Roxas Aburame

General Information
Name: Roxas Aburame

Nickname/Alias: N/A (If he does become S rank it will be "Suna's Silent Beetle")

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Looks: Roxas wears a large, thick trench coat that covers his entire body, excluding the upper half of his face and head. The trench-coat is completely gray with a slightly darker tint to it; this is to make sure that he isn't easily seen when trying to hide from an enemy. Beneath this trench coat is pure solid diamond armor that covers his entire upper body, his shoulders down to his elbows, down to his knees, and half of his neck. This armor is great against weaponry, but enough consecutive blows could break the armor. Once a single area of the armor is punctured, however, the entire suit will fall to pieces.

Another thing that this coat does is cover up the countless number of bugs that swarm on and below Roxas's skin. Along with his trench coat and armor, Roxas wears normal clothes below the coat, but above the armor. This consists of baggy black pants and a black short-sleeved shirt. There are two pockets on the trench coat, as well. These two pockets are very deep and open and can hold multiple forms of weaponry. This is not his only means of weaponry, however, and has two pouchs on the backside of his waist and a small mini pouch brandished on the side of his upper calve.

Personality: Roxas Aburame is a quiet ninja who prefers a life of solitude, over a proper social life. Roxas is most likely the most silent person in the entire Village Hidden in the Sand, choosing not to talk very much. Any on-lookers would first describe him as very creepy, but anyone that truly knows him recognizes him for his intelligence, strategical genius, and generosity.

Another distinguishing feature of his personality is that Roxas shows extremely little to no emotion whatsoever. He prefers to not show them, due to his belief that it shows weakness. Despite this belief and fact, he can be seen by many at most times being pulled into sad or joyous events with a slight smile at the crook of his lips. He tries not to let anyone get too close to him, for he thinks it's better to not have friends, but occasionally there are one or two people who manage to actually get into his inner circle; also known only as his friendship.

Another reason a lot of the village think he is fairly creepy is the fact that he tends to relate to bugs and can be seen often talking to them as if they were human companions. Another tendency found in Roxas is his corrective personality. He tends to restate facts in a more technically correct fashion, which has earned him the title by some as a smart-ass or seen as too determined to be correct. This is not the point, however, Roxas's sole reason for correcting people's technical mistakes is to make sure everyone gets the correct idea, and do not believe what isn't necessarily true.

Finally, he has a very observant feature. He keeps note of his surroundings, every change and movement, and can easily tell if there is something wrong: with someone or the surroundings. He dislikes emotional sadness and will try his best to make people feel better, by any means possible; so long as it does not damage his dignity. All in all, his outside forces people to perceive him as quiet and creepy, while on the inside he is actually caring and semi-compassionate.

Personality Trait's: Roxas Aburame is extremely and wholsesomely devoted to the study of bugs. The small specimens simply facinate him, especially when it comes to new jutsu, developed by himself, utilizing his clan's Kekei Genkai. All in all, he thinks bugs, with the right modifications, could be the deadliest creatures on the Earth.

Catch Phrase: "You cannot defeat us...we are all here."

Clan Information

Clan Name: Aburame

Kekkei Genkai: The Aburame clan (油女一族, Aburame Ichizoku; Literally meaning "Aburame family") is a clan characterized by their use of insects as weapons. The insects live in symbiosis within the body of the shinobi. At birth, members of this clan are offered to a special breed of insects called destruction bugs as a nest, residing just under their host's skin. The insects can leave and enter through various pores, apparently by eating their way through the skin. They feed on chakra as a food source, making them quite deadly. The relationship between the shinobi and the insects is mutually beneficial. The host grants the bugs shelter and allows them to feed off their chakra, their body becoming a living hive, and in return the bugs do the user's bidding, allowing the shinobi to perform ninjutsu-like techniques without the use of hand seals or chakra conversion.

