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| Clan Name: Okamoto Clan Kekkei Genkai:Siren's Of Sound Okamoto Clan members has the inate ability to control sound. There ability isn't just simply sound manipulation, but clan members have gained what is known as the ultimate control over sound. The clans ability over sound is so unique and advanced that the bloodline ability is only found in females of the Okamoto Clan, hence the ability is called "Siren's Of Sound". Clan members who inherit this ability naturally gain and advanced auditory system inheriting them with advanced hearing and balance, along with powerful lungs, throat, and vocal cords. This ability, though, limits the clan members to only one basic element which is wind, as sound is an advanced manipulation of wind. Sonar Sense: Members of this clan who gain the bloodline ability are born with a unique sense of hearing. Their Auditory System is special so that they gain extraordinary abilities when sensing through hearing. Over generations their Auditory System has advanced, beyond that of any other clan making them capable of sensing and mapping areas simply through the power of hearing. Clan members, by focusing chakra, are able to hear the slightest noise whether it is a tap dripping in the distance, or the rustle of leaves, no sound can escape from the clan member’s ears. It takes much skill to harness this ability, and control it, so the member can limit certain sounds and find their location. Through this ability alone clan members "see" just through hearing, as in their mind, the location of each individual sound is mapped out. Clan members can manipulate the sound ability even further for sensing, by radiating sound waves outward and reading the feedback, they can locate and analyze unseen objects in a sonar-like fashion. This grants them "selective hearing", enabling them to focus upon, enhance, or totally block out any given sound in their environment and making them a superhumanly acute eavesdropper in surveillance situations. This has an incredible range, able to locate and pick up individual sounds in a 5km radius from the user. This allows the clan members to instinctively analyze, replicate, and block sonic waves or vibrations from other sources. They can even block out other sounds via tampering with the frequency. Sonic Chakra: Sonic Charka is unique to clan members of the Okamoto Clan who possess the ability known as "Siren's Of Sound". All members chakra is a unique colour compared to normal chakra, as it is a pale pink colour. The chakra is not only unique for its colour, it grants the users nervous system and auditory system complete immunity to any form of sonic power. This allows the clan member to not be effected by their own techniques; it also prevents them from being effected by hearing based techniques. But the most unique characteristic of "Sonic Chakra" is it's super vibration. The chakra is the base to all vibration techniques, as it allows the clan member to super vibrate anything that the chakra comes in contact with, whether it is a sound based technique, wind, or to an item to increase greatly increase the cutting power. Perfect Pitch: Members of the clan gain perfect tone or perfect pitch, the ability to hear in their mind the correct frequency for every musical note on the scale. Every note on the scale clan members can reproduce via vocal cords which induce a different effect upon those who hear it. Low C- Causes low level anxiety and shortness of breath. D- Causes high level anxiety and panic attacks. E- Causes dizziness and vertigo. F- Causes nausea and stomach cramping. G- Causes severe headaches and fatigue. A- Causes blindness. B- Causes euphoria and eventual stupor. High C- Causes the listener to visually hallucinate. By rapid oscillation between multiple notes clan members can combine the effects of this ability. This is combined in the clans sound based techniques, mostly used in the genjutsu, having dramatic effects on the opponent’s body and nervous system. Sonic Release: The Okamoto Clan's ability of sound release is the foundation of ability to manipulate sound. Sonic Release allows the clan members to increase and decrease the frequency of sound waves to the ultimate control. Using their powerful lungs, throat, and vocal cords they can produce a sonic scream for various effects, able to reflect psionic powers. Clan members can overwhelm listeners with deafening noise, stunning them with tight-focus, low-frequency sonic blasts (effective even against shielded ears by penetrating the skull via bone conduction). The power of Sonic Release can plunge the target into a hypnotic trance, disorient them, nauseate them, or simply render them unconscious. Using sonic waves and their unique "Sonic Chakra", they can rapidly vibrate self or other masses at will. They can generate sonic blasts which strike with tremendous concussive force, liquefying or outright disintegrating targets, this being achieved the highest levels of power. The Sonic Release is capable of emitting a sound equivalent in decibels to the noise of a jet engine passing 5 feet from one's ear. It can also be used secretly with the ability to influence others through sub-vocal (below the level of conscious human hearing) sonic; this is more of a subtle "nudge" or subconscious suggestion rather than outright mind control. But the balance as to be maintained, and if the vocal cords are used for long periods of time then they can be destroyed. If more than four vocal techniques are used in successive posts, then the clan members has a 2 post cooldown to use a technique next. Sonic Taijutsu - Disintegration: This is the Okamoto's form of taijutsu, which can only be used by members who possess the bloodline, and "Sonic Chakra". To achieve this level of taijutsu the clan’s member must be able to perform basic chakra control along with being able to completely understand how to manipulate that of the Sound element and their "Sonic Chakra". Performing this technique allows the user to be able to utilize a unique and rather dominant taijutsu technique that can rival even the greatest if used in the correct manner. Achieving the first step is key and really simple when done patiently; upon channeling chakra through themselves they will immediately manipulate the surrounding sound waves encompassing them and direct that energy around their body. With the unique power of their "Sonic Chakra" members will rapidly vibrate the sound waves around their body cause their whole body, in the image of another, to be a complete pale pink blur (due to the colour of the chakra). The vibartions around them will act as a kind of armour which is used for deadly offensive purposes. Along with giving the user a speed increase, and a blurry exterior image, the nature of the vibrating chakra itself is incredibly dangerous. When coming into contact with another, while this taijutsu technique is active, with literally disintegrate the body of the opponent. The rapid vibrations have an immense cutting power and will literally rip and tear the opponents flesh. While the vibrations themselves, when coming into contact with the opponent can literally shatter bones when enough contact, and vibrating force is made. This technique is ment to completely destroy the targets body, and causes gruesome amounts of external and internal damage. Solid Sonic Release: This is an advanced form of the Sonic Release and only truly gifted members of the clan can attain this ability. Clan members can create solid-sound energy constructs which they can then manipulate at will. Creation of inaudible ultrasonic waves which they can use to influence the emotions of those around them. They do this by converting sound into a malleable form of energy that has physical form and mass, termed "solid sound". They can initially create simple 3-dimensional sound/mass constructions, though as they gain further knowledge and experience with their new powers, They can learn to create more complex forms. They can shape and animate these by mental command and they only remain in existence for as long as the clan member wills them to. This can be used for many things such as they can "fly" by generating solid sound "wings" attached to their body; Create a dome of "solid sound" around their body; form solid projectiles out of sound. Due to the nature of the clan members "Sonic Chakra" all of these techniques are released with a pale pink colour. War Cry: Perhaps the most advanced ability of the clan, that only a few member obtain. This is the purest form of using "Sonic Chakra" to affect either the clan member’s allies or target. Not only can the sound based techniques harm the opponent, but due to the unique nature of the chakra they can be used as supplementary stat boosts to an ally. This is said to be the manipulation of the ancient ability of sound and its effect on chakra. The clan member can use this to boost an allies chakra, energy or power of a technique. But through analyse of the target, they can also determine and pinpoint certain weaknesses or areas in the target which they can tap into and effect. This in conjunction with the clan members "perfect pitch" trait, can form devastating effects to an enemy. The "War Cry" ability has to be played through a musical medium i.e. an instrument or the ability can not be produced. Commonly within the clan the instruments formed for this ability are a Conch Shell or Flute. Sexy Clansmen in Action! - Spoiler:
History:The Okamoto Clan is a long standing clan from Kumogakure which has produced some of the most talented ninja in the village. Due to the skills of their kekkei Genkai they are widely respected by ninja from and citizens from the village and other villages alike. They have been a long standing clan in Kumo and have had many respectful leaders on the Kumo Ninja Counsel Board so they have a large about of ‘pull’ in the village when it comes to what goes on. The Otakomo Clan are by far the most wealthy clan in the village, and maybe the country. The main family, whom the leader of the clan derives from are particulary rich and are incredibly wealthy. Their main clan compound is situated near the east side of the village on the mountain side, of course, is very large. The clan area is a combination of many very old, but beautiful and elegant buildings. The largest building is the leader of the clan's home, which is a large mansion, and rivals even the Raikage's compound. The Okamoto Clan has been known to produce very skilled and talented ninja and this is due to their Kekkei Genkai. Their bloodline ability is very powerful and is widely known around the Lightning Country. The clan has been around for a long time, said to be one of the founding clans of Kumogakure, and with this they carry with them a large legacy and practice. In the clan itself, woman are considered as the leaders of the clan, and the clan leader is always a woman. This is due to their unique kekkei Genkai which is genetically only passed down between the woman of the clan. This is an unusual role, as the men are dominant in the ninja world. The clan holds a strong focus on reputation and doesn’t like it’s members putting it in disripute. But none-the-less the clan is more laid-back than that of the Hyuuga. They were once a dominant clan not only due to their unique abilities but their size, but now the numbers in the clan are dwindling. The bloodline which is passed down between women, seems to be decreasing and it is a worry that this unique bloodline might fade out of existance. But clan members don't only become ninja. Some who are not inherited with the bloodline may still choose to become a ninja, or they may follow another path of interest. Even if one doesn't gain the bloodline they are still treated as family in the clan, as they aren't power hungry, or blindsided by it. The clan has a long heritage in music, this is mostly likely due to the "Siren's Of Sound" bloodline. Members are brought up to have a great knowledge in music and to embrass it. They see music as a way to escape the troubles of life, and have an ancient belief of the connection between sound and music with the chakra system. These beliefs can be connected and related with the "War Cry" ability of the clan, which is able to harness with skill into boosting their fellow man. The clan decided to settle down in Kumogakure a long time ago, and hasn't changed since. The clan holds a great sense of national pride in the village, and doesn't take traitors to the clan or village lightly. Secret Clan Jutsu: - Quote :
Sonic Release Techniques
Name: Sonic Release: Perfect Pitch Rank: D-C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: Members of the clan gain perfect tone or perfect pitch, the ability to hear in their mind the correct frequency for every musical note on the scale. Every note on the scale clan members can reproduce via vocal cords which induce a different effect upon those who hear it. By rapid oscillation between multiple notes clan members can combine the effects of this ability. This is combined in the clans sound based techniques, or genjutsu, having dramatic effects on the opponent’s body and nervous system. When combining multiple notes it costs an additional D-ranks worth of chakra. For the effects to be added onto a normal sound based technique, they can only come into affect in the next post. Each note causes a different effect on the target: Low C- Causes low level anxiety and shortness of breath. D- Causes high level anxiety and panic attacks. E- Causes dizziness and vertigo. F- Causes nausea and stomach cramping. G- Causes severe headaches and fatigue. A- Causes blindness. B- Causes euphoria and eventual stupor. High C- Causes the listener to visually hallucinate.
Name: Sonic Release: Echo-Location Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu (Passive) Element: Sound Description: This technique utilizes the clan members ability to radiate sound waves outward and reading the feedback which is commonly known as "Echo-Location". This form of technique is used in a battle situation. The clan member will radiate sounds waves in a 20m radius from the user in rapid, regular intevals. The sound waves will touch a near by object and bounce back enabling the user to locate objects and targets in the surrounding area. This jutsu activates when the use enters a battle, and they can produce up to 5 sound waves per post. This enables them to sense where any target may be throughout the duration of the battle, making it near-on-impossible to "sneak up" or escape the user.
Name: Sonic Release: Ventriloquism Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: The clan member uses their own mouth to transmit chakra and essentially bundle up sound until they want to release it. This allows them throw their voice or move any sounds they can make with their mouth to any location without the sound fading. If they know where a person's ear is, they can use this to actually whisper into it. This jutsu does not require hand-seals.
Name: Sonic Release: Shriek Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This jutsu can be used to emit a loud scream empowered by chakra from the clan members throat. The sound emits from the user and spreads over a wider area over the target making it harder to dodge. This technique is loud enough to make people cover their ears and make the targets body numb. The blast of sound energy gives the target a ring in their ear for a single post. This jutsu does not requires hand-seals.
Name: Sonic Release: Deafening Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This jutsu utilizes the ability to nullify sound in a certain area. By setting up chakra in a small area that is designed to both emit sound waves to counter any sound waves that enter it to cancel most sound that enters the area out completely. The area can be moved freely, and usually surrounds a victim's head to dampen all sound someone might hear, or placed around something that is making a sound to prevent anyone from hearing it. The movement is not instantaneous, if the user loses track of the object or person then the user has to concentrate to move the chakra around his or her intended target again. The area affected by this jutsu can range from the size of a human head to a vehicle.
Name: Sonic Release: Sound Wave Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This jutsu actiavtes when the user slams both their hands together. With the power of a built up wave of sound, the clan member is able to make a shockwave of sound that is able to block, change, or slow projectiles. But this technique can also be used to slam into the target and it has enough force to knock the opponent over. If the target is hit by the wave of sound they will hear a large buzzing sound in their ears for 2 posts. This justsu does not require hand-seals.
Name: Sonic Release: Sound Clone Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: Sonic Release: Sound Clone is a Ninjutsu technique used by the Okamoto Clan. Using there ability to manipulate sound, they will form a clone made up of sound based energy. Because it is made up of sound energy, the clone can disperse and reform without ending its existence. When they need for the clone ends, the user can disperse the sound and end the clones existance. When the clone is destroyed it will release a high-pitched shrilling sound which will leave a ringing in the targets ears for 3 posts, which is incredibly distracting.
