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PostSubject: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyTue Dec 15, 2009 10:26 pm

General Information
Name: Ozu Nodaku
Nickname/Alias: Mu (nothingness, void, or zero-from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mu_(negative) if this in incorrect)
Age: 16

Gender: Male

Looks: He wears a worn brown poncho kind of like clint eastwoods in his spaghetti westerns and a green straw Chinese worker hat. He has big blue eye’s and longish brown hair. He is relatively handsome and about 6 feet tall. He carries his backpack on his back filled with food and supplies. He has a special Khunai pack also at his waste, with a special compartment for paper and exploding notes.

Unlike most kids his age, he has little acne and is relatively clean swimming or taking baths whenever possible. He's reasonably built, even though not he's not incredibly strong he can fight decently using instinct. The drum his grandfather gave him he carries on his waste which he handles with great care.
Mu is fair skinned and his body is already showing signs of large amount of body hair. He wears blue shoes with white stripes and most his socks are brown.

Personality: Ozu is extremely moody, depending more or less on how he feels he can be depressed and reclusive or happy and full of life. He can be silly but become quickly serious when realizing the situation he’s in or even when some else is trying to talk seriously with him. He tells horrible jokes. Joke killer is another name for him possibly. Also when he’s angry he gets extremely intense and sometime he can loose complete control, usually when he is fighting for something that is close to him. He has a good heart essentially but will do bad stuff if he doesn’t think there will be large problems for anyone. He does like girls but is more or less looking for a close relationship or a good friend. When he introduces himself he is usually friendly but awkward at making conversation. He loves noodles and dumplings, especially ramen and udon and pork dumplings. He is also quite smart even if he doesn’t realize it and likes to thing and plan things through, but he has a bad habit of not finishing stuff up.

Personality Trait's: Mu is extremely serious about his music and doesn’t take it lightly. To him its his life style and one of the few things that is their for him. He style tends to be on the darker side, and usually reflects past experience of his, yet it can also be fun. He is always searching for more understanding on music and life, but he thinks the average person doesn’t pay enough attention to the arts or music especially. Yet if he successfully transmits his feelings through a song to another person he is generally pleased with himself.

Catch Phrase: Ohh, ohh Damn

[b]Clan Information[/b]

Clan Name: Senkyoku Clan (this is currently unknown to Mu due to the fact that his grandfather never really spoke of his past.)

Kekkei Genkai: Senkyoku Members are born with the Earth based Kekkei Genkai called "Echoed Word's". By sending chakra waves into the Earth (or other sound cunduction objects), The Senkyoku clan can produce several "Songs" which can take on may diffrent effect, the most notible being sound based Genjutsu, though Shockwave and Destruction type Ninjutsu are common.

Clan Symbol:

Clan History: Senkyoku Clan were originally a band of traveling Musicians and Artists that wandered the borders of the Land of Fire and Earth, Collecting Songs and writing Storys as they travled. Do to their skill, many countrys hired them as what was called "War Painters". War Painters were people that in times of Battle, would enter the fray, and record the events of the battle, wither by Drawing, Song, or Writing, because of these Dangerous circumstances, many of the Senkyoku were heavily trained in combat of all forms, and they soon came to be know as the untouchable, as Senkyoku memebers were said to come from the most bloody of battles unscaved. When the Great Shinobi Wars began, the Senkyoku were thrown into turmoil, the boarders that they had wandered for years were no longer say, no place was, and the Senkyoku soon dwindled in Numbers. It was not till a small band of refuges settled near the Village Hidden in the Leaf, that the Senkyoku were able to Stablize. Forced to Fight inordered ot survive, the Senkyoku began to use their Skills to create powerful Song based Genjutsu inorder to protect their new home.

Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure

Skill Information

Skill Specialty: Sound based Ninjutsus and genjutsus.

Elemental Affinity: Earth/Water
Main: Ninjustu
Sub: Genjustu

Special Characteristics: How loud the sound is depends on the amount of chakra used. Also due to the art of sound control extreme loud noises can be muffled.


