Alernik Inuzuka FINALLY FINISHED

General Information

Name: Alernik Inuzuka

Nickname/Alias: Al, Nik, or Zuka
Age: 25

Gender: Male

Looks: Since he is part of the Inuzuka clan, he has claw type mark on his cheeks, and canine like eyes, just like all members of the clan do. He has blue green eyes, because his mother was not part of the clan, and his father was, so he got a mix of both. His ears are kind of droopy, like some dog species. He has brown hair, and his hair is messed up most of the time, but it looks pretty cool on him though.

He is about five feet ten inches tall, and weighs about 170 pounds, which is pretty average for a man. he is nearly pale skinned, and he has broad shoulders, for most of his weight comes from muscle mass. He has a six pack, and has ripped arms, and legs as well.

He has tough skin as well, it takes a while for it to be punctured, even by a sharp sword, so this is helpful in the midst of battle. His skull is rather hard, for, in his past, he has only gotten a minor concussion for running directly into a wall going 22 MPH, during training, so since he has trained to be a pure brute, this trait of his will come greatly in handy.

He is sometimes ridden off as a nerd of some sort, because he always focuses on his duties, and always studies to be better, and he wears glasses as well, and they are black, with dark green arms, and they have the Konoha Shinobi symbol at the front of it, between each lens.

He was born with a small tumor in his stomach, and this could not be removed. It has been cured, but not removed. No effect will come out of the tumor, but it makes him look fat, but if you look at him shirtless, you will clearly see that he is not. Just another thing for them to ridicule him about.

He has thumbs and such, but they function less properly than regular human thumbs. His fingers and toes are longer than most people, and his hands and feet are smaller, so those are rather disproportionate. He also has a smaller head compared to his body, though most dogs' heads are, if anything, larger than their bodies in proportion.

His hair, when a dog, though is neatly groomed, no matter how much he gets into. It is dark brown, and is always smooth and clean. He, when a dog, is often compared to a boxer in looks, which is his companion's species. So, when he is full canine, he is about the size of a Labrador, and weighs about as much as a Great Dane or German Shepherd.

Personality: Due to his clan ability, he has a great sense of smell, and just great senses overall. His dog instinct makes him very curious to his surroundings, and takes everything into mind with great detail. He likes to be nosy, and tries to get into any sort of business that sounds interesting. He also likes too nose around, and try to find out things that others may not know, he tries to explore the unknown, which would be a philosophical way to put it. And this is only when he is a dog.

When he is human, he is almost exactly the same. He retains all of the information that he gets when he is canine, and keeps it deep into his mind. He tries to use this when the time is right, but most of the time, and this happens frequently to him, he just blanks. If he were to get an essay, he wold remember it easily, but if he was trying to explain something, he finds it difficult to. And if he does find a way to explain it, it usually makes no sense, though he makes it sound convincing and intelligent.

He loves to hold conversation, but it usually doesn't last long. When he does hold conversation, it lasts maybe 3 minutes or so, until he finds someone or something more interesting. He is in the ultimate search to have a conversation with one that knows as much as he does. He as yet to. He looks upon this as more of a side thing, more than a primary objective. He tries to keep everything simple for those with lower intelligence than him. But, like it has been explained, it is hard to.

He is generally ignored by the public, because he lacks confidence. When he tries to do something, it often ends in failure due to his lack of confidence. That's why he normally strives for the ordinary, instead of the extraordinary. Although, when he does receive thanks or an accolade, he is humble to do so. He finds himself inferior to many around him, for some reason, and this has to do with his self confidence. He is a people pleaser, so he wants to disguise his humbleness. Since he has such a low self-confidence, he wants to make it look like he is humble, so people don't pester him about being proud. When, inside, he is proud, so this is a major flaw of his.

And since he has a tumor in his stomach, since he had that, even as an infant, having it is a nuisance. It makes Alernik very nervous that people will make fun of him for it, like the cruel kids in his not too distant childhood. He is also very anxious to get things done, and he tries to ignore the fact that his brain tells him this. So, his personality, on this level, is somewhat contradictory, since he procrastinates a lot.

