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Mr. Kyou

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PostSubject: The People of Destinies   The People of Destinies EmptySat Nov 07, 2009 5:15 pm

Clan Name: "People of Destinies"

Kekkei Genkai:
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Zarashigan literally means the Red Vulture Of The Hell or Demon Birds, it includes the sense of chakra which is used on locating the target and assasinating target in a very extreme speed . They used to be called The Red Sonic for speed/The Assasinators for their fast way of killing. The Clan member's eyes are taken at their birth.When the Zarashigan is fully activated,The Zarashigan will appear on their eye. Based on the Kage's observation, the members of the clan has a short lifespan when they can't defeat the demon inside them.

Like other eye jutsu,the Zarashigan can see chakra. He had the ability to use his vision abilities to penetrate the walls or other solid objects to view a wider world. User's vision is also able to locate and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from long distances, and notice changes in an individual's chakra. It is also able to sense how many of them are present. User's vision has heightened perception and analytical powers, meaning user can comprehend any details he sees to predict the opponent's next move.
Clan Symbol: N/A

Clan History: There's only few details about the clan. It is known that the wielders of Zarashigan are the one's who'll bring destruction to the ninja world. To bring the hell above. The members of the clan are not relatives or in the same family. It only comes to the point that Demon will put their heart into anyone who has a weak spirit and they call it a "Host". They believe that they can possess the host forever when they make a faith battle in the right time. Now, Kyou Uchuzaki was the only host of Zarashigan in the Fire Country. Only the Hokage and few persons knew about Kyou's power and they believe that Kyou can defeat the demon inside him at the right time.

Clan Jutsus:

Name: Zarashigan Ability: Tracking Sense
Rank: N/A
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Description: As one of the Zarashigan's ability, user is able to locate and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from long distances, and notice changes in an individual's chakra. It can also be used to sense how many of them are present.

Name: Zarashigan Ability: X-Ray Vision
Rank: N/A
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Description: By using the Zarashigan sight,user is able to see through walls or any solid objects, the vision can also be extend at least up to 5m not like the Byagukan. This vision can also be used to view at dark places or uncleared zones.

Name: Zarashigan Ability: Predictor
Rank: N/A
Description: When Zarashigan is activated, user's vision has heightened perception and analytical powers, meaning user can comprehend any details he sees to predict the opponent's next move and this ability also is used to track fast moving objects. Using this ability,the person can make mimics to other person's movements and attack. The ability can also be used to make consecutive dodges. It can also be recognized as a "seeing the future" jutsu.

Name: Vampire Reaction Effect
Rank: Basic Ability
Description: When darkness falls, the Demon inside the host awakens. In this case, the host will become more powerful and faster. Creating brute force punches in each attack. In this case,it will ignore the person's side effects like injury, internal organs problems and it can also make a temporary regeneration for the user's cells. But when the light touches the host ,it will make him back to normal condition.

Name: Temporary Darkness Technique
Rank: C
Description: The most basic technique of the clan. User closes his eyes for a moment making a concentration. When user opens his eyes, it will create darkness that will cover an area like a smoke bomb. The technique will remove the victims' tracking abilities for 3 seconds while in the dark. In this situation, the user is the only one who can see in the darkness.

Name: Zarashigan Crow Technique
Rank: C
Description: User must close his eyes for moment to use the jutsu. After the concentration, a dark ghost crow will come out from his left eye. This crow can't hurt or attack people. The crow's vision will be linked to the user's vision meaning that the user can see what the crow see. User can only create 1 crow at a time that will last for a minute.

Name: Zarashigan Ability: Reading Eyes
Rank: N/A
Type: Kekkei Genkai Ability
Description: This ability is capable of inducing a unique brand of hypnosis that involves suggesting actions and thoughts to the opponent through simple eye contact.

Name: Zarashi Karasu Manipulation
Rank: C
Description: The technique requires Zarashigan Karasu to be used. By manipulating the Zarashigan Karasu, user is able to transform crows into solid items like kunai, shurikens, senbons and etc. The user can also create things by using all the crows. This can be used to offensive or defensive purposes. However, the items transform back into crows after using it.

Name: Multiple Zarashigan Crow
Rank: B
Description: This technique is a higher version of Zarashigan Crow Jutsu. User can create crows up to 100 at his will. This crows has the characteristics of a normal Zarashigan crow. But unlike Zarashigan Crow Technique, all the crow will only last for 20 seconds.

Name: The Dark Cloak
Rank: A
Description: A high and advance version of manipulating Zarashigan crows. The roes is able to form into a dark cloak that can expand based on the number of crows used. The cloak recieve from any attack without harming the user. This proves that the cloak is the best ninjutsu defense. After using the cloak, the crows will then scattered.

Name: Darkness World
Rank: S
Description: A very strong forbidden ninjutsu, a very high version of Darkness Technique. User will close his eyes to use Demonic a high amount of chakra. At the moment user will open his eyes. User is able to cast Darkness in a very large area with the same characteristics of Darkness Technique that would last for 30 minutes (5 posts in RP).


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Todd
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PostSubject: Re: The People of Destinies   The People of Destinies EmptySun Nov 08, 2009 6:15 am

Not a bad thought out clan though there are afew issues. In many places you have contradicted yourself and that will need to be fixed.

