Initake Yari Done [need admin opinion]

General Information:
Name: Initake Yari

Nickname/Alias: (S rank shinobi only, Please only give one or 2 nicknames. These names are to be implimented in RP as another name your known by. This is to be part of your 'legacy')

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Looks:

He has white hair, though not as long. His hair, in the front, has bangs down to nearly his eyebrows. And His eyes, they are a deep green, a dark green, like a forest green almost. He has a fairly normal noe, just a little more lengthy. His mouth is normal, though he speaks with a slight lisp. He is skinny for his body stature, not too muscular, not too fat, just in the middle. He stands just around 6 feet, and weighs just around 175. His legs are longer than normal as well. And he has chubby fingers and toes, not that it matters. His head is kinda small, and he has PERFECT skin.

His looks are slightly like his father, and a lot like his mothers. His father has virtually no hair, compared to Ini's good amount. His dad has an extremely long nose, and his dad, for what he remembers was always toned, and that is about the only resemblance there. Some looks like his mom, the others he thinks he looks like his granddad.

Personality: He is not like bipolar, there is just two sides of him that ou see often, and they are nearly polar opposites. One minute he could be could be laid-back and calm. And he is normally like this when he is around a small amount of people, not too large, but when he is around a large crowd of people, he is different.Normally, when he is around a large crowd of people, he is very uptight and obnoxious and sometimes just plain rude. He can yell at you, call you names, and be very random. Remember, he is only like that if he is either pissed off or on a sugar rush.He also has ADD/ADHD, has too constantly be moving around.

He is also not very forgiving, he can hold a grudge for years, which he has, and still hasn't apologized to his friend for what he did. Athough he can hold a grudge, he can also keep secrets very well, he llikes to tallk a lot, but he ca n keep secrets if the person's secret could cost them something.

Personality Trait's: He is normally centered around his training or his, or sometims he finds himself lost in his thoughts about anything, he gets lost in them very easily, keep him entertained.

Catch Phrase: none.

Clan Information

Clan Name: Yari

Kekkei Genkai: The Yari clan is a bunch of necromancers, or ones who control the dead. At the peak height of any shinobi, an Army of the Dead can be arisen as the clans ultimate ability, but for the ones who are not of the highest resolve, they have smaller, weaker necromancy abilities, but still good nonetheless. He has the power only to learn the basics of his kekkei genkai, unlike his father, who was an all poweer jonin. He has a basic ghoul, who has basic taijutsu, and he has basic deat energy control as well.

His father was an all powerful jonin of Suna, and he knew almost every neromancy ability kown to man, and most others he made himself,, he was a very talented necromancer, and luckily, he was Initake's mentor. Too bad he was only around to teach him the basics, because he died at the hand of the Akatsuki two weeks after he had taught him the basics.

He is still learning the basic necromancy things, for some basics are really that powerful, and his uncle is the only one that knows them, and he is in Kiri right now, so Initake kind of has to teach himself some non-basics, so he can make up for the ones he doesn't have.

Necromancy, is vasically the stduy and manipulation of the dead, or maybe just the non-living, they are not dead once being under the powerful mind of one who can raise the dead and use them to their own pleasure. Yes, there are plently faults, and sucsessions of being a necromancer, but, being a genin, he only has a few of each.

Having being a necromancer, he has to choose one of a few Lords, which many necromancer follow a different ones than whom they are related to. Necromancy has many different ways oof worshipping the dead, and having them part of their everyday lives. They have a monogamy choice, they have a Greek or Roman type of godly choice, or they can run their own type of religion, which usually fails. Sucsessions of being a necromancer, is that controlling the dead requires much intelligence, and thise whom are not geniuses, will fail, and maybe die in trying to do so.

Controlling the dead means a few tings for a necromancer. One, that when they are controlling the dea,d that they are part dead themselvs as well, and cannot be effected by elements the way the living are. When they are not controlling the dead, they are always finding ways to look inside the living, and see how they are, what makes them tick, so that they may know how to hurt them inside and out, with their superior abilities. And thridly, most of them, are not very talkative, they keep to themselves, because most of them are afraid theat if they sy the slightest thing, they may release their dark energies and displease their God, and be punishhed for it. Not Initake, he kow how to change the tempo and topic of conversation, which was one of the many things that his father had taught him.