Personality Trait's: He loves to howl, even as a human, it makes him a weirdo to some people, but friend and family to others.

Catch Phrase: N/A

Clan Information

Clan Name: Inuzuka Clan

Kekkei Genkai: Members of the Inuzuka clan have a close companionship with their canine familiars. The member also displays canine characteristics, including an enhanced sense of smell and canine instincts.
Special: Every member of the Inuzuka Clan utilizes a canine familiar that takes the place of the summon. They utilize many of the same aspects of regular summons, except that the same Canine familiar is used and grows in strength along with the user at each rank up. They cannot use summons. (( Quoted from http://remix.lethyl.net/clan/inuzuka/ ))

Clan Symbol: The clan symbol is the claw like marks that scar across their cheeks. They are red, and they come to point, like a triangle, but it just looks much cooler.

Clan History: A clan that can base its heritage primarily from the Hidden Village of Konoha. The Inuzuka clan are known for their severely close ties to the canine species. Many members have a canine familiar who acts as a partner to the clan member. These companions are awarded at a young age and both canine and human are encouraged heavily to grow as one entity so as to better support each other through life. Members of the clan also have the unique ability kept secret within their ties to take on canine-like abilities. (( quoted from same URL as KKG ))



Rank Information:
Rank: (What is your current rank?) Jonin ( A Rank )
Village: (What village do you currently live in?) Sunagakure no Sato

Skill Information

Skill Specialty: ( You may pick 2 skills: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Weaponry, Medical, Puppetry, Fuuinjutsu)
Main: Kenjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
Sub: Water

Special Characteristics: He has chakra conductor scimitars, so that way he can use the chakra in his body, and transfer it to the sword, so he can enchant it, and use it with elemental techniques. He also is able to perform taijutsu without any sort of precedent that doesn't have an element to it. But, if it does have an element ro use a technique, it would be normal.


Items/Weapons:



Name: Chakra Conducting Scimitar #1; AKA Firepup
Appearance: The basic looking scimitar, except it has a reddish tint to it, if you look closely enough. It's blade its about a foot and a half long, and inflicts piercing, and slashing damage, depending on how you strike. Though, the fire enchant that gives it it's reddish tint, does more damage with a slash.
Rank: B Ranked
Special Abilities: It has a fire enchant on it that, out of ten strikes, burns someone every 4 times. The burn lasts for 4 posts, and inflicts damage on the other persons chakra, especially wind. If the user has wind chakra, it makes them not able to use wind ninjutsu for 2 of their posts. It has no effect on water or fire, but for any other element, it renders them unable to use any ninjutsu of that element for only 1 post, IF the burn hits in the first place.
Origin: Alernik had originally found this at a weapon shop in Konoha, when visiting there as a child. His father had knew that he wanted it, and got it, hid it and gave it to him a few years later.

Name: Chakra Conducting Scimitar #2 AKA Soggy Doggy
Appearance: The basic looking scimitar, except it has a bluish tint to it, if you look closely enough. It's blade its about a foot and a half long, and inflicts piercing, and slashing damage, depending on how you strike. Though, the whirlpool enchant that gives it it's bluish tint, does more damage with a slash.
Rank: B Ranked
Special Abilities: It has a whirlpool enchant on it that allows the sword to pull the enemy closer to Alernik once stricken, and spins the enemy while doing so. This makes the enemy dizzy, and leaves them vulnerable for their next post, allowing Alernik to do what he wants. Also, once this effect is used in a post, the user must end their post.
Origin: Same origin as Fire Pup.


Jutsus: (Use the the following template)

CLAN JUTSUS

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KENJUTSU

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TAIJUTSU

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Background Information (Here is where you will give the complete history of your character. If you can please put it into Arc's.)

PRE-ACADEMY ARC

Alernik had grown up on a farm outside the village of Kumogakure. He, there learned to farm, and grow and cook his own foods, like any normal person, but was isolated from the outside world. His parents kept him strictly on the farm. They taught him all he needed to learn, and his father was a former shinobi, long since retired, but he couls still teach a few basic techniques. When this took place, his father taught him how to wield a sword and fight in melee combat, and, since his father was from Rain Country, he knew nothing of the local ninjutsu or lightning techniques, he only knew water and fire, the complete contradictory combo of elements. He learned many basic techniques with a sword, those that require no sort of skill to do, same with the taijutsu, he learned enough to basically win a fight.

