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PostSubject: Jakku Suragi Updated   Jakku Suragi Updated EmptySun Nov 29, 2009 6:10 am

General Information

Name: Jakku Suriagi

Nickname/Alias: "Oh, you mean that quite guy!"

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Looks: Black straight hair that has a blue tint to it in moonlight. Almost always wears his mask only pulling it off if he is around family or trusted friends. He wears his head protector on his forehead and never takes it off feeling it is dishonorable to. He is 6"2' and 200 lbs. He has a lean build and is capable of doing extremely fast hand signs so he can seal a genjutsu in a kunai and then still have enough time to throw it.
He has a scar over his right eye and his eyes re a crimson color making it look as though he has a sharingan which he use to his advantage in battle by making the opponent refuse to look him in the eyes, He will often even use the false place technique to put three commas around it. When he does this it gives him an advantage be keeping the enemy's eye sight strictly indirect and keeps them concentrated on looking away not dodging. It also discourages genjutsu users from casting illusions on him.

Personality: He is really cut off from the world only getting close to his mother who died during a battle against the nine tailed fox demon. He hasn't gotten close to someone since. He is usually found in his thinking tree unless he is training or making a genjutsu. Occasionally he will ask if someone would like him to cast his training genjutsu Keiko no Jutsu (Training Technique) to supply a training exercise equal to that of fighting an army.
Although he usually doesn't he can be corned into a conversation if you really try, most of the time he just looks at you as though you have said something stupid hoping to scare you away. If you do not he will probably
act a little cold, but that is only because he has not communicated to any one since his momma died.
Personality Trait's: He develops mirror based genjutsu techniques that he teaches to no one.

Catch Phrase:"Few cheat death, none escape. Come, taste death's blade."

Clan Information


Clan Name: Suragi
Kekkei Genkai:
Clan Symbol: «§»
Clan History: Only two are left, Jakku Suragi and Hiro Suragi. The rest of the family line died fighting the Nine tailed spirit fox. The suragi family has a extreme hatred for the tailed beasts. When fighting them they hol nothing back often said that their abilities will exceed their current rank due to them useing pure hatred. Hiro and Jakku where found on the battle field nearly dead. They had no Head protector so the clan they where from was a mystery. they were taken in by a sunagakure women. Jakku was 6 Hiro was 5. They always felt that they were the outcasts in the village due to them being adopted, they long to find their original village. Every mourning Jakku will meditate, whilst Hiro plays his grandfathers orcarina, from the tree in the backyard. They often train together in Jakku's training illusion, they both share a love for climbing trees. Jakku often sits alone in his thinking tree wondering what is happening in his home village. -Still underconsturction me and my friend are working on it-


Rank Information:


Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure

Skill Information


Skill Specialty:

Main:Genjutsu
Sub:Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main:Wind
Sub:Earth

Special Characteristics: He is able to bind his genjutsus into a kunai through a ninjutsu symbol he puts on them by using different hand signs while holding them. He has trained himself in a illusion to be able to form hand signs quickly in order to be able to form them fast enough to be able to throw a Kuni at normal speeds without alerting his enemy of him sealing them.

Items/Weapons:


Name: Chakra formed Kasurigama

Appearance: A custom kuni kasurigama that is laced with chakra so it has the cutting power equivalent to ten razors.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: Can be used to activate the Kagame no jutsu through the ninjutsu symbol on its end.
Origin: When he was in his first training exercise he was given only one kuni and was told that he would have to attack and kill a pack of wolves with it, the day before going he grabbed a chain from his grandpa's kasurigama and practiced all day in an time stop illusion til he learned to use it. (As he moves up in rank he will upgrade it)

Jutsus:


Name: Kagame No Jutsu (Hall of Mirrors Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The caster puts the enemy in a world that is full of mirrors all reflecting the caster, each reflection can attack but if attacked they will shatter and be replaced by another can be broken by an outside ninja or by finding the right reflection that is the center point of the chakra. Casted by the user sealing it into a chakra based Kasurigama and making the opponet look at the blade while doing the tatsu (dragon) hand signal.(As he moves up in rank he will upgrade it)



Kagami Sakasa Mokushi no Jutsu (Mirror Inverted Sight Technique)
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Element:Wind
Description: Everything perceived by the enemy is inverted, if they see the caster coming from the right and block to the right they will get hit on the left.

Shikou Tendou no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Supreme Paradise Technique)
Type:Genjutsu
Rank: D
Element:Wind
Description: The person under it sees themselves on an island surrounded by beautiful women in bikinis if the caster wants they can cause the women to form into anything they can imagine and force them to attack the person under the genjutsu. The Sexy no Jutsu of Genjutsu.