There is mainly only one disadvantage of being a necromancer, is that, when using their abilities among other undead, if they go against a worshipper of another God, then they may lose their necromancy ability.

Clan Symbol: No symbol, well it does, it is just hard to find an image of it. It is a dark green mammoth, to represent power and the size of the clan, for it is over 50.

Clan History: The clan really has no history, considering it was only made around 5 -10 years ago. Ini's father created the clan, and was no small feat for the people of Suna. Hi father was born and raised in Suna, and around 20 years ago, was one of the village best jounin. He then created a clan, and got their family, and others to recruit, althoguh most required a blood transfusion to use their KKG.

His father and his uncles knew what they had to do with these ordinary shinobi's in order to make them officially part of their clan. of ocourse, they had to give them blod transfusions in the first place, not that hard. But the seconds part of the clan acception progress hurt. Very much.

They had to sedate the non-members, and then inject some of their Death Energy in them, nearly killing them, because all member of this clan are part undead, so tthat's what they did to make one a member.

And now, with members of the clan nearing 50, the clan tries to accept fewer, more powerful members, because they have many young men and women and the clan, and they needed a littler older, more experienced shinobi's, that can learn more than the basics. Since the lkeader of the clan was struck down by the Akatsuki, Ini's father, his "uncle" (not really) took over the clan and still holds the same tradition of the clan that is was meant to take, and that it has to take, in order for it to succeed, and not fall apart, or be baned froom the village, for being "evil".

Hs uncle now is the leader and is in Kiri, and Initake has to train with his younger brother, who he thinks has great potential. He looks at him as his punching bag, but he knows he is better than that, but he does not sure howw good, they have swapped a few techniques, and they know how good they are, but they do not know hpow they will fare against anyoe else. Initake's record facing his brother is 5-1.


Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub:

Elemental Affinity: Katon, Fuuton
Main: Katon
Sub: Fuuton

Special Characteristics: The user, if next to any dead bodies, which is not normal, can rise a ghoul, or zombie, if you will. The ghoul has virtually no chakra or constitution. But, the ghouls do have a couple special abilites, although they are only E and one D Rank per ghoul. Also, while in his necromancy presence, anyone in his clan uses death energy, which is like chakra though it requires the presence, and can only use necromancy abilities while in the presence. when using jutsus in this presence, the user burns noo chakra, but death energy.

Items/Weapons:
Name: Douten & Dageki ( Stun and Shock)
Appearence: https://media.photobucket.com/image/dual%20daggers/windz10/fm-411sm.jpg?o=2

They look exactly alike, but they are different in many ways. The left handed one is Strun, and the Right Handed one is Shock. They both have different abilities.

Rank: C
Special Abilities: If Stun hits, then the enemy becomes stun for one second per hit, and if Shock hits, the enemy becomes slightly electrocuted, and after 10 hits, they get a first degree burn, 20 for a 2nd, and so on.

Origin: These were not forged by the clan's kkg. These were forged by Initake's father before he died. He was sent by the Kazekage to have two blades forged for him, to replicate for his soldiers for the war that was going on against Konoha earlier this century. His father made these blades, and were used in the war, they are said to have the most kills when used by trained shinobi's in that war. And now, the original pair, given to Ini by the Kazekage, is the family's heirloom.

Jutsus: (Use the the following template)

KATON NINJUTSU

Name: Katon Shouheki - Fire Barrier
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user can cast a barrier around him, that is lodged in the ground, and cannot be moved. It stays there for around 50 seconds (around 5 posts). When up, the user s not susceptible to anything but water and wind jutsus. Theonly way to destroy this barrier is by a water jutsu, or a B Rank+ Wind Jutsu, or just to wait it out. The user also regains some chakra and energy over time while the barrier is in effect, but this ca only take place if withing 1 foot, and only works for the caster.

Name: Katon Awa - Fire Bubble
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user creates a bubble similar to the barrer. This bubble is ONLY suscepitble by a water jutsu or 3 kunai. (or more obviously). And is destroyed after a minute and a half (around 13-17 posts). Can regain chakra and energy if concealed withing the bubble, and can also be destryed by a sword cut. Bubble can change places if it is still existent, an if the user has enough chakra, although the changing place of it takes up 2X as many chakra as to summon he bubble.

