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Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: New jutsus: Wed Jul 01, 2009 5:38 am | |
| Name: Itami Isou (pain transfer) Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: none Description: The user will form a bubble in his hands which will start to grow, until it becomes the size of a basketball ball, then Rukasu will introduce it in himself and all the pain and exhaustion that he has will be into that bubble...After it the Rukasu can send it to the enemy and if it hits the opponent will get the exhaustion and pain of Rukasu..Although rukasu can simply seal it in a scroll or any object he founds...Due to be forbidden it can only be done 1 per topic although it costs like an A-rank jutsu. Link: (taken from a topic) - Spoiler:
After talking with his summon and trained with him Rukasu thought that San might had to go home, and since Rukasu wanted to try his new techniques that he made up, it was a way nicely to send him back home...While he opened another lolly pop and put it in his mouth he started to make the arrangements, like memorizing the seals, and the handsigns he had to perform to do those jutsus, then he asked for an anbu to get a certain criminal that was on hospital which would be very hurt so he could start with his first technique...The Itami Isou.
The doctors from the hospital came too since they were not in favour of this situation since it was a mere experience technique and if Rukasu made something wrong it could kill the guy, although he asked for space and started to execute his technique, Concentrating some chakra a bubble of chakra started to form slowly, and time by time it started to grow, making it by the size of a basketball ball, and then focusing in the man, Rukasu introduced the ball inside the man which after rukasu took it, he felt no harm neither pain in his chest, since it was already inside the ball, although the ball exploded and the men got it again, and diedi...Fortunately it was a mere criminal that after it was going to be executed so no one minded at the end, although if it once occurred in Rukasu's position he could die depending on his pain, and endurance...
The doctors returned to the hospital, and 2 anbus went cremate the body while other 2 went to get another one to be in the trial, which was a bit dark and terrified although if Rukasu learnt it it would be used for good...He knew that was a bit wrong to do that although he wanted to help the others and so he made that as equals as other do other time...When the other criminal arrived he was already in painkillers although the pain continued so Rukasu made the same thing again, although now he was more careful. He put the bubble inside the man's chest and then slowly took it off, adding more chakra, which unable to it to explode again, and so Rukasu successfully took it off and sealed it in a scroll...After doing it many times he now already knew how to do it although he wanted to try to throw that bubble to another person so that she/he would get with the damage and pain of Rukasu if he had taken from himself, which could happen during a fight, although after doing many times he started to lose control of his hand which was shaking alot, so he decided to only use once per a fight/ situation.
After taking again the pain from the same criminal Rukasu tried to aim and throw it to another criminal which was there only to get the damage of it, and see if it worked...Which did since when the bubble trespassed him, the criminal got in his knees and started to have huge pain in his chest, the same one as the other one had...One jutsu was successfully achieved, now there was only 1 left... Name: Kaihou Fuuin (Seal release) Rank: S Type: Fuuinjutsu Element: none Description: Rukasu will start to draw a circle around the object which has the seal he wants to remove, then he continues to draw the seals which will take some time so it isnt used on combat...After that time (depends on the rank of the seal and in the condition and rank of user which in this case is Rukasu) rukasu will make some seals and put his palm on it with some blood on it, like the kuchyose no jutsu...After it the letters will start to move and the seal will start to break, although it takes time until it encrypts all seals and letters that are there, so even if its a original seal that it is, it doesnt matter...If its a seal that Rukasu already knows it will take less time than the new ones...If its a new one some time it will take and this technique each time its used on a new one, it will start to learn it slowly and it might take some time, although it starts to encrypt every seal letter, piece by piece, until it finds a way to unseal that fuuinjutsu technique that Rukasu is using on. One of the downfalls of this technique is that this technique is unable to unseal a fuuinjutsu technique that is of a kekkai genkai neither if its an S-rank one... Link: (taken from a topic) - Spoiler:
There was only one more technique that Rukasu wanted to learn today, and he had been all week studying seals, and the art of mastering the fuuinjutsu so he could remember some things about that skill he had. His technique was invented to be evolved each time it appeared a new barrier, meaning that it would learn each time a new seal appeared made by an enemy or a friend…This technique would release any seal put onto an object or a person, and it would analyze the type of the seal and then take it using the arts of Fuuinjutsu. It was a complex technique which needed practice and hard effort on it, so Rukasu started training after he learned the previous one named Itami Isou, which was that technique that took the pain from a person and could be able to introduce in a scroll, or throwing at the enemy, which would take afterwards that pain…
As soon as Rukasu was ready he started to draw some seals he knew on the ground separately so it would become a mess…Then he started to practice with them, although before he started he needed a bit of the taste of his lolly pop that was already finished and he needed a new one since it was his addiction which gave pleasure all the time, that’s why he was always with it on his mouth…After he tasted it, he got back to work using his scrolls and his technique he started to practice and study some that were on the ground that he asked for some anbus to put there some too, so he wouldn’t recognize some, and he might afterwards learn it but for now he was just going to practice that technique named Kaihou Fuuin…
He started to make hand signs and put his hand on the ground as he said “Kaihou Fuuin” although the technique was released but when it got there it wouldn’t released making a problem to Rukasu, because without that effect the technique sucked…So he looked again to the book he was writing with his observations and wasn’t understanding what was wrong there, although one anbu said that maybe Rukasu should use the two palms instead only one, at least until he didn’t managed to do it with one hand only.
