An'baraks new S-rank summon! (which i learned through rp)

Name: Demonic summoning: Eredar demon lord.
Rank: S
Appearance: http://www.svrwf.de/wd/eqdkp/plugins/bosssuite/games/WoW/images/bosses/big/archimonde.gif
[b]Type of Summon: Demonic Portal
Species: Demon
Elemental Affinity: Shadow/fire
History: History: The artifact in question, Is an old scroll, from a time long past. It is an artifact of my clan, of a great shinobi named Gul’dan. Gul’dan was one of the greatest of our clan, but he crossed the boundraries of what mortals should do. He attained great power as an unthor, and wrote down many mighty jutsu, many of which were stored in my Clan’s library.” At this point An’barak removed a large tome from his knapsack, and wiped a bit of dust off the cover. The pages were crinkled yellow with age. He opened it, and displayed a page to Kuro, picturing a man with bright red eyes, his hands glowing with shadow energy. “To this day, this is the most accurate picture we have of Gul’dan.” To the side of the picture, was a scrabble of demonic lettering, an old language created by the founders of the Unthor clan, a language only an Unthor knew how to read. Conveniently, An’barak had exterminated the rest of the clan, so he was the only one left with the knowledge. “Gul’dan became obsessed with becoming a god, and wished to rule over this entire world. So, In his thirst for power, he used a ritual which has been lost to time, to summon a mighty demon, which he planned to kill, and capture his power, in order to seal it within himself. Indeed, had Gul’dan done as he planned, he might have succeded. However, during the ceremony, in his impatience, Gul’dan left several holes in his summoning ritual, and got more than he bargained for. A demon far beyond what he had anticipated emerged, and despite Gul’dans great power, it defeated him in one fell swoop. However, Gul’dan managed to force the demon back to its own world, and with his dying blood, created a scroll in which he detailed how to perform the summon properly, as he had spent many a year studying how to summon and control a greater demon. He wrote down his shortcomings, and what other similar powerseekers must do in order not to make his same mistake. He used his last breath, to cast the scroll through the dimensional planes, and supposedly it landed somewhere here, in the Rain Country.” An’barak shut the book, and replaced it in his knapsack. “That scroll is written in the language of old, a language passed down through the Unthor line. If you and I are thinking of the same thing, I am the only one who can decode it. As for it being a stepping stone to a greater artifact, fess up, Kuro, we both know that was your bluff. Any power I gain is power towards the akatsuki, Isn’t that right Kuro?” He smiled as he said this, knowing that he had Kuro caught, If Vice wanted the power of that scroll for his organization, An’barak was his only chance to read it, and indeed only An’barak knew how to meld the chakra’s in order to perform a summoning of that scale. “I have been studying the demonic Arts for quite some time, and believe that I would be capable of doing what Gul’dan failed to do. The demon summoned through the secrets contained within that scroll would be a great asset to not only my arsenal, but that of the Akatsuki as a whole. And that is what I have come here, to the rain country, to find.”
Link: [Link to training topic]

Description: This is An’barak’s most powerful summoning. It requires all of his focus to maintain control over this demon. This demon has a humanoidal appearance, other than the fact that it has a beard of what appears to be tentacles, and hooves rather than feet. It’s skin is pale blue. The Eredar is physical muscular, and is also a deadly jutsu user. An'barak is not entirely sure he can control this demon, and is therefore very reluctant to summon it.

Jutsu's:

Name: Endless fear
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: The Eredar locks eyes with the target, and lets a grin slowly spread over his face. If the target maintains eye contact with the eredar, and sees the grin, he will see the demon (Fearful though he already is) Transform into a monstrosity. This inspires a huge amount of fear in any opponent, as if they are facing hell itself. Most opponents will either fall to their knees shivering, unable to do anything even as their death blow approaches.

Name: Soul Flay
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shadow
Description: The eredar Attaches a tether to an enemies soul, and slowly drains it out, causing a huge amount of pain in the proccess as the soul is removed. However, if the target moves, the tether is broken. It takes 2 posts of no moving for the target to die from this.

Name: Finger of Death
Rank: S
Element: Shadow
Description: The Eredar's most powerful offensive spell. It will gather a huge amount of chakra on the tip of its finger, then point at the target. An Arcing beam of red energy, roughly 7 feet in diameter will shoot from its finger towards the target. The chakra is of such great power that the surroundings are dyed red as the beam shoots out. This technique generally obliterates most targets instantly. It is avoidable/blockable, but very difficult to do so.