Name: Katon Hei - Fire Wall
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user creates, after a series of hand signs, a nearly inpenetrable wall. The wall is up for 10 secondsonly, and protects the user from the front and sides only, anc an only be penetrated by a jutsu of one rank higher or more, and that only applies to wind and water.

Name: Reiki Katon - Fire Aura
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: When this presence is cast, the user if surrounded by a slight barrier of fire chakra that lasts for 5 mins. When this is in effect, all fire jutsu being cast have a less chance of being dodged, faster cast, and execution, and does 5% more damage. The only flaw to this is that, once again, it is easily destroyed by a water or wind ninjutsu. Also, if the user is stuck by a sword, then the sword gets fire sent up it's blade and burns the enemy, and does half damage to the user of the jutsu. If struck by kunai, the user of this jutsu takes half damage, and then kunai is then repelled back at the thrower at half of the speed, but is not fire like enchanted.

Name: Hinotama - Fireball
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: Basic Fireballl technique, the user, after a couple handsigns shoots a fireball out of their hands and is thrown at the enemy. Is one half inch in diameter.

Name: Kaji Ken Saraundo - Fire Blade Surround
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: A total of 5 swords enchanted with fire fall from the sky, claculating the position of your target, and then surrounds them, on all sides except for above and below. This can be reversed, manipulated and used in many diffrent ways by both sides, and it all requires just slight common sense, thats whay it is only D Rank.

Name: Ken Kaji Manipyureito - Fire Blade Manipulation
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: the user summons two to five blades enchanted with fire andcan use them to their advantage. They can be manipulative with them and use them to attack their enemy,or they could just use it to wield the sword, and copy the motion of their sword, and have the summoned ones do the same.

Name: Kaibun - Ash
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu does exactly what thename implement it to. When this block of fire chakra, not just fire, but fire chakra, making it less vulnerable to the outside effects, strikes the target, the user, started from it's fingertips begins to discintegrate, but the block travles at only 10-15 MPH so, it is easy to dodge.

Name: Kihonteki Katon Ame - Basic Fire Rain
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user shouts a loud incantation to the skies, as they begin to rain down. This rain is of a 100 foot distance, and cnan be extended upon movement of the user. The user is impervios to this jutsu, and when the target is hit, a 2nd or so degree burn is intact, and the burn lasts around 20 secnds. The rain lasts 1 minute, and can burn the ground if needed, and the distance of this jutsu, as in the radius/circumference and all that can be chosen by the user, but is not aable to be changed while the jutsu is already in effect. Can also be used as a shield, for the user can surround themselves in this rain, though if this is the case, it takes more pwer to focus it to one spot, and lasts then only 10 seconds. The larger the area, the weaker, but the less chakra it costs, the smaller area, better effect and chance too hit, more chakra.

Name: Yakedo - Burn
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu is very simple yet kind of hard to execute. It can only be used on projectiles, which is the difficult part, meaning that you have to have great reflexes to use this. Whenever a projectile is thrown at him, of ANY kind and of any rank but S, he can burn it midair, without any effort, and all it takes is 2 hand sgns.

Name: Kanetsu - Heat
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu is performed after around 5 hand signs, and can be used in a couple of ways. The first way is that the user uses this jutsu and makes the heat in the air SEEM alot hotter than normal. It is the same temperature, but it seemes hotter. The user, if the have their fire aura or over 60% percent chakra, is impervious to this jutsu. The second way ios the user direct all of the heat from this jutsu and chakra to the insides of the opponents body, an makes them overheat, to nearly 5 degrees higher, it would be nearly impossible to live from that, although if the user is withing 30 feet of that person and uses the second effect, it costs 2X as much chakra, which would be around 15-20% chakra. Also, if they do use th second way, then the user loses the same amount of heat that the other gains, ONLY if it hits.

Name: Meruto - Melt
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The user is able to melt things. If harder than a soft metl or hard wood, it can be burned. If wood is being burned, than it discntegrates, but the smoke and ash get n both the peoples' faces, making it harder to see. If it is metal, a softer metal, such as gold, it melts, but since it has to be by touch, both the people get a slight burn and damage done.



