Shunsuu Sagishi (Origami) vs Yameni Suki (Kibaka)

Note: This is a wagered fight. If Origami wins, Kibaka must permanently (Until the end of the Chuunin exams) have: Origami beat me: in his signature. The same applies if Kibaka loses Origami, in which case Origami is the one who must add that Kibaka beat him in his signature. In the case the fight is a draw or is discontinued via mod rulings - this does not apply.

Shunsuu stood opposite to Yameni, approximately a good 20 metres away. They had agreed on a spar, and Shunsuu ready as always, had quickly started it. They were sparring in a clearing with trees on either side as well as a scattering of trees to the front and back. The wind was very calm and their was a water source to the left of Shunsuu, a good 10m away in the form of a small stream. It was a decent location for a spar, and Shunsuu quickly began the first move. He immediately grabbed two senbon from his pockets, and quickly attached them to explosive notes before throwing them behind Yameni - to lodge them into the trees behind. He would not activate the explosive notes.

Wasting no time after he threw the senbons, he jumped back while making his handseals, "Kirigakure No Jutsu." A dense mist began to form. He would shuffle away from his original location.

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Name: Kirigakure No Jutsu
Rank: D
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, reducing visibility within the affected area. The density can be controlled by the user, allowing them to create a mist so thick that even they can't see through it.

Suki smiled at the boy as he stood opposite her on the battlefield, with Oshi next to her. He was in his normal, panther-like mode, and was purring happily next to Suki. He saw two senbon hit a tree, but said nothing of it, the cat was usually quiet, and didn't think this was important enough to disturb his master about.
As Shunsuu jumped back and caused a mist to appear, she did nothing but send instructions to the cat through her kekkai genkai. He slinked into a bush and dissapeared, intending to walk around the two ninja and appear behind the boy, looking just like Suki.
Suki took a single senbon from her pouch, and threw it into the mist. She assumed he would be there, and one needle wouldn't make enough sound to hit him.
As soon as Oshi reached his intended position, he used man beast clone, and walked out of the bush. He moved to the left, to avoid any senbon that Suki threw.
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NAme Man-Beast Clone
Rank D
Element No element
Type Clan jutsu
Description Juujin Bunshin is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Inuzuka clan and the Yame clan. First the clan member and the familiar may ingest a soldier pill to help their strength and stamina. Then, acting in conjunction with the clan member, the canine/feline familiar will transform themself into a copy of the clan member. While in this form they can accomplish many of the same techniques as the original

"It's time to finish this fight," thought Shunsuu to himself as he began to form another set of handseals, "Water Release: Hearing Aid." Small globules of water formed in his ear, shaping themselves to increase his perception of sound. Now he would be able to accurately track his opponent's location through sound unless they stayed perfectly still.

Next he grabbed the 4 specially pre-prepared senbon from his senbon pouch. Each one was already attached to the dangerous metal wires. In normal conditions they were already hard to spot, in the mist, virtually invisible. He threw two of the senbon, across to eitherside of himself to the trees on the right and left of the clearing. This would form a line of slicing wire from the left side to the right side 5m front of him. He repeated this with another pair to form a line 5m behind him of slicing wire. Anybody reckless enough to run or charge in the mist would be sliced by the wires as they attempted to go through the line.


"Now for the finishing touch," he whispered to himself as he formed another set of handseals, confident he wouldn't be interrupted in this mist, "Mizu Bunshin No Jutsu."
Two water clones appeared, using the source of water from the nearby stream. They were either side of him and covered his openings from the flanks.

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Diagram: Lines represent the wires. X is supposed to be in the center.
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Name: (Custom) Water Release: Hearing Aid
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: After forming the necessary handseals, the jutsu creates two globes of water inside the user's ears, the globes - through their strange shape allow the user to sense movement to a high degree of accuracy through sound (and also slightly louder). The radius of this jutsu is 40m.

Weapon:

Spoiler:

Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Suki sighed, she was finding it hard to think, and with a mood swing was coming on, she had no idea what to do. She used her haze clone technique, and sank into the earth using her underground fish projection technique. She sighed inwardly, and thew a barrage of seven shuriken from the ground in several different places. Without realising it, she had almost cut one line of the wire, and some shuriken flew towards Shunsuu and his clones.
Oshi collected himself quietly, and ate a soldier pill that Suki had given him earlier. Still standing still, he waited for the shuriken to stop, and then used Great breakthrough, hoping to clear the fog with his wind.
Suki heard the wind, and almost slapped herself. Why hadn't she thought of that?!
She jumped up from the ground behind a clone, and walked around aimlessly like she was a clone.

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Haze clone technique
D rank
No element
Oboro Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Rain Genin team lead by Oboro. Oboro Bunshin is a normal Bunshin technique that created approximately a hundred clones of their Genin team. Due to the number of clones created, Oboro and his team can take the opportunity to hide from their target. To attack their target they will hide in the shadows of the clones and attack from underground.

