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Aries Leaf Genin
| Subject: Xylo puppets Thu Jun 25, 2009 10:39 pm | |
| Name: Gai
History:
Description: This puppet, was modeled after a large ninja. After his sensei finished training his this was to gave to him as a reward. It is completly fire proof and is made of pure metal covered wit fire proof plastic. He found spar time, and soon as he was about to retired he trained Xylo. Wears a Black dressfit, under it's black cloak with a hood. He ceated this puppet special so that all joints were connected by his chakra.
Abilities:fighting
Weapons: The core: Magnets mixed with chakra that circulate in her system that retracts and attracts metal
The Outer Body: Can extract small spikes from within it's body. (6in Can be projectile)
Back: A windmill shuriken on her back which he can throw
Mouth: (20 )magnetized kunai with multiple exploding tags glued on them can be fired out (two at a time)
Hands:Shoots out a stick goo that stops an opponent in place in stepped in. 1 free post.
Arms: Can extend it's arms out 10 extra meters. Reason-(This puppet joints are all connected by chakra. this enables her to extand bady parts.) __________________________________________________________________________________
Name: Pisces
History: ( In the Description)
Description: This is a very large puppet with more armor than a samurai army.. He has a long face and a sharp pointy nose. His ears are also pointy and he has three eyes. Being 6ft tall he wears a white robe similar that of the five genin set, with a long hood reaching all the way down his back. He is naked underneath and wears wrappings on his feet.
Abbilities: trapping
Weapons: Left Elbow: Contains a flamethrower that spews out 5 meters.
Right Elbow: Can release an invisible and sensceless gaseous fume from her body that is highly flammable
Mouth: A vacuum that can suck particles from the air and absorb into his body
Full Body: Blows out a dark black cloud of smoke use for attempts to escape or catch an enemy off guard with an supprise attack.
Hands: Contains 8 poisonus bombs(4 in each forearm)wrapped in explosive notes which can be tossed at the enemy _________________________________________________________________________________
Last edited by Xylo on Sat Jun 27, 2009 12:36 pm; edited 3 times in total | |
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Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Fri Jun 26, 2009 12:56 am | |
| One thing...I think that 10 extra metres is too long for a puppet's body part to extend...If it was the arm, okay...But the limbs..hmm
The rest seems good...just check the final part. | |
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Aries Leaf Genin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Fri Jun 26, 2009 1:47 am | |
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Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Fri Jun 26, 2009 2:06 am | |
| Why the hell is this in the clan section? | |
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Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Fri Jun 26, 2009 2:26 am | |
| I moved it to the puppet creation...I didnt noticed that since it was a minor thing...
Seems fine...Approved..
PS: I changed your "limbs" to arms... | |
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Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Fri Jun 26, 2009 3:01 am | |
| Wait wait. Xylo You're not a puppetry specialist.
You may have puppetry, but You'll have to remove all Weapon based techniques. | |
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Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Fri Jun 26, 2009 3:06 am | |
| I thought you had puppetry...
Why do you want some puppets if you dont know how to master that skill...
When you change it, say so... | |
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Aries Leaf Genin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Fri Jun 26, 2009 8:01 am | |
| i don't have techniques
i'm a weapon specialist why can't i have weapons
at first u said that i couldn't have jutsu (and i don't have jutsu) | |
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Robin S ranked Missing-Ninja
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Fri Jun 26, 2009 3:07 pm | |
| ...Xylo.
You need the puppet trait or puppet mastery to be able to possess; let alone control puppets. Another factor is, your a genin and therefore; you are not experienced enough to have super awesome puppets [Kankuro is a canon-char exception]. So lessen the effects/weapons of each puppet and alter your character so you have puppet knowledge.
Or so god help us. | |
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Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 3:46 am | |
| How could you control the puppets without the puppet jutsu Xylo >.> | |
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Aries Leaf Genin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 4:48 am | |
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Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 5:06 am | |
| >.> I said you can. but you must remove all weaponry jutsu from your character . AFter all. WEaponry and puppetry are two seperate things. | |
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Aries Leaf Genin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 6:12 am | |
| no it's not
no really
puppets are just advanced weapons
and why would i want puppet that don't have any weapons thats stupid
i master at weapons so why can't i have any | |
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Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 6:34 am | |
| You can still have weapons in the puppets. But you can't have weapon techniques. >.> It wouldn't be fair. It would be the same thingg as you having 3 specialites. And you're only a genin... | |
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Aries Leaf Genin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 6:43 am | |
| ok but i'm talking to adam right now to see if he can change weaponary to puppetry on my app
but thats all i have is weapons in my puppet | |
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Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 6:46 am | |
| Alright. so you don't have any weaponry techniques then. no sealed weapons or anything? | |
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Aries Leaf Genin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 6:47 am | |
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Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 6:57 am | |
| okay . Ask Adam if it's alright that I change it, and I will. | |
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Absolute Greed. Leaf Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 9:03 am | |
| Woh woh woh. 20 meter flame throwers? Change it to 5.
10 meters? THat's still a lot for chakra extension that's over 30 feet. Change this to 4 meters. | |
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Aries Leaf Genin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:54 am | |
| the reason it's like that is because these puppets will never grow as i grow through the ranks
i figured that it should start this way because it will never get any better
I changed it though | |
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Yondaime Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Xylo puppets Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:44 pm | |
| i reviewed everything and since you are now a puppeteer these puppets are fine to be used...
So one thing you have to remember you cant use the puppets at the same time since you are not a chuunin yet and your rank as genin is too weak to have the ability to make more chakra strings to control the other one...
Approved^^ | |
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