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| Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} | |
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Paradox
| Subject: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:04 pm | |
| Yoshisado was packing his things, ready to leave the village, when he seriously thought about what he was doing. He was leaving the village for a number of reasons, the main one being that he believed that he could learn to defend people more if he was surrounded by danger on a daily basis. It was a selfish reason along with a selfless one, trying to become stronger to defend his village. With the recent attack on the village, and how the enemy wasn't truly stopped, got Yoshisado depressed about the defense capabilities of the village's members. Yoshisado thought that if the missing ninjas and criminals were so powerful, then maybe he could leave and get in on some of that power. That made up his mind for good, and he decided to go at the dead of night. He then wrapped himself in his special cloth that contoured to his body, which made him appear all black, shielding him from most view because of how dark it was outside. He rushed out of his house towards the village entrance, which was slightly more guarded than usual due to the recent attack. There was about three chuunin guards at the gate, just standing there, looking around. Yoshisado was about one hundred feet from the entrance, when he formed some handsigns, spewing a large amount of thick smoke from his mouth, blanketing the area. He then ran towards the gate, but then stuck to the left side of it, forming some more handsigns, and then melded into the shadow of the wall. He stuck to the shadow, and then traveled in it till he reached the other side of the wall, away from the chuunin's sight range. He then hopped onto a shadow of a scorpion until it reached a small thicket of cacti about one hundred feet away from the gate. He then stayed in the shadow, waiting until he was sure he was safe and no one followed him. - Spoiler:
Name: Invisibility Cloak Rank: D Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is an improved version of the magic cloak of invisibility technique. The user will use a special cloth that will contour to their bodies, and is made to match the surroundings. This cloth has the right proportions and perspective from all sides, giving a better advantage to not be seen.
Name: Smokescreen Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is an improved version of usual smokescreens caused by some bombs. The user will exhale, causing a large amount of thick smoke equal to the hidden mist jutsu to pour from their mouths. The smoke is very thick, and the people must rely on other senses to see through it.
Name: Shadow Walking Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu allows the Kyoukan members to sneak into places without detection. The Kyoukan member will meld into a shadow, such as that of a tree. The user can the "jump" to another shadow, if the two shadows make direct contact. If there is no direct contact with another shadow, then the user will be stuck in the shadow until there is direct contact, or the jutsu ends.
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| | | Brock Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Mon Dec 07, 2009 2:17 pm | |
| Kogan traveled quickly, he was in the centre of the village moments ago, now running towards the gates. He ran past the chuunin guards quickly, they both seemed a bit startled from the havoc that had occurred. "It's being handled, just do your fucking job!" he yelled. Everybody needed to stay headstrong in moments like this. He continued on out the village, almost one hundred and fifty metres out he spotted a boy who seemed to be 'escaping' the village. "You! The village is being attacked and you try to take this as a chance to escape. I'm very limited on time, I'm about to pursue the fella that just caused this fucking carnage. You are now in my way!" Kogan said, with extreme rage. What was wrong with these young shinobi thinking they truly were smart enough to escape like this. What did they expect to do when they got out there, they wouldn't have enough money to buy them a bowl of noodles and if they did have enough money, they were quick targets for a mugging, which always occurred out here, Kogan had seen it happen when he was out on missions numerous times. He was cut, the longer he spent with this boy was time the fucker who caused them mess was escaping, he knew he would have to make quick work of him. "I cannot say I'm not going to enjoy this." Kogan said as he charged wind chakra into his arm. He quickly used the Body Flicker Technique to appear behind the user, the wind blade was ready. Kogan let out a loud battle cry, flinging the wind blade towards the genin. Kogan appeared behind the boy before he could even realize, eliminating every chance he had to dodge, he wasn't even aware Kogan was there until Kogan released his battle cry, but it was too late, not even a fellow jounin could dodge an attack with this level of surprise the genin was done for. Jutsu Used:- Spoiler:
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu Rank: D-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
Name: Kaze no Yaiba [Wind Release: Wind Blade] Rank: A Element: Wind Description: A ninjutsu technique where the ninja creates a whirlwind blade around their arm with chakra. The blade slices through almost anything and cannot be easily blocked, as it is said that "nothing can stop a blade of wind." This would mean that even weapon labeled as indestructible or unbreakable would easily be sliced through by this move. This technique does not require hand seals.
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| | | Jiro Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:09 am | |
| OOC: I was having a look over the thread and Im concerned how you saw Paradox's charry seeing he was hidding in shadows using a technique yet your character spots him without the aid of any chakra or specialist sensory techniques. Relying on regular eye sight i struggle to see how you even noticed him let alone launching a attack | |
| | | Robin S ranked Missing-Ninja
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Tue Dec 08, 2009 9:18 am | |
| OOC: Basically, Your post in void and nulled because it is extremely hard to track him. Therefore, Paradox escaped. | |
| | | Paradox
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Tue Dec 08, 2009 9:21 am | |
| Woot, im the first to ever escape suna with a plan that i said would work, i think. | |
| | | Blaize Sand Genin
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Tue Dec 08, 2009 10:47 am | |
| OOC: DARN IT PARADOX UR LUCKY I CAN'T POST IM IN ANOTHER TOPIC! | |
| | | Nøctis Sand Genin
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Tue Dec 08, 2009 12:04 pm | |
| Noctis had been on high alert ever since the attack he continued his activities as he normally did with Repede not far away. He was making his runs when Repede stopped and growled loudly. Noctis stopped and looked back at his comrade. "Whats wrong" he asked. Repede growled again then pointed. Noctis didnt see anything out of the ordinary, but Repede obviously did. Noctis nodded to Repede and and the dog bounded after what caught his attention. Noctis knew that what ever it was couldnt hide from Repede and when Repede found it Noctis would take it down. He unsheath his sword and paid close attention to Repede movements the dog knew Noctis could reach the location in seconds so therefore manuevered in a way that it wouldnt get in Noctis's way.