Name: Sonic Release: Unseen Warrior Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This jutsu utilizes the ability for strong, high pitched sound to physically affect objects. This jutsu creates a sound at a high enough pitch that it can't be heard, and strong enough were it can actually hit objects. The sound can not maintain constant pressure on an object, so it is ill suited for more tasks outside of battle. Inside of battle, the Unseen Warrior can actually create enough force to bruise an opponent. The exact amount of force that this jutsu can exert is limited only by the user's ability to control and produce chakra (in other words, the user can exert one pound of force for every pound of their body that he or she has). This jutsu can not focus the force emitted enough to pierce or cut a person. The "force" or "servant" manifests for a small amount of time, during which it can perform a variety of actions. It is impossible to control more then one servant, and the affect lasts for 3 posts. The damage shown is the total the Unseen Warrior may inflict upon a person per post. The damage may be split up amount different people.
Name: Sonic Release: Sonic Mind Barrier Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This is a technique that utilizes the clans ability to manipulate sound waves. The user will form a sound barrier around their mind with their unique "Sonic Chakra". This sound barrier, by manipulating the frequency of the sound will be able to protect the users mind from foreign objects/people. Mind infiltration techniques e.g yamanaka, are rendered useless as they are not able to enter the mind as the sonic chakra creates a barrier. This comes in handy against clan's who focus on trying to enter the mind and attack the target. The barrier itself works for 2 posts and block up to A-ranked infiltration techniques.
Name: Sonic Release: Sonic Trance Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This is a unique technique that utilizes the clans ability to manipulate sound waves. The user with gather the unique "Sonic Chakra" in their lungs and release a low-pitch vocal noise from their throat. This low-pitch noise can not be heard from a human, but can be heard by animals. This sound makes the opponent feel initially feel wozzy, and then puts them into a hypontic trance. The target will find themselves feeling very sleepy and will eventually fall asleep, succumbing to the effects of the technique. This technique takes effect after the next posts that the technique is used.
Name: Sonic Release: Hell Shriek Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This is an improved version of the "Shriek" technique. The sound emits from the user and spreads over a wider area over the target making it harder to dodge. The user produces a scream that is empowered by chakra. The sound produced is twice as powerful as the "Shriek" technique, and is enough to make enemies go temporarily deaf for 2 posts. The power of this technique is immense able to generate a sonic blasts which strikes with tremendous concussive force able to knock an opponent out cold. The high-pitch from this technique has the power to break glass. It sounds so horrible as if it comes from hell itself, making (some) enemies cower with fear and terror. This jutsu does not require hand-seals.
Name: Sonic Release: Total Control Technique Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This jutsu is a more advanced version of the Deafening Skill. By setting up chakra in a small area that is designed to emit sound waves to counter any sound waves that enter it and controlling what sounds are and are not canceled out and actually enhance others, the user is effectively able to control what sound enter and leave the area affected by this jutsu. The area can be moved freely, and usually surrounds a victim's head to dampen all sound someone might hear, or placed around something that is making a sound to prevent anyone from hearing it. The movement is not instantaneous, if the user loses track of the object or person then the user has to concentrate to move the chakra around his or her intended target again. The area affected by this jutsu is only about the size of a human head or a vehicle. Effects lasts 2 posts and the user must know Deafening technique.
Name: Sonic Release: Explosive Shockwave Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This is a powerful technique used by Okamoto Clan members. They will gather chakra deep in their lungs and throat while breathing in. They takes in so much air that it literally expandes their torso area. Then, will tremendous strength they will release it causing massive shockwaves of sound energy. In order for these shockwaves to be successful the clan member must produce them in a deep tone and when released, it sounds like a deep buzzing noise. This causes large shockwaves which destroy anything in it's path. The sound is known to rip open tree trunks and completely shatter earth. Though this jutsu takes a toll on the throat and could actually rip it open, this is why clan members can only use this technique twice in a battle.
Name: Sonic Release: High Vocal Roar Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This is a technique used by Okamoto Clan members. By gathering their sound chakra in their lungs and then expelling it thye can create a high-pitched noice that completely surrounds the user. This jutsu has different stages of damage that it causes the enemy over a prolonged period of time. The enemy hearing a constanting ringing noice after the technique has been used [first post]. On the second post the user will begin to hear noises as if inside their head. This is the distortion of different sounds around the target amplified numerous times, driving them crazy. Finally on the third post the target will temporarily loss their hearing for an additional 4 posts as the sound gets so intense it destroys the opponents sence of hearing.
Name: Sonic Release: Sound Orbs Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This is a technique used by Okamoto Clan members. Similar to the Sound Release: Explosive Shockwave technique the clan member will gather a large amount of chakra and air in their lungs and throat expanding their torso. If the previous technique has been used it may fool the enemy but instead of using the Explosive Shockwave technique the user will compact the pressure in his mouth and then release the sound in compressed orbs. These orbs are about the size of a basketball each and travel at very fast speeds. The orbs have the ability to rip through solid materials such as trees, metal and earth. At each rank the user can produce 'x' amount of orbs per turn: C: 3, B: 6, A: 9.
Name: Sonic Release: Sonic Fists Rank: B-A Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Element: Sound Description: This is a technique used by Okamoto Clan members. The user will focus their "Sonic Chakra" into his large fists and/or feet. As long as the chakra is maintained, the fists and/or feet will cause sonic blasts to be emitted onto the targets upon impact. The sonic frequencies become more damaging with more chakra used. Depending on the rank this technique can cause significant damage to the targets body, not only physically damaging them with hits but internal damage as well. Even if the user doesn't hit the opponent they will cause some damage as the sonic blast will hit the opponent as they have a wider range that initial contact. This technique lasts for 4 posts. B- If physical hits connect the target will receive internal bleeding A- Even if hits don't connect the target will receive internal bleeding after 2 hits [successful or not]
Name: Sonic Release: Subconscious Nudge Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This is a technique utilizing the unique abilities of the Okamoto clan, and only the most experienced members can access this technique. By releasing sub-vocal sound waves clan members gain the ability to secretly influence others through the use of sub-vocal (below the level of conscious human hearing) sonic sound. This is more of a subtle "nudge" or subconscious suggestion rather than outright mind control. It gives them the ability to slightly manipulate the users brain, it does not allow them the ability to control but to stop the users actions i.e if they were about to perform an attack, by using this technique they can prevent that by "nudging" to them subconsciously. This technique is a lot more effective on animals but it also works very well against humans.
