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PostSubject: Ryuusei Aburame   Ryuusei Aburame EmptySun Dec 13, 2009 7:01 pm

General Information
Name:Ryuusei Aburame
Nickname/Alias: Bachiatari

Age:13

Gender:male
Looks:
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Personality:
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Personality Trait's: bugs.

Catch Phrase: pain is nothing more than a thought.

Clan Information
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Rank Information:
Rank:Genin
Village:Sunagakure no sato

Skill Information

Skill Specialty:
Main:Ninjutsu
Sub:Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main:lightning
Sub:water

Special Characteristics:

Jutsus:
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Background Information
Birth Arc/Early Years
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Academy Arc
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Genin Arc
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RP Sample:Ryuusei was born on what his family called a cursed day. This day was a day of much misfourtune. Their family had suffered personally on this day with family deaths, fights of great magnitude, financial suffering as well as personal losses for each member. To add insult to injury their village Konohagakure would have several problems of their own occure. Such as assasinations, mission falure, poor economic conditions, war, good shinobi fallen in battle, among other things. As result his family saw it fit to nickname him Bachiatari meaning "Cursed." His 'birthday' was to be the worst day of the year. This didnt really affect his personality as he developed. However his own family and various village members wouldnt celibrate his birth nor really acknowledge his existance just for this day. Now most would take this and feel put off by it or feel put down, but it didnt really seem to affect Ryuusei really on the out side. On the inside he held contemptment against his family for allowing him to be born on the day he did as well as his friends for acting in the manner they would.


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PostSubject: Re: Ryuusei Aburame   Ryuusei Aburame EmptyWed Dec 16, 2009 2:45 am

Bumpage my way.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuusei Aburame   Ryuusei Aburame EmptyWed Dec 16, 2009 4:20 am

- You will need to write an RP sample, just giving us a taste of how you RP.

- 250 IQ for a 9 year old? please remove. Also your personality makes reference to mist nin and village? Might want to double check that.

- 9 year old genin? please increase your age by a couple of years, its unrealistic for a genin that age.

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Immunity to Genjutsu:As an Aburame Ryuusei is immune to genjutsu
Please remove, immunity to genjutsu is disallowed.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuusei Aburame   Ryuusei Aburame EmptyWed Dec 16, 2009 7:55 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuusei Aburame   Ryuusei Aburame EmptyWed Dec 16, 2009 8:54 pm

Konoha is closed, change to Suna.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuusei Aburame   Ryuusei Aburame EmptyThu Dec 17, 2009 12:34 am

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuusei Aburame   Ryuusei Aburame EmptyThu Dec 17, 2009 6:36 am

Insect Sphere is B rank and should be removed as such

Remove references to shino from your Jutsu

Destruction bug nihon shock needs more description as to what its effects are. As it stands it sounds too powerful for a c rank
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuusei Aburame   Ryuusei Aburame EmptyThu Dec 17, 2009 7:57 pm

removed inect sphere and nihon shock cos it would kill. and removed shino.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuusei Aburame   Ryuusei Aburame EmptyFri Dec 18, 2009 3:01 am

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Name:destruction bug host
Rank:D
Type:ninjutsu
Element: none
Description:The Destruction Bug Host Technique is a practice exclusive to the Aburame clan; a clan famed for its use of the kikaichū in their jutsu. To grant a newborn member of the clan the use of the kikaichū, the newborn's body is offered to insects as a nest. Over the years, as the child grows up, they are instructed in the hiden jutsu of the clan, and learn how the insects may serve them in
-Is this wip? cause it ends abruptly.
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