As he progressed into his early teenage years, he found himself becoming more and more skilled in these arts, and also in the basic everyday life arts as well. He found this being his key to getting out of the farm, and to explore the world. It's not like he didn't love his parents, or the farm, he had nothing against them, he just didn't want to spend all his life in a bubble.

So, one day he found out a certain technique from his father, a basic tai technique where he can do many flips in the air, and land square on the ground, without making any noise, because of the way he lands. He executes this technique that night, and this technique is key to his leaving. He went to the bathroom, and left th shower running to make them think that he was still there, and he climbed up to the roof, and jumped off, using this technique, and he ran to freedom, with suitcases already there and packed, hidden in a small alcove near the horses' stables, and he took them and ran towards the village, and he knew the first place he was gonna go......

ACADEMY ARC

Alernik spent most of his academy days to himself. At the beginning, especially. He took to his studies mainly, and stuck to them. He had no time for friends if he wanted to be a successful shinobi, and that was his fathers' downfall, so he did not want to be a weak genin, like his father, though, it is hard for him to say that, because his father taught him most of the things he knows today. He excelled in all of his studies, and techniques, being at the highest of his class in all categories. He was made an example of a model student, but did not let this go to his head, so he just continued to do what he wanted to do, and that was to study,m and better himself.

Once he knew he was far enough ahead of all his fellow classmates, he then made time to make friends, and he made quite a lot of them. Most of them were ridden off as "nerds" but he didn't care, they were some of the more talented ones as well, and these were the only ones he would accept, because of their ability, they knew they were fearedm so in a way, if they wished, they could become bullies.

Alernik finished that year as valedictorian, with a perfect 4.0 GPA and flawless citizenship record, not even so much as a dot of wrong on it, he always obeyed rules, but the only negative comment he got from any of his teachers, well, there were two, but he only considered one of them to be vital: Learn to believe in yourself more. And this would be the goal for the rest of his days as a shinobi. Well, that and to do his always apparent goal: to better himself.

GENIN ARC

Alernik began as a genin with high expectations, but he never held it to him to do what other people wanted him to do, only what he wanted, and those who had the power to make him do what he had to. He was assigned a team, with one whom had nearly died the previous year in the Chuunin Exams, and another that seemed to have no desire to do much of anything in the world, so he really didn't bother to talk to either of them, unless
A) it was necessary, or
B) One began conversation with him first. So, he just kept to himself once again, and just mainly spoke to his sensei. And he did this rarely as well, only if he needed help, which wasn't very often, or when he felt like he was surrounded by idiots, and needed intellectual conversation.

He entered the Chuunin Exams as the heavy favorite to win it all, at all costs. Alernik looked as the Chuunin Exams as more of a gate to the rank of chuunin, rather than an obstacle, he thought of it as a goal to achieve. He whizzed thru the written exams, and the first round was no problem. He had little struggle with the second. With the finals in his grasp, he was heavily favored yet again. He barely won the match, he left with a broken leg, and a sprained left forearm. Te ther contestant barely made it out alive. The final four remaining made chuunin.

CHUUNIN ARC

Alernik stood at the top of Hokage Mountain. He had gotten transported to Konoha, because they had a shortage of genin, after a recent accident that happened in the city. He gladly went here, he always dreamed about visiting Konoha. Here, he had met the famous Hokage, and got a mission, fulfilled it within a few days, and received another. This is really all he had done as his Chuunin months pressed on, and eventually, after he received more and more advanced missions, he became a Jonin.

JONIN ARC

Alernik began his jonin days very unenthusiastically, not being in the mood most of the time to deal with genin, and he doeswn't normally have the patience, but he would like to test them, and see what they can do, and compare them to him when he was a genin. When his team was fully assigned, he looked at them as a good team. He had a kenjutsu specialist, medical ninja, and an archer, truly unique.

