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PostSubject: Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin)   Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin) EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 4:32 pm

Name: Renjiro Senju

Nicknames: Renji – Ren

Age: 11

Gender: Male

Village: Hidden Leaf

Land Of Birth: Hidden Leaf

Ninja Rank: Genin

Looks: Avatar - Also he has light blue eyes with long black hair. He usually has his hair down and straight so that it can flow through the air. His typically clothes are his fathers old and shrunk jounin clothes when hes not either doing his Clan tasks or on a mission. All other times he wears his dressing gown. Renjiro doesnt have any specific identifiers like scars but he does have a tattoo on his left shoulder. the tattoo is a personal one to renjiro and has no real significence as in symbol wise. He does however wear his senju weighted cloak alot on the outside of his fathers jounin jacket.

Fighting Styles: Gouken Ryuu - Strong Fist Style (punching and kicking in a precise and stong manner - having trained for a few year in learning how to do so) and Sword Fighting (Renjiro carries a katana with him at all time). Gouken Ryu is a type of Taijutsu which concentrates on dealing the maximum amount of damage before the opponent can counter too heavily. Each strike is set to break a bone or destroy armour and is proformed with deadly precision due to extreme target, dummy and weight training.

Personality: Wise, caring and considerate but always looks out for his team and his village. He is always withdrawn and never shows emotion unless when he is at his limit and going full out. When going full out his personality changes to that of a sick and horid killer who uses his jutsus to kill rather to than capture. Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin) Renjir10


Special Characteristics: Mokuton and Bijuu Control. Also extreme training at a young age to master the earth and water elements while still a young genin. Also due to being a senju Renjiro uses 20% less chakra on earth and water elemental jutsus.

Elements: Earth and Water (Water and Earth – Mokuton control at a later date)

Skills/Specialties

Main- Ninjutsu
Sub- Fuuninjutsu - hasnt unlock his 2nd speciality

History/Background Story:

Birth - Being handed to the Senju clans elders

Renjiro was born into the village like very other child was. He was loved by his mother but was shown strictness from birth by his father like all males of the clan. At the age of 1 he was handed to the clans elders for judging to see if he had the gift of the clans Kekkei Genkai of wood manipulation. After 3 hours of chakra judging and physical examinations renjiro was judged to have the genes and therefore teh ability to be able to use the kekkei genkai and was then told that his training will begin as soon as renjiro was able to mold chakra which was when he was 4 years 5 months and 23 days old. From the day he was judged to the day he first meld chakra his life was great as far as being cared for and loved by his mother and father.

The day soon arrived when renjiros' father observed renjiro playing in the sand and seeing the sand swirling around him showing that infact renjiro had show his chakra system was matured and ready for light training. This brought great pain to renjiros father as it ment he had to send his son to the elders and see his son every 2 weeks for a few hours. Renjiros fathers told his wife and she instantly broke down into tears. She then simply went and got renjiros favourite teddy bear from hsi room and gave it to renjiro. His father picked him up and gave him a kiss on on his forehead and then his mother did the same walking away into the kitchen. With that his father took him down the road to the elders meeting house and sat renjiro down in the waiting room just outside the main room in the house. A booming voice was heard from within the room saying 'Renjiro Senju come in' renjiro did so and walked in with his father there. his father looked at him with glistening eyes (glistening because he was holding back his tears) and said 'Renjiro i love you so much. i know i havent shown it at all really but its in preparation for today.' he paused ' you have to go with the elders and undergo training ... ill see you in a week and remember that we love you and this is the best thing for you' renjiro began to cry and said 'i love you too dad' with that his dad disappeared in gust of leaves.

The elders to the academy

After that day Renjiro, little by little, trusted the elders and then they began his ninja training slowly working up from pushups, situps etc to preforming the academy jutsus and then to working very slowly on working to get his earth element perfected. The training was to draw out his chakra ... emerge himself in earth and fell the earth around him and get a feeling of how to mold his chakra around it and then molding his earth chakra from his feet to his hands and trying to form earth out of his hands. This took him until his 9th birthday where he was entered into the acadamy and because he had been cooped up with the elders he had been isolated from otehrs his age and the rest of the village.

Academy

Renjiro was still rather isolated when he joined the academy at age 9. He ended up in the academy 3 years early due to him passing the required academy entrance exam early. He passed well above the required mark as predicted by the Senju elders.

Renjiro met his classmates the day after the entrance exam and was further segregated due to him getting in 3 years early. Slowly but surely he made his way with the rest of the class to learning all the required academy jutsus with great accuracy and skill. His best jutsu at this time was his replacement jutsu.

Graduation day finally came but Renjiro wasn’t bothered at all. No signs of emotion just a little glimpse of happiness that he passed and started to be noticed by a couple of his fellow clansmen and women. Renjiro graduated at the 3rd highest in his class of 17 but he was the youngest of all of them as they were all 12 except him. During his time at the academy he had small tasks to do within the Senju clan like delivering mail and personal messages to high-ranking members within Konoha

Genin

Renjiro graduated the academy at age 10 therefore still being the youngest of the Genin graduates. Since his graduation and recieveing his leaf ninja headband he hasnt done alot. He wasn't put into a team due to the request of fellow clan members until now. This was to make sure renjiro was ready to able to manipluate his chakra and then mold both his elemental chakra together to a certain extent so that Renjiro could continue the training while being part of a ninja team.

