Kugutsu (Approved!) [L3][SE]

General Information
Name: Kugutsu Shishou

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Looks:

Kugutsu is a very tall boy for his age. He looks a lot older than he really is. He has spiky redish hair, that reaches past his chin. His skin is a tanned color, due to the fact that he lived in the sand village his whole life. His eyes are a greenish color and one is covered with a bandage, he uses this to make it harder for to fight. He will take it off, if he needs to. He wears his headband over his neck, which is a Sand headband, that is black.

Kugustu's clothing consist of a red shirt, without sleeves. He wears a brownish jacket over his black pants. These pants reach slightly passed his knees and to his shoes are bandages. He also has a bandage on his left hand, were a glove covers. The open fingered glove is a light brown, much like the jacket. He also wears black, open toed shoes.


Personality: Kugutsu is a very kind boy. He loves to train with his skills he has trained with over the years. He likes to build things with his hands and use those to fight with. He also loves to hid inside these things when fighting. He uses puppets to fight. He is very smart when it comes to fighting, and he knows how to build many things and build them well. Kugutsu loves animals, and most of his puppets look like different types of animals. He will do anything for his village, unless that means him dying, although he will fight until he cannot anymore.

He loves to fight and will spar with anyone. He wants to create a human puppet, but he does not wish to kill someone, unless he has to kill them already. He would use a fallen friend as a human puppet, if they allowed him to do so. He is a very smart person and knows how to fight and look over a battle. He uses a lot of poisons also. He acts older than he really is. He can sometimes be a pervert.

Personality Trait's: He likes to build puppets, and fight with them. His favorite part is to place weapons inside the puppets. Most of his puppets have tons of weapons in them. He will help anyone, if he can.

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Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
Village: Suna

Skill Information

Skill Specialty:
Main:Puppetry
Sub: Medical

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
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Special Characteristics: Despite the fact of being a great puppetry, Kugutsu is worked with a little Medical jutsu, mainly with his puppets. He is great at making tools and using his puppets.

Items/Weapons:

Scrolls

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Puppets:

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Summonings

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Jutsus:

Basic Jutsu:

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Puppetry Jutsu:

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Medical Jutsu:

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Background Information
Pre-Academy

Kugutsu was born twevle years ago, in the sand village. His father and mother were always there for him, so he grew up with a pretty good life.His father was a blacksmith, so he grew up building things a lot. His mother was a nurse, and she helped him learn medical jutsu, at an early age. However, he was not fond of the medical jutsu, but he still had to learn it. It was not until he found out about puppets, until he found his true passion. He began to train with them, as well as build them himself. He started this at hte young age of five, and he even put the weapons he built with his father inside the puppets. He was soon taken away, by a medical jutsu user, to test. This person wanted to try out a jutsu he had been working on, that ultered the make-up of humans. He made Kugutsu body more snake like, but it was not as planned, because it did not go as far as others had. He spent several weeks training his new found powers. He went back to his family and he was given his first puppet by his father, that used metal. It was an armadillo, and he used his new found ability to use the puppet a lot easier. Kugutsu trained many months with this puppet, this was all before he went into the academy. However, he was not as skilled as any Genin or even Academy student.

Academy Arc:
At the young of ten, Kugutsu was enrolled into the ninja academy in the village of the sand. His parents knew that he would become a skilled puppetry, but he would need a head start to even think about becoming a ninja. The ninja academy would be a great way for Kugutsu to get a head start to becoming a great ninja. He was put in right away, and started learning the basics. He did not like going to school, because he wanted to learn more about puppetry, but he had to start with the basic's. He knew if he sat through this, he could become a much better ninja, so he stuck with it, and tried to do his best in school.

During his time in the academy he built another puppet, but this one was not as good as his armadillo puppet. it was a common puppet, that was used to learn with. He could not use the armadillo puppet as well as he could this one. He had to start out weak, because even though he could build good puppets, he couldn't use them to the best of his ability. This puppet did not use many weapons, but it help Kugutsu with his ability to use puppets. He did not like this puppet as well, but with the help of a tutor, he would soon be able to use his puppets to the best he could.

After a year of training and learning the basic's of shinobi, he was ready to take the exam to become a Genin. With the knowledge he gained over the year and the training nonstop, he was about at the Genin level. He took the exam, and just as planned he passed it, with his skills of the basic's puppetry and the little medical jutsu he knew. Afterwards, he became a Genin of the sand village.

Genin Arc:

This is Kugutsu current arc. He has done quite a bit already as a Genin. For one he has done a lot of training in the medical arts. He has learned quite a bit from his mother. He has also been able to use his armadillo puppet, better than ever. He also was given another new werewolf puppet from his father, that is used for attacking. It was also at this time where he was granted 3 scrolls to summon his puppets, which also came from his father.Kugutsu has yet to learn how to use more than one puppet at once. So, he can only uses one puppet at a time. However, he can only use two at a time. He is currently looking for a team.

