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PostSubject: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptyThu Jun 25, 2009 10:39 pm

Name: Gai

History:

Description: This puppet, was modeled after a large ninja. After his sensei finished training his this was to gave to him as a reward. It is completly fire proof and is made of pure metal covered wit fire proof plastic. He found spar time, and soon as he was about to retired he trained Xylo. Wears a Black dressfit, under it's black cloak with a hood. He ceated this puppet special so that all joints were connected by his chakra.

Abilities:fighting

Weapons:
The core: Magnets mixed with chakra that circulate in her system that retracts and attracts metal

The Outer Body: Can extract small spikes from within it's body. (6in Can be projectile)

Back: A windmill shuriken on her back which he can throw

Mouth: (20 )magnetized kunai with multiple exploding tags glued on them can be fired out (two at a time)

Hands:Shoots out a stick goo that stops an opponent in place in stepped in. 1 free post.

Arms: Can extend it's arms out 10 extra meters. Reason-(This puppet joints are all connected by chakra. this enables her to extand bady parts.) __________________________________________________________________________________

Name: Pisces

History: ( In the Description)

Description: This is a very large puppet with more armor than a samurai army.. He has a long face and a sharp pointy nose. His ears are also pointy and he has three eyes. Being 6ft tall he wears a white robe similar that of the five genin set, with a long hood reaching all the way down his back. He is naked underneath and wears wrappings on his feet.

Abbilities: trapping

Weapons:
Left Elbow: Contains a flamethrower that spews out 5 meters.

Right Elbow: Can release an invisible and sensceless gaseous fume from her body that is highly flammable

Mouth: A vacuum that can suck particles from the air and absorb into his body

Full Body: Blows out a dark black cloud of smoke use for attempts to escape or catch an enemy off guard with an supprise attack.

Hands: Contains 8 poisonus bombs(4 in each forearm)wrapped in explosive notes which can be tossed at the enemy
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Last edited by Xylo on Sat Jun 27, 2009 12:36 pm; edited 3 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptyFri Jun 26, 2009 12:56 am

One thing...I think that 10 extra metres is too long for a puppet's body part to extend...If it was the arm, okay...But the limbs..hmm

The rest seems good...just check the final part.
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptyFri Jun 26, 2009 1:47 am

changed
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Absolute Greed.
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptyFri Jun 26, 2009 2:06 am

Why the hell is this in the clan section?
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptyFri Jun 26, 2009 2:26 am

I moved it to the puppet creation...I didnt noticed that since it was a minor thing...

Seems fine...Approved..

PS: I changed your "limbs" to arms...
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptyFri Jun 26, 2009 3:01 am

Wait wait. Xylo
You're not a puppetry specialist.

You may have puppetry, but You'll have to remove all Weapon based techniques.
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptyFri Jun 26, 2009 3:06 am

I thought you had puppetry...

Why do you want some puppets if you dont know how to master that skill...

When you change it, say so...
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptyFri Jun 26, 2009 8:01 am

i don't have techniques

i'm a weapon specialist why can't i have weapons

at first u said that i couldn't have jutsu (and i don't have jutsu)
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptyFri Jun 26, 2009 3:07 pm

...Xylo.

You need the puppet trait or puppet mastery to be able to possess; let alone control puppets. Another factor is, your a genin and therefore; you are not experienced enough to have super awesome puppets [Kankuro is a canon-char exception]. So lessen the effects/weapons of each puppet and alter your character so you have puppet knowledge.

Or so god help us.
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 3:46 am

How could you control the puppets without the puppet jutsu Xylo >.>
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 4:48 am

I trained for the technique NEAR

Adam told me i could and you know of this

therefore i can use puppetry

here is the link

https://ultimateshinobi.rpg-board.net/training-area-f136/xylo-training-puppetry-t1337.htm#16088
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 5:06 am

>.> I said you can. but you must remove all weaponry jutsu from your character . AFter all. WEaponry and puppetry are two seperate things.
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 6:12 am

no it's not

no really

puppets are just advanced weapons

and why would i want puppet that don't have any weapons thats stupid

i master at weapons so why can't i have any
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 6:34 am

You can still have weapons in the puppets. But you can't have weapon techniques. >.> It wouldn't be fair. It would be the same thingg as you having 3 specialites. And you're only a genin...
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 6:43 am

ok but i'm talking to adam right now to see if he can change weaponary to puppetry on my app

but thats all i have is weapons in my puppet
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 6:46 am

Alright. so you don't have any weaponry techniques then. no sealed weapons or anything?
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 6:47 am

not any
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 6:57 am

okay . Ask Adam if it's alright that I change it, and I will.
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 9:03 am

Woh woh woh. 20 meter flame throwers? Change it to 5.

10 meters? THat's still a lot for chakra extension that's over 30 feet. Change this to 4 meters.
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 10:54 am

the reason it's like that is because these puppets will never grow as i grow through the ranks

i figured that it should start this way because it will never get any better

I changed it though
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PostSubject: Re: Xylo puppets   Xylo puppets EmptySat Jun 27, 2009 10:44 pm

i reviewed everything and since you are now a puppeteer these puppets are fine to be used...

So one thing you have to remember you cant use the puppets at the same time since you are not a chuunin yet and your rank as genin is too weak to have the ability to make more chakra strings to control the other one...

Approved^^
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