Keiko no Jutsu (Training Technique)
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: The caster gets the person they are training to look at a symbol drawn on the palm of their hand. As the person looks the world shifts into a battle front with and endless army of ninja charging at them. Though the illusion can cause no harm to the person it does look real as when he/she gets cut blood fly's from the wound in the illusion, but not in real life. The ninja army faced has experts in all the Jutsu as to give them a feel for real battle.Even Genjutsu can work in this plain. After the training is over the caster will feel weak and need to rest do to the strain it causes on the body from chakra flow.

Kokohe kaizoe no Jutsu (Second False Place Technique)
Type:Genjutsu
Rank: D
Element: Air
Description:Jakku's special false place technique in which he can make a one sided mirror illusion over on an object that will keep up with it and mimic it perfectly. He normally uses it to add three commas to his eyes.

Background Information:

At age 6 he and his brother Hiro, whom was 5, were found on the battle ground of the ninetailed spirit fox. Without a headband they were adopted into the sunagakure village. He often fewlt he was a misfit until he was enrolled in the academy. Having a natural ability for genjutsu he was often the top in his class. He graduated the academy at the age of 15, he was reconised for having amazing power over genjutsu and chakra control. While in the academy he was the one that no one really knew existed because he never really said anything even if he knew the answer to a question because he believed what his grandfather said, "A wise man listens, a fool speaks loosely" At 15 he invented his first Genjutsu, Kagame No Jutsu. He first combined his kasurigama with chakra eleven days after his 15 birthday. On his 16 birthday he discovered he could seal a genjutsu into a weapon. He sealed Kagame no Jutsu into his kasurigama at age 15, making his Kagame no Jutsu even stronger when he has released his chakra.

RP Sample: As Jakku drew his seal on the ground he focused his chakra. Slowly the world changed into a his training illusion. Quickly Jakku jumped to his feet pulling his kunai kasurigama he took a defensive stance. Immediately genin charged him. He spun the blade over his head decapitating the ninja. As their life left them they collapsed in a pile of blood. He formed a low level fire attack and targeted another genin that decided to attack. As he burst into flames he collapsed screaming in pain. Jakku was about to end his suffering when he felt a sharp pain on has shoulder, he pulled one of his kunai and thrusted it into his enemy. Feeling the cloth the soon to be dead ninja was wearing he forced the razor sharp blade upwards. As the kunai passed it cut the torso into leaving a line of severed tissue and blood behind it, the ninja grabbed his midsection appearing to attempt to hold it together before he fell to a lifeless corpse. The other ninja stopped screaming at this point. He charged at a ninja scout in a tree. As his blade sunk into the side of the scouts head Jakku felt his chakra get a little scrabbled. 'What?' he thought as he was pulled out of his training session by a fellow genin. "Sensei saids to meet him." he said as Jakku stood up and disappeared out the door.


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PostSubject: Re: Jakku Suragi Updated   Jakku Suragi Updated EmptySun Nov 29, 2009 1:20 pm

This needs some work.

-More history, personality, and looks.

You should add more jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Jakku Suragi Updated   Jakku Suragi Updated EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 9:52 am

added more background appearance persaonality jutsus and rp samples
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PostSubject: Re: Jakku Suragi Updated   Jakku Suragi Updated EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 5:03 pm

- Your only allowed jutsu up to C rank at Genin.
- More indepth information on Clan History.
- More indepth information on Background story.

~Thank You
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PostSubject: Re: Jakku Suragi Updated   Jakku Suragi Updated EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 9:27 pm

Me and hiro Suragi are working on the clan background and obviously i can't fixed character back till i get clan one up. Everything else is ready.
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PostSubject: Re: Jakku Suragi Updated   Jakku Suragi Updated EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 9:32 pm

Remove (knows a few ninjutsu) this is not allowed.
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PostSubject: Re: Jakku Suragi Updated   Jakku Suragi Updated EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 9:34 pm

kk removed
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PostSubject: Re: Jakku Suragi Updated   Jakku Suragi Updated EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 10:05 pm

I highly suggest you add some ninjutsu in there as well. Your more or less just wasting a specialty by not adding it into the things you know and having juts genjutsu, only a handful of C rank ones, will put you at a major disadvantage.
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PostSubject: Re: Jakku Suragi Updated   Jakku Suragi Updated EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 10:16 pm

Another suggestion if your not actually that intrested in Ninjutsu is to remove it. Just have Genjutsu and have your character totally focus on that, a character that has spent time on both Gen and Nin wouldn't be anywhere near as powerful at using Genjutsu as someone who has spent all their time training in it. Double edge sword tho, you may find it difficult when facing opponents close range :X

I could go into alot more detail but i think you get the idea,
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PostSubject: Re: Jakku Suragi Updated   Jakku Suragi Updated EmptyTue Dec 01, 2009 8:03 am

kk i'lll update it thx
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