Dagara's Puppets

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Puppet's Name: Itami
Appearance: Please see Physical Description in the previous post
Requirements: Choice human bone reinforced with chakra
Puppet's Rank: S
Special Skill: Made of numerous small parts that enable quick change in appearance with a few edits here and their. Itami can be refitted to resemble nearly any human female of slim figure within 5 posts of focused attention.
Weapons: Itami possesses the below weapons:

Head:

Tongue: Itami's tongue is made of a thick red coil that ends in a poisoned tip. The poisonous film resembles human saliva, giving the illusion of a human tongue. The tongue can extend to nearly 5ft and once it strikes a target, drawing blood, the poison enters the blood stream and causes the afflicted to slowly lose control of the fingers.

This attack is usually performed through a kiss. 3 posts after being afflicted, the target loses the ability to manipulate their fingers, making hand signs nearly impossible. The first post after being infected, the target feels a rush of heat in their blood, but this is often mistaken for infatuation.

Eyes: Itami's eyes are often used to direct Ninjustu through by Dagara from within, making them a weapon all their own. Itami's eyes are made of chakra conductive glass to enable this to function properly, and the lack of visible hand signs can take an opponent by surprise.

Neck:

Throat: Itami's throat is lined with a powdered poison that can be expelled out of the mouth to make a poisonous fog that covers a 30ft area upon being expelled and extends 5ft per post afterwards. The poison attacks the nervous system, causing eye sight to blur the 1st post of being within it. 2 more posts after that, the target begins to see 3 copies of any object, even if they exit the poison (due to it having entered their bodies, though it can be removed by a medic.)

This causes all aim to become mere guess work, effectively rendering most Taijutsu or weapons highly ineffective due to lack of precise aim.

Chest:

Breasts: Itami's breasts, usually covered up by clothing, actually bear no resemblance to a normal humans. A large fanged mouth occupies the entire space and can be closed to appear solid, but once in close range can be used to inflict heavy bites and tear flesh.

Stomach: Dagara resides within here in the stomach cavity of Itami. The insides are reinforced with steel and various threads extend from both of Dagara's hands when using the puppet casually. When in combat, however, he uses only one hand to control Dagara since he no longer needs the precise control necessarily to give her a human 'flow'. His other hand is used to send chakra strings out of Itami's left hand to control his other puppets.

All food is sent down the throat and down a small tube into Dagara's lap, so that he can resume normal consumption without attracting attention. The insides of Itami are sound proof, causing Dagara to adopt the habit of talking to himself within Itami.

Arms:

Right Arm: Itami's right arm is able to break open, revealing the inside of the elbow. Within this elbow cavity resides a small folded up machine resembling an umbrella that can extend outwards from the elbow and shield from attacks. The umbrella shape leaves space for the upper arm to be turned at a 90 degree angle and not have it interfere.

This umbrella is made of sheet steel and chakra, enabling it to absorb many different kinds of attack (up to A Rank unless the attack is specially designed to pierce and is B Rank), though Fire attacks of B or higher rank can melt it away in 2 posts. The umbrella, merely for cosmetic appeal, is painted with 5 smiling skulls.

Right Hand: Itami's right hand is able to fire off each of its fingers which, upon exiting the hand, extend out to form a small grappling hook attached by a coiled metal wire. The hooks are able to stick into most non-slick surfaces and can also wrap around an opponent and constrict them. Once hooked, they are very difficult to remove, and the only known method is to push the weapon through the stuck area (such as an arm) and then pull it back through and out.

Most ninja, however, are unaware of this and will simply tug endlessly and accomplish nothing. The ones who do know this are often fishermen aware of the concept of a fish hook, but even those ninja are reluctant to accept the pain of the only viable means of removing the weapon short of cutting the metal wire.

Left Arm: Itami's left arm's top arm covering can be slid back to reveal numerous piles of exploding tags . The tags can be removed individually or in clumps and used as normal tags. Dagara is found of taking out a handful, lighting them, and then throwing them at an opponent. Though the attack is nearly impossible to dodge, it is very wasteful of tags and can only be performed twice before the tags run out.

