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Ichi-Kun
C ranked Missing-Ninja
C ranked Missing-Ninja
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PostSubject: Ikatsu Yari (PENDING!) POST!!!   Ikatsu Yari (PENDING!)  POST!!! EmptyTue Aug 04, 2009 8:54 am

General Information:
Name: Ikatsu Yari

Nickname/Alias:N.A

Age: 11

Gender: Male

Looks: Ikatsu Yari (PENDING!)  POST!!! Devil-may-cry-4-08b

He wears a red coat all the time.Under that he wears a black long sleeve shirt with a V-Neck.Though when hes at home he just stays in his pajamas.He wears black pants and has chains running down them.He has a similar look to his brother Initake.He has white hair and blue eyes but when he uses necromancy they turn completely black.It is a special trait that only he can do.

He has a very muscular body for his age.He wears a V Neck most of the time to show it off.Even though hes quite he always likes to be a bit of a show off for the ladies.



Personality: Kat likes to lay low alot of the time.He doesnt like it when his brother Initake is in one of his "moods" because it quite frankly pisses Kat off.He usually stays quite when he has to but he always communicates when in battle.He loves being alone on roof tops.It clears his head when he has to do something big.But he also likes to talk to the dead.He likes to hear how people lived their lives , it relaxes him very much.

Personality Trait's: Dead People

Catch Phrase: I know when your gonna die Smile

Clan Information

Clan Name: Yari

Kekkei Genkai:The Yari clan is a bunch of necromancers, or ones who control the dead. At the peak height of any shinobi, an Army of the Dead can be arisen as the clans ultimate ability, but for the ones who are not of the highest resolve, they have smaller, weaker necromancy abilities, but still good nonetheless.


Clan Symbol: It is a dark green mammoth, to represent power and the size of the clan, for it is over 50.


Clan History: The clan really has no history, considering it was only made around 5 -10 years ago. Ini's father created the clan, and was no small feat for the people of Suna. Hi father was born and raised in Suna, and around 20 years ago, was one of the village best jounin. He then created a clan, and got their family, and others to recruit, althoguh most required a blood transfusion to use their KKG.



Rank Information:
Rank: Academy Student (-_-")
Village:Suna

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty: Kenjutsu
Main:Kenjutsu
Sub:N.A

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Katon
Sub: N.A

Special Characteristics: The user, if next to any dead bodies, which is not normal, can rise a ghoul, or zombie, if you will. The ghoul has virtually no chakra or constitution. But, the ghouls do have a couple special abilites, although they are only E and one D Rank per ghoul.


Items/Weapons:
Name:
Appearence:
Rank:
Special Abilities:
Origin:


Background Information:

Birth Arc-
He was born as any other baby would have been born.He was born in the back of his dads wagon.They didnt have enough time to get to the hospital so they had to give pregnancy in the middle of Suna in a wagon.At first they didnt know what to call him but they decided to call him Ikatsu in the end.Ikatsu meant Grim in english and they thought it would be perfect for him.And so with that Ikatsu was put into the world with the abilities of a necromancer.

Child Arc-
Ikatsu was running as fast as he could down the dark alley.He cut through into a street.He stopped to think.His chasers were probably right behind him.He saw a graveyard close by.He ran into it a hid behind a gravestone.He could hear the hollers sounding closer and closer."Get out of this town necromancer!You aint belong hea!"said the 3 shinobis as they approached and entered the graveyard."There he is!".Kat was screwed he began to run again but the shinobi were to fast and they knocked him to the ground.One of them took out his sword as another one grabbed Ikatsu and held him off the ground.The one with the sword held it to Kats throat as the third one began to speak."Well necromancer...have any last words?when you steal from good strong shinobi like us...the penalty is....DEATH"said the shinobi."Wtf are you talking about?!I simply walked by your house!You cant kill me for that!"said Kat effortlessly."Well see about that..."said the shinobi with disgust as he turned to the shinobi with the sword and nodded.Kat closed his eyes and flinched he was sure he was dead now.But he waited and nothing happened but he refused to open his eyes but several moments later nothing happened."My job is done here....dont worry Ikatsu...your time has not come yet."said a hoarse voice.Kat opened his eyes and surprisngly he was on the ground surrounded by three dead shinobi lying on the floor.But what really shocked him is that there was a ghost standing in front of him.But the ghost dissapeared as soon as Kat took a glimpse.Kat ran home as fast as he could and confronted his father and told him about what had happened.Then his father nodded his head once Kat was done with his story and said "It is time for you now...".Kat and his dad trained his necromancy powers for months.And finally Kat was at the same level as his brother.Now he is in the academy.

Academy Arc-
(Will be filled out once Kat has become a Genin)

RP Sample:

Look at death at admin building in Suna


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Ichi-Kun
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PostSubject: Re: Ikatsu Yari (PENDING!) POST!!!   Ikatsu Yari (PENDING!)  POST!!! EmptyWed Aug 05, 2009 4:53 am

Jutsus:

Academy Jutsus

Spoiler:

Katon Jutsus

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Clan Jutsus

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PostSubject: Re: Ikatsu Yari (PENDING!) POST!!!   Ikatsu Yari (PENDING!)  POST!!! EmptyWed Aug 05, 2009 8:53 am

Your second fire jutsu still sounds a bit over D rank, at least C. Fire swords from the sky???

You need a hell of a bigger description of your kkg, including technical information of amounts, and powers of risen undead, per rank.

You need at least 2 paragraphs of clan history.

lets see here, I know that your putting them as C so you can have them as a genin, but all of those Clan jutsu would be at LEAST B rank, some of them A. As for the first clan jutsu, you're raising a freaking ghoul from the ground, that's C rank, at least.

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