RP Sample:
The wind began to blow hard around the mountain tops. A man stood on top of this mountain, with a mask covering his face. Behind the mask, the man had an evil smile on his face and he was giggling just the slightest. He looked as he was waiting for something or someone, as of now, nothing was known. He slowly turned towards the bottom of the mountain, as he saw two men walking up. They two had masks on and each had robes on. The two walking was not sure, what was going to happen, but the man on top wanted something with them, and he was not going to be nice about what that thing is. In fact, he will probably try and give them one of the worst things in the world, death.

However, a fight would come about and the gift the man at the top wished to give the others, would not become an easy task. He laughed louder as they got closer to him. The man at the top was sure that he was going to kill the men, and thought it was going to be an easy task. But he was wrong. He thought he became so much stronger than them, because he had been through some horrible things. He did get stronger, but as he did, they did as well.

You see, these three men have a past together. For each pair a completely different story, almost nothing had been alike. Either way, it was assumed that the two walking up had been allies, while the one on top had been an enemy of the two. All three of these men, were powerful ninja, each with their own strength and weakness. Soon, after about ten or so minutes, the two reached to top and if you could see their faces, you'd only see a disapproving look. But from the other man, was a somewhat happy look, or better said as an evil smile.

The man who had been on the top of the mountain to start with, slowly removed his mask. As of now, only 1/4 of the right side of his face was shown. As of now, it was to soon to assume who this man really was. The other two removed their robes, and it could be made out somewhat of one, but the other looked like he was a loud here. This shocked the man he had been walking with and even the one who wanted to kill him. Soon, the man who was at the top the whole time spoke up. "Who are you?" He said and took of his mask. The man had been Hell's guardian, Garnurk. He laughed as soon as his mask came off.

The two men said as the one who had already been known, took of his mask, showing that it had been the Hokage, Sannam. He sighed and glared at Garnurk, and then looked back at the still masked guy. The last man took of his mask, and he was still a stranger to the two others. He sighed and he began to change. Sannam and Garnurk gasped as the man had been the Demon King Drac.

Drac, Sannam and Garnurk stood looking at each other. The tension rose as soon as everyone had shown their true self’s. There was sure to be a battle, that would be sure to show the talents of each. This would not be a fight to miss. Even though they all knew a fight was going to break out, they all stood there and only breathing and heart beating was heard.

Finished

Hello Kugutsu ^^

I'd like to raise one point to you, i know we don't follow the rules of the narutoverse all the time but when judging an individuals skills to their current rank i like to use characters from the show as a starting point. So, for this example i'll use Kankuro. Now take into account that at Genin rank (during the CE's) he was only capable of controling one puppet. This is someone who has only ever trained in puppetry as his specialty. Your character seems to have decent knowledge of medical jutsu, which in my understanding takes a very high chakra control. My point being, noway could your character create those puppets and posses such medical knowledge at Genin rank. With this said, i believe it fair to ask you to remove the following. (Atleast until chuunin rank).

1) Please Remove Armadillo
2) Please Remove Werewolf
3) Please Increase the overall amount of posts Kugutsu's opponent/target has before they pass out. This is a very powerful jutsu for someone of your characters rank, by increasing the amount of posts it makes your poison less powerful. Again, please bare in mind as your character advances in rank so will your abillity to create poisons.

(If you have any questions or would like to debate what i've put above please contact a second moderator to examine my post. Thank you for joining Ultimate Shinobi, have a nice day.)

Very well said L33, and I agree with you totally, however I think I have a comprimise which could be made here. Now obviously you cant just carry three puppets with you everywhere, thats just unreasonable anyways. Instead, your character could implement the use of scrolls, and carry them on his back like Kankuro did, with a stippulation at hand. You can only use one per battle, and change your history to having been given the puppets as a gift from your father perhaps, or maybe two of them from your father and you created the third, whcih would work two. I do agree that you shouldnt be able to manipulate all three at the same time.

Senkou, thats pure genius dude. Ok, provided Kugutsu change's his background so that it was actually his farther who made them and then gave them to him i'm down with that idea. Obviously, yes it stands to reason that you lack the control at your rank to use all two, three at once. The giant scroll is an excellent storage device however it does add weight to your character, bare in mind others may try and use that agianst you if you haven't already taken it off. (i.e Someone sneak attacks you while your traveling.)

So, change the above and weaken the poison jutsu and you'll have an approved from moi

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I think its all in order, so ....APPROVED

I second that. x