A female bug can be left on a target, which then can be tracked by smell by the male bug, or scout bugs can be sent out and return to tell the host information about the area. For this reason, Aburame clan members are experts in espionage; they can communicate with the bugs, and the bugs specialize in stealth because they make no noise or motion during combat. In addition to utilizing insects in battle, the Aburame clan also studies insects.

Clan Symbol: N/A

Clan History: Once a small clan, the Aburame grew over the years and can now be seen with signature sunglasses and bulky clothing to hide their clan’s Kekkai Genkai. At birth, the Aburame are introduced and infused with the Kikai, small destructive bugs that feed off Chakra. Covering their bodies to keep their enemies clueless to the bugs, the Aburame can use the Kikai Mushi to attack or track enemies, even steal their Chakra. The clan has been noted for hailing from not only Konohagakure no Sato, but from Sunagakure as well, now, however, they’re a country-wide clan. Besides this, there is exponentially little history of the clan.

Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure

Skill Information

Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Medical

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire Element (Katon)
Sub: Wind Element (Fuuton)

Special Characteristics: Roxas took on a three year long training period at one point in his genin years, returning as a powerful ninja in both ninjutsu and medical jutsu. Roxas has a highly extensive knowledge of handsigns and can utilize strings of them faster than most his rank, as well as extremely advanced chakra manipulation in order to perform medical jutsu, allowing him to pack extra power in each punch or kick.

Other concluded characteristics of Roxas, that make him a tough opponent, are his Aburame clan standard issue sunglasses. They have been slightly darkened to the point where he can recognize objects and attacks, but can not see the details of his opponent. These glasses make him immune to genjutsu ranked below him, due to this. One of his last special characteristics, is his impeccable and surprisingly amazing accuracy with weaponry.


Items/Weapons:

Name: Shuriken (12)
Appearance:
Rank: E
Special Abilities: A shuriken (手裏剣), like kunai, is one of the more basic weapons seen in Naruto. They are sharpened, four-pronged metal stars, useful for throwing. Although small, they can be used to distract, or, if accurate enough, can be deadly. They have an open circle in the center, used for grabbing with a finger, to avoid cutting oneself, or to put thread through. The circle is also a benefit in aerodynamics, as it ensures more accurate trajectories.

In addition to the basic shuriken, larger, arm-length shuriken have been seen in the series. They are usually carried on the back. The Fūma Shuriken is of a similar size, but is more lethal and can be folded together for easier storage.
Origin: N/A
Name: Kunai (15)
Appearance:
Rank: E
Special Abilities: A Kunai (クナイ), like shuriken, is one of the more basic weapons seen in Naruto. It is a black dagger designed to be thrown, and is about the length of one's hand. Many ninja attack by attaching an exploding tag to the blade. The kunai is usually thrown so that it lodges in an object near the target, and then the explosion from the attached tag destroys said target. Kunai can also be kept on spring-loaded wires in the user's sleeve, as seen in Naruto's fight with Sai when they first met. They can also be used for close combat, like a normal knife. Empowered with "chakra flow", kunai thrown into targets can cut through solid wood and even solid stone targets.

Different types of kunai have been seen in the series. Minato Namikaze used three-bladed kunai that had a special seal applied to them in order to perform his Flying Thunder God Technique. During their battle with Hidan, Izumo and Kotetsu used kunai the size of ordinary blades to attack him with. Kabuto, when threatening to kill a hospitalized Sasuke in Part I, held a kunai with a curved blade to Sasuke's neck. Also, during the Chūnin Exam, Team Oboro used double-bladed kunai whilst facing Team 7.
Origin: N/A

Name: Fuuma Shuriken (Giant Shuriken) (2)
Appearance:
Rank: D
Special Abilities: A large, four-bladed shuriken possessing pre-eminent sharpness and lethality. This type of shuriken is considered characteristic to the famous Fūma clan, after whom they were named and who possibly developed them. However, their use is not limited to this clan. Its four blades can be collapsed for easy storage, leading to its nickname Shadow Windmill (影風車, Kage Fūsha). In Sasuke's battle with Itachi he has shown the ability to rig the four blades to disconnect and have them fire as a surprise attack.
Origin: N/A