So he tried with the two hands and noticed it was better since he used chakra with the two and so the technique prevailed, without getting corrupted by that bad effect…After that he started to use it one different seals which caused the technique to learn many different forms of seals and that was great since if Rukasu got attacked with a seal or saw a seal in his surroundings that could even prejudice him he would use this technique to take it off, and that would be good even for a person with a curse seal, although this skill would be only for Rukasu at least for not getting on the wrong hands…
After a while he started to get tired and that was normal since that technique was a S-rank forbidden jutsu which he invented up by seeing many seals which could affect anyone of the village, and if he didn’t that technique correctly it would prejudice many lifes of his village and many others. He went eat something so he could be fully restored and go back to the trainng and start doing that technique with only one hand although now was time to eat, he had his stomach empty and he doesn’t like to be hungry and hear it making some strange noises…
As he finished eating Rukasu returned to the training circle which new seals had been put on the floor by some of the anbu which were there to help him during his training since they had nothing to do temporarily… When he got there he started to concentrate with one hand chakra on it, and started to slowly put it on the seals although he needed more chakra on it since he had to reproduce the same amount of chakra that he had when he put the two hands on it so or even more amount although that way he would waste chakra for nothing but there were some seals which needed that and others less stronger didn’t needed, and the ones which Rukasu already known each time he used that technique on them it would cost even less chakra although he couldn’t use that technique many times due to his rank, and damage that it cost on the person who used it many times. As he started to put his hand to the ground he noticed that the seals were started to get removed and floating though the air as they vanished into that technique, like little black letters that were flying in the air and then puff, they disappeared.
Rukasu continued training all day and he finally successfully achieved and took control of that technique although he had to be careful about using that technique too much…
Last edited by Rukasu on Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:07 am; edited 7 times in total | |
| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Wed Jul 01, 2009 6:29 am | |
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| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Wed Jul 01, 2009 6:31 am | |
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| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Thu Jul 02, 2009 8:03 pm | |
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| | | Gabriale Kyru Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:50 am | |
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| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:53 am | |
| Ruka. Fuuinjutsu have specific unsealing methods, many times only the one who created it can remove it, and such is stated so in the jutsu description, many times. please add something about not being able to unseal these types of fuuin.
The second one is alright. | |
| | | Gabriale Kyru Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:55 am | |
| I didnt bother checking them since they were all ready approved by L. | |
| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sat Jul 04, 2009 5:42 am | |
| - Pat wrote:
- Ruka. Fuuinjutsu have specific unsealing methods, many times only the one who created it can remove it, and such is stated so in the jutsu description, many times. please add something about not being able to unseal these types of fuuin.
The second one is alright. The first one is about the pain release what im i suppose to edit?? | |
| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:21 am | |
| Darnit. I mixed them up XD The first one is alright, the second one is the one I had problems with. | |
| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sat Jul 04, 2009 5:55 pm | |
| - Pat wrote:
- Ruka. Fuuinjutsu have specific unsealing methods, many times only the one who created it can remove it, and such is stated so in the jutsu description, many times. please add something about not being able to unseal these types of fuuin.
