Wazima Subeta (Done)

Basic Character Information:

Name: Wazima Subeta
-Nickname: -
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Clan: Subeta

Looks:

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Personality: He is always a very happy person, he often makes jokes, despite growing up in Kirigakure. When he is angry he is silent, his normal joking nature is replaced by a silent rage which will impare his abilities, because he doesn't think rationally. He has trained so that he does not become angry, due to his sensei being a harsh his lesson's will often be harsh and difficult, but if he is befriended, his sub conscious harsher lessons will be replaced by lighter ones, this is not to say that the lessons will be easier, but it would not be as harsh.

When in battle, Wazima seem's just as he was before, but he is actually very focused, he keeps up a charade of being the same to throw his opponent off guard. He thinks every move through to the point where he can almost not be wrong, he will then often pretend to have made a mistake to find an opening to attack. Wazima will often spin or mess around with assorted ninja tools, making it appear like he doesn't care.


Basic Clan Information:

Clan Name:
The Subeta Clan
Kekkei Genkai:
The Kinegan
Clan Symbol:



Clan History:
The Subeta clan originated from the land of snow, it started of with a family of blacksmitheis, the most talented of the family was the father, not because of his experience, but because he had figured out a way of putting his chakra into his work, because the father didn't know how to properly use chakra, his creations could sometimes be unpredictable, one day when he was attempting to teach his oldest son how to pour chakra into his work, two chakra charged sparks flew into the oldest sons eyes. After two weeks of blindness the oldest sons eyes began to heal, in doing so he started to see things differently, this eye was later called the Kinegan.

After the oldest son had discovered the kinegan, he set about traveling the world to find as many uses fore it as possible, as well as how to activate and deactivate it. After several years he met a squad of genin, when he saw there amazing skills he asked their jounin who they were. He realized that he could use his doujutsu to become a ninja, and start a ninja clan. He wandered around the world, until he found one of the five great nations; Konohagakure. He started a family there, where they learnt the ways of the ninja, before discovering many jutus that could be used with the kinegan.
Link: Here ^^


Rank Information:

Rank: Jounin
Village: Sunagakure


Skill Information:

Skill Specialty: Main: Weaponry Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Main: Fire Sub: Water
Special Characteristics: Much faster than average hand seal speed, this is used for a manner of things the first if for jutsu, the second is for throwing weapons and the third is for sword play. He has amazing deadly accuracy, he doesn't miss. He also has significant strength in order too lift some of his heavier weapons, but this is a rather small part. He has also undertaken training to increase his speed, both whilst running and throughout his entire body.

Suiton Jutsu

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Kiri Jutsu

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Non-Canon Fire Jutsu

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Non-Canon Water Jutsu

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Non-Elemental Jutus

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Weapons:

Name: Subeta
Appearance:See appearance picture.
Rank: A
Special Abilities: Chakra Conductive, Can break other swords of the same rank, not to mention scenery and swords of a higher rank (S) sword, with chakra. It is made out of a special metal combined, meaning that it is almost impossible to deystroy.
Origin: This is the first sword made ever made with the Kinegan, it was pasted down to Wazima through his father, who got it from his father, who got it from his father, etc.

Name: R. Hand Glove Scroll
Appearance: Looks like a little metal strip, see appearance description
Rank: C
Special Abilities: Can summon the following weapons, either all at once, or individually:
Subeta x1
Spear (Normal spear, C ranked) x1
Origin: Bought and manufactured into his glove using his kinegan.

Name: L. Hand Glove Scroll
Appearance: Same as R. hand Scroll
Rank: C
Special Abilities: Can summon the following weapons, either all at once, or individually:
Mace (Normal Mace, C ranked) x1
Kunai x30
Senbon x10
Shuriken x10
Origin: Bought and manufactured into his glove using his kinegan.

Name: Item Pouch Scroll 1
Appearance: Looks like this.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: Can summon the following weapons, either all at once, or individually:
Pole arm x1
Shuriken x20
Senbon x30
Origin: He made it himself.

Name: Pouch Scroll 2
Appearance: Looks like this.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: Can summon the following weapons, either all at once, or individually:
Double Sided Sword (Looks like this, C ranked ) x1
Senbon x40
Kunai x10
Origin: He made it himself.

Name: Pouch Scroll 3
Appearance: Looks like this.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: Can summon the following weapons, either all at once, or individually:
Kama (with longer than normal chain) x2
Origin: He made them himself,].

Name: Pouch Scroll 4
Appearance: Looks like this.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: Can summon the following weapons, either all at once, or individually:
Sai x2
Origin: He made it himself.

Name: Pouch Scroll 5
Appearance: Looks like this.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: Can summon the following:
Large Weapon Scroll x1
Origin: He made it himself.