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The most common weakness of the doujutsu is that user can only use one ability at a time. They must stop using an ability to use the other ability.

Genin- 1 ability at a time
Chuunin-2 abilities at a time
Jounin- 3 abilities at a time
Jounin+- All abilities at a time
You have said that weakness of the doujutsu member is they can only use one ability at a time. But you haven't explain that only occurs for genin. If that is a true limitation of the KKG (and it needs one as it is quite powerful) please make it so for all ranks.

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User's vision is also able to locate and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from long distances, and notice changes in an individual's chakra. It is also able to sense how many of them are present.
Can you give a accurate range of how far it can locate and what level it can sense the chakra network.

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User's vision has heightened perception and analytical powers not unlike the Sharingan, meaning user can comprehend any details he sees to predict the opponent's next move and this ability is used to track fast moving objects but however, even though the user may be able to see an attack or know it is coming, their body may not have time to react. This also allows the user to pick up on subtle details, enabling them to read lip movements or mimic something like pencil movements allowing the user to recognize techniques in a short period.
You have also contradicted yourself here. You say it cannot analyse like the sharingan, but you have said it can pick up on subtle movements allowing you to mimic and read movements. That is analysing in my book. Please remove.
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Mr. Kyou

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PostSubject: Re: The People of Destinies   The People of Destinies EmptyTue Nov 10, 2009 3:15 pm

BUMP !
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PostSubject: Re: The People of Destinies   The People of Destinies EmptyTue Nov 10, 2009 5:51 pm

Mr. Kyou wrote:
... the Zarashigan can... see things through darkness and uncleared places.

I'm pretty sure that a clan has been made that can see in the dark. It's the Kitsuki clan I beleive.

Mr. Kyou wrote:
User's vision has heightened perception and analytical powers, meaning user can comprehend any details he sees to predict the opponent's next move and this ability is used to track fast moving objects but however, even though the user may be able to see an attack or know it is coming, their body may not have time to react. The ability is also used to memorize a certain object in a very short period of time,this can be used to analyze a person's movement,words,attitude and etc.

This entire segment is basically the ability of the Sharingan.

Mr. Kyou wrote:
User's vision is also able to locate and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from long distances, and notice changes in an individual's chakra below the distance of 5 km. It is also able to sense how many of them are present.

Byakugan's ability.

Ergo, your Doujutsu is a combination of the Byakugan and the Sharingan, which isn't allowed, so edit it to something different.
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Mr. Kyou

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PostSubject: Re: The People of Destinies   The People of Destinies EmptyWed Nov 11, 2009 2:41 pm

Ohh .. I think I shall tell it ..

That's Ranmaru's Bloodline not Sharingan ..

And That's not Byagukan .. its from Karin ..

I think Todd will the one who'll check it ..
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PostSubject: Re: The People of Destinies   The People of Destinies EmptyWed Nov 11, 2009 6:25 pm

Mr. Kyou wrote:
That's Ranmaru's Bloodline not Sharingan ..
Leafninja.com wrote:
Ranmaru was an orphan growing up in the Water Country. What happened to the rest of his clan is unclear, but because he grew up in the Water Country, it is possible they were killed when the populace turned against the bloodlines. His traits include penetrating vision and a unique chakra particle extension. He had the ability to use his vision abilities to penetrate the walls of his small shack and view the outside world. This ability does not appear to have the range of the Byakugan, but it actually has the ability to counter that Hyuuga trait.

Ranmaru's vision grants him a greater ability to see ones' life force, even beyond the Hyuuga's internal chakra perception. This allowed him to determine that Raiga, who had recently fallen in battle, was still alive. This was something Neji's Byakugan could not sense.

Ranmaru could also extend his chakra out in red dust-like particles to create phantoms and hide his own chakra presence. The phantoms appeared to have functionality only when used in conjunction with Raiga's Kirigakure technique. The spectral images could be granted life-like chakra flows to confuse both normal ninja and Neji's Byakugan.
Ranmaru's Doujutsu is different from the Sharingan. It's slightly similar to the Bykugan because it has X-ray vision, but he can only see through solid objects and can't see chakra, rather he sees life-lines or whatever.

Mr. Kyou wrote:
And That's not Byagukan .. its from Karin ..
Mr. Kyou wrote:
User's vision is also able to locate and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from long distances, and notice changes in an individual's chakra below the distance of 5 km. It is also able to sense how many of them are present.
Karin's ability was not a Doujutsu. What you have written above is the Byakugan's ability. It can see the flow of chakra, can therefore detect changes in its flow, and can see long distances.

Mr. Kyou wrote:
I think Todd will the one who'll check it ..
I find that offensive. It sounds to me like you think I don't know what I'm doing. You ask for it, you get it.
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PostSubject: Re: The People of Destinies   The People of Destinies EmptyThu Nov 12, 2009 7:52 am

Kyou, you say Todd's is better is insubordination, first and final warning, next time you will be in trouble.
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Mr. Kyou

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PostSubject: Re: The People of Destinies   The People of Destinies EmptyThu Nov 12, 2009 12:50 pm

Oopss .. Sorry .. I will not do it again ..

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PostSubject: Re: The People of Destinies   The People of Destinies EmptyThu Nov 12, 2009 1:51 pm

DONE ..
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