taco cats clan

Clan Name:Taco

Kekkei Genkai:Glass manipulation and kenjutsu masters.The glasses density is equal to the jutsu.C=copper B=iron A=steel S= harder then steel.The glass also has the ability to control the chakra of the tailed beasts.All glass made by the taco clan weigh 25 pounds.



Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name:Glass object jutsu
Rank:C-A
Type:ninjutsu
Depscription:Allows the user to make a glass object such as a sword.

Name:Glass clone jutsy
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Depscription:Makes a clone of glass out of the user.To defeat a glass clone you need to break it.

Name:Multy glass clone jutsu
Rank:b
Type:ninjutsu
Depscription:Creates 3 glass clones of the user.To defeat a glass clone you need to break it.

Name:Glass armor
Rank:A
Type:Taijutsu
Depscription:Covers the user in a armor of glass.

Name:Glass city
Rank:S
Type:nijutsu
Depscription:Allows the user to make anything they want out of a huge amount of glass.It was given the name because it was said that it was once used to make a city of glass.It can only be learned by the clan leader.



History: Cat Taco One day when experimenting with his chakra discovered that he could make a glass element.At first he thought "so what anyone can make glass."He then threw the piece of glass at the training dummy he had been using and it cut straight through it.He thought that that was weird.HE then tested the glass to see if a kunai could cut through it but it didn't.The glass was as hard as steel and even though it was small it felt kinda heavy about 10 pounds.This was the day that the taco clan was formed.The current clan leader is Maneki Taco

A few Problems I have with this.

You're allowed creation from....nothing, from what I can tell. You cannot create something from nothing, even in the naruverse, except for a few exceptions. and those exceptions are at tremendous cost. To create glass you would need sand.

You're not very descriptive. You're kkg should be at least 1 or 2 paragraphs, and the history should be 2 paragraphs long. Jutsu need to be described better.

hmm.. glass thats hard as iron, steel, even harder than steel? Seems unnecesarily OP, you could've just gone with a metal creation clan