Underground fish projection
Rank C
Earth
Ninjutsu
Doton • Dochuu Eigyo is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. Using the haze clones, the Rain Genin use clones to confuse their enemies and then hide within the earth. From the shadows of the clones, the actual ninja can then attack their target.

Diatoppa:Great Breakthrough
C rank
Ninjutsu
Wind
a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Shunsuu chuckled as he heard the approach of shurikens. He speedily formed the necessary handseals before whispering, "Fuuton: Daitoppa!" He blew out a powerful wind that easily blew away the shurikens. Then from behind him, he felt the same jutsu. That was strange. That meant somebody was behind him. Nevertheless, as the jutsu did not target him, it meant that they did not know his real location. He chuckled again. If it was an attempt to clear the mist, it failed. The water particles in the mist, once blown, will return to fill up the space left. Plus due to the size of the mist, it just wasn't plausible for a wind jutsu of that rank to clear it.

Shunsuu focused back on the task at hand. He could hear the earth moving, and then footsteps. Perfect. By finally moving, his opponent had given away their location. Then again, it could be a clone. He would track it and finish this fight off. Both he and one of his clones began a set of handseals.

"Takitsubo no Jutsu!" said one of the clones. The volume of water was useful in two ways. Firstly, it would drench the area and secondly, it'd cut off any escape routes underground unless his opponent wanted to risk going underground without air.

"99 Senbon Spray!" said the real Shunsuu. 99 senbons thrust out into the air before scattering around the area, falling like a deadly rain. He made sure that none would hit himself or his clones. As soon as he finished the jutsu, he began to track down the footsteps of his opponent along with his other clone - 5m in, they would duck beneath the wire they had set up. He left one clone in the same location who began another set of handseals.

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Haze Clones or normal bunshins don't make real footsteps so I'm tracking the real you.


Jutsu Name: Fuuton: Daitoppa - Wind Release: Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, the user will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Jutsu Name: 99 Senbon Spray
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: After the user performs the correct handseals, up to 99 senbons from the user's bag, pockets or hands are thrust high into the air by chakra before falling back down and scattering themselves in a radius of 15m. This rain of senbon can be aimed due to the user directing the senbon with his chakra.

Name: Takitsubo no Jutsu - Waterfall Basin Technique
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu will summon a large amount of water from the ground to form a wave to drench the area. Yamato used this technique along with Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart to create a waterfall as an example of elemental chakra to Naruto.

Oshi, jumped back, and drew Suki's fan from his belt. She'd given it to him before the battle, and now was his chance to shine. He couldn't do it on all of the water, but he could still use it for most of the area, slightly more than half. He focused, and used Suki's redirection jutsu. The water he manipulated hit some senbon, and the turne on their side, falling like useless...senbons. He spun the water to batter the area that he had heard the techniques being said. He'd made a silly mistake by saying the jutsu loud enough to hear. Because he was behind them, it created an awkward angle and he could redirect the attack back at their genaral area. It was a big mass of water, and he hoped to hit them. With as much force as he could, smashed the water onto the trio. He didn't waste time in looking for Suki.
Suki has heard the clone and boy as well, as she was further from the three that oshi, she used revolving split earth palm, and moved a rock above her as a makeshift umbrella to stop her getting hit by the water and needles. She and threw big rocks at the source of noise when she thought they had stopped, and gasped. there were more needles that she thought! She turned and ran to the trees, but two clusters of three needles hit her left leg, and right arm.
Hidden behind trees, about 50 metres away from the three opponents, she pulled out the needles, and applied some herbs to clot the wounds. She also took a soldier pill to help her stamina. Her last one.
She grimaced as she listened to the loud rocks and water hitting things.

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Name: Redirection
Rank: C
Type: ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:The user redirects a Lightning or water jutsu using a hefty burst of wind and maneouvering it to pull and push the jutsu away from the receiver and somewhere else, maybe even back at the user of the jutsu. It can also be used to delay and soften a wind attack, to make it easier to dodge or to weaken the blow. It can only redirect C rank moves and below. C rank moves cannot be redirected back at enemy, just to the side of behind them, all lower ranks are easily directed.

Air Cannon
C rank
Nijutsu
Wind
Suki uses both her fans to cause two shere-like forms of wind at the opponent, upon hit, they throw the opponent back, the crushing blow can cause extra damage when the receiver falls

Revolving split earth palm
C rank
Earth
Ninjutsu
Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it

Shunsuu continued to pursue Suki with his other clone who began another set of handseals. He heard the noise of earth scrunching up. That probably meant the clone he left behind was destroyed but it didn't matter. He concentrated on chasing Suki and as he heard her begin to run towards the trees. He chuckled and activated the explosive notes that were on the senbon. Even if she wasn't knocked out or seriously wounded from the explosive notes, she would be stunned.