Items/Weapons:

Name:Hyoushi
Appearance: About 1.5 feet in diameter, the drum is relatively strong and is made from leather. Hyoushi is a double sided drum that is beat upon with the users hands. The drum as circles echoing out from the center that create a design similar to that created by a drop of water on a flat pool.
Rank: D
Special Abilities: The use of this drum is more based on the users skill with sound jutsus and genjutsus. It can be hit pretty loud (not as a defensive thing but just simply to make a loud noise) to make a loud noise which is a quite deep sound.
Origin: A drum given to Mu on his 6th birthday, which ever since he has kept close to him at all times.

JUTSUS


Name: Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None.
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description: Henge is the basic skill a ninja must know to become a Genin. It's mostly used as a decoy, to confuse the opponent by transforming into somebody that's an ally with the enemy, and then attack from the back when he's not expecting it. This technique can easily be combined with other jutsus for a more powerful effect, such as with Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique].

Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None.
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description: This technique must be mastered by any ninja who has graduated from the shinobi academy. It's the most basic technique a Genin must know, since it can be a real lifesaver. This ninjutsu creates a simple illusion clone identical to the caster. The clone however has no physical properties and will disperse the moment it is touched.


Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking]
Rank: C (Basic)
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Requirements: Learned From Sensei // Chuunin Basic // Kinobori no Jutsu.
Description: The user focuses their chakra to the soles of their feet and step onto the water. From the surface of the liquid, they would then need to be able to measure the amount of chakra it would take to support their weight along the surface of the water without sinking. Once this is mastered, the user would be able to easily walk on water.


Jibaku Fuda: Kassei [Exploding Tag: Activate]
Rank: C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Requirements: Explosive Notes.
Description: Utilizing chakra, a ninja is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag. This can also be used to deactivate any explosive tags in the vicinity of the user, which were set to explode by means other than through the use of jutsu

Nawanuke no Jutsu [Rope Untying Skill]
Rank: E (Basic)
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Requirements: None.
Description: This jutsu gives you the ability to easily free yourself from a rope or any other object made from something similar to a rope. This jutsu works merely by inserting chakra into the rope, and requires no hand seals.

Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Requirements: None.
Description: Kawarimi is a widely used and very famous skill among shinobi. The user taps into their chakra and exchanges places with an object of similar weight and size. This is clearly an evasion technique used to dodge attacks; however it can be linked with other jutsus or attacks to create massive damage if done properly.

Myu-jikaru Gokuin [Musical Seals]
Rank: D
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Requirements: Speak your mind jutsu or musical instrument to create the sounds.
Description: This technique allows the user to draw up chakra by playing musical notes instead of making hand seals. On a large scale, this is often faster than making normal hand seals. This ability does not require chakra nor hand seals to be able to use. However, the chakra needed to use the jutsu performed through this method is still consumed.


Water

Kirigakure no Jutsu [Hidden Mist Technique]
Rank: C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Requirements: None.
Description: A ninjutsu technique that covers the area surrounding the user completely in mist. Once used, there's practically no visibility within the area of this jutsu for both the user and their enemy. This is a perfect situation for someone who trains in the art of silent killing.

Suiton: Jouka [Water Release: Cleanse]
Rank: D
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Requirements: None.
Description: After the user forms a few hand seals they concentrate and convert a small amount of chakra in their eyes into water. The small amount of water causes their eyes to tear and rid themselves of any irritating substances like sand or powder.

Mayomeru [Purify]
Rank: C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Requirements: Water.
Description: The user places their hands on a surface of water and causes all man-harmful impurities to be removed from it. This makes the water suitable for human usage and probably more easy to manipulate by Suiton.

Suiton: Suikemono Sakusei [Water Release: Water Animal Creation]
Rank: C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Requirements: Water Source.
Description: The user uses their chakra to create animals out of water that are around the size of an average person’s fist. These animals are able to fly if properly shaped, and move with a good deal of speed. However, they have insanely low strength, and will be destroyed with a single hit, making them difficult to put to offensive use.

Suiton: Nami Shindou no Jutsu [Water Release: Wave Impact Technique]
Rank: C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Requirements: Water in front of the user.
Description: A small wave of water erupts in front of the user (about 6 feet tall) and crashes down about 7 feet directly in front of them. Although the technique does no real damage, it does deflect projectiles out of the air and can also knock the opponent off their feet if they are caught in the impact.