Background Information:

You're going to need more in personality, and your kkg needs to be better explained and cleaned up ^_^

I'll delete this message when you ask me to, just send me a pm ^_^

Please delete all references to Cannon Characters.

Dr.Jekyl, Mr.Hyde, Sephiroth

Hey initake you know that if you don't have kenjutsu it won't matter what swords your clans make you cant use them cause I am pretty sure that without kenjutsu you cant use a sword higher than D and swords with an element are C rank.

stfu SS . >.< jp and uhhhh.... i forgot to fix that good point.

You can have weaponry instead of kenjutsu, which I would suggest.

And wth Adam? Dr jekyl and Mr Hyde aren't canon anything, it's a common excepted story in most cultures..

Sephiroth is only comparable for looks. Neither are really important or life altering.

grrr i don't want my new charry's ap to be longer than two pages so stop putting useless crap in it >.<

Oh, that reminds me, Solid snake, don't post in apps, first warning.

>.<

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Many people say he resembles Sephiroth

This is implying that if I walked past him in the street somebody would say. "Hey is that Sephiroth?"

Nothing related to cannons, delete it Initake.

Solid Snake, don't post in applcations. NO MATTER WHAT!

Here is what you need to do so far Initake, add more jutsu, make sure you get the academy jutsu.

If you have weaponry instead of kenjutsu, a kenjutsu specialist would kick your ass at sword combat no matter what your kkg, for they specialize in it and you don't so choose wisely.

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Special Characteristics: his clan is distantly related to the Uchiha's, so their Katon Ninjutsu does more effect of it's general effect. Also, any taijutsu or close ranged attack has more of a chance to stun.

There is no mention of your clan being distantly related to the Uchiha clan in your Clan History, if this happened it must be known, I want a big descriptive paragraph of this in the clan history or delete the Special Characteristic.

NECROMANCY ABILITIES

Name: Gaki - Ghoul
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: The user, if near any sort of corpse, or near any near dead people, is able to arise a ghoul from the ground. They are then controlled by their necromancer, or can use their own small minds to use their own abilities, though they are weak. The ghoul can only use taijutsu, and iff using this technique, onew can only be summoned at a time.

Name: Gensui - Decay
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: The users' ghoul lets out a horrifying stecnh that can be smelled from nearly, literally a mile away. The foul odor is really a gas, invisible. It sprays out, but iit sprays in a line, so it is easy to dodge with a talented nose. As the spray goes farther and farther way, the line grows. It travels about as fast as one walks. If the person is so unfortunate to get hit by this jutsu, they begin to rot, and the roting begins at the skin, a it chews at the persons' body until the jutsu wears off, which is around 45 seconds to one minute. (around 6 posts). Herbs, alcohol, and rubbing yourself down with a Sakura, or smelling one does the trick and gets rid of the poison.

Name: Nikuya - Butcher
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: While the enemy is even slightly hurt, the user can generate 10 death energy, and regenerate 1 over every 3 seconds. And if you or your ghoul hits the enemy in melee, it generates 10 Death Energy, and if hit non melee, it generates 5 Death energy, and regenerates 1 over avery 3 seconds. (btw E and D Rank shinobi begin with 75 DE C Rank begin with 100, B with 145, and A or S rank have 200.) (can only be used if in presence.)

Name: Kaori (of the) Nai - Scent of the Dead
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: When you either dodge, or take direct damage from a target, then you use this jutsus effect, generating 5 Death Energy, and this jutsu can only take effect every 10 seconds (about two posts). (can only be used if in presence.)

Name: Oujou Seishou Taitoku - Death Energy Mastery
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: Increases your maximum Death Energy by 25. ( so now my character would have 125.) (can only be used if in presence)

Name: Kuroi Seishou - Black Energy
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: Increases all necromancy jutsu, and ghouls jutsu to do more damage, and raise any effect any jutsu may have. (can only be used if in presence) Requires 10 death energy.

Name: Oujou Tsume - Death's Talon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: You take heat from your targets bpody, and then they cannot attack for about 8 seconds (about a post, maybe two) this is in effect, you can attack twice as many times as you normally could for 8 seconds (1-2 posts). Takes 5 death energy to use. ( can only be used in presence)

Name: Oujou Fukyuu - Death Rot
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: If was hit by a melee attack froma ghoul, the terget becomes diseased, losing chakra slowly by the seconds, and then any of the next attacks, of ninjutsu only, made by the user does 1/5 more damage than normal. Including their necromancy abilities. This jutsu lasts for about 20 seconds (about 2 posts each). Takes 10 Death Energy. (can only be used if in presence.)