Thats why this one is different from one that already exists in -Naruto World...That's why i made this one since i am a fuuinjutsu master, it can learn through time although i cant release a seal that i havent seen, but that technique will take some time to learn it how to take it off...I dont see whats the problem.. | |
| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 05, 2009 12:14 am | |
| So in order to release a technique, you have to learn it first? | |
| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 05, 2009 12:59 am | |
| Yeah, the technique will take sometime to learn new ones...(maybe some hours or some days, depending on the rank of the seal) | |
| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 05, 2009 1:49 am | |
| I still don't like this. Basically, you can't unseal some fuuinjutsu techniques, period. not to mention, most have very specific unsealing methods. It's Op for your character to have some kind of "cure all" for fuuinjutsu. | |
| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 05, 2009 2:24 am | |
| Why is that??
My technique is like the process of finding a cure to every decease...You first research about that new decease and then you will make a cure that can attack it, and my technique is the same way, it will research about the respective seal and then unseal it, so it will be useless...
Its like using a device to hack the alarm of someone's house, so it wont go off when you rob his house...
Of course this takes time and i cant do it during a combat since i dont have time... | |
| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 05, 2009 2:56 am | |
| Regardless. Theres no actual downfall. not being able to use it in combat isn't really one, because after you see it in combat, you can just disarm it in the future.
My main problem with this is that you would have to learn a fuuinjutsu technique to be able to stop it, but just seeing a fuuinjutsu once wouldn't give you all the experience neccesary to learn it.
And besides! I'm reading the description now! it says nothing about learning it!, it just says decryption and such. that's BS. Fuuinjutsu isn't the same as genjutsu, you can't just release it. quite a few seals have a specific method of removal that must be upheld, and many more can only be removed by the one who put it in place.
State this in your app or this is denied. | |
| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 05, 2009 3:29 am | |
| Edited...
Btw i forgot to state in the jutsu by mistake but in the training i put that there...and i thought it was on the description of the jutsus | |
| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 05, 2009 4:21 am | |
| - Quote :
- Fuuinjutsu isn't the same as genjutsu, you can't just release it. quite a few seals have a specific method of removal that must be upheld, and many more can only be removed by the one who put it in place.
State this in your app or this is denied. | |
| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 05, 2009 4:55 am | |
| Thats what this technique as in particular different from the others that already exist and can release some fuuinjutsu seals...
This one is able to find that specific method of removal that the original user put it...
Do you want me to put this on?! | |
| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 05, 2009 5:04 am | |
| Ruka, it's still unfair, and OP. but at the very least put an inability to release seals that require a specific user's chakra and seal's that are of a kekkei genkai. | |
| | | Todd Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 05, 2009 5:45 am | |
| Hmm i am no expert on Fuuinjutsu so im not sure if my opinion will stand up much here. But i do agree with with pat on this one. You can't have a technique that can release any fuuinjutsu as they are all different. Fuuinjutsu is a difficult thing to control and put regulations on. Your specialty is fuuinjutsu so i have no problem there. Pat has suggested this: - Quote :
- but at the very least put an inability to release seals that require a specific user's chakra and seal's that are of a kekkei genkai.
I agree with that idea. Or i suggest making it only able to release up to a specific rank perhaps up to A. You shouldn't be able to have the power to release any S-rank seal with just one technique for all of them. This is just my opinion i suggest getting someone who knows about fuuinjutsu and has amde a character with that i.e either John or Jace ^^ | |
| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:07 am | |
| Ok edited, although i didnt put as downfall that point of specific user's chakra, because then everyone will say that their technique to be release needs that and this is simple a useless technique... | |
| | | Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Mon Jul 06, 2009 5:09 pm | |
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| | | Nagori Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: New jutsus: Sun Jul 12, 2009 4:05 am | |
| Name: Itami Isou (pain transfer) Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: none Description: The user will form a bubble in his hands which will start to grow, until it becomes the size of a basketball ball, then Rukasu will introduce it in himself and all the pain and exhaustion that he has will be into that bubble...After it the Rukasu can send it to the enemy and if it hits the opponent will get the exhaustion and pain of Rukasu..Although rukasu can simply seal it in a scroll or any object he founds...Due to be forbidden it can only be done 1 per topic although it costs like an A-rank jutsu.
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