Name: Pouch Scroll 6
Appearance: Looks like this.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: Can be used to seal and unseal any item.
Origin: He made it in case he wanted to seal anything.

Name: Large Weapon Scroll
Appearance: A large scroll normally worn on the back.
Rank: B
Special Abilities: Can summon the following weapons, individually or all at once:
Katanas x10
Tantos x12
Kunai x50
Exploding Tag Kunai x100
Origin: He made it himself.

History and RP Sample:
History:

~ Academy Arc ~

For a good three weeks before his first day in the academy Wazima couldn't sleep, he had insane notions that to be able to use at least one jutsu, and he had spent the last three weeks constantly working on his ninjutsu and kenjutsu skills, he didn't sleep for three weeks.

It was Wazima's first day at the academy, he hadn't slept once for the last three weeks, he walked up to the front of the academy, it seemed much larger than he had remembered, it was intimidating. He looked up to the door, before ascending the steps to the academy, he opened the door, looking at the small card his parents had given him; 285, he remembered his parents, trying to help him master the bunshin jutsu, his lake of sleep had concerned them. But it was worth it. He walked up to the door; 285. He opened the door, before passing out from exhaustion. From that day on he pretended to be anti-social, every one in the class thought he was a horrible student, but only his results said other wise.

~ Genin Arc ~

Wazima's genin days were the hardest he could remember, he had spent almost every waking moment working on some jutus, resulting in the large jutsu arsenal he has today. He worked non stop, the only time he ever stopped his training was to eat or sleep, even so, when he did, it was scarce. After mastering 50 or so jutsu he had convinced the hokage to allow him to join team 9 with two other genins, one which was a master of taijutsu and the other one was from the inuzika clan. His sensei was harsh, constantly forcing him to work harder and harder until he was ready for the chuunin exams.

His sensei and the rest of team 9 where on a mission for the rest of the year, they where left in the land of snow as they waited for their mission to end, a missing ninja had come to the village, taking the inuzuka clan member to become a missing ninja. This prevented the team from participating in the chuunin exams for another year, and when the chuunin exams where almost ready they had to get another member for their team, not allowing them to participate.

After another year of training Wazima's personality had started to change, he had become increasingly like his sensei, he had started to crave his rare praise, and his personality had started to compromise.

~ Chuunin Exam Arc ~

Wazima's group had decided not to participate in the chuunin exams, the new member need to learn how to work as a team, so he quit his squad, before entering the suna chuunin exams solo.

After he made it to sunagakure he passed the first test easily. In sunagakure the chuunin exams where different, the first test was to survive in the desert for three days, they would then have to find one of the six kunai buried underground, if it was the correct kunai teh bandages around the handle would be replaced by a summoning scroll, a jounin would appear, before warping the finder and his group to the next stage. There where thrity-four other fake kunai, which instead of a scroll, would have 27 collective exploding tags. He easily passed, due to his kinegan, making the first stage simple.

The second stage wasn't as easy, it was a team on team battle royal, he almost didn't past the second exam, but after flooding the stage with mist and then runnig behind the leader of the team, he managed to intoxicate the their leader, before taking out his second member using the pheonix flower jutsu to hide his numerous weapons. The last was the most difficult, he had precise control of his wind chakra, allowing him to defect all long range attacks. This was only defeated by sending a combination of the grand fireball jutsu, the chain end of his kamas, and a mizu bunshin.

The last test was strange, unlike the other nearly every other chuunin exam, there could only be one winner. The way the third round was done is by proving that you have the skills to defeat a chuunin, you have to face a chuunin in one on one. You could decide to either survive for five minutes, or defeat the chuunin. They only allowed one winner, and the genin's didn't know it, but it wasn't decided by how they fought, but how they chose to fight. Every match would start off with the genin against a wall, with the chuunin putting his kunai next to the genins throat. The genin would then have to say a sentence, before escaping from the chuunin. If you wanted to survive, you would have to say; 'time,' but you wouldn't just say 'time' you would have to use it in a sentence. If you wanted to defeat the chuunin you would have to say; 'end' but like the other option it had to be used in a sentence. It Wazima's turn to fight, he looked up into the chuunin's eyes, 'Your time is at an end' he as the only one to have said both, but in addition to that he was the best fighter. He was the only one to pass.