Name: Yuuri Rinjoukan - Literal meaning "better presnce" but actually means Improved Presence
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: The user, while in the presence, takes less effect of a jutsu that dealt damage to him, and also it takes more to kll him thanks to this jutsu, because the user also regains 5% more health than normal, so it takes more jutsu and effort to kill him. Takes 7 Death Energy. ( can only be used if in presence)

Name: Junka - Acclimate
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: The user, if hit by a jutsu of an element, builds up resistance to that element, taking less damage of that element. This jutsu lasts 10 seconds, and every attack taken by that element during this jutsu's active time, takes less effect of the jutsu. Can only be used three times in one spar. Takes 10 Death Energy. (must be in presence to use) If a jutsu is used that is the opposite element of the element that is being resisted, it does nearly twice as much effect on the user of this jutsu.

Name: Oujou Dageki - Death Strike
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: The user instantly attacks the target three times, no hand signr incantation needed, and does only 60% damage every time, so it has less damage effect, though while this is in effect, cannot be blocked or parried, Regenerates 3 death energy per strike. Takes 5 Death Energy. (must be in presence)

Name: Gensui Bakuha - Decaying Blast
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: The user performs a highly regarded C Ranked technique, hitting all enemies with 5 yards, dealing Damage Over Time, making the targets chakra deplete slowly over 10 seconds, (around 2 posts, 1 of their posts), can be used only 5 times in one spar. Takes 10 Death Energy. (must be in presence to use this.)

Name: Fukenzen - Morbid
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: Increases the effect of Decay by 20%. Since decay has a 10 foot effect, it makes it a 12 foot effect, and since the gas travels at 1-8 MPH, it now is 1-10 MPH. Also, makes the decay's gas unable to be dodged for 3 seconds, because this jutsu also slows down the enemy, by throwing some of the death energy "chakra" at the enemy. Takes 5 Death Energy. (requires presence for this).


Name: Oujou Shusseki - Death Presence
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ KKG
Element: N/A
Description: One of the two KKG jutsus that use chakra. Converts the user from a regular shinobi, to being half undead, and therefore, having the many abilities of the undead, except more elite. The user now uses no chakra, and has stronger thoughts than the regular shinobi, and moves faster, deals more melle damage, and is able to use many other things. While in this presence, the user is limited to only the KKg abilities.

UNDEAD TAIJUTSU

Name: Ensoku - Trip
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu/KKG
Element: N/A
Description: While in melee combat, the ghoul uses a basic trip technique, by sweeping their feet across the floor, and tripping the enemy.

Name: Katsu - Rip
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu/KKG
Element: N/A
Description: The user's ghoul uses another basic taijutsu attack. The ghoul horizontally slashes at the target, and tries to knock them back. Does little damage, and has a 25% chance of stun if not knocked back, for 3 seconds the stun lasts.

Name: Baundo - Bounce
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu/KKG
Element: N/A
Description: The word "bounce" can mean two things for taijutsu. For the ghoul there are two meanings.

The first meaning is to jump really high in the air, and stay there for 2 seconds, maneuvering and moving to the way that it feels it is useful and comfortable to it.

Second meaning is to belly bounce. He jumps slightly and thrusts his belly at the enenmy, forcing the enemy to the grond. It is almost guarunteed, because the ghoul weighs over 200 lbs.

Name: Matsuri - Feast
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu/KKG
Element: N/A
Description: The ghoul, if has the opurtunity, can jump on the target, and try to eat him. While this jutsu is intact the ghoul is impervious to taijutsu, kenjutsu, or shuriken or kunai. Only ninjutsu can effect the ghoul here.


(btw, these are ll of the jutsu that the ghoul can do voluntarily. I will make te controlled jutsu later.)

BIRTH ARC

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CHILDHOOD ARC

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CHOICE OF WORSHIP ARC

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ACADEMY ARC

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GENIN ARC

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RP Sample: Look at my Chuunin Exams or my death.

