Initake Yari Done [need admin opinion]

bump I have made all of the modifications everyone so far had asked me to. If they need anymore, than ask me and i will do so again, just make sure that when i am done with these that they will be looked at. I hate having to wait for an app checking when there are barely any others done. Also, I have made everything longer, if i am approved say so.

I was asked to post here, by the creator.
I think maybe that this character is over powered for a genin knowing only basic techniques.
Maybe instead, you can take away some of these jutsu, and try and learn them through rping?
But i think that its a great character, and could be even greater if it had longer arcs, and less jutsu... or less powerful jutsu...

i could make the arcs longer... and i might, but before i get approved, and get it moved, i want to shorten my list of jutsus, and as Leah stated, learn them and more through rping.

Leah, I don't care if you get permission from the creator to post here, its staff only, its a rule. Quit breaking rules.

Ok thats great that you have increased the size of your KKG but you still havent told me anything about it. I dont care about your father in suna thats for history! You have to describe it as if im an idiot and i dont know what necromancy is. You have to describe in detail what it is, how you do it, and positives and negatives.

If i have to tell you this again i will disallow you to have the KKG as you are obviously not worthy.

Controlling the dead means a few tings for a necromancer. One, that when they are controlling the dea,d that they are part dead themselvs as well, and cannot be effected by elements the way the living are. When they are not controlling the dead, they are always finding ways to look inside the living, and see how they are, what makes them tick, so that they may know how to hurt them inside and out, with their superior abilities. And thridly, most of them, are not very talkative, they keep to themselves, because most of them are afraid theat if they sy the slightest thing, they may release their dark energies and displease their God, and be punishhed for it. Not Initake, he kow how to change the tempo and topic of conversation, which was one of the many things that his father had taught him.

Dead bodies don't burn? Can't be imprisoned by water or crushed by earth? Will wind not cut them or send them away? will lightning not destroy them?

Get rid of that part, it doesn't make sense to be in there.

and thats it? besides the jutsu reduction? ok.

Approved.