Kiri Shunshin no Jutsu [Mist Body Flicker Technique]
Rank: C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Description: The user will be able to disappear from their previous position in a cloud of mist and reappear elsewhere. The distance they reappear to depend on the amount of chakra they choose to use, though they must travel more than 2 miles, and know exactly where they are going. This jutsu is only to be used outside of a battle, or to leave a thread entirely. This jutsu is only to be used outside of a battle, meaning you can't start a battle with it either

Suiton: Shiryoku [Water Release: Sight] (Doujutsu)
Rank: D
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Requirements: None.
Description: The user is able to see light without it being bent by water. This allows them to see through a mist, or to the bottom of a pond.


Earth

Doton: Tsuchi Saiku [Earth Release: Earth Trick]
Rank: E
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Requirements: Dirt, Soil, Or Mud Nearby.
Description: After forming a few hand seals the user grabs a handful of mud in his hand and throws it at his opponent. Just as he begins to throw the handful of mud the user pushes out some chakra into his palm. The escaping chakra pushes the mud faster than what would be expected towards the opponent. Although it does little damage it does dirty the opponents clothing and may irritate certain parts of the body (eyes, cuts, nails… etc.).

Doton: Da-to Tsumemono wo Keisi [Earth Release: Dirt Wad Formation]
Rank: D
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Requirements: None.
Description: The user makes one handseal, and opens his palms facing the ground. He draws up dirt, and packs it tightly with chakra, into a ball the size of a tennis ball. With practice, these balls can be made as hard as rock.

Doton: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu [Earth Release: Inner Decapitation Skill]
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Requirements: None.
Description: A Doton (earth element) ninjutsu normally used to catch the target by surprise. After performing a series of hand seals and raising his chakra, the user burrows underground using his chakra. After the ninja feels he is below his opponent, he raises his hand and grabs his opponent's feet, then buries them underground, leaving only the target's head above the surface. This leaves the head open for attack. This jutsu does not let the user move around underground.

Doton: Jimen Bara [Earth Release: Ground Thorns]
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Requirements: None.
Description: The user performs a few hand seals, causing a small area of ground to become extremely jagged and sharp. This is basically a ninjutsu to create makibishi out of the ground itself.

Doton: Tsunagakure no Jutsu [Earth Release: Hidden Rope Technique]
Rank: E
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Requirements: Rope, wires… etc.
Description: This jutsu allows the user to hide a rope under a short layer of earth, making it totally invisible to those passing by. It is great for disguising traps. This technique does not require hand seals.

Doton: Hibi [Earth Release: Crack]
Rank: D
Type:Ninjutsu
Element; Earth
Requirements: None.
Description: Guiding his chakra via handseals, the user produces a crack that could trip the opponent or cause a body of rock to be unstable.

Doton: Douro Shougaibutsu [Earth Release: Road Obstacle]
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Requirements: None.
Description: The user takes the chance of a charging target to use this jutsu. Through a couple of quick handseals, the user creates a few small rocks to pop out of the ground in the target's way. This effect is sudden to force the target to trip and hurt themselves.

Doton: Nameogusoku [Earth Release: Armor of Earth]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Requirements: None.
Description: After performing the handseals, the user is engulfed with a layer of earth which then hardens to a very high density and is used as armor; each piece of the armor can endure at least one hit, and can endure more depending on the hit force, and the level of the user. The armor itself is very heavy, creating a drain on the user's stamina as well as their chakra, and also greatly decreasing both their speed and strength no matter the rank of the user.

Doton: Tera Myu-zika [Earth Release: Terra Musica]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Requirements: Musical Seals.
Description: The user will play music, and the ground under the enemy will begin to shake, and waves will run through it. This also makes soil fairly loose, which can be good for farming certain crops. This technique does not require hand seals.

Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu [Earth Clone Technique]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Requirements: None.
Description: This is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes earth to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Tsuchi Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out attacks on its target. Also, elemental clones can think, but only on the rudimentary level, and the concentration for their jutsu needs to be maintained by the user. When this clone disperses, it reverts into a pile of dirt. The Clone is 1/10th the power level and strength of the user

Drunkard's Ballad
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: -
Description: A Simple, Cheerful toon that can be played on any Instrument. A toon that reacts with the listeners nervous system in a way that replicates Drunkenness, causing dizziness, nausea, and a lack of coordination. When the toon stops, the targets are left with one heck of a hangover.

