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| Ikatsu Yari (PENDING!) POST!!! | |
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Ichi-Kun C ranked Missing-Ninja
| Subject: Ikatsu Yari (PENDING!) POST!!! Tue Aug 04, 2009 8:54 am | |
| General Information:Name: Ikatsu Yari Nickname/Alias:N.A Age: 11 Gender: Male Looks: He wears a red coat all the time.Under that he wears a black long sleeve shirt with a V-Neck.Though when hes at home he just stays in his pajamas.He wears black pants and has chains running down them.He has a similar look to his brother Initake.He has white hair and blue eyes but when he uses necromancy they turn completely black.It is a special trait that only he can do. He has a very muscular body for his age.He wears a V Neck most of the time to show it off.Even though hes quite he always likes to be a bit of a show off for the ladies. Personality: Kat likes to lay low alot of the time.He doesnt like it when his brother Initake is in one of his "moods" because it quite frankly pisses Kat off.He usually stays quite when he has to but he always communicates when in battle.He loves being alone on roof tops.It clears his head when he has to do something big.But he also likes to talk to the dead.He likes to hear how people lived their lives , it relaxes him very much. Personality Trait's: Dead People Catch Phrase: I know when your gonna die Clan InformationClan Name: Yari Kekkei Genkai:The Yari clan is a bunch of necromancers, or ones who control the dead. At the peak height of any shinobi, an Army of the Dead can be arisen as the clans ultimate ability, but for the ones who are not of the highest resolve, they have smaller, weaker necromancy abilities, but still good nonetheless. Clan Symbol: It is a dark green mammoth, to represent power and the size of the clan, for it is over 50. Clan History: The clan really has no history, considering it was only made around 5 -10 years ago. Ini's father created the clan, and was no small feat for the people of Suna. Hi father was born and raised in Suna, and around 20 years ago, was one of the village best jounin. He then created a clan, and got their family, and others to recruit, althoguh most required a blood transfusion to use their KKG. Rank Information:Rank: Academy Student (-_-") Village:Suna Skill Information:Skill Specialty: Kenjutsu Main:Kenjutsu Sub:N.A Elemental Affinity: Main: Katon Sub: N.A Special Characteristics: The user, if next to any dead bodies, which is not normal, can rise a ghoul, or zombie, if you will. The ghoul has virtually no chakra or constitution. But, the ghouls do have a couple special abilites, although they are only E and one D Rank per ghoul. Items/Weapons:Name: Appearence: Rank: Special Abilities: Origin: Background Information: Birth Arc- He was born as any other baby would have been born.He was born in the back of his dads wagon.They didnt have enough time to get to the hospital so they had to give pregnancy in the middle of Suna in a wagon.At first they didnt know what to call him but they decided to call him Ikatsu in the end.Ikatsu meant Grim in english and they thought it would be perfect for him.And so with that Ikatsu was put into the world with the abilities of a necromancer. Child Arc- Ikatsu was running as fast as he could down the dark alley.He cut through into a street.He stopped to think.His chasers were probably right behind him.He saw a graveyard close by.He ran into it a hid behind a gravestone.He could hear the hollers sounding closer and closer."Get out of this town necromancer!You aint belong hea!"said the 3 shinobis as they approached and entered the graveyard."There he is!".Kat was screwed he began to run again but the shinobi were to fast and they knocked him to the ground.One of them took out his sword as another one grabbed Ikatsu and held him off the ground.The one with the sword held it to Kats throat as the third one began to speak."Well necromancer...have any last words?when you steal from good strong shinobi like us...the penalty is....DEATH"said the shinobi."Wtf are you talking about?!I simply walked by your house!You cant kill me for that!"said Kat effortlessly."Well see about that..."said the shinobi with disgust as he turned to the shinobi with the sword and nodded.Kat closed his eyes and flinched he was sure he was dead now.But he waited and nothing happened but he refused to open his eyes but several moments later nothing happened."My job