Name: Sonic Release: Vibration Cloak Rank: A-S Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Element: Sound Description: This technique is used in conjunction with the clans taijutsu capabilities. This technique utilizes the super vibrating nature of the Okamoto Clans "Sonic Chakra". The clan member will form a set of hand-seals and a thick pale pink (colour of the chakra) cloak will completely form around the users body. The user will rapidly vibrate the sonic soundwaves around the body which gives the basic form of the cloak. This grants the user many additional abilities and effects. The user when they move form an illusionary trail copy of themselves as the cloak grants them a blurry after image. This makes it difficult for the opponent to pinpoint the users position. By super vibrating the air around the user, it grants them a greater increase in speed while moving, the speed increases as the rank of the user increases. A-rank the user is granted a 150% speed increase, and S-rank the user is granted a 300% speed increase. But the most important aspect of the technique is the vibrating nature of the chakra combined with taijutsu. When coming into contact with another, while this technique is active, it will literally disintegrate the body of the opponent. The rapid vibrations have an immense cutting power and will literally rip and tear the opponents flesh, and severe limbs completely. While the vibrations themselves, when coming into contact with the opponent can literally shatter bones when enough contact, and vibrating force is made. This technique is ment to completely destroy the targets body, and causes gruesome amounts of external and internal damage.
Name: Sonic Release: Howl Of The Banshee Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This is one of the most powerful techniques which the Okamoto clan have in their arsenal. This technique fully utilizes the clan members Sonic Release skill combined with the special characteristics of their "Sonic Chakra". The user will gather their "Sonic Chakra" in their body in a large, concentrated amount. They will then expel this sonic energy in the direction of the opponent. This technique has the super vibrating nature combined with advanced sound manipulation in it and it creates a wave of sound which is capable of liquefying or outright disintegrating targets. This technique echo's from the users mouth and is so powerful that it the only sound it makes is a slight high-pitched ringing sound. It is capable of completely destroying organic and inorganic matter completely disintegrating everything in it's path. If a target is caught in this technique it lead to permanent deafness along with serious damage externally and internally to the users body. The target will only gain this kind of damage within a 20m area of the user. There has been no known opponent who has survived this technique, due to the devestating nature of it. This technique can only be used a one per battle, and the user has a 5 post cooldown on any sound related technique afterwards. The user cannot speak for over a week after this technique due to the strain on the vocal chords.
Multi-Toned Metallic Plate Techniques
Name: Sonic Release: Balance Destroyer Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: By controlling high and low pitch sounds with chakra and directing them into the opponent's ears, the user causes a disturbance in his or her opponent's eardrums. This causes the opponent to lose balance for a short time. The sound is produced by a multi-toned metallic plate worn across the ninja's forearm, which when tapped, can produce devastating vibrations. Once the plate is directed towards the opponent, it is tapped, producing sound waves that the ninja then manipulates with chakra, guiding it to the intended target. The effect of the sound waves dissipate over time, meaning this jutsu can only be used at a certain range (twenty feet). Effect Lasts two posts.
Name: Sonic Release: Vibrating Sound Drill Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja uses sound waves above one hundred and fifty megahertz to disorient an opponent by attacking their inner ear, causing violent dizziness and occasionally nausea. In some cases, damage to the eardrum can occur, creating a long-lasting advantage in battle. The sound is produced by a multi-toned metallic plate worn across the ninja's forearm, which when tapped, can produce devastating vibrations. The attacking ninja takes a swing at their opponent intending to be dodged. Once the plate is directed towards the opponent, it is tapped, producing sound waves that the ninja then manipulates with chakra, guiding it to the inner ear of their opponent.
Name: Sonic Release: Muscle Control Technique Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This is a powerful jutsu that sends high or low frequency sound waves to muscle joints to affect an opponent. The sound waves are directed to the tendons and muscles, causing the victim's joint to suddenly straighten or fold. The sound is produced by a multi-toned metallic plate worn across the ninja's forearm, which when tapped, can produce devastating vibrations. Once the plate is directed towards the opponent, it is tapped, producing sound waves that the ninja then manipulates with chakra, guiding it to the intended target. The effect of the sound waves dissipate over time, meaning this jutsu can only be used at a certain range (twenty feet). Only one movement may be forced at a time with this skill.
Name: Sonic Release: Muscle Cramp Skill Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: This is an advanced form of the Muscle Control Skill that combines high and low sound waves to disable an opponent. By quickly switching between the two extremes, the user causes muscle spasms and cramps, temporarily disabling the joint and causing an extreme amount of pain and discomfort afterwards. The sound is produced by a multi-toned metallic plate worn across the ninja's forearm, which when tapped, can produce devastating vibrations. Once the plate is directed towards the opponent, it is tapped, producing sound waves that the ninja then manipulates with chakra, guiding it to the intended target. The effect of the sound waves dissipate over time, meaning this jutsu can only be used at a certain range range (twenty feet). Joint is disabled for 3 posts, and pain persists for at least five posts afterwards.
Name: Sonic Release: Vibrating Sound Spear Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: The user creates a very precise high pitched vibration that only affects opponent's skin. The vibrations cause blood to rise to the surface very quickly, resulting in bruising or, in extreme cases, blood blisters. The sound is produced by a multi-toned metallic plate worn across the ninja's forearm, which when tapped, can produce devastating vibrations. Once the plate is directed towards the opponent, it is tapped, producing sound waves that the ninja then manipulates with chakra, guiding it to the intended target. The effect of the sound waves dissipate over time, meaning this jutsu can only be used at a certain range range (twenty feet).
Name: Sonic Release: Vibrating Barrier Wall Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: By sending out sequence of low and high sound waves, the user is able to create a blast that emits from the multi-toned metallic plate that is worn across the user's forearm. This blast is capable of stopping most projectile attacks, including fire, sound, air, and water-based attacks of the same level. This jutsu is also capable of knocking an opponent back a few feet, but otherwise does little damage to the human body.
Name: Sonic Release: Chest Slam Skill Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: The user sends a very powerful low frequency wave of sound that is directed to the target's chest. This wave of sound hits its victim's internal organs and disrupts them. It becomes difficult to breath, there is incredible chest pain and throwing up is not uncommon. The sound is produced by a multi-toned metallic plate worn across the ninja's forearm, which when tapped, can produce devastating vibrations. Once the plate is directed towards the opponent, it is tapped, producing sound waves that the ninja then manipulates with chakra, guiding it to the intended target. The effect of the sound waves dissipate over time, meaning this jutsu can only be used at a certain range (twenty feet). Effect lasts two posts.
Name: Sonic Release: Muscle Collapsing Technique Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: An advanced form of the Muscle Cramping Skill, this skill utilizes both high and low pitched sounds to disable an opponent. By constantly shifting between a high and low pitch, the user is able to cause his or her victim's muscles to rapidly contract and straighten, causing cramps. However, the user does not stop there. They continue the process, and gradually pick up speed. This may cause the muscles and ligaments connected to them to tear, or otherwise become damaged. If this jutsu is used twice on the same joint, it may cause the muscle to collapse completely, rendering it useless until medical attention is obtained. A jounin is capable of healing the joint with the chakra scalpel and then the healing hands skill. The sound is produced by a multi-toned metallic plate worn across the ninja's forearm, which when tapped, can produce devastating vibrations. Once the plate is directed towards the opponent, it is tapped, producing sound waves that the ninja then manipulates with chakra, guiding it to the intended target. The effect of the sound waves dissipate over time, meaning this jutsu can only be used at a certain range (twenty feet). Disables a joint for 5 posts, the muscle is then hard to move and incredibly painful for the rest of the battle. Must know muscle Cramp Skill.