This training took a full year under the three Senju elders. Renjiro was the prodogy of the senju clan and was the memeber that would put them back into the world as the top ranked clan in kohona. The training was extreme and tiring for a Genin which was why it took a year to do so. The training required superb chakra control with precise chakra manipulation to form each and every one of his jutsus. Renjiros training ended when he was able to proform each and every Earth Jutsu to the highest standard which was that it was flawless in movement, speed and power. Which he did just in time for the clan to allow him to become part of the next group of leaf genins.

Roleplay Sample:

Renjiro woke up one morning, feeling drowsy. He got out of bed and pulled out a bowl, a spoon and a glass. He got a box of cereal and poured some into the bowl, then poured some milk into the bowl. He got some orange juice out of his refrigerator and poured some into his glass. After breakfast, Renjiro was enthusiastic and ready to train. He set off to the Academy, feeling refreshed and ready for learning. After school, Renjiro decided to wander off to the forest. He tried using his Mokuton No Jutsu on a tree stump as it is easier to use wood as a base to create new wood than creating it from scratch and in the ground. 'I... I need to get this right... to proove myself to the other clan members' Renjiro thought to himself as he continued focusing chakra within himself. Renjiro then formed the 3 handsigns requirted for teh jutsu, (Tiger, Dog and Snake). Everyday and every night Renjiro would practice and practice some more. “Mokuton No jutsu!” he shouted every time with real feeling while saying it and then trying to form the pillar of wood. Each time he did the jutsu it would grow a it from a tiny 1cm square of wood ontop of the stump to creating a slightly wider and longer piece of wood.

“Sensei is this good enough?” Renjiro said
“Yes” said master Ti
“Can I try it on you?” Renjiro said with great respect on his voice
“Yes you may” said Ti
Renjiro then got into his standard stance and then said “Mokuton No Jutsu” he created a small 1 meter by 1 meter pillar of staright wood by Ti's legs. Renjiro put alot of chakra into the jutsu to make it expand and grow to being 1 meter by 1 meter by 1 meter. When that happened he then worked on manipulating the pillar to wrap around Ti. He the focused again putting alot of chakra into the jutsu making the wood start wrap around Ti's legs. "Very well now thats enough!" Ti shouted as the pillar continued to wrap around his legs making it very tight. "Ok" renjiro said releasing the Snake handsign thus breaking the chakra bond he had with the pillar of wood.


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PostSubject: Re: Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin)   Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin) EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 4:38 pm

Jutsus:

E ranked

Spoiler:

D ranked jutsus

Spoiler:

C ranked jutsus

Spoiler:
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PostSubject: Re: Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin)   Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin) EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 9:12 pm

In your Jutsu section, when we say "Type" of technique... were referring to ( Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Weaponry, Medical)
-Please follow the correct Jutsu template.

Quote :
Sennen Goroshi - One Thousand Years of Death
Rank: E
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Description: Though it is called "Leaf's Ancient Supreme Technique", Sennen Goroshi serves more as an insulting shock technique rather than a skilled Taijutsu technique. The ninja forms their hands into the seal of the tiger, and then jabs their fingers into the nether regions of their target. The result is shocking violation of the targets sanctity and often their launching in the air to stop the awkward feeling.
-Taijutsu, not in your specialty. Remove please
Quote :

Name: Earth Release: Rising Stone Spears (Doton: Doryuusou)
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: This technique lets the user summon stone spikes from the ground. This technique doesn't seem to be very effective.
-How big are the spikes?

Quote :
Name: Moguragakure no Jutsu - Mole Hiding Technique
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description:Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground
-How long can you stay underground?
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Name: Doton Doro Gaeshi – Mud Overturn
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense.
-Describe size, shape, and durability of the wall
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PostSubject: Re: Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin)   Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin) EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 9:14 pm

::coughs:: 1000 years of death isnt classed as real taijutsu as its just sticking your fingers in someones butt so no i wont remove. And for the other stuff. doesnt need to be specified these have already been approved its the water jutsus ive added
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PostSubject: Re: Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin)   Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin) EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 9:25 pm

Accordiing to Leaf Ninja 1000 Years of Death is classified as Taijutsu. Heres the direct description:
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Though it is called "Leaf's Ancient Supreme Technique", Sennen Goroshi serves more as an insulting shock technique rather than a skilled Taijutsu technique. The ninja forms their hands into the seal of the tiger, and then jabs their fingers into the nether regions of their target. The result is shocking violation of the targets sanctity and often their launching in the air to stop the awkward feeling.
Link: http://leafninja.com/taijutsu-3.php

And what do you mean those jutsu have already been approved? ?
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PostSubject: Re: Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin)   Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin) EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 9:27 pm

this is an update for adding a 2nd element water. and ive included my full already approved genin app but added water jutsus too it. soooo all anyone needs to do is aapprove those new water jutsus
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PostSubject: Re: Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin)   Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin) EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 9:32 pm

1.Well why you just add the water techniques inside the jutsu section and ask a mod to stick it to your app? When you put a application on here all of it gets checked.

2. Who approved you?
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PostSubject: Re: Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin)   Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin) EmptyMon Aug 17, 2009 9:34 pm

im waiting for adam now lol
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PostSubject: Re: Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin)   Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin) EmptyWed Sep 16, 2009 7:52 pm

BUMPS FOR ADAM!!
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PostSubject: Re: Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin)   Renjiro Senju Update - (wasnt aware of the 2 elements for genin) EmptyFri Sep 18, 2009 4:40 pm

As I've told you in the chatbox, new jutsu cannot just be added, this update is not needed, if you want your second element, you ask me to add it to your old app, and then you train the jutsu.

Not to mention here, Elder Sage asked you to remove "A Thousand Years Of Death" and told you exactly why with links and descriptions and it's still on your application. You said your not removing it. It's not a suggestion or a request. It's a command.

I'll repeat myself, there is no need for this update!
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