~ Chuunin Arc ~

After becoming a chuunin, Wazima spent half a year in sunagakure, training his katon jutsu he heard that the next chuunin exams would be in kirigakure. He spent a month contemplating whether or not to return to Kirigakure, or stay in sunagakure. He decided upon returning to Kiri for the chuunin exams, before living in sunagakure. As he waited for the kiri chuunin exams to begin he joined team six in sunagakure. His sensei in sunagakure was just as mean as his sensei in kiri, but only towards Wazima because he lived in kirigakure. His other two team mates were more supporting, they were both chuunins, just like Wazima. The male chuunin was an earth specialist, and the other was from the hyuuga clan. He went on one B rank mission with his other team mates, before returning back to kirigakure, he rejoined team 9, after being a proctor for the next chuunin exam, he was quickly promoted to Jounin.

~ Jounin Arc ~

After following in the steps of the founder of his clan he spent two years wandering the world, lending his services to others, before deciding to live in sunagakure.




Rp Sample:

Wazima lazily looked up at the sun, smiling, there was something about the sun in sunagakure that made him happy, after being brought up in Kirigakure the sun had always been a rare sight, and when it did rarely come out, the day was always amazing, the normal mist that hung over the city thinned, the numerous missing-nin stayed inside bars and taverns, not wanting to face the sun, whether it was to avoid being seen, or to avoid the sun. He remembered running around, avoiding the numerous ninja training there mist skills, but instead fighting with the other genin. Wazima snapped out of his flash back, focusing on the mission at hand. He was hidden in a tree, not the best place to hide, but his presence was hidden, as was body, and hiding in a tree was better than nothing. He sat in the tree enjoying being up high, and feeling the warm wind on his face, but as much as he loved sunagakure, there were some things he hated about it. The lack of water, which not only made forty percent of his jutsu difficult or useless to use, but also his mist justsu were in the same boat. Due to that lack of water, the trees were missing, and somehting about that was disscomforting, after spending twenty years in Kirigakure, a lack of trees discomforted him. He shook his head, focusing on his mission.

He had to escort a very important prince to his home country. He had been in the tree for a near two hours now, and he was starting to think that they weren't coming, of course this was the rendezvous point, so they could've been harmed on the way there. He doubted it though, he was a very important person, and he didn't have many enemies, still. He sat there perfectly still, and perfectly hidden, he was meditating, focusing on his chakra, letting it flow out around him, he would know when anyone came near, he extended his range up the track seeing if he could sense the prince. He jumped forward's, unsure of whether or not his mission would end up being completed. He stopped sending his chakra forwards, seeing if he could sense them, he realised that this method wasn't working, so he jumped up, sending chakra to his eyes as he tried to see them using thermal vision. He landed, unable to see them, he deactivated the thermal eyes, as his thermal vision faded, he saw them, turning the corner. He realized why he couldn't see them or sense them, the prince was surrounded by gaurds, all of which seemed to be able of harnessing chakra, there were also a chuunin and a genin, both of which must have been supplying the shield, the body guards were supplying the chakra, making it impossible to sense them with out keen sight. He jumped backwards, making sure he wouldn't be seen, he stopped five feet away from the rendezvous point, before remembering his hidden presence.

Wazima sat up high in the tree, in the familiar position he had spent a good two hours in, before trying to find the prince he would escort. It had taken them a good fifteen minutes to make it that fair. So that's why they took so long, there protection comes at a price, it severely reduces their speed. He sat silently, waiting for them to make it to the destination. He looked around taking in his current surroundings. Fire wasn't a problem, but water would end up being one. There wasn't water anywhere, and what was there was barely sufficient to create a mizu bunshin. Besides that all there was were a dirt road, and the occasional tree or shrew. He looked up, expecting the prince to be there by now, but they were slow, they were almost here, but it would take a minute. He focused on all the scenery there was, trying to find a way to use laughter of loki, there was a chance of doing it, but that would require him to move the water into a physical shape, he had an idea, by throwing an exploding kunai, he could knock over a tree, giving him a wider surface to rebound off. He looked at the group, moving forward. He focused at the tree behind them, before firing a kunai at one of its bigger branches, slicing it clean off. The large branch fell, it would not hurt the prince, it may hurt some of bodyguards, but he could easily save them, not only that, but there were to ninja there with them. The branch fell, he had already perceived where the barrier would be, but what happened next made it amazingly clear, the barrier had physical substance, it deflected the log, which promptly caught on fire. Wazima was unsure, he had never dealt with this type of situation before, but he thought he knew how to stop, the barrier would have a weak point, but the only way to find out how to do so, would be to test it out. The parties movement had slowed even more, the act of deflecting the log had drained their speed. So thats how the barrier works, it strength and physical substance take up speed. It can't be that easy, they'll have a trick up there sleeve. He didn't think they had realized his presence yet. His kunai was fast and accurate, but what if they had noticed that he was there? He decided to keep up a path in which he didn't reveal himself. He needed another idea, it would be hard to make more realistic 'accidents' and he had no idea how he was going to do it. He decided on a course of action, it wouldn't look like an accident, but they diffidently wouldn't realize it was him.