Sirens Calling
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: A Sweet, soft melody that can be played on any Instrument. As the target listens to the Melody, the are instinctively draw towards the direction of the sound, following it's call in a Dream-like Daze.

Song of Submission
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: -
Description: The user sends a wave of Chakra into the Earth, producing a soothing melody that calms the target, reducing response time and awareness. Last for as long as the Melody is played outside of combat, and for 2 posts inside combat.

Voice of Darkness
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user sends a wave of Chakra into the Earth, Producing a chaotic melody that disrupts how the brain interprets Signels from the eyes, plunging the target into a absolute darkness. Last for only one post.


Echo's Voice
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Support
Element: -
Description: The user sends a wave of Chakra into the Earth, Producing a slient sound that Changes the way the target hears sounds. The Target will hear every sound after words in as a long echo, getting louder and louder with each echo. This Jutsu can either be use as a offensive manner, causeing the target great pain from the every echoing sounds around them, or to boost the power of other "Songs". If Used before any Genjutsu type "Songs", the effect's lenght is increased by one, if used before a Ninjutsu type Song, the rank in Increased by 1/2 (say if the rank started at C, then if this jutsu was used before it, it would be C(1/2), this means it could beat a C rank jutsu, but not a B rank Jutsu, it is Inbetween the two).

Hallow Wispers
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: A Low, Heartpounding song that can be played on any Instrument. As the song plays, the target begins to hear wispered voices coming from the shadows, and see images out of the coner of their eyes.


Genjutsus- All my genjutsus are transmited through sound.

Senrigan [Clairvoyance]
Rank: C
Type:Genjutsu
Element:None
Requirements: Musical instrument
Description: This technique is initiated once the target hears some signal sound of the user, such as a flute or a harp. It allows the target to “hear” the thoughts of the user, as if they were performing a case of mind reading. Of course, as this is only a one way deal, conversation is impossible. Also, as the target can’t block out the sound of the user’s thoughts, in the hands of a true psychopath, this can be a very destructive technique.
Post Duration: 2 posts.

Me wo Samasu [Waking Up]
Rank: C
Type:Genjutsu
Element:None
Requirements: None.
Description: A sight based genjutsu of some intricate detail when under the effects of this an individual suddenly finds them self awaking in a cold sweat as if from a bad dream As if the were never in the situation from before the jutsu was applied.
Post Duration: 3 posts.

Sa Ato Nozomi [Make a Wish]
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Requirements: None.
Description: This jutsu would be the complete opposite of the Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: Vision of Hell Skill]. Instead of seeing the thing they most fear, the target would see the thing they wish or love for. This is a sound based Genjutsu
Post Duration: 2 posts.

Kawa Oto [River Sounds]
Rank: D
Type:Genjutsu
Element:None
Requirements: None.
Description: The Target hears a running river to the left or right of him (user's decision). It is particularly effective against thirsty opponents, and is mainly used to make your opponent move towards the noise. This is a sound based Genjutsu
Post Duration: 1 post.




Kaiteki Uta [Comfort Song]
Rank: E
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Requirements: Instrument.
Description: This technique lulls the enemy into a false state of comfort. This is a sound based genjutsu
Post Duration: 1 post.



Shi kara no Sasayaki [Whispers from the Dead]
Rank: C
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Requirements: None.
Description: The effects of this sound based jutsu makes those entrapped hear the voices of lost loved ones or family or friends they hadn't seen in a long to be saying awful things about them and their constant failures. As well bringing up dark secrets from their past to instill self doubt in the one trapped. This is a sound based genjutsu
Post Duration: 3 posts.


Shoshi [Bibliography]
Rank: C
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Requirements: None.
Description: The target will see their life flash before their eyes, even if they are not about to die, often times creating the impression that the target is about to die. It can also be used for interrogations to make people remember facts. Due to the sheer amount of information that needs to be processed by this, a person’s life will flash before them at a rather accelerated rate, so that a year may only take a few seconds to look through. This is a sound based Genjutsu.
Post Duration: 2 posts.

