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PostSubject: Shinju aburame   Shinju aburame EmptyTue Jul 28, 2009 5:26 am

General Information:
Name: Shinju Grace Aburame

Nickname/Alias: ()

Age: (11)

Gender: (Male)

Looks: ((Shinju aburame 20040316-dep12_1
His holed where the bugs come out are hidden under his eyes and behind his hears but there are 2 on his neck that don't show. 3 on his arms and 4 down his chest and same on the back. He then has 3 more on each of his legs.)

Personality: ( Shinu is a depressed person who is a Emo. He does not care about anything and he does not like people with high voices. He hates people who keep talking and wont shut there freaking mouth. Shinu likes food but if he eats meat he will just keep wanting more. Shuni's mind wonders of a-lot so sometimes even in a fight he wonders off in to his own little magic world. Shinu still is nice to people if he sees something in them he likes but he can be very focused. He is smart when he is in a good mood but if he is in a bad mood he will just start cussing at you acting like you are a person who just killed his best friend. Shinu likes only few people but the ones he like he gets along with very well. He likes the night but he really hates when people start to act bad at him. He really hates when people are beating on little kids younger than them this really ticked him off enough to beat them to death. Shinju loves to casue pain to himself by his kuni and loves the taste of his blood and thinks it is very good.)

Personality Trait's: (Causing pain to hinself)

Catch Phrase: ("what the hell do you want")

Clan Information

Clan Name: Aburame

Kekkei Genkai: (The Aburame)

Clan Symbol: (idk)

Clan History: (The Aburame is a clan characterized by their use of insects, called Kikaichū, as weapons. The insects live in symbiosis within the body of the shinobi. At birth, members of this clan are offered to a special breed of insects as a nest, residing just under their host's skin. The insects can leave and enter through various pores, apparently by eating their way through the skin. The insects are called destruction bugs. They feed on chakra as a food source, making them quite deadly. The relationship between the shinobi and the insects is mutually beneficial. The host grants the bugs shelter and allows them to feed off their chakra, their body becoming a living hive, and in return the bugs do the user's bidding, allowing the shinobi to perform ninjutsu-like techniques without the use of hand seals or chakra conversion.
A female bug can be left on a target, which then can be tracked by smell by the male bug, or scout bugs can be sent out and return to tell the host information about the area. For this reason, Aburame clan members are experts in espionage; they can communicate with the bugs, and the bugs specialize in stealth because they make no noise or motion during combat. In addition to utilizing insects in battle, the Aburame clan also studies insects. They were rivals of the Kamizuru clan, the bee users, until they defeated them in battle. A major defining trait of the Aburame clan is that all of its known members wear dark sunglasses that hide their eyes as well as jackets that cover part of their face.))


Rank Information:
Rank: (genin)
Village: (Leaf)

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty:
Main: Genjutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Lightning
Sub: Wind

Special Characteristics: ((is unaffected by genjutsu under the rank of b or lower. and has dark wings)


Jutsus: (Use the the following template)

Name: (Bug Gun)
Rank: C
Type: Clan
Element: None)
Description: (This allows them to form a large amount of bugs in there hands and then shoot out like a machine gun at the opponent.

Name: Lightning sheild
Rank: C
Element:/Type Lightning Ninjutsu
Description: a simple lightning shield forms around user head to toe and all around them. If there is another person very close to him it then it closed in on them also

Name:Lightning clone
Rank: C
Element:/Type lightning Ninjutsu
Description: Makes 5-10 lightning clones but when these are destroyed the lightning then flys at the opponent. These are made by natural lighting strikes that come down from the sky and make the clones.

Name: bug fade
Rank: C
Element:/Type None Clan aburame
Description: when shinu gets damaged by taijutsu he fades in to bugs and the bugs crawl up the opponents arm and shinu then appears 10 ft away.

Name: Bug Jar Technique (蟲瓶の術, Mushi Kame no Jutsu; English TV "Wall of Insects Jutsu")
Type: Hiden, No rank, Defensive, Short range (0-5m)
Users: Aburame clan
Debut (Anime): Naruto Episode 150
This jutsu uses the Kikaichū bugs living in the user's body as a shield by having them fly in a dome shape at high speed. The dome is strong enough to destroy incoming attacks, but can be disrupted with sufficient explosive force.