Name: Exploding Tag (12)
Appearance:
Rank: D
Special Abilities: Exploding tags are scraps of paper inscribed with a special formula, centring around the kanji for "explode" (爆, baku). Infused with chakra, they will explode after a set amount of time, or remotely. The tags can be attached to a surface or wrapped around a weapon to be thrown at an enemy. They are very versatile and one of the basic ninja tools.
Origin: N/A

Name: Ninja Wire (total 140 meters, divided into two different coils (70 meters each coil))
Appearance:
This picture is a very close up picture of diamond alloy ninja wire, which is really less than a millimeter in thickness.
Rank: D
Special Abilities: This diamond alloy ninja wire is extremely tough and Roxas has a plentiful resource of it, using it for many basic uses such as attaching it to weaponry or to bind his opponent utilizing it.
Origin: N/A

Name: Chakra Seal Tag (5)
Appearance:
Rank: C
Special Abilities: Using a tag similar to the exploding tag and placing it on a door, the user prevents anyone else from entering or leaving the room. By using a special hand seal, the tag disappears.
Origin: N/A

Name: Flash Bomb (5)
Appearance: although it looks heavy, it is actually very small and light.
Rank: D
Special Abilities: Flash bombs are small round spheres that are attached to a kunai knife, similarly to an exploding tag. Once thrown, flash bombs explode on impact, creating blinding flashes, used as a diversion. Shikamaru Nara uses these against Tayuya; using them to create shadows so he can use his Shadow Imitation Technique on Tayuya's Doki.
Origin: N/A

Name: Samurai Sword (1)
Appearance:
Rank: C
Special Abilities: A sleek and tough sword with a diamond blade and comfortable fitting handle made from an unknown material. The sword has a small millimeter thick hole at the bottom of the base of the handle where ninja wire can be put through in order to utilize ninja wire along with the sword, to direct and coordinate it if it's thrown.
Origin: N/A

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Background Information
It was a cold winter night in the Hidden Sand Village, all was silent, and all was peaceful. Not for long though, for a scream filled the area with a piercing cry. The source of this noise came from a home not to far from the Sunagakure Medical Hospital. "Hold on!" Oshito Aburame, Pendo's father, told his wife soothingly. "We'll get you to the hospital!" he picked her up gently, and ran out the door towards the Medical Building as fast as he could. He then body flickered into the room in front of the receptionist. "My wife is giving birth help us!" he shouted, as another piercing scream echoed through the building. The receptionist seemed to hesitate with fear before pressing a small button on the desk and a beep was heard. "A baby is coming!" she shouted, frantically as medical ninja swarmed the entire room, coming in with a cot, placing the woman on it, and rolled her through the emergency doors. Oshito followed his wife, Nibu Aburame, as the medical ninjas rolled her away. He prayed silently to himself as they prepared to remove the baby by applying anesthetics and soothing the mother.

"We're losing her!" a medical ninja shouted, now becoming nervous as a drop of sweat swelled up and dropped from his forehead. "We can only save one but the other will die!" another shouted, looking towards Oshito now. Oshito thought about it for a multitude of seconds before beginning his reply. "Sav-" he began, but his wife gripped his hand with strength. "Save...our son..." she told him, her eyes watering as she moaned in pain. "I-I Ca-a-an't..." he told her, beginning to cry as well. "Save...him" she told him, now demanding before her grip grew weak and she screamed once more, now gripping the blanket. "We need an answer now!" the medical ninja shouted. "Save...the child..." Tatsu told them, forcing out the last two words like raw meat. "Save...Roxas..." he repeated as he crouched down taking his wife's hand as he caressed it gently. "Please. Take care of Rox..." she tried to say but it was too late. Her eyes sat emotionless and her face expressionless. She was now dead and the cries of a baby filled the room as the medical ninja wrapped it in a blanket and handed it to Oshito.