Left Hand: Itami's left hand is made of highly conductive chakra enhanced bone to enable it to channel chakra strings and manipulate other puppets, giving the illusion that Itami is the actual puppeteer. Each of the 5 strings can manipulate a single puppet.

Puppet's Jutsu: None

Puppet's Name: Razen

Appearance: A large white crocodile which resembles an albino crocodile very closely, were it not only the skeletal remains of its former self. Razen has two gold flames where its eyes used to be, merely for visual preference and fear, and other than that simply resembles an oversized crocodile skeleton.

Requirements: Crocodile bones and human hands bones.

Puppet's Rank: B

Special Skill: Razen's body is specially constructed to be incredibly sturdy and serves as a highly defensive puppet that Dagar often keeps around him to guard against attacks. Razen's bones are hardened through the use of choice crocodile bones, chakra, and hardened stone within the bone cavities.

Weapons: Head:

Mouth: Razen's mouth is lined with hundreds of sharp teeth who at first sight appear to be entirely normal teeth, but in fact are specially designed weapons. If Razen's teeth are knocked from his mouth, or he voluntarily spits them out, and they land within a surface, their effect activates.

Each tooth unfolds from its compact tooth shape and rises from the material it fell in in the form of a skeletal hand. The hands reach from the earth and try to grab the target's ankles, and the hands can also disrupt certain jutsu by grabbing objects such as wires.

Each hand is made of chakra infused bone, making them fairly sturdy, but they can be broken by many forms of Taijutsu or direct force from another jutsu type. Prying the hands off, however, is more difficult than breaking the hand but still very possible.

Tail: Razen's tail is able to flex and extend to 15ft in length and can deal powerful blows with its girth. Though Razen's tail does not contain any poisons as is the norm for puppets, this is compensated for by sheer force.

Razen's tail can easily go through a tree trunk, and Razen is often used to grab heavy boulders and throw them at opponents or to shatter boulders to harm opponents behind them.

Puppet's Jutsu: N/A




Puppet's Name: Horudo

Appearance: An enormous skeletal bird with four wings that each are filled with numerous human skulls strung along chakra strings, rather than feathers. Each skull is constantly open, as if screaming, and a chilling whistle can be heard as Horudo flies overhead if the mouths remain open, though they can be easily closed.

Requirements: Eagle bones and human bones.

Puppet's Rank: A

Special Skill: Horudo is able to fly up to 100ft in the air, though Dagara obviously cannot go that high due to thinness of oxygen. Dagar is capable of riding on Horudo and often uses the bird for transportation. Horudo can fly up to 60MPH.

Weapons:

Head:

Beak: Horudo's beak can spit out a toxic fume that directly attack the bodies vital organs, slowing down the hearts beating, filling up the lungs and preventing adequate breathing, and eventually causing the lungs to completely halt, suffocating anyone who inhales these fumes within 3 posts after inhaling.

Chest: Horudo's chest cavity is large enough to house 3 adult humans of average size. This is used to take hostages or to transport those who buy Dagar's services, which is incredibly rare.

Arms:

Wings: Horudo's wings have numerous strings with human skulls strung along that loosely resemble feathers. though anyone can note that they are not feathers. Each skull has a paper bomb attached to its inside and the skulls can be released to fall on opponents.

Unlike regular paper bombs, these are already pre-lit and kept from exploding by the chakra strings that Peirce through each skull and tag. A few seconds after being released, the bomb explodes due to no force holding it back any longer, causing numerous bits of sharp skull shrapnel to pierce opponents.


Puppet's Jutsu: N/A

Puppet's Name: Daisame

Appearance: Daisame resembles an enormous skeletal shark, but whose fins are filled with artificial sails rather than skin or tissue. Daisame's great jaw contains hundreds of teeth arranged in 3 rows, useful for increasing grip and tearing power. Daisame is streamlined and his bones are oiled for increasing speed.