Name: Sonic Release: Puppet Master Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: By sending a near constant stream of high and low pitched sound to the intended target's muscles, the user is able to control the muscle's movements. Through this, the user is able to effectively take full control of an opponent's body. Unfortunately, because the sound waves need to be so precise, the intended target must remain nearly perfectly still for a full second when this jutsu first takes effect. Also, the user must remain still and constantly performing the proper hand-seals or the jutsu would be canceled.
Solid Sound Release Techniques
Name: Solid Sound Release: Butterfly Wings Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: Using the advanced clan technique of Solid Sound the user can create 3-dimensional sound/mass constructions from the sound waves around then using their chakra. With this technique the user will form a short string of handseals and will create beautifully decorated pink butterfly wings which form on the users back. The wing span from one end to another is about 5 feet long and and can be used to hover in the air. The clan member usually uses these wings in battle to have a height advantage over there opponents, instead of using them for transportation as they can't actually fly long distances. Though the wings allow the user to have fast evasion in the air over short distances and give them an advantage for aerial based attacks.
Name: Solid Sound Release: Blade Cutters Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: Using the advanced clan technique of Solid Sound the user can create 3-dimensional sound/mass constructions from the sound waves around then using their chakra. The user will swiftly move their arms across the air around them, and with this manipulate the sound waves in the area. With swift movements the soundwaves will combine with the users chakra creating pink solid sound constructs. With rapid arm movements it will form long sharp sound blades the fly through the air towards the target, though they can make any shape they wish with any part of their body.
Name: Solid Sound Release: Machine Gun Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: Using the advanced clan technique of Solid Sound the user can create 3-dimensional sound/mass constructions from the sound waves around then using their chakra. The user will gather soundwaves around their hands and combine it with their chakra. When released, pink bullet-like projectiles are released at a rapid and fast pace like a machine gun from the users hand area. Thousands of sound bullets are created and have the piercing power of a normal sendon. By flowing chakra the user can create a continuous rapid fire tracking and hunting down the enemy. This technique is very dangerous but can only be sustained for 2 posts at a time. During these 2 posts no other technique may be used.
Name: Solid Sound Release: Wrecking Ball Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: Using the advanced clan technique of Solid Sound the user can create 3-dimensional sound/mass constructions from the sound waves around then using their chakra. The user will gather soundwaves in the shape of a spiked wrecking ball either around themself or another target. This dome around the target acts as both an offensive and defensive tool. The Wrecking Ball around the target when they move rolls with them gathering energy, and when it makes physical contact with another its solid, built-up energy is released causing great physical damage. The user is able to trample over target, and the destructive force of the technique is great, able to cut down trees, run through metal walls etc. This technique also offers the user some form of defense, able to protect the user against A-ranked physical attacks while in duration. This technique lasts for 3 posts, and can be dispelled when needed.
Name: Solid Sound Release: Updraft Sonic Geyser Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: Using the advanced clan technique of Solid Sound the user can create 3-dimensional sound/mass constructions from the sound waves around then using their chakra. The user will gather soundwaves in a circular motion around the target. The soundwaves will appear invisible to the normal eye, but a ocular power to view chakra may sense the soundwaves around the user. This technique can be initiated whenever the user wills it, meaning that the technique can be performed any amount of time after it is initiated. When the user wishes to initaite ther technique, they will click their finger and instantly, the built-up sound energy around the target will form into an explosive geyser of sound that will both, hurtle the target up into the air many feet above, and due to the explosion, badly damage their body both internally and externally. The deadliness of this technique is it's secrecy as it does not require any handseals to perform and it can be initicated at any moment.
Name: Solid Sound Release: Protective Dome Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: Using the advanced clan technique of Solid Sound the user can create 3-dimensional sound/mass constructions from the sound waves around then using their chakra. The user will gather soundwaves in the shape of a dome around themselves. This will form half a meter from the user allowing room for another person inside as well. This technique does not require hand-seal and can be activated at will. The pink dome flows with waves of sound and can protect the user against a wide range of techniques. The user is protected against all A-ranked techniques and below for a single turn. Once the technique is dispelled it will release a soundwave in a circular direction knocking back any opponent that may come within a 10m radius of the technique.
Name: Solid Sound Release: Reflective Jewel Motion Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: Using the advanced clan technique of Solid Sound the user can create 3-dimensional sound/mass constructions from the sound waves around then using their chakra. The user will gather soundwaves and form it into a complicated shape, a 3-dimensional diamond which will hover in front of the user. This can only be performed by the highest level of clan members, as the ability to shape the sonic chakra to make the 3-dimensional diamond is very complex. The diamond hovers in front of the user and acts as a kind fo shield from chakra based attacks. When the opponent activates their chakra within a 15m radius of the diamond and forms it into a technique, once that "said" technique has been performed by the target, the pale pink diamond will light-up and absorb the chakra from the technique into the diamonds core, thus negating the technique used. But not only does it absorb the chakra, it then reflects the technique that the target used, back towards them, utilizing the reflective nature of sound combined with the clan members chakra. The diamond "absorb" then "release" a limited amount of chakra/techniques as stated; Can absorb and reflect an unlimited amount of D-ranked techniques. Can absorb and reflect 20 seperate C-ranked techniques. Can absorb and reflect 10 seperate B-ranked techniques. Can absorb and reflect 5 seperate A-ranked techniques. Can absorb and reflect 2 seperate S-ranked techniques. This technique roughly costs about 1/4 of a normal ninjas chakra to perform and requires a long string of handseals.
War Cry Techniques
Name: War Cry Release: Chakra Booster Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: The ability of War Cry Release is an ancient technique that is unique to the Okamoto Clan. By using their sound manipulation they harness the natural connection between music and chakra to produce unique effects. With this technique the clan member will combine their chakra with their musical medium to produce this technique. By playing a melody on the instrument directed towards the chosen target, the clan member is able to stimulate the tenketsu of their target and grant them a boost of chakra. The amount of chakra boosted depends on the rank of the user, and this technique can only be used on another person, not the user themself. C-rank gains a 10% increase in chakra for 1 post, B-rank gains a 20% increase in chakra for 2 posts, and A-rank gains a 30% increase in chakra for 3 posts.
Name: War Cry Release: Specialty Enchancement Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: The ability of War Cry Release is an ancient technique that is unique to the Okamoto Clan. By using their sound manipulation they harness the natural connection between music and chakra to produce unique effects. With this technique the clan member will combine their chakra with their musical medium to produce this technique. By playing a melody on the instrument directed towards the chosen target, the clan member is able to enchance the power of a specific attribute of the target. The first specialty that the chosen target has is enchanced by the power of the user for 3 posts, and for any technique that is used under that speciality within the time frame it will gain one ranks increase in power e.g a C-rank technique will become a B-rank technique. This technique can only be used on another person, or the user themself.