is done here....dont worry Ikatsu...your time has not come yet."said a hoarse voice.Kat opened his eyes and surprisngly he was on the ground surrounded by three dead shinobi lying on the floor.But what really shocked him is that there was a ghost standing in front of him.But the ghost dissapeared as soon as Kat took a glimpse.Kat ran home as fast as he could and confronted his father and told him about what had happened.Then his father nodded his head once Kat was done with his story and said "It is time for you now...".Kat and his dad trained his necromancy powers for months.And finally Kat was at the same level as his brother.Now he is in the academy. Academy Arc- (Will be filled out once Kat has become a Genin) RP Sample:Look at death at admin building in Suna
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| | | Ichi-Kun C ranked Missing-Ninja
| Subject: Re: Ikatsu Yari (PENDING!) POST!!! Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:53 am | |
| Jutsus: Academy Jutsus- Spoiler:
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique Rank: D Element: N/A Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Katon Jutsus- Spoiler:
Name: Hinotama - Fireball Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fire Description: Basic Fireballl technique, the user, after a couple handsigns shoots a fireball out of their hands and is thrown at the enemy. Is one half inch in diameter.
Name: Kaji Ken Saraundo - Fire Blade Surround Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fire Description: A total of 5 swords enchanted with fire fall from the sky, claculating the position of your target, and then surrounds them, on all sides except for above and below. This can be reversed, manipulated and used in many diffrent ways by both sides, and it all requires just slight common sense, thats whay it is only D Rank. Clan Jutsus- Spoiler:
Name: Gaki - Ghoul Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: The user, if near any sort of corpse, or near any near dead people, is able to arise a ghoul from the ground. They are then controlled by their necromancer, or can use their own small minds to use their own abilities, though they are weak. The ghoul can only use taijutsu, and iff using this technique, onew can only be summoned at a time.
Name: Majikku Misairu - Magic Missile ( idk if this is considered canon, but it is from Duengeons and Dragons) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: The user has a misslie shoot out of hi hand, and is a missle of 4 inches in diameter. If the misslie does nothit and animate object, it lets out noxious fumes, and poisons and burns most around him. It spreads at only around 5 - 15 MPH, so it is easy to get away. If it does hit a human body or an animate body, and the body is weak enough to be killed by a sall amount of damage, the fumes still spread but only half as fast, and nearly 1.5X as far. Bt, if the body is too weak to take a hit, than the body dies, and is then ressurected by the necromancer and the body comes back as the same figure it once was and it now a ghoul under the necromancers, or it's own control, and obtains the same powers of a regular ghoul.
Name: Gensui - Decay Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: The user spurts an invisibly gas, bu easy to smell, horrible smelling gas, at the enemy, and tries to decay the enemy with said gas. If it hits the enemy, which is kind of hard to do, since it travles slowly, and has a small area of effect, but if it doe, then the enemy is decayed, beginning with the skin, as the first layer peels off, it hurts only a little, but as it gets down towards the veins, blood, and nerves it stings like hell, and it takes time. It taes arond 3 mins (about 20-30 posts) to completely rot. And there is only one way to stop it from doing so, either rubbing yourself down with alcohol, or smelling or rubbing yourself with a Sakura, and some herbs to the trick as well.
Name: Nikuya - Butcher Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: While the enemy is even slightly hurt, the user can generate 10 death energy, and regenerate 1 over every 3 seconds. And if you or your ghoul hits the enemy in melee, it generates 10 Death Energy, and if hit non melee, it generates 5 Death energy, and regenerates 1 over avery 3 seconds. (btw E and D Rank shinobi begin with 75 DE C Rank begin with 100, B with 145, and A or S rank have 200.) (can only be used if in presence.)