He looked at the baby with loving eyes as it cried. He began to softly rub the baby's head cause it to stop crying and looked back at it's father with curious eyes. "I love you..." he said, looking towards his wife as tears streamed down his face. He didn't care what anyone thought of him, He would cry if he wanted to, and he needed to. He walked out of the hospital back home and placed the baby in the crib they had bought in advance. After covering up the baby and giving him a warm bottle of milk Oshito went upstairs to his room where he lay splayed out on the bed ready to be overcome by sleep. That day had been the worst day of his life. He lost his wife. But not only that, although he had lost a life he had also received a new one. 'His name will be...Roxas Nibu Aburame...' he thought, drifting off into the empty void of sleep. He knew that he had long days ahead of him and a bigger job. He was now a single father and he would probably have to live in an apartment unless he was able to go on more missions.

"Da-da?" Roxas said, adorably. "That's right..." Oshito told him lovingly as he picked up his infant son in his arms and cradled him gently. "I'm Da-da." he told his son, as he tickled his exposed belly. Roxas was only one and a half years old and wore only a diaper as he lay in his father's arms. "Ma-ma in hee-aaven?" Roxas asked, his eyes goggling as he looked past his fathers gentle and encouraging face to the pattern of the roof. "Yes. Mama in heaven." he reassured his son as he carried him outside. Many of Oshito's friends passed by as they waved at Roxas. Some stopped to hold him or play with him, or even introduce him to their pets or own children. Oshito seemed to never be interested in any of it though. He would normally pay attention to everything around people, like nature, the sky, and everything that wasn't man made. He loved nature and the sweet scents of flowers and the colors of the different petals that were like sugar for his eyes. Although he yet to understand the full extent of what any of this meant he was a fairly intelligent baby.

At the age of two he began to develop a liking for fruit. He loved how fruit could be eaten without drink because of how much moisture was in it. He especially loved cherries, tomatoes, and sometimes he could eat parts of watermelon if it wasn't too rough or hard. He was still interested in God and Heaven and about his mother and constantly asked his dad what his mother was doing. The same reply came every time "She's watching over us from heaven. She's with Jesus." Roxas loved to learn and mostly enjoyed his father reading him stories about past ninjas and sometimes even make believe books of ninjas that never even really existed. He loved the stories a lot none the less. He always asked his dad if he was ever a ninja and Oshito felt a low wave of despair as he answered. "I gave that up a while ago." Oshito would respond, vaguely. "Why?" Roxas asked, in that broken tone that only babies possess. "Because I wanted to spend more time with you." Oshito said, picking up his son and tossing him into the air before catching him skillfully in his arms. This always made Roxas giggle because he enjoyed the thrill of flying.

When he was three years old he began to dream of becoming a ninja. "Daddy, I'm going to be the best ninja that ever lived! I'll even beat the Kazekage himself!" Roxas shouted, as he jumped around punching pillows. "No one will stand a chance against me!" and with that he kicked the pillow into the air and punched it into the wall. "I won't let anything happen to my little ninja..." Oshito said, as he came up behind Roxas and tickled him. Roxas was subdued as he fell to the floor laughing as he was tickled nearly to death. Roxas loved playing ninja and loved to dream. His father wanted to do anything he could to help his son achieve his dream of becoming the most powerful ninja ever, although Oshito doubted it was possible but he believed in his son and began to train him at the young age of 6.

"Dad! I've finally got it!" Roxas shouted, as he leapt into the air and spun in a complete three-sixty rotation tossing kunai and shurikens as he swirled. Every kunai and shuriken hit their bulls-eye except for two or three that hit a couple of inches off. He was now seven and very skilled with kunai and shuriken and that sort of basic weaponry. He enjoyed training with his dad and that was one of their favorite things that they did together. As Roxas trained harder and harder each day he finally completely mastered the move at the age of 8 when he first began to gain his abilities, playing with the bugs and talking to them as if they were his friends. He was able to make his movements precise and complete the thrust and angle with such effectiveness that it was hard to miss.