Noctis weaved a hand sign and prepared to move, he wouldnt let another intruder get away from the village so easily, he failed in saving his home once he would die before he let it happen again.
(short but sweet) | |
| | | Adam The Fourth Hokage
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Tue Dec 08, 2009 12:28 pm | |
| OOC: Hold up Hugh, if I'm correct, which I believe I am, Paradox stated he stopped the technique when he was one hundred metres out. - Quote :
- He then hopped onto a shadow of a scorpion until it reached a small thicket of cacti about one hundred feet away from the gate. He then stayed in the shadow, waiting until he was sure he was safe and no one followed him.
Brock stated he saw the boy one hundred and fifty metres, meaning the technique would have stopped fifty metres ago.
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- He continued on out the village, almost one hundred and fifty metres out he spotted a boy who seemed to be 'escaping' the village.
Therefore I find Brock's post completely plausible. | |
| | | Paradox
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Tue Dec 08, 2009 12:41 pm | |
| ((OOC:Umm Adam, did you miss the whole "he stayed in the shadow" part? I'm just wondering, cause if his post is plausible, then my char is dead, so what happens to dead chars. One of the mods/admins delete them right? And i get to make another genin?)) | |
| | | Adam The Fourth Hokage
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Tue Dec 08, 2009 12:53 pm | |
| OOC: Do you take me of that much of an idiot, clearly your post states you stayed in the shadows for one hundred metres to ensure nobody followed you. This what mean after one hundred metres you stopped the technique, considering he stated he saw you one hundred and FIFTY metres out, it is plausible for him to see you. | |
| | | Paradox
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Tue Dec 08, 2009 1:04 pm | |
| ((OOC: so, im dead anyways. So now what?)) | |
| | | Adam The Fourth Hokage
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Tue Dec 08, 2009 1:46 pm | |
| [i]OOC: Your not dead, because you needa reply to his post, I suggest ignoring Noctis, because Brock got there first. | |
| | | Leah Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Wed Dec 09, 2009 7:22 am | |
| ((OOC: First of all, I suggest you simply start a new topic with the same beginning, because now this topic is crowded with OOC posts. Also, may I join?)) | |
| | | Paradox
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:32 am | |
| ((OOC: I guess I'll just respond here cause it would be useless for like three jounins to come after me when it just takes one to get me.))
Yoshisado had figured it was safe, and came out, only to run into a jounin from the village. The jounin was pretty far away, but he was fast, and spoke to Yoshisado in a very harsh tone. Yoshisado was about to apologize and surrender, when the jounin suddenly appeared behind him, and then cut his back with a wind sword. Yoshisado lost the feeling in his back and legs, his spinal cord and other organs around the area were severely damaged. "He, oh well, it was a good plan, too bad I couldn't protect anyone." Yoshisado thought, laughing. He could no longer speak, and simply wrote down something on e piece of paper, trying to hand it to the jounin. He fell before he handed it to him fully, his eyes growing dull. With tears on his face, he fell to the floor face up, dead, crystal blue eyes still open.
On the paper read, "I only wanted to help peo..." The rest was smudged. | |
| | | Brock Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Leaving the Village {P, unless trying to stop} Wed Dec 09, 2009 12:54 pm | |
| Kogan's attack hit, he sliced the boy to such a point he was almost in two pieces. A delightful smile came across the evil jounin's face. But he thought to himself, was he truly evil. He had just saved the village from an ultimate threat and then handled a young boy who was escaping the village, now he was hunting the threat that got away. Some might have considered him a hero, but truth was, he was only feeding his appetite to bring pain to others. When it came down to his home in Sunagakure though, he had to protect it. He had finally found a worthy opponent, he wouldn't let him get away so easily. Kogan looked down at the boy who lied on the sandy field attempting to speak, saying he was only trying to protect people. "Protect people?! If you have any friends or family in that village there, they are either dead or in fucking distress wondering if you are dead and where are you? Escaping the fucking village!" Kogan yelled, pointing at the gates of the Sand village as he mentioned it. The boy handed the Kogan a half written note, he couldn't write anybody as his bleeding was getting severe. Kogan snatched the note from the boy's cold shaking hand as the boy's eyes lost signs of life and the boy's hand dropped, he was dead. Kogan read the note.
It read: "I only wanted to help peo..." The rest was smudged with the boy's blood.
Kogan frowned heavily, scrunching up the paper and flicking it at the boy's dead body in disrespect. "Good Riddance, you pathetic boy." Kogan said, kicking some sand at the boy's dead body. Kogan had more important things to attend to, know he had to hunt down the man who attacked Sunagakure. Kogan began running further from the village, he would return soon enough, he knew he wouldn't take long to crush this man. Hopefully he would see the scout girl who ran off ahead of him soon enough. | |
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