The Subeta Clan

Clan Name: The Subeta Clan

Kekkei Genkai: The Kinegan, here is a random picture of a normal eye transforming into the kinegan, the final eye is the kinegan. Here's the info; The subeta clan have a doujutsu, the Kinegan, that allows them to see the structural weaknesses and weak points in a weapon and the memorize the weapons structure, later transform/create/improve/change their own weapons accordingly. This eye sight isn't only used for creating powerful weapons, but also can be used whilst fighting, for example in a sword vs sword battle, the user can activate their Kinegan so they can see the weakest point in a weapon at a maximum of 50 ft, then when close, put a small amount of chakra into the weapons weak point, destroying or damaging the weapon. Whilst the kinegan is activated the user can sense weapons around them, but only weapons. Like the sharingan the kinegan takes up little to no chakra to use. Due to the users great general knowledge of weapons, the eye can tell the subtle differences in a weapon and natural substances, the kinegan can see through tree's, walls and the like, but it severely reduces it's range. The kinegan does not have to see the weapon, when the weapon gets within 10 ft, the kinegan can sense it.

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History:
The Subeta clan originated from the land of snow, it started of with a family of blacksmitheis, the most talented of the family was the father, not because of his experience, but because he had figured out a way of putting his chakra into his work, because the father didn't know how to properly use chakra, his creations could sometimes be unpredictable, one day when he was attempting to teach his oldest son how to pour chakra into his work, two chakra charged sparks flew into the oldest sons eyes. After two weeks of blindness the oldest sons eyes began to heal, in doing so he started to see things differently, this eye was later called the Kinegan.

After the oldest son had discovered the kinegan, he set about traveling the world to find as many uses fore it as possible, as well as how to activate and deactivate it. After several years he met a squad of genin, when he saw there amazing skills he asked their jounin who they were. He realized that he could use his doujutsu to become a ninja, and start a ninja clan. He wandered around the world, until he found one of the five great nations; Konohagakure. He started a family there, where they learnt the ways of the ninja, before discovering many jutus that could be used with the kinegan.

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Well so your doujutsu can find the weak points in weapons. Ok that it is fine BUT! weapons are made out of either wood, metal, glass etc. So does this mean that your eye can see through all these substances? This would mean that Kinegan has the ability of the penetrating eye which means they can see through walls, trees etc because if you can see weapons than you could look through all these things as they are made out of the same material.

Either clarify it better that you can only look at weapons e.g only weapon materials that are a certain thickness OR you can penetrate thorugh any substance such a metal walls etc.

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With your jutsu are you physically changing the say a kunai into a katana or are you just making it look like it is. If so can you please make sure you explain it, is it confusing the enemy like a genjutsu or a ninjutsu actually changing the weapons shape. If its a ninjutsu please explain how you can do this better..

Then you will be approved. ^^

Ok, thats Edited. xD

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Ok fine approved. ^^