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PostSubject: Hitogoroshi   Hitogoroshi EmptySun Apr 19, 2009 4:12 pm

Name: Hitogoroshi Misendo Shikai

Age: past life: 8
years after risen from dead: 5 years

he's 13

Gender: male

Village: he was born in the rain village, ressurected from the snow village and deported to the sand village.

Rank: genin

Physical Appearance: Hitogoroshi Shito_kun_by_chibimisao
he has straight black hair along with pale skin. his eyes are a grey color and has no pupils whatsoever. he wears mostly black and carries around a cold coffin that fits his stature. the black clothes hide the stitches along his body in which he had wrapped black cloth around for some reason.

Personality: he usually acts nuetral to any circumstance and is polite to the extreme. during fights he talks to the person as if they were having a cup of tea. (ex: * hito grabs the mans sword and twists it out if his hand, holding it up to the mans neck* "how are you this nice day? anything new?" man: '.......')
he only show emotion when he think he should. when someone cries he tries to look confused, but sometimes he accidentally makes it look like a smirk.

Element: lighting

Weapon of Choice: Name: sonkun (ones companion)

Appearance:
Hitogoroshi Soulseythe_cu
Special Abilities: it can fold its large blade and become a staff, it could also expell sharp blades at both ends making it a double shafted spear, and it can hold and use chemicals inside the spine of the staff and expell the through the blades.

Origin: he picked it from four things. a bow and arrow, claw gloves, a spike jacket with spike swords, and of course the scythe. he chose it because it was easier to have and disquised itself well. he also like it because it was given to him from the first shikai before he was deployed to the sand and he like s chemicals and to blow Poo, crap up with small things.

Fighting Type: weaponry, taijutsu.

Background:
academy: after a few months of mourning his parents and waking up from the shock of his own death. he started to talk again, not much, but enough to ask if he could learn about his old body so he was able to walk around. throughout those months, he wasnt able to walk. he had to just lay in a sanitary room going through the rotting processes until his own blood ran dry. after that, he spent two years learning on how to control his own body and feelings so they stay contained. everything he learned was all about the will to learn and move. if he lost that, he would have to learn all over again. another year later and he was deployed from his home in the snow and to the hot, sand desserts of suna. he was allowed to pick a coffin, clothes, and some other stuff he would need for the journey.
genin: after a horrible year of academy where he had to relearn how to read and write, he began exploring his abilities. but mostly in his phisical abilities. does this hurt, does that smell and how hard can i hit until i break a bone kinda stuff. and yet, he is still learning.

Rp Sample: hito sat in the shade of a choked palm tree in the sunakagure watering hole as people walked by. it was a sunny day, a friday. the academy students, including him were out enjoying their freedom at being young. hito wonderd if those kids had a past life, or if he was the only one that remembers. he took out a book and began to read. though, after a few minutes, he felt someone standing in front of him. as he looked up, he saw shira. the schools taijutsu wonder. she glared down at his small figure. " why dont you do tai? afraid to break a bone?" she demanded.
hito continued to look up. he gave a quick smile and returned to his somber face. " yes, though im glad your more brave than me to break several bones. no wonder your at the top of the tai class. how are you fairing?" he flatterd her. which suprised her none the least. but before she could retort if what she thought his 'smart allecky' attitude he was already running torwards another dark corner to do his homework in.


Clan Name: shikai

Kekei Genkai: pale skin, dark lips and nails along with the habit of being close to the dead. ( an attration to sutures, sythes, coffins, cemetaries, ect)

Clan History: there was this man named methuselah who owned a morturary in the land of tea. he was a lonely man and only talked to the bodies he burned or embalmed. soon, there was an epidemic and there was no time for embalming. so he snatched one of the dead children and began to study nercomancing. (not necrophilia, to those who have an avid mind) on the third try on the child, he came to life. though not fully. he had only trapped an artificial soul inside a dead body; it soon grew a personality but it stayed a dead body, only walking or running by the whim of the artificial soul and called it . it never knew pain, it never knew love. it was a sad child. after the old man died, the child grew and became a mortuist also, and took up the family buisness by being a necro, and thus made the first perfect shikai. Hitogoroshi Misendo Shikai. which meant 'murderer of the soul reaper and of the undead'.
hito felt love, hurt. he could smell, touch and taste. though it was all of memory of his past life which haunted him. he could not feel phisical pain though, so Shikai sent him off to be a ninja in the leaf. and thus starts the begining of this chapter.