They completed 5 missions in the seven months they were together. Apparently, Alernik had taught them well enough how to make strategies, and balance out their uses in combat, and in the real world, when you are not being a shinobi, and just a civilian, because they had all obtained chuunin after the Chuunin Exams, so he felt a sense of pride, and very slightly, self confidence, maybe he was meant to be the unsung leader, and he didn't even know this, for he had never gotten a chance, or an experience quite like this.

He was then, soon after, transferred to Sunagakure, because they were getting signs of Akatsuki activity, so they needed him for assistance. He later obtained two nicknames.
1) The Tri-Village Shinobi
2) Shinobi of Akatsuki Slaughter. He liked this. He knew he was getting somewhere in life. To think, all of this came from isolation on a farm nearly 3000 miles away from where he is now. What now, parents, what do you think of him now?

RP Sample:(Give us a brief RP sample of your original work)

( This came from Alernik's days in the Kumo Academy )

Alernik sat at his desk given to him, and every other student, by the headmaster of the Kumo academy, studying quietly for one of his exams he had at the end of the week. He looked at the book blankly, and this method, as far as he knows, only worked for him, staring at the book. When he looked at it, he soaked it all in with his amazing, and almost savant-like photographic memory. He retained it all, usually, and this was not a large exam, and he knew this technique before he entered the academy, so he wasn't worried.

He tended to read ahead most of the time, which is what he was doing right now. He had covered nearly three chapters of material in a few hours. He saw these academy techniques as useful, but not necessary. But, he wiped any wandering thoughts from his mind, and once again began to study.

He then stood up, and paced back and forth, repeating the things he learned, occasionally checking back to see if he got it correct. He remembered them all. His self-confidence was a factor in this, because he usually takes a while to perform this in the actual exam, because he thought he would choke, and pictured himself failing. No. He didn't need that thought in his head. Especially not now.

As he continued to remember many of the techniques, he quietly performed those he could, in his room. He, at the end of the night, dissipated all of his clones, and proceeded to bed. But, he couldn't sleep.

He heard a patting at the window, and then a tinking noise, proceeded by a large clunk. He approached the window, with a flashlight in hand, only to see a man or woman, he couldn't tell from the back, in a black and purple robe, walking away, with a sword in their hand, the MAN, he could now tell, looked back, and to his right. He disregarded the man for now. He shined the light over to where the man had looked, and saw a corpse. He couldn't make the body out, but he didn't want to go outside to find out who it was, either. He just kept his mouth shut, and went to bed, keeping this in his thoughts, but he knew who that man was, or rather, who he belonged to.

The Akatsuki. He didn't say anything, because he knew they would find him somehow. So, being himself from then on out, remembering it from time to time, he proceeded on with life.

Finally Finished with my app. Ready for approval.

Code Applied.... COLOR ME NAO!

Not bad overall

- Remove elements, as if you dont have ninjutsu as a speciality you cant use elemental ninjutsu.

- Remove the link to your jutsu from naruto wiki etc. It isn't needed as they are canon.

- Remove reference to canon characters in your jutsu as well.

Ok. One thing, i do not use ninjutsu, i use them as enchants on my weapon, and modifications to my ken and some tai. And the others are easily fixed.

All fixed except for dynamic entry. I want to keep Guy's version.

Take the following jutsu out as it is only for Akimichi!


Name: Mega Palm Thrust
Rank: B
Type Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: After using the Multi-Size Technique to increase his size, the user funnels chakra into his hands and thrusts his palms to the ground, causing extensive crushing damage to anything that may be caught beneath them. This attack is also shown to have a wide range due to the increased size of his palms.

Also, this is powerful enough to split the ground beneath him for a good 20 feet, and anyone under it or within the 20 feet, will be caught in it, and it closes after one post, so whomever is caught in it needs an extremely powerful water, mud, or earth jutsu to get out.

fixed that too -_- >.>

Do you have permissin from a Staff member to make a Jounin?

I've said i was making a jonin to Jiro, Robin, and Todd, and i think adam was there when i said it, and none of them said anything.... so...

bump >> i was told to.

is fine approved.