Name: Kaori (of the) Nai - Scent of the Dead Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: When you either dodge, or take direct damage from a target, then you use this jutsus effect, generating 5 Death Energy, and this jutsu can only take effect every 10 seconds (about two posts). (can only be used if in presence.)
Name: Oujou Seishou Taitoku - Death Energy Mastery Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: Increases your maximum Death Energy by 25. ( so now my character would have 125.) (can only be used if in presence)
Name: Kuroi Seishou - Black Energy Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: Increases all necromancy jutsu, and ghouls jutsu to do more damage, and raise any effect any jutsu may have. (can only be used if in presence) Requires 10 death energy.
Name: Oujou Tsume - Death's Talon Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: You take heat from your targets bpody, and then they cannot attack for a fulll 10 seconds (about two posts) and while this is in effect, you can attack twice as many times as you nomrlla y could for 10 seconds (2 posts). Takes 5 death energy to use. ( can only be used in presence)
Name: Oujou Fukyuu - Death Rot Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: If was hit by a melee attack froma ghoul, the terget becomes diseased, losing chakra slowly by the seconds, and then any of the next attacks, of ninjutsu only, made by the user does 1/5 more damage than normal. Takes 10 Death Energy. (can only be used if in presence.)
Name: Yuuri Rinjoukan - Literal meaning "better presnce" but actually means Improved Presence Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: The user, while in the presence, takes less effect of a jutsu that dealt damage to him, and also it takes more to kll him thanks to this jutsu, because the user also regains 5% more health than normal, so it takes more jutsu and effort to kill him. Takes 7 Death Energy. ( can only be used if in presence)
Name: Junka - Acclimate Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: The user, if hit by a jutsu of an element, builds up resistance to that element, taking less damage of that element. This jutsu lasts 10 seconds, and every attack taken by that element during this jutsu's active time, takes less effect of the jutsu. Can only be used three times in one spar. Takes 10 Death Energy. (must be in presence to use)
Name: Oujou Dageki - Death Strike Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: The user instantly attacks the target three times, no hand signr incantation needed, and does only 60% damage every time, so it has less damage effect, though while this is in effect, cannot be blocked, parried, or dodged. Regenerates 3 death energy per strike. Takes 5 Death Energy. (must be in presence)
Name: Gensui Bakuha - Decaying Blast Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: The user performs a highly regarded C Ranked technique, hitting all enemies with 10 yards, dealing Damage Over Time, making the targets chakra deplete slowly over 20 seconds, (around 4 posts, 2 of their posts), can be used only 5 times in one spar. Takes 10 Death Energy. (must be in presence to use this.)
Name: Fukenzen - Morbid Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: Increases the effect of Decay by 20%. Since decay has a 10 foot effect, it makes it a 12 foot effect, and since the gas travels at 1-15 MPH, it now is 12-17 MPH. Also, makes the decay's gas unable to be dodged for 3 seconds, because this jutsu also slows down the enemy, by throwing some of the death energy "chakra" at the enemy. Takes 5 Death Energy. (requires presence for this).
Name: Oujou Shusseki - Death Presence Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG Element: N/A Description: One of the two KKG jutsus that use chakra. Converts the user from a regular shinobi, to being half undead, and therefore, having the many abilities of the undead, except more elite. The user now uses no chakra, and has stronger thoughts than the regular shinobi, and moves faster, deals more melle damage, and is able to use many other things. While in this presence, the user is limited to only the KKg abilities.
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| | | Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: Ikatsu Yari (PENDING!) POST!!! Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:53 am | |
| Your second fire jutsu still sounds a bit over D rank, at least C. Fire swords from the sky???
You need a hell of a bigger description of your kkg, including technical information of amounts, and powers of risen undead, per rank.
You need at least 2 paragraphs of clan history.
lets see here, I know that your putting them as C so you can have them as a genin, but all of those Clan jutsu would be at LEAST B rank, some of them A. As for the first clan jutsu, you're raising a freaking ghoul from the ground, that's C rank, at least.
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