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PostSubject: Emi Ayame   Emi Ayame EmptyMon Aug 03, 2009 8:42 am

General Information:

Name: Emi Ayame

Age: 12

Gender: Female

Looks: Emi usually wears dresses with leggings or a top and skirt with leggings. She likes bright colors. She has long orange-ish brown hair. She usually puts her hair in pony tails. She wears her village head band around her waist. She wears jewelry around her neck and wrists. She wears make up for special occasions, on a day to day basis she wears mascara and lip gloss. Her skin is fair at night and tan at day. She has emerald green eyes that shine and glitter in the sunlight. She is quite skinny.

Personality: She can be outgoing sometimes. She is very intelligent and cares about school. She loves animals and takes care of them for a living with her clan. She has a really good sense of humor and loves to laugh. She loves to write, read, and have fun. She loves the water. She also loves the outdoors she spends most of her time outdoors.

She loves hanging out with her friends and family. She is a very bright and fun girl. Her favorite color is Purple and Green. She can be quite at times. She is very shy when you first meet her but once you get to know her she opens up.

Personality Trait's: Emi centers around her school work and job.

Catch Phrase: “You don’t want to mess with me!”

Rank Information:
Rank: Academy Student
Village: Suna

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Kenjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Earth
Sub: -----

Items/Weapons:

Name: Katanas
Appearence: A clear/ shining green blade with a brown handle.
Rank: C
Special Abilities: It can cut through most rock.
Origin: Her earth Katanas came from her grandfather right before he died in a fire saving her family. He gave it to her to protect her family when she was 7. She has been using it ever since. She cherishes it. She wears them on her back everywhere she goes. Emi and her grandfather shared the same birthday and shared everything else.

Jutsus:

Ninjutsu

Name: Bikou Ninjutsu (Shadowing Stealth Technique)
Rank: -
Type: Supplementary
Element: -
Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible. The skill and length in which one can stay hidden varies by rank and ability.

Name: Bakuyaku Fusen: Kai (Explosive Tag: Release)
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: -
The user will activate an explosive tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu (Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Change of Body Stance Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.

Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the clone gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu (Shadow Shuriken Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
When throwing a shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.

Background Information:

Emi was born on February 14 at 10:10 in the morning she was born 4 weeks pre mature and was really small. They all worried about Emi being as small as she was. She sometimes couldn’t play with kids her age. She was made fun of being as small as she was she was treated unfairly until she was 8. Being as smart and as fast as she was kids noticed that she was nice and really cool so they decided to be friends with her. From then on she was the most popular girl in the academy. In the academy Emi would always be the smartest girl in the class. She would always win awards in sports and classes. She was always athletic and shy. She got a small White Fox when she was just four years old she named her Miyu.

Mika Buldalair was he best friend ever since they were 2 years old their parents were also best friend so they always spent a lot of time together they were like the sister they never had. In the academy Emi would always be the smartest girl in the class. She would always win awards in sports and classes. She was always athletic and shy. So she helps Mika when she needs it. They’re families are like one whole family they always have a game night.

They move to a new mansion every year. The Ayame’s always buy a house buy the Buldalairs. She has had a job ever since she was 8 she takes care of animals and gets paid. She may be rich but she is as normal as everyone else she has responsibilities, and she is very giving and caring. She isn’t a snob. She loves animals and people. She always goes to this island with Mika its hidden in the deep blue water fog. Nobody knows about it other then their family. They keep it hidden because that is their oasis.


RP Sample:

Emi walked in smiling. “Hey sorry I am late got a little held up in work” said Emi grasping her Katanas. “Ready” Emi said with fire in her eyes. “I know I am ready” she said with a smirk. Emi threw shiriken. “Where did ya go” Emi said. “I don’t think so.” Emi said running to the figure. “Honey dinner” Emi’s mother said moving towards the house. “Okay mom, thanks.” Emi said with an embarrassed look on her face.
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PostSubject: Re: Emi Ayame   Emi Ayame EmptyMon Aug 03, 2009 8:45 am

Lower the age a bit. 12 seems a little old for a Academy Student.

Other than that you should be set.
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PostSubject: Re: Emi Ayame   Emi Ayame EmptyMon Aug 03, 2009 9:05 am

*cracks fingers*

history needs to be in arcs (Birth, childhood, Academy, etc) and a little bit longer

you cannot have katanas as an academy student, and even if you could, you couldn't have those katanas because they cut through rock.
Remove that.