Denied on the basis that a necromancy KKG would be unbalanced. There are so many things here that would have to be either refused or edited substancially. The idea of death energy, ghouls that are impervious to genjutsu and physical attacks, instantly attacking an enemy and doing a percentage amount of damage and last of all... Magic Missile - which is an attack in a completely different game/universe.

ok. I see what you are saying, but i am definitely keeping my necromancy, and i will change it the way it needs to be, and i will delete te magic missile. And the ghouls are not completely impervious to genjutsu and physicalattackes, that is only on one jutsu. And i made the whole percentage thing because it is kind of difficult to put it any other way. Also, death energy is only used while the user is in a certai presence, and that can only be achieved by those being necromancers. And also, to balance my character out, i would delete my fuuton ninjutsu as well, so that way it all balances out, and then i wonder if it would be all right.

This is ALOT of jutsu for a Genin. And Aren't Genin limited to a single element anyway? Or am I once again confusing the rules of one site with that of another...

I'm going to have an admin personally take a look at this.

I would absolutely deny a necromancy kkg, and the C-ranked jutsu you have for your KKG are overpowered.

mhm i agree with the admin check part, because if they say tht i will have to lower the effects of certain jutsus, i will have to know which ones, and also i belive genin are only limitred to one element on Ingoo flash....

Well first of all if you wish to have a necromancy KKG you can't expect to write three lines for the description of the KKG and another three for the history. Beef both of them up considerably describing what type of necromancy your capable of and what the limits are etc. Also most necromancy kind of stuff would involve a large, dark history . You do this and then i will take a proper look at it.

all right ccan be done and will be.

fixed and beefed up. Ifg anything else, which there probably will be, i will fix.

Longer personality and looks. Beef up the clan history and kkg more.

ugh
i am a genin don't you know that?

Yeahhh, genin are supposed to have 2 paragraphs for looks and personality.

fine then

FUUTON NINJUTSU

Name: Shippuu - Gale
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: This is a jutsu that heightens the wind force and MPH. As a D Rank jutsu, it makes the wind's speed 60 MPH, forcing it at the enemy, trying to knock him/her over. As a C Rank it is 75 MPH, B Rank 90 MPH, A Rank 100 MPH, and S Rank 130 MPH. It is used as a knockback/stun jutsu. If it doesn't knock the opponent over, the D Rank stuns for 3 seconds, the C Rank stuns for 5 seconds, B Rank 9 seconds, A Rank 12 seconds, and S Rank 20 seconds.

Name: Hitofuki - Gust
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: This jutsu is kinda like his Gale jutsu, but different. What this does, is that he shoots a gust of wind out of his hands, after the three hand signs, and then shoot it at an object, trying to break it, or at least damage it.If you aim it at a person, you have to aim it at the head or the heart. Otherwise, it will jiust swirl around them and then fly away. This jutsu stays at 65 MPH, and if it hits the person dead on, it has the power to AT LEAST knock them down. If anything more, to the heaad, they can get a slight concussion and black out for a few seconds. If it hits thir hearth, yes, it gets oxygen in, bbut it makes the target feel heavy, and either A) go slower or B) run out of breth alot easier.

Name: Kmoakai Tatsumaki - Small Tornado
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: This jutsu does what it's name implies, but it is much more complicated tan that. After 3 seconds of hand signs, the usrer opens their arms, vulnerable, and ifnot interupted, then a tornado shoots out froom their bdy, surrounding the enemy, encasing thenm in it for around 5 seconds (around 1-2 posts) without any escape. The tornado makes the air around the heavier, and makes it harder to breathe, and after the five seconds, they can escape bby crawling through the bottom. And after the user shoot the tornado out of their body, they become tired for a while, since they used their own oxygen, so it sucks for the opponent if the user has bad BO. The tornado is around 15 feet high, and the circumference is about 5 feet.

Name: Oshi - Push
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: Simple. The jutsus' wind power keeps on pushing the enemy, and doesn't let up uuntil the enemy is knocked over. f the enemy is running against the wind, than the wind tries to keep it in place or push it back. The wind covers 40-60 feet long, it depends on how much area they are working with. If the enemy is able to break this jutsu, than the jutsu is spkit in half., and comes from behind the enemy, and knocks theover that way.

When i added onto my KKg and such, it said it was too big so....