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Tahji
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PostSubject: Training for Graduation   Training for Graduation EmptyFri Dec 11, 2009 3:19 pm

Tahji looked around the field. He breathed in and out, in and out. Tahji scanned a row of trees, just long enough for him to use the Shunshin no Jutsu. He climbed onto one tree and relaxed. His sensei taught him that to perform this jutsu, you need an amount of chakra. He estimated the amount and started charging up his chakra to his feet. He Tahji looked through the fields, from left to right and right to left. He scanned at a row of trees, just enough for him to use the Shunshin no Jutsu. He breathed in and out, in and out. Once again, he scanned the row of trees, estimating the amount of chakra he will need to jump through it. He walked towards a tree a tree at the left and jumped onto it. He stood there on a thick branch and started charging chakra and transferring it towards his feet. Tahji looked at the distance again and double checked his chakra amount. ”That should be enough” he thought. He bent his knees and jumped. He saw the last tree in a second. He felt light, very light. He landed softly on the large branch of the last tree. He turned around and saw what he did. He charged the same amount of chakra and transferred it to his feet. He wanted to try again. When he was ready, he launched himself towards the tree he first went on. This time it was faster. He landed just one second right after he jumped. With a confident feeling, he jumped off the branch and ran back to where he put his things. He got ready for the next jutsu and sat down on the mat he had set up a while ago. There, he charged his chakra full and began eating a sandwich he brought with him. He stood up with the magic cloak in his hands. He transferred the chakra to his feet and jumped. He landed next to the biggest tree that is surrounded by smaller trees creating a perfect opening.

A rabbit was hopping towards him. He backed up towards the giant tree. The rabbit did not know he was there so it kept on hoping. When it was near, Tahji pulled on his Magic Cloak hiding himself. It was either the rabbit was to dumb or it didn’t spot Tahji because the rabbit just hopped by, right next to them. At least Tahji wished the rabbit didn’t spot him. He pulled off the cloak and followed the rabbit silently. He crawled on the ground hoping that the rabbit wouldn’t have good eyes. He stood up and hid in the shadow. The rabbit heard the rustling sound of the leaves so it turned around. The rabbit stayed there for a while and then hopped on. Tahji charged his chakra getting ready for the next jutsu.

Last of all, Tahji wanted to try out the Bikou Ninjutsu today. He kept on following the rabbit. This time he followed it around using the Bikou Ninjutsu. He first hid behind a boulder, then a tree until he caught the rabbit in his hands. He dropped it on the ground as it hopped away. He saw a small boar near where he was standing. He closed into to it. The mother boar suddenly came rushing at him. Tahji used the Shunshin no Jutsu to jump onto the nearby tree. The mother boar halted, surprised by a sudden disappearance of her target. The mother boar backed up until her baby was safely next to her. Tahji recharged his chakra and waited. He threw a kunai onto the ground. The little boar got scared and run away. His mother followed it to the nest. Tahji used the Bikou Ninjutsu to track them all the way to the nest and thought ”Success!” Tahji walked away and charged his chakra. He used the Shunshin no Jutsu to jump back where he started from. He yawned and packed up his things. He headed back to the orphanage and prepared for tomorrows jutsu practice.


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Adam
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PostSubject: Re: Training for Graduation   Training for Graduation EmptyFri Dec 11, 2009 3:35 pm

OOC:

This isn't acceptable. Each of them would be either 100 words for E ranks, 150 for D.

The first paragraph, Shunshin no Jutsu. That's only 99 words. When you need a minimum of 150.

The second, Kauremino no Jutsu. I don't even know what that is? Is that supposed to be Kawarimi no Jutsu? If so, it doesn't make you invisible. Anyway, that would require probably 100 words as an E rank but 78 words is terrible.

The third, Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique is a D rank, you only have 86 words, also terribly below the required limit.
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PostSubject: Re: Training for Graduation   Training for Graduation EmptyFri Dec 11, 2009 3:38 pm

ooc: ill be editing soon.
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PostSubject: Re: Training for Graduation   Training for Graduation EmptyFri Dec 11, 2009 5:00 pm

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