Name: War Cry Release: Highlighted Element Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: The ability of War Cry Release is an ancient technique that is unique to the Okamoto Clan. By using their sound manipulation they harness the natural connection between music and chakra to produce unique effects. With this technique the clan member will combine their chakra with their musical medium to produce this technique. By playing a melody on the instrument directed towards the chosen target, the clan member is able to increase the power of any elemental attacked used by a chosen target. The melody with be played in combination with the attack and will increase the power of the attack by one rank e.g C-rank technique will become a B-rank technique. This technique can only be used on another person, or the user themself.
Name: War Cry Release: Physical Conditioning Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: The ability of War Cry Release is an ancient technique that is unique to the Okamoto Clan. By using their sound manipulation they harness the natural connection between music and chakra to produce unique effects. With this technique the clan member will combine their chakra with their musical medium to produce this technique. By playing a melody on the instrument directed towards the chosen target, the clan member is able to increase the strength, speed and stamina of a chosen target. When the melody is played and the target hears the tune, they will become invigorated with new power. The target will gain a 50% increase in physical strength, speed and stamina for the first post and on the second it will decease to 40% and on the third it will decrease to 30% and then the technique will end on the forth. This technique can only be used on another person, or the user themself.
Name: War Cry Release: Offsetting Sound Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: The ability of War Cry Release is an ancient technique that is unique to the Okamoto Clan. By using their sound manipulation they harness the natural connection between music and chakra to produce unique effects. With this technique the clan member will combine their chakra with their musical medium to produce this technique. By playing a melody on the instrument directed towards the chosen target, the clan member is able to counteract an incoming genjutsu technique and/or free anyone else under its spell. The user can dispel a genjutsu of S rank and below, but this technique can only be used twice per battle.
Name: War Cry Release: Defensive Aura Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu Element: Sound Description: The ability of War Cry Release is an ancient technique that is unique to the Okamoto Clan. By using their sound manipulation they harness the natural connection between music and chakra to produce unique effects. With this technique the clan member will combine their chakra with their musical medium to produce this technique. By playing a melody on the instrument a pale blue coloured aura will appear around a targets feet. This aura is a projection of the chakra's natural connection with sound and music, and with that great power the targets will gain an increase in defensive based stats. The user plus any willing target will gain a complete protection against non-chakra based techniques, and their health regeneration abilties will double in accuracy and speed. This allows the user and any target to recover from physical and mental wounds a lot faster. This technique can only last for 3 posts.
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| | | Jiro Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Okamoto Clan [Finished] Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:58 pm | |
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- Sonar Sense: Members of this clan who gain the bloodline ability are born with a unique sense of hearing. Their Auditory System is special so that they gain extraordinary abilities when sensing through hearing. Over generations their Auditory System has advanced, beyond that of any other clan making them capable of sensing and mapping areas simply through the power of hearing. Clan members, by focusing chakra, are able to hear the slightest noise whether it is a tap dripping in the distance, or the rustle of leaves, no sound can escape from the clan member’s ears. It takes much skill to harness this ability, and control it, so the member can limit certain sounds and find their location. Through this ability alone clan members "see" just through hearing, as in their mind, the location of each individual sound is mapped out. Clan members can manipulate the sound ability even further for sensing, by radiating sound waves outward and reading the feedback, they can locate and analyze unseen objects in a sonar-like fashion. This grants them "selective hearing", enabling them to focus upon, enhance, or totally block out any given sound in their environment and making them a superhumanly acute eavesdropper in surveillance situations. This has an incredible range, able to locate and pick up individual sounds in a 5km radius from the user. This allows the clan members to instinctively analyze, replicate, and block sonic waves or vibrations from other sources. They can even block out other sounds via tampering with the frequency.
Sonar doesn’t work just by hearing, you need to send out sound waves yourself to make it work. The sound waves bounce back and from the timings/new sound one can extrapolate the distance. In animals and humans it’s called echo location. It works in a well water environment and in the air because their a few obstructions but at ground level it’s a lot less effective. On the ground any number of things could get in the way and causes it to bounce back early such as a tree or a large rock. It is fine to have it but please tweak it to indicated making some sort of sound (fine to be inaudible) which bounces back this would be limited by whatever is in the reason in a desert this could potentially reach the 5km make but in a thick forest you would be lucky to see more then 50ft tops with it, though probably a lot less. Also you need to consider making yourself vulnerable to loud noises when using, it only makes sense if powerful sense of hearing heightens the shock of large sounds - Quote :
- Sonic Chakra: Sonic Charka is unique to clan members of the Okamoto Clan who possess the ability known as "Siren's Of Sound". All members chakra is a unique colour compared to normal chakra, as it is a pale pink colour. The chakra is not only unique for its colour, it grants the users nervous system and auditory system complete immunity to any form of sonic power. This allows the clan member to not be effected by their own techniques; it also prevents them from being effected by hearing based techniques. But the most unique characteristic of "Sonic Chakra" is it's super vibration. The chakra is the base to all vibration techniques, as it allows the clan member to super vibrate anything that the chakra comes in contact with, whether it is a sound based technique, wind, or to an item to increase greatly increase the cutting power.
I think its okay to be fine to the nature of sonic attacks, such as high frequency, vibrations they might cause but any related pressure would likely affect a clan member never the less. - Quote :
- Perfect Pitch: Members of the clan gain perfect tone or perfect pitch, the ability to hear in their mind the correct frequency for every musical note on the scale. Every note on the scale clan members can reproduce via vocal cords which induce a different effect upon those who hear it.
Low C- Causes low level anxiety and shortness of breath. D- Causes high level anxiety and panic attacks. E- Causes dizziness and vertigo. F- Causes nausea and stomach cramping. G- Causes severe headaches and fatigue. A- Causes blindness. B- Causes euphoria and eventual stupor. High C- Causes the listener to visually hallucinate. ] By rapid oscillation between multiple notes clan members can combine the effects of this ability. This is combined in the clans sound based techniques, mostly used in the genjutsu, having dramatic effects on the opponent’s body and nervous system. Needs chakra cost, associated duration unless of course this is just a prelude to the actual techs if so it’s fine. There should be a time aspect to these techs, they strike my as potentially instantaneous, perhaps you need to them for a few seconds before the affect kicks in - Quote :
- Sonic Release: The Okamoto Clan's ability of sound release is the foundation of ability to manipulate sound. Sonic Release allows the clan members to increase and decrease the frequency of sound waves to the ultimate control. Using their powerful lungs, throat, and vocal cords they can produce a sonic scream for various effects, able to reflect psionic powers. Clan members can overwhelm listeners with deafening noise, stunning them with tight-focus, low-frequency sonic blasts (effective even against shielded ears by penetrating the skull via bone conduction). The power of Sonic Release can plunge the target into a hypnotic trance, disorient them, nauseate them, or simply render them unconscious. Using sonic waves and their unique "Sonic Chakra", they can rapidly vibrate self or other masses at will. They can generate sonic blasts which strike with tremendous concussive force, liquefying or outright disintegrating targets, this being achieved the highest levels of power. The Sonic Release is capable of emitting a sound equivalent in decibels to the noise of a jet engine passing 5 feet from one's ear. It can also be used secretly with the ability to influence others through sub-vocal (below the level of conscious human hearing) sonic; this is more of a subtle "nudge" or subconscious suggestion rather than outright mind control. But the balance as to be maintained, and if the vocal cords are used for long periods of time then they can be destroyed.