Body flickering towards the explosion site, the clone finished its handseal. Even if Suki was unhurt, she would be stunned by the explosion and the next attack would probably come as a surprise. "Suiro No Jutsu," whispered the clone. Meanwhile the real Shunsuu stopped pursuing and threw the senbon with slicing wires around the trees and the area so that anybody trying to help from outside, would run into the wires and be sliced.

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Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.


Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. Clones can be used in place of the actual person, provided that the clone is the one that performed the technique. This jutsu can't be performed without a sufficiently large body of water to supply the water for it. Neji Hyuga has been able to use his ability to release chakra from all of his pressure points to disrupt the flow of chakra inside the prison and break free. Despite the fact that the prison is made up entirely out of water, and the target is unable to move while within it, the target is still able to speak. However, the one imprisoned still has to maintain the ability to breathe.

Oshi turned into a cat and found suki with his better senses pretty quickly. The thing was, she was almost unconscious, surrounded by enemies and trapped in a big bubble. That sucked.
He quietly stalked to the explosion site, shifting into spectral form, and turning invisible. Only Suki would see him, unless this boy was of the yameni clan, or a dog. He was neither, so he floated through the wires, and looked at suki. She was pretending not to notice him, and her mood swing was coming on. She looked into his eyes for a second, and Kazuku knew what to do. He walked behind the tree, and turned back into Suki. He then used Mud flow river. It would head for the clone, and he would slip, breaking the prison. He remained silent, and turned back into spectral form as he inspected what had happened.

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Mud flow river
No rank
Earth
Ninjutsu
Doton • Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.

As the clone slipped, it kept its right arm inside the water prison even as it fell while the real Shunsuu dropped 20 of his senbons tip first onto the floor as he placed his foot to keep the clone from sliding too far away from the water prison. Now he had no senbons left but to resolve the business, he'd force Suki to forfeit or pay the consequences. Forming the correct handseals, he guided his chakra through the senbons as they dug underground, directly beneath the water prison. If the water prison was going to be released, then Shunsuu would not hold back and allow the senbon to thrust up, pinning Suki's feet onto the floor before letting the 15 other senbons pierce her.

"Surrender now, or I will skewer you with my senbons. I do not like to resort to injuring people to win a fight but if your too stubborn to realise your loss, then I will make it so that you cannot stand up. Don't worry, I'll avoid your vitals if I can but I'll give you five seconds to make a decision," said Shunsuu, "There's no way to stop this attack, even if you attacked me right now, I can just guide the chakra through these senbon. However, if something did happen to me, I might not be concentrating enough to guide the senbons to pierce non-vital parts, do you understand? It would just be a big accident."


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Jutsu Name: Gyorai Senbon - Torpedo Senbon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will throw or disperse senbon into the air and then plant them tip first into the earth. Using his chakra the senbon will travel into the ground. Then at his discretion, he can fire the nails from the ground through the feet of his target to nail them in place. He can then fire the remaining nails from the ground to cut his target to pieces. The variant Ninpou • Gyorai Shin was a Ninjutsu technique used by the thief Gosunkugi in the anime.

OOC: Okay I've edited, so you can edit the next post as a reply. Also, originally when I wrote she was unconscious, I forgot to go back and type 'almost', anyway, here is the post.
Congratulations!!! You beat me!!
Although, it was no surprise

IC:

She just spat at him when the prison burst. She looked at him for a while. As soon as she got to four, she looked up. "Ok, you want me to give up?" she asked. "Well, truthfully, Id rather die than give up, so..." she paused to 'think'
"No" The words rung out in her head, and she knew exactly at that moment what to do, he'd never expect it. She didn't like losing, and her metal disorders were probably messing with her mind, but she had to do it.
She struggled and jerked, and formed handseals, to waste chakra, and energy.
But it was no use, she wouldn't die, he'd somehow made sure of it. She gave him one last look, and showed him a rude gesture with her burned hands before she fell unconscious.

OOC:

Urm before you can form a single handseal or get a clump of leaves, you'd already be struck full of senbons. A single suspicious action and your pinned - you wouldn't have time to escape from it or use a jutsu. As soon as the water prison breaks, the senbons fly into your body, you simply don't have time to use any jutsu whatsoever. Also, you can't just type my water prison breaks - it didn't break because the clone kept his arm inside the water prison even when he slipped.

Plus, your summon was unapproved due to its spectre mode. I could also point out the fact your character was also originally knocked unconscious by the explosive notes, and if that really happened - then at that point it would've been a victory and my character would've just walked off. Funnily enough, although your character was knocked unconscious, she doesn't seem to have any external injuries, which would surely be quite serious if the explosion temporarily knocked her out.

I think this battle is over, so here:


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