Appearance should be a tad longer, or include a picture that matches it.
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PostSubject: Re: Emi Ayame   Emi Ayame EmptyMon Aug 03, 2009 10:01 am

General Information:

Name: Emi Ayame

Age: 12

Gender: Female

Looks: Emi usually wears dresses with leggings or a top and skirt with leggings. She likes bright colors. She has long orange-ish brown hair. She usually puts her hair in pony tails. She wears her village head band around her waist. She wears jewelry around her neck and wrists. She wears make up for special occasions, on a day to day basis she wears mascara and lip gloss. Her skin is fair at night and tan at day. She has emerald green eyes that shine and glitter in the sunlight. She is quite skinny.

Orange... Pictures, Images and Photos

Personality: She can be outgoing sometimes. She is very intelligent and cares about school. She loves animals and takes care of them for a living with her clan. She has a really good sense of humor and loves to laugh. She loves to write, read, and have fun. She loves the water. She also loves the outdoors she spends most of her time outdoors.

She loves hanging out with her friends and family. She is a very bright and fun girl. Her favorite color is Purple and Green. She can be quite at times. She is very shy when you first meet her but once you get to know her she opens up.

Personality Trait's: Emi centers around her school work and job.

Catch Phrase: “You don’t want to mess with me!”

Rank Information:
Rank: Academy Student
Village: Suna

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Weaponry

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Earth
Sub: -----

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Jutsus:

Ninjutsu

Name: Bikou Ninjutsu (Shadowing Stealth Technique)
Rank: -
Type: Supplementary
Element: -
Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible. The skill and length in which one can stay hidden varies by rank and ability.

Name: Bakuyaku Fusen: Kai (Explosive Tag: Release)
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: -
The user will activate an explosive tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu (Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Change of Body Stance Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.

Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the clone gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu (Shadow Shuriken Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
When throwing a shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.

Background Information:
Beginning

Emi was born on February 14 at 10:10 in the morning she was born 4 weeks pre mature and was really small. They all worried about Emi being as small as she was. She sometimes couldn’t play with kids her age. She was made fun of being as small as she was she was treated unfairly until she was 8.
Academy

Being as smart and as fast as she was kids noticed that she was nice and really cool so they decided to be friends with her. From then on she was the most popular girl in the academy. In the academy Emi would always be the smartest girl in the class. She would always win awards in sports and classes. She was always athletic and shy. She got a small White Fox when she was just four years old she named her Miyu.
Friends at Academy

Mika Buldalair was he best friend ever since they were 2 years old their parents were also best friend so they always spent a lot of time together they were like the sister they never had. So she helps Mika when she needs it. They’re families are like one whole family they always have a game night.She always goes to this island with Mika its hidden in the deep blue water fog. Nobody knows about it other then their family. They keep it hidden because that is their oasis.
Her now

They move to a new mansion every year. The Ayame’s always buy a house buy the Buldalairs. She has had a job ever since she was 8 she takes care of animals and gets paid. She may be rich but she is as normal as everyone else she has responsibilities, and she is very giving and caring. She isn’t a snob. She loves animals and people.


RP Sample:

Emi walked in smiling. “Hey sorry I am late got a little held up in work” said Emi grasping her Katanas. “Ready” Emi said with fire in her eyes. “I know I am ready” she said with a smirk. Emi threw shiriken. “Where did ya go” Emi said. “I don’t think so.” Emi said running to the figure. “Honey dinner” Emi’s mother said moving towards the house. “Okay mom, thanks.” Emi said with an embarrassed look on her face.


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PostSubject: Re: Emi Ayame   Emi Ayame EmptyMon Aug 03, 2009 10:04 am

I believe I said history needs to be longer, and in arcs.. but please, next time, just edit your existing application, don't repost it.
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PostSubject: Re: Emi Ayame   Emi Ayame EmptyMon Aug 03, 2009 10:27 am

k done
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PostSubject: Re: Emi Ayame   Emi Ayame EmptyMon Aug 03, 2009 10:37 am

PUT IT INTO ARCS


LABEL THEM
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PostSubject: Re: Emi Ayame   Emi Ayame EmptyMon Aug 03, 2009 10:42 am

Now did i do it right?
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PostSubject: Re: Emi Ayame   Emi Ayame EmptyMon Aug 03, 2009 10:44 am

Yeahhh Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Emi Ayame   Emi Ayame EmptyMon Aug 03, 2009 10:46 am

YAY TY
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