Jutsu:

name: lighting blade
rank:c
element:lighting
type: weaponry
description: his scythe is charged with electricity he attacks by slashing at the foe, or shocking the oponent within a few meters.

name: lighting continuation
rank:c
element:lighting
type:weaponry
description: when his scythe is turned into a staff, his staff, and his body is charged with electricity, attacking faster in a blurred fashion.

name: obiturary renewal
rank: c
element:n/a
type:tai
description: after pouring liquid nitrogen on his hands, he starts to attack using tai. since a cadaver soaked in liquid nitrogen thrown at a high velocity, it will simply bounce back. thus, when hito hits, his hands bounce back faster than they came. giving him only to push.

name: trick coffin
rank: c
element:na
type:weaponry
description: hito hides in his coffin and opens several slotsat the same time, throwing out several kunai, senbon and explosive tags to light up the sky.

name: black rose
rank: c
element:lighting
type: weaponry
description: hito takes his scythe and spins it into a blur above his head, as he is doing that, liquid nitrogen is spurting out of the blade, while it is going everywhere, he has charged the scythe with his chakra, making the liquid nitrogen freeze on contact and electricute you. since he is spining it so fast, his body is the stem and the sythe is the rose.

name: lovers ash
rank:c
element: n/a
type: weaponry
description: hito grabs his scythe, while the chemical leaks coming from the blade is full of gunpowder, he fights with it, and well into the fight, he scrapes his sythe against his coffin to strike a spark and set the entire battle area on fire.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.


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PostSubject: Re: Hitogoroshi   Hitogoroshi EmptySun Apr 19, 2009 8:57 pm

Genin cant have techniques over C Rank so remove or edit the B Rank Jutsu accordingly. You age seems odd. It should be more inline with a genins i.e. around 13. You must aldo add the basic academy ninjutsu which can be found on the character creation guide. Please be aware the going with wep and tai as a mains you wont be allowed more then the basic ninjutsu so you might want to go weaponary and ninjutsu instead
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PostSubject: Re: Hitogoroshi   Hitogoroshi EmptyMon Apr 20, 2009 7:42 am

hopefully, is this better?
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PostSubject: Re: Hitogoroshi   Hitogoroshi EmptyMon Apr 20, 2009 8:57 am

See shikai history? That and the clan areas seem to be incomplete?
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PostSubject: Re: Hitogoroshi   Hitogoroshi EmptyMon Apr 20, 2009 9:38 am

because there are only 2 shikais right now

one is in snow counry making shikais, and the other-me- is in suna
im sorry if im not descriptive. my apologies.
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PostSubject: Re: Hitogoroshi   Hitogoroshi EmptyMon Apr 20, 2009 3:52 pm

Sorry can't be approved with out the clan information filled out accordingly
or no clan at all =[
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PostSubject: Re: Hitogoroshi   Hitogoroshi EmptyMon Apr 20, 2009 3:54 pm

vua'la

---It's Voila! Damnit. Don't use a french term if u don't know how to spell it.
~ <3 Robin (A french speaking person)
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PostSubject: Re: Hitogoroshi   Hitogoroshi EmptyMon Apr 20, 2009 3:56 pm

you need to add arcs
Academy and Genin

Quote :
name: black rose
rank: c
element:lighting
type: weaponry-gen
description: hito takes his scythe and spins it into a blur above his head, as he is doing that, liquid nitrogen is spurting out of the blade, while it is going everywhere, he has charged the scythe with his chakra, making the liquid nitrogen freeze on contact and electricute you. since he is spining it so fast, his body is the stem and the sythe is the rose.

Remove the genjutsu part
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PostSubject: Re: Hitogoroshi   Hitogoroshi EmptyMon Apr 20, 2009 4:13 pm

better?
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PostSubject: Re: Hitogoroshi   Hitogoroshi EmptyTue Apr 21, 2009 4:34 am

approved
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