He pulled eight kunai out, before revealing the wire attached to them, he found an angle that would fit his purposes, before throwing with perfect accuracy. The kunai flung around another train a while away, before spinning around the back of the tree and getting stuck there.


(Not finished. Unless that much is acceptable. ^^)

Mist jutsu require a special kkg..

Do they, I thought that you could learn them if you originated from Kirigakure....

But i'll remove ^^

WAAAAAAAAY longer Chuunin arc. at least 2-3 paragraphs.

Edited~ Hope thats enough ^^

Bump~

Yeah.. Thats a crapload of jutsu and weapons.. someone else Will have too look at it, I'm too tired.

Fair enough ^^

Those techniques reminded me of Fallen Angel and Gabriele? Did you copy those techniques from other people on Ingoo?

I thought they were from somewhere..... But I didn't exactly know where.... What should I do about it?

Sorry, I should probably explain, I made this guy a while back, but didn't really do anything about, the other day I found Ultimate Shinobi, I was gonna make a guy when I found this..... Once more, what should I do about it?

Bump?

Could someone give me a solution, or approve it? ^^

Removing them?

I don't know which ones they are.... But I'll try ^^

Ok, I think i've gotton rid of them.

Bump~

I told you to delete all of the jutsu you stole.

I'm on ingoo you know. You don't know which ones you copied from Fallen Angel and Gabriele?

Wazima wrote:

I thought they were from somewhere..... But I didn't exactly know where.... What should I do about it?

Sorry, I should probably explain, I made this guy a while back, but didn't really do anything about, the other day I found Ultimate Shinobi, I was gonna make a guy when I found this..... Once more, what should I do about it?

I said that, so honestly. No.

Heres a Link to where I was referring to: http://narutor.forumotion.com/character-creation-f2/wazima-subeta-done-t5365.htm

Dr. Love clearly states the techniques that were orginality his. On your application you still have it.

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Name: Toratsume (Tiger Claw)
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu is first used by the user building up a layer of chakra around their blade. After this simple process is down the user then can actually use the jutsu as an offense degree. Once the chakra is pushed around the blade the user then can use the blade in battle; and by swinging the blade the layer of chakra will fly off the blade and outward at the opponent. At the exact instant the chakra leaves the blade the user then ignites it creating flames. Depending on the amount of chakra that is pushed out depends on the power of the flames. This jutsu is effective for mid-close ranged attacks. The jutsu is so named because when the slash of chakra is shot outward and ignited it takes a slight curve to it and looks like that of a tiger claw. The flame shot is the length of the blade.

Name: Tenkeitora (Tiger Revelation)
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: Fire
Description: The utilization of this jutsu is very similar to that of the Tiger Claw Jutsu. The user first starts by building up chakra around the blade. Once this feat is done the user then moves to attack their opponent. The way and means of the attack with the blade can be done in anyway but the important part of the attack is that the user will miss on purpose. Or let it be dodged, either one. Once the user either misses the swing, or the oppoent dodges, the user then lets the chakra build up on the blade move off from the blade. And once this is done the user will ignite the chakra quickly causing an explosion of flames exactly near to where the attack by the blade was missed, or dodged. The flames are equal to that of a paper bomb.

Were the ones.

Ok, Thats edited.

I assumed that you also wanted me to get rid of:

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Name: Kishoutora (Rising Tiger)
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: Fire
Description: Kishoutora is a jutsu that uses the combination of kenjutsu and ninjutsu. More specifically the fire element. First the user unsheathes their blade (In this case, Katana) and then focuses their chakra all around the blade. In the heartbeat that this occurs as soon as the chakra had built up round it the user then ignites it creating flame around the blade. Because the flames are on the top layer of the chakra on the blade, it will cause no harm to the blade itself. Once the flames are created the user can fully use this jutsu. The user then swings the blade in horizontal motion brandishing the flames. The flames them expand greatly with great force creating an apparition of a tiger made out of flames. The flame tiger is about as powerful as a normal fireball jutsu and it moves at quick speed. The tiger is shot forward burning brightly. Now at the moment the tiger is created the user uses the body flicker technique and using the flame tiger as a distraction makes an attack with their katana.

It just seemed to fit into that catagory.

Hope it can be approved now. ^^

Ok; bumpity bump bump.

It's been a day and 11 minutes.... Bump

There are still a lot of fire and water jutsu that are from ingoo's jutsu list which are made by Hageshii. Im not sure on the legistics about that, if you are allowed them or not, this is a different site. Maybe you should keep the ownership name above them?

Everything else seems fine and would get my approval. But i might get a second opinion on that, probably Living Spirits.