Now nine years old Oshito enrolled Roxas in the academy. Roxas was the only Aburame in his class and at time he felt left out among the others. Roxas loved learning new jutsus such as the academy jutsus and when he had mastered them all, which was easy for him, he graduated from the academy and finally became a Genin at the age of nine. He loved being a Genin and wore his headband as soon as he received it. His father was so proud of his son and his accomplishment and took him out to celebrate at a nearby ramen shop. They ordered the usual and had a good time as they ate and talked about the future to come and how Roxas wanted to one day become the Kazekage, a much higher honor than defeating him.

Roxas began to spend a lot of time on missions but still spent some time with his dad and some of his friends when he wasn't working hard to help out his dad. He wanted to make everything perfect and make it where they could move back into their old house. Someone was currently living it it but they planned on buying it back so Roxas was saving up. His dad was saving as well from selling ninja gear. He sold shurikens, kunai, scrolls, ninja wire, and other items that were essential to a normal ninja in Sunagakure. His best seller were senbons and they were a personal favorite of Roxas as well. His father always told him it wasn't the strength or size of something but the skill of the user using the item. He taught his son that honor and virtues were the most important part of life and to not dabble in money and riches but love and good always conquered evil and hatred. Roxas always loved to hear what his father had to say and wanted to teach the same to his son when he grew up.

RP Sample:
The room was near silent, the only sound being the pitter patter of rain outside. Everything seemed motionless at first, not even a bug crept through the small box-like room, until the slightest of movement showed at least a single sign of life. The young jounin known only as Pendo awoke by his own hand, as he always did. He tended to wake himself up at the perfect time, because as he looked at his soundless clock he realized what time it was. Yes, time for the beginning of a very dreary day, as well as a funeral. He pulled his legs over the side of the bed and sat up to prop his head on his arms. As his hands met his face, he relaxed his neck and thought about life, death, and how the two met in battle so many times in the ninja world. Death would often fight off life and claim it's victim, but sometimes when life cared about a certain individual, it would fight even harder to save it from death, but even so - death had it's own feelings as well about who it wished to claim.

It was a fairly good analogy, Pendo thought it was anyway. It fit well, and he knew that the day that Ayumu had died, there must've been a tremendous clash between the two forces of life and death. Both wanting to save or claim a common victim. Pendo was sure that death was reluctant to take Ayumu's opponent, but even something as dark and sinister as death lived by a set of rules that it must follow. The rain began to grow much louder as the sound thickened into a thumping on his roof. He would be required to attend the funeral, not that he would've attended it anyway, but he had inquired the idea of everyone being punctual and he would not be the one to displace his own ideas. He wasn't tired though, he never was despite the fact that he attained only four hours of sleep at a time. He did this to save time and to be ready if anything new comes up.

He retained his hands to their placements within his pockets before moving to his closet. He pulled the two panels of wood aside to reveal an encampment of clothes of his own choosing. Different kinds were there: suits, heavy training gear, light training gear, armor, robes, all kinds of clothing. He slowly pulled out a black suit hung on a single hanger, and glanced over it before nodding to himself. It was a very nice and formal attire that would slightly fit in, being black, but also stand out from the usual visual of gray. Pendo closed his closet once more before laying the silk suit on his bed. He then proceeded to remove his current clothes that were of casual sleeping attire, before slipping on his pants, shirt, and then suit jacket. When he was completely set he moved to the kitchen to get a bowl of cereal to eat, careful not to spill a single drop on his new silk suit.

