B- Rank salamander

Name: Wayborn
Rank: B
Appearance:
Type of Summon: Blood Donation
Species: Salamander
Elemental Affinity: Fire
History: Wayborn was summoned by Ragna during his training Salamandria, to summon stronger salamanders. Wayborn has wings and scale even though he is a salamander, among his kind he is considered the messenger of the salamanders. Being able to fly, dig, and swim at very high speeds he is a ideal candidate for sending messages or traveling helper. At max speed he is able to cover 10 miles in less than 40 minutes. Wayborn uses a special ability to make the rider and company smaller so that they fit in his mouth, making him able to hold 3 people but no more than this. Besides flight and speed he is able to speak, but he has no physical defensive skills other than very good dodging skills. As stated it has scale which provide defense against most attacks, the skill itself provide a small chakra covered substance that gives the salamander more defense. This defense is comparable to a A rank defensive jutsu and it is non elemental.
Link: [Link to training topic]

Ok post aquiring the summon contract.

i am taking a wild guess and say you mean the train link

f you had to train for the summon. You still have to find the contract and such >>

i have the contract already because i was able to summon a E - rank salamander, i am about to make a training post where my char goes to the home of the salamanders similar to what jiraiya did. is that fine?

yep

Unapproved. Miluda and Weigraff are which rank, C-Rank or B-Rank? If they are varying rank, elaborate on the abilities of both ranks.

Chakra Shield, what are the diensions of the shield?

Also, Weigraff cannot use an A-Rank Genjutsu if he is a C-Rank/B-Rank summon. Change the rank of the Genjutsu, as it is it's a B-Rank.

-edited-

Name: Chakra shield
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: This jutsu uses the a none affinity based chakra on to create a wall of chakra. Miluda spews it from her mouth as one would for a fire ball, except she spits it out in a square shape 3 dimensional box . It only protects the front of the body, if attack from all sides this jutsu is use less. It can guard up to B rank jutsu and afterwards she must wait 3 turns before she can use it again.


How big is it? As Im reading this Im figuring its as big as that coin in the picture because it never states if the box surrounds only the salamander or he spits a MUCH bigger one out. State how big the Salamanders are as well.

-edited-

Miluda
Name: Chakra shield
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: This jutsu uses the a none affinity based chakra on to create a wall of chakra. Miluda spews it from her mouth as one would for a fire ball, except she spits it out in a square shape 3 dimensional box. The size is about the size 30ft wide and 14ft tall. It only protects the front of the body, if attack from all sides this jutsu is use less. It can guard up to B rank jutsu and afterwards she must wait 3 turns before she can use it again.

How long does it Last? Also if its a wall your meaning it cant move as well which is fine with me, just add it to the description.

lol ok edited again ^^

bumped for approval

Quote :

Name: Salamanders Roar
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: This Genjutsu is a sound type. Weigraff lets out a loud roar that unless a salamander, deaf, or related to the summon beast family in some way will be caught in this genjutsu. The sound travels into the ears and sends shockwaves across the brain making illusions to confuse the mind. This Takes 2 post to complete, he cannot move during this process. If he does he must start over, only chakra sensitives of a high caliber can sense this chakra forming. Once caught unless the user has a skill that says otherwise, any who hear it are (except for the exceptions previously stated) paralyzed.

I kinda see how this would be used but amuse me and add and example of the 'illusion' part.

oh man come on ...sigh fine
basically it is similar to the toad song done by the toad couple on pain it akes tiem and cant be disturbed unless it has to start over. not to sound like a ass but i think my description is fairly simple for anyone to understand it. while weigraff prepares me and miluda defend him, once completed unless the user has a protection from it he is paralyzed. i dont know what more I can say to explain this.

changes made

bump for approval

bump again >.>

ok i have been a good sport about this, i think i have waited long enough for someone to check my damn app i mean hell look at the date, can someone please look it over so i can get on with my other jutsu

Ok your summon cant be using genjutsu since you dont have genjutsu, and essentially would be cheating the system. Also, as stated, the B rank summoning is basically two summons that are connected so to qualify as B rank each would have to be only C rank by them selves. The genjuts would also not be allowed as it is A rank. Chakra shield would have to be performed by both of them if their speerate beings that are just connected and have spereate chakra pools and everything. Either that or it would have to be lowered to a C rank jutsu and only capable of blocking C rank and below attacks.

ok its gone am i good now?

Your not going to have any jutsu at all now?

no its just used for travel

ok then approved for training