Nemuri [Sleep]
Rank: C
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Requirements: None.
Description: A Genjutsu technique where the ninja places their hand on their target's shoulder and forces them into a deep slumber. A useful technique when subterfuge is involved with a mission, but utterly useless in combat. This is a sound based Genjutsu.
Post duration: Effects are Indefinite; the jutsu itself is 1 post. (Cannot be added to)

Magen: Moufubuki [Demonic Illusion: Blizzard]
Rank: C
Type:Genjutsu
Element:Water
Requirements: None.
Description: The user summons a blizzard to the surrounding area and causes illusionary snow to fall from the sky. This snow will act as a way to reduce visibility and will make it difficult to move for the opponent due to the screaming winds. This is a sound based Genjutsu.
Post duration: indefinite, careful of the chakra drain though.

Koori no Jutsu [Ice Technique]
Rank: C
Type:Genjutsu
Element:Water
Requirements: None.
Description: This genjutsu starts out by making the target feel very cold. As time goes on, the target's body begins to feel colder and colder, and then starts to become numb. By the end of the jutsu, their whole body will be left half numb, and half freezing. This jutsu is highly uncomfortable to those used to the cold, and is even painful to those who haven't developed a strength against the cold. This technique's effects can even be enhanced more when used in cold and/or snowy areas. This is a sound based Genjutsu
Post duration: 2 posts.

Guru-vi- [Groovy]
Rank: C
Requirements: Psychedelic.
Description: The enemy will see the world begin to wobble around him, and loose his sense of balance. This is a sound based Genjutsu
Post Duration: 2 posts.

Genjutsu Kai [Genjutsu Release]
Rank: C (Basic)
Requirements: Learned From A Genin Sensei.
Description: The user places their palms together and forms a single hand seal, after which they yell “Kai” or “Release”. This can be used on the user, or others (though for others they also need to touch the person), canceling the genjutsu that they are in. However, not all genjutsu can be kai’d out of. This is a sound based Genjutsu

Saikederikku [Psychedelic]
Rank: D
Requirements: None.
Description: The colors of the world around the opponent appear to change randomly. This is a sound based Genjutsu
Post Duration: 1 post

Ravage wolves
Rank:E
Description: The enemy hears and sees wolves in the distant as if they are circling him. This genjutsus Is used to scare the opponent mainly. This is a sound based Genjutsu


[b]Background Information:[/b] Ozu was born in a wood hut somewhere in the woods in Bear country. Ozu was raised by his grandfather, an x shinobi who had once been a jonin of the hidden star village. Not much is know about his grandfather except that he left after some conflict with the laws and regulations and the hokage. Ozu’s knows little of his parents accept that his father was killed during a raid and his mother’s fate is still unknown. Ozu’s childhood was spent helping and learning from his grandfather and he rarely left the forest. Ozu’s is well read and has a good knowledge of world history and culture, but he is a little socially awkward, never being around anyone else except is grandfather and a few birds that were friends of his grandfather, who always had a unexplained affinity with them. His grandfather also taught him a wide variety of jutsus and chakra control techniques. Almost everything Ozu knows about the world is from his grandfather. Ozu’s only friend is a bird named Nanashi, or nameless, a falcon who Ozu’s mother had supposedly had left him. Ozu’s always had a good ear but he never learned to play an instrument or sing properly. When Ozu was 13, assassins came and killed his grandfather and burnt down his house. During the attack Ozu’s awakened his kekki genki but he doesn’t remember anything after he did, since he blacked out. All he remembers is waking up with almost liquefied boneless bodies. Since that day, Ozu took up the nickname Mu, meaning nothing. Looking for a place to call home and having some ninja skills Mu found the Sand village and since then has taken residence and enrolled as a Genin Ninja. Mu is always constantly looking for information on his ancient clan ancestry and is still friends with still Nanashi.


RP Sample: As Mu walked down the road listening to the wind rustle through the trees he thought about his childhood and where he was heading now. He felt lonely and dishearten, but he also felt a sense of freedom. As he walked down the road his old friend Nanashi, the falcon his mother gave him, landed on his shoulder and creaked. Slightly angered at his laziness to go hunting, Mu pulled out a piece of beef jerky from his back pack and fed it to Nanashi. Mu looked up at the far away clouds and wished he could be a bird, remembering the dream he had last night that seemed realer then reality at time. In the dream he was a sparrow flying through his childhood woods back home. Even though Mu felt a slight pain go through his chest he trudging on hoping that the next down would have some good noodles.