Requirements: Shark bones

Puppet's Rank: B

Special Skill: Daisame's body is coated in specially prepared diamond strands that are used to slice through the earth as if it were water, enabling Daisame to easily swim through both water and land. Daisame specializes in swimming through sand, since it is more porous than earth, but can swim through stone or earth at half of his normal speed.

Weapons:

Body: Daisame's bones are covered with specially prepared diamond strands that enable him to slice through most substances, including opponents if they stand in the way. Due to the bulk of the shark, he is easily dodged, and rarely slices people with his body.

Head: Daisame, imitating a real sharks mental compass, is able to track down ninja within his natural territory of sand. The pressure caused by a ninja stepping on sand causes a small energy to radiate from the pressure point, caused by the gravitational pull from the small indent where the foot resides, and Daisame can pick up on that.

These senses are sent via Chakra String to Dagar who interprets the signals to locate the ninja and then attack. Daisame can sense stationary ninja, as well as mobile ones, though using techniques to send chakra to the feet disrupts the vibrations, but only Suna ninja do this due to fear of quicksand.

Puppet's Jutsu: N/A



Puppet's Name: Camura

Appearance: A large assembly of human bones which strikes fear in the majority of ninja upon sight. Eight arm bones are used as the spider-like creatures legs, six human skulls make up its body, five of which are used as attaching joints for the legs. Spreading out from the creature's body are numerous ribs that form of a defensive sphere of sharp bones.

The sixth skull has three holes bored in the middle of the forehead to closer resemble spider eyes. The jaw is split in half so that it hands loosely and a human arm dangles from the creature's mouth like a tongue.

Requirements: Numerous human skeletons

Puppet's Rank: A

Special Skill: Camura has no distinctive abilities beyond normal weaponry, though Camura is designed to strike fear into ninja with ease. Ninja who do not have relations to the undead or other demonic creatures are paralyzed with fear for 1 post after the puppet is brought out.

Weapons:

Head:

Tongue: Camura's 'tongue' is able to be shot within the earth, an opponent, or any other object, and sense out choice bones for Dagara's use. In villages, bones are rarely found randomly, but in the field a slight chance exists that if a person died there, bones may be located for use.

If used to enter another ninja, the hand pierces through the chest and then analyzes the body. If the bones are not sufficient for Dagara's use, the hand is removed. If the bones, or even a single bone, appeals to him, the hand worms its way through the body and attempts to extract the bone 1 post after entering.

Eyes: Camura's eyes, though hollow, are actually able to record sights when filled with a thin chakra film that causes them to glow red. In addition, Camura is able to fire out chakra strings from his eyes if Dagara locates suitable bones for a new puppet. Individual bones can be manipulated, but they rarely are.

More often, Dagara uses Camura to control the skeletal body of a fallen enemy or a recently slain ninja. Not to be confused with Human Puppetry, Dagara has no access to blood line abilities or jutsu of the target.

Arms: Camura's arms are able to detach from its body and levitate in the air before the arms split open to reveal four human hands arranged in symmetrical pattern with a large blade in the middle. Each of the arms flies towards an opponent and can redirect its course if Dagara knows the target moved, making it incredibly difficult to dodge.

Once the blade pierces, the hands reach out and dig into the flesh. 1 post after being struck, the hands push the blade in further, causing incredible pain that prevents the target from running or using Taijutsu without moving the blade and damaging the body further. Removing the blade is difficult due to the hands holding it in place.

When Camura's legs are removed, Camura uses the skulls that compromise its body to drag itself along the ground, or uses chakra strings to attach to an object like a grappling hook and move that way.

Puppet's Jutsu: N/A

Puppet's Name: Jinmenju

Appearance: A truly powerful puppet that defies the norm for most puppets, which amuses Dagara greatly. Jinmenju is a great tree nearly 25ft tall with great branches that, rather than fruit, has hundreds of human skulls (after using Great White Graveyard Jutsu, before hand the branches are bare.) Jinmenju has a large toothed mouth in its trunk that is usually closed.