After finishing his breakfast he placed the bowl and spoon in the sink, noting to wash the dishes when he returned from this important event. He sighed, looking out his window into the wet darkness beyond the paned glass window. His eye wandered back to his hand which had began to shake, clenching to the counter as if for dear life. Another important life lost in Konoha...Someone who had killed one to save a thousand. Pendo felt a large pang of guilt that he hadn't been there to help, he could've done something, something to have stopped the tragedy that sat in the corner of everyone's mind, that was even unnoticed in the minds of some. How could he just sit here in his nice suit, with his nice cereal, and yet not feel the pain that the young ANBU leader had felt?

Pendo's mind whirled as it processed it all, he had always thought that Konoha wasn't at war when they were, at war with missing ninja...with Akatsuki. Both were a grand and monstrous threat to the currently sorrowful village. Remorse and sadness lingered around him, as if it were the very oxygen he was breathing in. Every second, he realized, was just as important as the one before it. Pendo once again let out a sigh, as he released his now whitening grip on the counter. He turned to face the western wall of the kitchen before walking out the side door that led into the alley way. It was a good exit because it led out into a clear path, where there were no villagers or anyone else in the way. The rain felt gently down, taking the risk of getting close to the master of water, but seemed to bounce off of thin air as it came within a centimeter of him. He was repelling the water from his suit so that it would not get soaked.

He walked down the cement-paved area with a perfect execution of steps that showed his skill and swiftness with each strident step. Any on-lookers would never even think about coming too close at first glance, but he also had a hint of humbleness to his look, his face was only slightly stern but also kind and comforting. Pendo enjoyed the rain though, and if he weren't wearing such an ancient family heirloom he would've let it fall freely upon his skin, and even drench his clothes. Soon, within only seconds, the large-scale funeral came into view. Although only one person had died, nearly the entire village had taken time from their daily tasks to accompany each other in this dark hour. The young jounin silently took a seat in the front row to listen to the wise words of the Hokage.

"Fellow citizens and shinobi of Konoha. We are gathered here today, to celebrate, honor and remember one of our greatest young hero’s ever to come from not only our village, but our country. Over time, many noble sacrifices have been made to keep our village safe from dangerous enemies and devastating forces. Just over a week ago, Ayumu Peinto, one of Konoha’s young and most skilled ANBU members, died at age seventeen. Ayumu was one of the unique young fighters I had ever met, and surely managed to progress quickly, making co-leader of the black op’s squad by the age of sixteen. Reaching what some of you would call the top, elite of the elite." Orito spoke confidently, and his sorrow could be clearly felt by many in the audience of the funeral. Pendo himself felt the coldness that lingered in the air, the coldness of death.

The Hokage was only silent for a brief moment before once again speaking. "This hero, died, to ensure we could all continue to live peacefully and with help from his partner, he managed to kill the one of the most dangerous figures ever too oppose Konoha. Unfortunately, this man, managed to get the best of Ayumu and eventually defeat him, bringing him to an early death. But his sacrifice was one that will never be forgotten and therefore I hope you all can join me in a one minute’s silence, not only to honor Ayumu, but all who have had made the ultimate sacrifice to protect us and make sure we can live in peace" those were the final words spoken before a long silence shrouded the area. Everyone, including Pendo, dipped their heads in silence. His eyes were closed for the seemingly-eternal moment before they once again peeled open at the sound of a new voice.

A few tears escaped Pendo's eyes, streaming gently down his cheeks as Ayumu's partner began yet another speech. "Ayumu Peinto was my co-ANBU leader, a fellow konoha shinobi but furthermore, my best friend. I stuck by him until his ast moments, fighting the former Akatsuki Leader and Ayumu destroying him; however to a cost. Ayumu also fell in the battle and i would give anything to trade places of our fates. I cannot describe what I saw, nor what I felt as I watched him fall prey to the unavoidable fate. As you know I am the leader of the ANBU and I am not the leader because of public speaking. So I apologise for being so short with my speech, but he was truly the closest thing I had to my real brother, He truly was the closest thing I had. And all I can say is that I know he is at peace and i know that he is looking down, on all of us. So as Ayumu said in his final moments; Long...Live...Konoha." Pendo listened intently, his mind and thoughts tending to every word as if he were on a remote island, and the words were his only sources of food.