Again techs needed before I can really tell, the background is fine but you would need related techs and chakra costs to make use of sonic release. I do want to know how long a period of time before they might destroy the vocal cords through their use though. A limitation so vague isn’t a limitation at all after all - Quote :
- Sonic Taijutsu - Disintegration: This is the Okamoto's form of taijutsu, which can only be used by members who possess the bloodline, and "Sonic Chakra". To achieve this level of taijutsu the clan’s member must be able to perform basic chakra control along with being able to completely understand how to manipulate that of the Sound element and their "Sonic Chakra". Performing this technique allows the user to be able to utilize a unique and rather dominant taijutsu technique that can rival even the greatest if used in the correct manner. Achieving the first step is key and really simple when done patiently; upon channeling chakra through themselves they will immediately manipulate the surrounding sound waves encompassing them and direct that energy around their body. With the unique power of their "Sonic Chakra" members will rapidly vibrate the sound waves around their body cause their whole body, in the image of another, to be a complete pale pink blur (due to the colour of the chakra). The vibartions around them will act as a kind of armour which is used for deadly offensive purposes. Along with giving the user a speed increase, and a blurry exterior image, the nature of the vibrating chakra itself is incredibly dangerous. When coming into contact with another, while this taijutsu technique is active, with literally disintegrate the body of the opponent. The rapid vibrations have an immense cutting power and will literally rip and tear the opponents flesh. While the vibrations themselves, when coming into contact with the opponent can literally shatter bones when enough contact, and vibrating force is made. This technique is ment to completely destroy the targets body, and causes gruesome amounts of external and internal damage.
Sounds OP, esp vs other close combat fighters. You would need to phrase this as actual techs and make them balanced. The nature of it particularly think is OP since you don’t need to hit anyone to badly harm and is pretty much insta hit. As it is I am not sure I can approve someone who can vibrate some one to mush just because he happens to be close by, thus rendering all close combat specialist rather boned so to speak. - Quote :
- Solid Sonic Release: This is an advanced form of the Sonic Release and only truly gifted members of the clan can attain this ability. Clan members can create solid-sound energy constructs which they can then manipulate at will. Creation of inaudible ultrasonic waves which they can use to influence the emotions of those around them. They do this by converting sound into a malleable form of energy that has physical form and mass, termed "solid sound". They can initially create simple 3-dimensional sound/mass constructions, though as they gain further knowledge and experience with their new powers, They can learn to create more complex forms. They can shape and animate these by mental command and they only remain in existence for as long as the clan member wills them to. This can be used for many things such as they can "fly" by generating solid sound "wings" attached to their body; Create a dome of "solid sound" around their body; form solid projectiles out of sound. Due to the nature of the clan members "Sonic Chakra" all of these techniques are released with a pale pink colour.
This makes almost no sense whatsoever, maybe I am just tired but I am struggling to see how sound can be used to make solid objects. At best you can contain it with other materials but changing its nature in this way seems only slight short of impossible. Though please get a second opinion on this if you think I just need more coffee - Quote :
- War Cry: Perhaps the most advanced ability of the clan, that only a few member obtain. This is the purest form of using "Sonic Chakra" to affect either the clan member’s allies or target. Not only can the sound based techniques harm the opponent, but due to the unique nature of the chakra they can be used as supplementary stat boosts to an ally. This is said to be the manipulation of the ancient ability of sound and its effect on chakra. The clan member can use this to boost an allies chakra, energy or power of a technique. But through analyse of the target, they can also determine and pinpoint certain weaknesses or areas in the target which they can tap into and effect. This in conjunction with the clan members "perfect pitch" trait, can form devastating effects to an enemy. The "War Cry" ability has to be played through a musical medium i.e. an instrument or the ability can not be produced. Commonly within the clan the instruments formed for this ability are a Conch Shell or Flute.
Looks fine though I think more info on how sound scan be used to determine and pinpoint certain weaknesses is needed Overall its an interesting app with a lot of potential however it suffers from questionable execution on some parts (mainly by a lack of logical link between what can be done with sound and what you clan's seems to be able to do with it) and by being borderline if not actually OP in other parts. The amount of different aspects is more fitting two clans or a clan with various branches then a single clan and you seem to specialising in no less the 3 aspects when most clans rarely go beyond one. Two is not unreasonable given the uchiha are good with both nin and genjutsu but I do think 3 is pushing it a little. Kekkai Genkai will a boost arent meant to be specific, allowing characters to do certain things well. My suggestion is to remove the rather OP sounding tai aspect and focus on using sound chakra and abilities based on your voice and pitch. | |
| | | Todd Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Okamoto Clan [Finished] Tue Dec 15, 2009 3:56 am | |
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- Sonar doesn’t work just by hearing, you need to send out sound waves yourself to make it work. The sound waves bounce back and from the timings/new sound one can extrapolate the distance. In animals and humans it’s called echo location. It works in a well water environment and in the air because their a few obstructions but at ground level it’s a lot less effective. On the ground any number of things could get in the way and causes it to bounce back early such as a tree or a large rock. It is fine to have it but please tweak it to indicated making some sort of sound (fine to be inaudible) which bounces back this would be limited by whatever is in the reason in a desert this could potentially reach the 5km make but in a thick forest you would be lucky to see more then 50ft tops with it, though probably a lot less. Also you need to consider making yourself vulnerable to loud noises when using, it only makes sense if powerful sense of hearing heightens the shock of large sounds
I have already stated what sonar is and echo location: - Quote :
- Clan members can manipulate the sound ability even further for sensing, by radiating sound waves outward and reading the feedback, they can locate and analyze unseen objects in a sonar-like fashion.
Would you like me to elaborate on the feedback side of it? This is only one aspect of my sound sensing abilities. - Quote :
- I think its okay to be fine to the nature of sonic attacks, such as high frequency, vibrations they might cause but any related pressure would likely affect a clan member never the less.