Unlike Dagara's other puppets, this one is actually made of a wooden exterior with a skeletal structure within it that forms the branches and skulls.

Requirements: An aged Iron Wood tree and numerous human skeletons.

Puppet's Rank: S

Special Skill: Jinmenju is the only puppet that does not have any weapons installed inside of it. Instead, Jinmenju has access to the Great White Graveyard Jutsu and the Great Black Graveyard Jutsu, detailed below.

Jinmenju is able to smack opponents with his heavy wooden branches and send them flying with little force. Due to the wood he is constructed from, even a chainsaw would go dull before breaking his wooden exterior, let alone his bones.

Weapons: N/A

Puppet's Jutsu:

Name: Great White Graveyard
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: Using his KKG and his control over Earth Style, Dagara assembles numerous earthen skeletons (fossilized bones are used to make this jutsu functional with Dagara's KKG) from the earth that are created within Jinmenju's trunk, unseen by the enemy. Each created skeleton causes a small white skull to sprout from Jinmenju.

At-will, Jinmenju may release a skull which slides out of the flower it grew from and appears as an earthen skeletal puppet. The puppet is uncontrolled until Dagara either inserts strings or uses Camura to control it. The skeletal is an average humans and is only as tough as hardened stone.

This jutsu can create 5 puppets in this manner, per post, during which Dagara remains stationary. If he is interrupted, the jutsu does not continue and whatever puppets that would've been gained that post are not.

Name: Great Black Graveyard
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: After using Great White Graveyard, Dagara may use this jutsu. Every created skeleton from Great White Graveyard halts whatever it is doing and marches inside of Jinmenju's mouth. Jinmenju then, 1 post later, spits out an epicly sized skeleton around the same size as Jinmenju.

This creature is known as Gashudokuro and it takes the place of Dagara's summoning technique. Gashudokuro is able to level forests with a swing of his hand, but rarely does so, preferring to instead feast on human flesh. Gashudokuro is NOT a puppet, and does not even obey Dagara at times when commanded to do something that does have an immediate pay off of human flesh.

Gashadokuro is incredibly strong and sturdy, but has one weakness, he is incredibly slow in movement and before an opponent is about to struck by him, a ringing is heard in the ears. Gasha, as he is commonly called by Dagara, considers this giving the opponent a fighting chance, Dagara considers it incredibly annoying.

OOC~ I'm bumping this in the hope someone will check it for you, cos I gotta run but if they haven't by tomorrow then I'll read over it and moderate it for you.

These seem okay, But I'd like a second opinion just to be sure that its not to overpowered.

Mostly alright but just a couple of small things:

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This umbrella is made of sheet steel and chakra, enabling it to absorb many different kinds of attack, though Fire attacks can melt it away in 2 posts. The umbrella, merely for cosmetic appeal, is painted with 5 smiling skulls.

Please state what rank your umbrella can absorb attacks at and what kind of attacks e.g elemental ninjutsu, taijutsu etc. Dont just say that fire element can melt it in 2 posts also state up to what rank it can protect itself from fire.

Could you also state how you control your puppets better for example Jinmenju as it is a large wooden tree, do you use puppetry chakra strings or what? Also how many threads of chakra strings each puppets uses so people know how many puupets you can use at a time.

Then we will look again ^^

The umbrella has been specified to block all A Ranked attacks unless they are designed to be pierce and are B Rank. It has been adjusted to block up to A Rank fire before melting.

Every puppet is controlled with the standard chakra strings, though for special puppets such as Jinmenju the width of the string is altered to fill out the puppet more since the trunk is much larger than puppet limbs.

I would assume that it would take half of a hand to manipulate a puppet, either the thumb and closet finger or the other three, since Kankuro appears to be able to manipulate two puppets with one hand at his rank I figured ti would be fair enough to allow the same thing with other puppeteers.

Cool thats all i needed approved.