell other jutsu:
C - Shuts down any jutsu C or lower. (Can be used once)
B - Shuts down Anything B or lower. (Can be used once)
A - Shuts down anything A or lower. (Can be used once)
S - Shuts down anything S or lower. (Can be used twice)

Name kontserun Henge - combined transformation
Rank S
Type Ninjutsu
Element--
Description
After activation, Kohaku and Nagito will do a combined transformation, fusing their abilities together. Smoke will explode, revealing a Kohaku much different than before, with the combined chakra flame, stamina, strength, speed etc. of Nagito. This not only alters her looks, but her fighting ability, causing her a great deal more strength.
Also, while in this form, Kohaku takes on attributes such as claws, and fangs, due to the cat like appearance. Each of the following stats are boosted by x percent:
Stamina - 100%
Strength - 80%
Speed - 80%
Chakra Amount - 80%
Chakra Power - 70%
Hearing - 80%

How big is the Largest version?

There.
I put in the largest version, and now can it be accepted?

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S - allows him to grow 120ft and increases his strength by 120%

regarding your huge growth jutsu please change the S-rank strength increase to 100%. Doubling the strength would be sufficient instead of 120%.

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Name kontserun bannin - combined Guard
Rank C-S
Type Ninjutsu
Element--
Description After activation, Nagito can emmit his chakra into the chakra channel of another, and then disrupt the chakra channel, and cause it to go hay wire, not allowing it to go through. In this way, Nagito can stop a jutsu from even happening, or stop if once it had happened. For example, in one instance, if Nagito sees the opponent stringing together hand seals, he will be able to send his own chakra into the mix, to shut the jutsu down, and thus the ninja's jutsu will simply naver happen; or, if the jutsu does go through, Nagito can emmit his chakra into the network, and thus shut it down. This jutsu causes Nagito to loose quite a lot of chakra, and can be lethal if he uses it on low chakra, and either way, causes strain on the body.
C - Shuts down any jutsu C or lower.
B - Shuts down Anything B or lower.
A - Shuts down anything A or lower.
S - Shuts down anything S or lower.

How does he send his chakra into the other target disrupting their chakra channel. he would have to make some sort of contact with the target either through touching them or having some sort of connection (e.g like Ino used her hair to connect her chakra to Sakura in the CE exam and use her mind disruption jutsu.) Also when your summon has cancelled the opponents attack does the chakra used by the opponent still happen (ie do they still waste the same amount of chakra using the attack even though it didn't work)

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Name kontserun Henge - combined transformation
Rank S
Type Ninjutsu
Element--
Description After activation, both Kohaku and Nagito will break themselves into chakra, rendering them invisible and non existant, before their chakra streams merge. After the chakra streams merge, they will begin to solidify again, only different. Their souls will become one, and Kohaku will appear, only in a mutant form, lacking that normal human form. When in this dsoul state, Kohaku's abilities are greatly enhanced. Also while in this state, all of Kohaku's jutsu are super charged, allowing the simple 'water dragon jutsu' to. instead of creating her normal two dragons, to create at least ten or eleven. After the jutsu wears off, depending on damage taken, and chakra used, Kohaku will again break down into chakra, and the two (Kohaku and Nagito) will return to their normal bodies. This jutsu has a huge strain on Nagito, and often causes him to have to dissapear into white smoke, and rest for a couple days before being summoned. This jutsu actually has a minor draw back for Kohaku as the jutsu is activated by Nagito, and while in this form, they are both running on his chakra. Also, while in this form, 'Kohaku' can use Nagito's jutsu, seeing as he is in her body.
Strength - 80%
Hearing - 90%
Speed - 70%
Sight - 80%
Stamina - 100%
Chakra - 60%
Jutsu Strength - 80%

I have big problems with this jutsu. In a way this would be a KKG combination technique with an animal as it is very powerful. You say you break yourself into chakra rendering yourself invisible and non-existant? that doesn't make sense, and then you merge your chakra streams together and solidify again. That isn't necessarily how chakra works. Also i don't think your character has the chakra control to use a jutsu like this (if stated in your special characteristics then i apologise as i havent checked your character) but im guessing that it isn't. Also your stats bonuses are very large. This jutsu is denied, but i hate to see all this work go down the drain. You will have to change it a lot to get accepted. Look at how the Inuzuka do a combination technique and try incorporate that into your jutsu. You can take on feline like abilities e.g claws, fangs etc. But the stats bonuses are rediculous.

Yeah, for combination transformation, look at Naruto and Gamabunta's transformation. one provided chakra, the other shaped it. The result was that they both transformed.

Edited.
I made a major correction on the last jutsu, now it's no where near as crazily OP.
And I re did the description on the second jutsu.
So ya.
Now can I be accepted...

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Name kontserun bannin - combined Guard

Regarding the combined Guard technique it is much better now thanks. Though i would like you to limit the amount of times it is allowed to be used in battle. S-rank allowed twice, anything below allowed once.

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Name kontserun Henge - combined transformation
Rank S
Type Ninjutsu
Element--
Description
After activation, Kohaku and Nagito will do a combined transformation, fusing their abilities together. Smoke will explode, revealing a Kohaku much different than before, with the combined chakra flame, stamina, strength, speed etc. of Nagito. This not only alters her looks, but her fighting ability, causing her a great deal more strength.

You will still have to name the percentage bonuses of the transformation. Also with your appearance change do you gain the abilities such as physical appearance of the cat like claws and fangs. If so please stat.

Ok.
Done.
Now can it be accepted.
And by the way, thanks todd for being such an awesome person!
haha...

120ft?!

Thats bigger than the American Football fields.

Yes please change this to a more realistic size ^^

Oh gosh.
Im so sorry guys, I thought I edited that way down before, but I guess not.
But I cut 30ft off of its top size.
Sorry.

approved leah!