Due to their advanced auditory system and chakra it doesn't affect the user. With their advanced level of sound control it is only reasonable that they can protect themselves from their own attacks. - Quote :
- Needs chakra cost, associated duration unless of course this is just a prelude to the actual techs if so it’s fine. There should be a time aspect to these techs, they strike my as potentially instantaneous, perhaps you need to them for a few seconds before the affect kicks in
Yeah this is going to be put into a jutsu technique which can be added to other sound techniques as an additional effect. There will be a chakra cost and perhaps a single post delay for the effects. - Quote :
- I do want to know how long a period of time before they might destroy the vocal cords through their use though. A limitation so vague isn’t a limitation at all after all
Ok, have added a cooldown on using it for long periods of time. - Quote :
- Sounds OP, esp vs other close combat fighters. You would need to phrase this as actual techs and make them balanced. The nature of it particularly think is OP since you don’t need to hit anyone to badly harm and is pretty much insta hit. As it is I am not sure I can approve someone who can vibrate some one to mush just because he happens to be close by, thus rendering all close combat specialist rather boned so to speak.
Think of Killer Bee super vibrating lightning chakra, this is using that but in the proper form in the "Sound Element". I was planning to use this idea for a single technique, like a cloaking technique around the user. The nature of the vibrating chakra is that it super vibrates the surroundings and it greatly increases the cutting effect, so the ability to shatter bones and cutting the opponents flesh would be combined with taijutsu naturally. I have stated numerous times that I have to make contact for this to happen, so it isnt a "instant hit". - Quote :
- This makes almost no sense whatsoever, maybe I am just tired but I am struggling to see how sound can be used to make solid objects. At best you can contain it with other materials but changing its nature in this way seems only slight short of impossible. Though please get a second opinion on this if you think I just need more coffee
If you are struggling to see how it works, that is reasonable, but we are relating it to teh narutoverse after all ^^. Most would say this about many abilities such as being able to harden mist? or the ability to shapeshift and take on other forms? This is just another variation of something that is impossible in rl, but in the world of naruto is capable. Chakra can be manipulated to the point where it can formed into a solid, correct? well think of this as the "Sonic Chakra" being manipulated to make a solid form, but it still gains the properties of sound and the abilities of "Sonic Chakra". - Quote :
- Looks fine though I think more info on how sound scan be used to determine and pinpoint certain weaknesses is needed.
Its not the sound that determines the weaknesses of the target, its the user through normal analysis and perception etc. I may have not explained it properly. ^^ - Quote :
- Overall its an interesting app with a lot of potential however it suffers from questionable execution on some parts (mainly by a lack of logical link between what can be done with sound and what you clan's seems to be able to do with it) and by being borderline if not actually OP in other parts. The amount of different aspects is more fitting two clans or a clan with various branches then a single clan and you seem to specialising in no less the 3 aspects when most clans rarely go beyond one. Two is not unreasonable given the uchiha are good with both nin and genjutsu but I do think 3 is pushing it a little. Kekkai Genkai will a boost arent meant to be specific, allowing characters to do certain things well. My suggestion is to remove the rather OP sounding tai aspect and focus on using sound chakra and abilities based on your voice and pitch.
I think that this fact is kind of irrelivant. Saying that it the there are to many abilities to be in one clan isn't correct, it is just that I have developed it more than the usual person would (I have explained somethings that coule be just in jutsu). Seeing is this is all under the concept of "Sound Element" it would all be branched under one clan. If someone tried to make a clan with Ice manipulation and shaftshifting then yeah, but this is all under the same advanced element of sound. The fact that the clan is universal enough that it can be developed in nin, gen and tai is something that should be credited not disregarded. You can only can two specialties on this site, so i dont see what the problem is. I am wanting to focus my character on nin and tai where someone else might focus on nin and gen. It is there choice, but they are still limited to the rules of the site. ^^ | |
| | | Jiro Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Okamoto Clan [Finished] Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:10 am | |
| First set of Jutsu reviewed so far
Sonic Release
Perfect Pitch: How longs do the effects actually last? Blindness seems a little extreme for a D rank effect too, might want to bump it to C rank
Sound Clone: Knock up to B Rank
Unseen Warrior: Can you explain what you mean by ‘the user can exert one pound of force for every point of int he or she has’. It’s not entirely clear what the scale of force is involved in this tech
Sonic Mind Barrier: Mind infiltration techniques? We talking yamanaka style or gen and to what rank? How long does the barrier last?
Sonic Trace: I think you mean ‘Trance’. You might want to stick in how long it takes to kick in, in posts
Vibration Cloak – Make A-S, it doesn’t strike as something a chuunin could do. Remove the blur part, drop speeds to 100% and 200% accordingly. What affect does getting hit by a weapon have on you in this state? I assume normal though that might be a bad idea for other reasons.
Just so you know where I am getting my comparator and thus suggested changes it’s from one of my own A rank techs:
Name: Ichi Motte Sono Kaze - Wind Release: One With the Wind Rank: A Element: Wind Description: This jutsu allows to suffuse their muscles in wind aligned chakra allowing them to reach incredible speeds and into blend in with the wind. While this won't make the user entirely invisible, it will make them seem blurred as if heat haze and very difficult to attack with any degree accuracy. A user affected by this technique can move twice as fast as normal. This state last for 6 posts
Sonic Release: Howl Of The Banshee: Size, area of affect and range needs definition. Since this is a insta kill tech it needs to be potentially dodgable/avoidable. Also because I forsee with out potential RP problems when you use it to kill someone who claims to have done something to avoid it/deal with it, you claim counter and it isn’t clear | |
| | | Todd Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Okamoto Clan [Finished] Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:27 am | |
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- Perfect Pitch: How longs do the effects actually last? Blindness seems a little extreme for a D rank effect too, might want to bump it to C rank
added duration, and bumped it to C-rank. - Quote :
- Sound Clone: Knock up to B Rank.
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- Unseen Warrior: Can you explain what you mean by ‘the user can exert one pound of force for every point of int he or she has’. It’s not entirely clear what the scale of force is involved in this tech
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- Sonic Mind Barrier: Mind infiltration techniques? We talking yamanaka style or gen and to what rank? How long does the barrier last?
Double done. - Quote :
- Sonic Trace: I think you mean ‘Trance’. You might want to stick in how long it takes to kick in, in posts
lol I did mean Trance ^^. Edited. - Quote :
- Vibration Cloak – Make A-S, it doesn’t strike as something a chuunin could do. Remove the blur part, drop speeds to 100% and 200% accordingly. What affect does getting hit by a weapon have on you in this state? I assume normal though that might be a bad idea for other reasons.
Lol discussed in admin c-box. Edited rank but keep effects. - Quote :
- Sonic Release: Howl Of The Banshee: Size, area of affect and range needs definition. Since this is a insta kill tech it needs to be potentially dodgable/avoidable. Also because I forsee with out potential RP problems when you use it to kill someone who claims to have done something to avoid it/deal with it, you claim counter and it isn’t clear.
Fair enough, edited accordingly. Bring on the next round!! Woohoo! | |
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