He continued to sit in silence as the speeches ended. Nothing else mattered to the Konoha shinobi at the moment. He was only focused on the hopes that the young ANBU leader had made safe-passage to a happy eternity in the spirit world. Even after everyone had left, and Pendo was left alone in the dim area, he sat there in silence. Ignoring everything else that went on, but simply focusing on one thing. That one hope alone combined with the hundreds of others that sat in the hearts of the villagers of Konoha would swade destiny into allowing the ninja safe-passage, and hopefully it worked like that. With one last glance at the black coffin, Pendo slowly left the area as the coffin would now be buried since the funeral was officially over. Although there was a death in Konoha, the great village would continue to live as mighty and strong as it always had for decades prior to today...

And I believe I am finished. ^_^
[Awaiting Approval]

I didnt even look at the rest of your app, your personality was a stop right away. All you did was copy and paste from Shino Aburame off naruto pedia. This is not acceptable. It is plagerizing and lazy. This is your first warning. If there is any other incidents of this in your app remove them.

Sorry, I thought if I edited a lot of it and added my own bits it'd be okay. ><

Removed and redone. (Fixed)

Change your main to Wind, as that is what you seem to have unlocked atm. You can only have one element as a genin, and since you only have wind jutsu, wind would be your main. You should also add ALL the basic academy jutsu cuz as it stands you cant even walk on water.

I think it's been decided that I can have two elements, I'm not completely sure. o.O

But anyways, my application is completely finished and awaiting approval..

- You can't use a picture of a canon character, please remove.

- The extra explanation under ninjutsu, village, rank etc is not needed, so please remove, as everyone already understands what though things are.

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These glasses make him immune to genjutsu from a distance

Immunity to genjutsu is disallowed, ill allow only D-rank immunity.

- remove reference to canon characters in jutsu e.g Hidden Bug Replacement.

- Poison Removal and Mist Waltz is B-rank, please remove.

*cracks fingers*

Okay, firstly, you have way to much additional information that you will be removing without question. You have given us paragraphs of copied information on such areas like Genin, Village, Ninjutsu and Medical Jutsu. Delete all of these, we are not idiots. We not what is what. All you have to have it say is....

eg. Rank: Genin.

Also do the same thing with your name and age, we do not need to know all that nonsense. Keep your application as clean as possible.

Okay Aburame Jutsu Time!

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Name: Insect Detonation Technique
Rank: C
Type: Clan jutsu
Element: None
Description: Forming only a single-handed handsign Roxas will near simultaneously detonate every single destruction bug he controls, in his body or not. This jutsu is mainly used for kame-kaze missions or if death is inevitable.

The Kikaichu aren't paper bombs, you cannot detonate them on command, that is like I can say I can go and detonate the pet of another chakra. Even though they belong to you, it is impossible to detonate them like so. Please Remove.

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Name: Insectile Chakra Feeding
Rank: C
Type: Clan Jutsu
Element: None
Description: Utilizing some of his clans jutsus that causes Roxas's bugs to steal his opponents chakra, he can call the bugs back to his body to feed him 75% of the stolen chakra. If the bugs are killed while trying to return, then the jutsu fails and the chakra is destroyed as well.

75%?! Too much Lower it down, below 50.

That's all I spot as issues with those jutsu. But I'd suggest searching for a new image too bro. If you search deviantart well enough, you will find better aburames.

>The Kikaichu aren't paper bombs, you cannot detonate them on command, that is like I can say I can go and detonate the pet of another chakra. Even though they belong to you, it is impossible to detonate them like so. Please Remove.

-Actually, it would be possible, wouldn't it?

Considering the bugs feed off of and live on my chakra, they contain my chakra. So couldn't I detonate them?

So your telling me that if I placed my bug's on you and allowed them to feed you chakra, I could make you explode? No. Remove.

Touche...

Fixed.

Just bumpin.

ok approved.