Last edited by masterpeewee on Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:46 am; edited 18 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyWed Dec 16, 2009 3:39 am

Do you have permission to be B rank Missing Nin?
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyWed Dec 16, 2009 8:20 am

I think its all ready for approval, just changed history slightly and village info so it made sense.
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyWed Dec 16, 2009 12:42 pm

Suna Genin cant have B ranked jutsus, please remove them.
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyWed Dec 16, 2009 9:12 pm

Sorry, I might have been unclear on that earlier but i think their all in red now and will become aviable for training to Mu once he becomes a Chunnin.
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyThu Dec 17, 2009 2:48 am

Just remove the B ranks for now.

You did not state you have the Water Affinity, add it in or remove those jutsus.
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyThu Dec 17, 2009 3:03 am

ok took out the B rank Jutsus and added that i have a water affinity
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyThu Dec 17, 2009 7:57 am

Shiro Yuki [White Snow]
Rank: C
Requirements: Above Average Speed.
Description: Hiding his handseals in his motion, the user runs circling his the opponent. Like a double team tactic, the user produces white after images which merge with his movement fulfilling complete bright blur. Being in such acceleration, attacking isn't much accessible to the user, but possible, while the jutsu is mainly for intimidation.

This is a Taijutsu technique given the afterimages.

Also please follow the actual Jutsu template for the site.
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyThu Dec 17, 2009 11:53 am

Took out the White Snow jutsu and correctd the jutsus
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyThu Dec 17, 2009 1:04 pm

Already a Sound Based Clan on the site, please remove.

You also need to supply us with an RP sample. If you use the code given in the template your application would be easier to follow, that is why it is there.
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyWed Dec 23, 2009 12:47 pm

Got rid of clan, think its ready, i'm not sure though on the Rp sample. It just said to give an RP sample, which i thought i did. It may have just been unclear when Mu's history ended and my RP sample began.
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyFri Dec 25, 2009 5:20 am

de bump
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyFri Dec 25, 2009 5:30 am

You can't have Sound jutsu without a KKG. You can use the already existing Sound Clan.

You need two paragraphs for looks.
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyFri Dec 25, 2009 8:22 am

got clan (I've asked permission from the opinion creator but i haven't gotten a response on what the policy of her clan is but i think its open) And added a paragraph more on my looks. Also changed my wind affinity to earth
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyFri Dec 25, 2009 8:45 am

The only Sound jutsu you can have are the Clan's Secret Jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyFri Dec 25, 2009 9:41 am

Took them all out accept for Musical Seals, which (not 100% positive) can be used by anyone who learns the ability.
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyFri Dec 25, 2009 9:43 am

Name: Speak your mind
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Desciption:
The user is able to portray sound from their head, the volume depending
on how much Chakra is used. This can be used when creating genjutsus
when one doesn't have am instrument or sound based Nijutsu. Words or
songs or really any sound can be created if the caster can imagine it.

Name: Art of sound control
Rank: C-A
Requirements: Hand sings or this can be done while speak your mind yet that is a B rank jutsu
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description:
Depending on the amount of Chakra used, sound emitted from the user or
noises that are hearable by the user can be amplified or muffled. On a
large scale, using the amount of chakra of about a A rank technique,
all sounds in a large radius can become comptely muffled or increased
extremely, such as a footstep sounding like a boulder. To the holder of
Node Kekkie Genkai though sounds can sound normal if intended to.





Are these in the kkg >.>?
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyFri Dec 25, 2009 9:48 am

Wow your fast, was just looking over my ninjutsu over myself and noticed them. They where part of my old KKG and i forgot to take them out but i have now/
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PostSubject: Re: Mu Genin   Mu Genin EmptyFri Dec 25, 2009 10:00 am

Remove Detection technique, and earth clone, like water clone, has to be 1/10th the users strength.

Your genjutsu are alright, but I can see ways in which they can be god modded and overpowered. Approved, but if I see you use them in such ways, you'll be swiftly unapproved.
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