Name: Doomfire
Rank: A
Element: Fire
Description: The Eredar summons giant pillars of flame which move around the battlefield according to his will. He can summon up to 4 pillars at once. Each pillar lasts for 3 posts. The Pillars move at run speed, and can rapidly incinerate anyhting they hit.

Name: Armageddon
Rank: S
Element: Shadow / Fire
Description: The eredar creates an enormous meteor of shadow fire (50 feet in diameter), which crashes down upon the target area, causing a vast explosion. The flames will then burn across the area for up to 3 posts, burning whomever goes through it. flames are infused with shadow chakra, causing them to burn even on water, or rocky substances. Requires A-rank level water jutsu to douse the flames post explosion.

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MAJOR WEAKNESS: an'barak has a VERY challenging tiem controlling this demon. Therefore, he can only use 1 A-rank jutsu, per post, while haviing this demon fighting along side him. If he tries anything beyond that, he will lose control, and the demon will turn on him.

Generally looks okay but I will need to think about reign of chaos. I do not like the idea of summons with their won summons. Can I ask how big is the summon?

The infernals have no intelligance whatsoever, and are controlled almost like puppets by the big guy. Big guy goes down/ leaves, so do the infernals. each one is around like 9-10 feet tall, and fairly wide. Also, due to their natural fire, and the fac their made of rocks, their not something anyone would want to fight up close.

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I really hate the idea of demons, my OPINION is denied, but get another staff member and its allowed.

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Name: Demonic summoning: Eredar Demon Lord
Rank: S
Element: Shadow
Description: This is An’barak’s most powerful summoning. It requires all of his focus to maintain control over this demon. This demon has a humanoidal appearance, other than the fact that it has a beard of what appears to be tentacles, and hooves rather than feet. It’s skin is pale blue. The Eredar is physical muscular, and is also a deadly jutsu user. An'barak is not entirely sure he can control this demon, and is therefore very reluctant to summon it.

-Please use the correct template for the summon. Please add more to the appearance also. Include personality, weight, small features etc. Since you didn't include a picture you need to be as detailed as possible.

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[b]Name:[/b] [Name of Contract]
[b]Rank:[/b] [E-S (ranks of the animals included in the summon)]
[b]Appearance:[/b] [What does the summon look like, a picture would be best]
[b]Type of Summon:[/b] [How is it summoned? Human sacrifice, blood donation?..the most used will be blood, by far]
[b]Species:[/b] [What Species of Animal]
[b]Elemental Affinity:[/b] [Does your contract have an element?]
[b]History:[/b] [How you met your Summoning]
[b]Link:[/b] [Link to training topic]

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Name: Reign of Chaos
Rank: S
Element: Shadow
Description: The Eredar weaves several handsigns, and calls upon meteors of chaos to rain down upon his opponents. 5 Bright green meteors will appear in the sky and crash down upon a general area of the eredar's selecting (A circle with a radius of maybe 50 meters, the meteors aren't terribly accurate.) However, After the meteors crash down, they will come to life, in the form of one of the most monstrous creatures imaginable. They will become 5 infernals-- shown here http://www.warcraft3.sk/pics/races/undead/units/infernal.jpg. Each of these creatures burns with hellish flames and have immense strength. They will run rampant after enemies for 5 posts before collapsing.

- I'm going to have to deny that. Firstly this isn't World of Warcraft this is Naruto, i know I sound like a spaz but seriously. Second I don't like the idea of a summon... summoning. I mean some summons are able to mustiply but this isn't the case.

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Name: Finger of Death
Rank: S
Element: Shadow
Description: The Eredar's most powerful offensive spell. It will gather a huge amount of chakra on the tip of its finger, then point at the target. An Arcing beam of red energy will shoot from its finger towards the target. The chakra is of such great power that the surroundings are dyed red as the beam shoots out. This technique generally obliterates most targets instantly. It is avoidable/blockable, but very difficult to do so.

-How big is the beam?


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sorry about that! thought i had picture link, added one.

-Removed Reign of Chaos

-Slightly nerfed the weakness.

-Added a replacement tech for reign of chaos.

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Approved

As a S rank summon it needs to earned through RP. When thats complete will be added to your app. If you have already done so post the link and I will add the summon to your app

https://ultimateshinobi.rpg-board.net/the-rain-country-f92/in-search-of-power-t2660.htm i 'earned' it in that link ^_^