Name: Bug Gathering Technique (蟲寄せの術, Mushi Yose no Jutsu; English TV "Insect Summoning Jutsu")
Type: Hiden, No rank, Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
Users: Aburame clan
Debut (Anime): Naruto Episode 149
By simply touching a surface, the user releases a small web of chakra that draws bugs to their location.


Name: Bug Clone Technique (蟲分身の術, Mushi Bunshin no Jutsu; English TV "Insect Clone")
Type: Hiden, No rank, Supplementary
Users: Aburame clan
Debut (Anime): Naruto Episode 74
Debut (Manga): Chapter 126
Using the Kikaichū bugs living in their body, the user can create a copy of themselves or anyone else they choose. The clone falls apart into its component bugs when struck. Because they're made of bugs, the clones can reform almost instantly.


Name: Destruction Bug Host Technique (寄壊蟲の術, Kikaichū no Jutsu; English TV "Parasitic Insects Jutsu")
Type: Hiden, No rank, Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary, All ranges
Users: Aburame clan
Debut (Anime): Naruto Episode 40
Debut (Manga): Chapter 69
The Aburame clan is famed for their use of insects in their jutsu. When a child is born, their body is offered to insects, called destruction bugs, as a nest. The bugs feed and live off the chakra that the body stores and in return the ninja gets to control and command the bugs, using them as their primary fighting technique. These bugs have the ability to drain chakra through physical contact with the enemy.


Background Information: (Shinu was born a normal aburame and his parents where the leaders of the clan. Shinu was always treated like a prince but he hated this and he started to hate all the people who would not stop Talking to him and giving him stuff. at age 8 he then started to dress darker and hurt people cause they would not shit up. he then started in his room all day long and started to not talk to people. Shinju then was 12 and hated these people more and more but could not do anything about it and then tried to make himself look crazy and then he became a emo because of it.)

ACADEMY ARK: Shinu really started hating these people and at age 12 could not take it anymore. he then ran away to the leaf and going the academy to become a ninja then once he was powerful enough come back and destroy the aburame clan. Shinu then went in the academy passing it easily from the training he got in the aburame clan. When he left he could do 3diffrent clones with made it for sure he was going to pass. He started disliking the villages and wanted to run away and be alone. He often tried this but was caught every time by the ninja an brought back to the leaf and he then got in fights with them often and could not stand them. He wanted to destroy the lead also and started hating everyone. He beat up may kids in the academy and he almost killed a lot of them.)

RP Sample: (Shinu walked through a forest with his hair over his face and a kuni in his hand and 3 in his back. "This is where life is good." He said in a cold voice and his back bleeding like crazy.) Shinu then walked though looking around entering the leaf village. Ahh the village of ninjas. I will be staying here for long time.)
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PostSubject: Re: Shinju aburame   Shinju aburame EmptyTue Jul 28, 2009 11:13 am

Hmm a couple of issues with this application. First:

-Your only allowed one element as a genin so please remove your sub element wind and any wind related jutsu that you have on your app.

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Special Characteristics: ((is unaffected by genjutsu under the rank of b or lower. and has dark wings)
Why are you uneffected by genjutsu under the rank of B. This will most probably be disallowed as a genin having this ability is OP, it would be acceptable if it came from a KKG of your clan but you are from Aburame so its disallowed, please remove. Alos dark wings? are these real wings? artificial or what? this is most probably disallowed as well due to its not from a special clan.

- Please sort your jutsu they are all over the place. So sentences don't even make sense and others aren't even complete. Please use the formate given in jutsu template and sort it out.

- Also a slightly larger RP sample is need please. It isnt hard and by the length of the rest of your application im sure you can muster up 4-5 more sentences.

[If you need any help don't hesitate to contact me or another mod or admin to help you, please fix though's things up and we will have another look ^^]
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PostSubject: Re: Shinju aburame   Shinju aburame EmptyTue Jul 28, 2009 1:49 pm

Quote :
Name: bug fade
Rank: C
Element:/Type None Clan aburame
Description: when shinu gets damaged by taijutsu he fades in to bugs and the bugs crawl up the opponents arm and shinu then appears 10 ft away.

I think your saying this is what happened when Shino was hit in the head by a kunai and spread into bugs. That was a bug clone. So delete the Bug Fade technique.
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