Ultimate Sun

first draft, let me know what you think

??? What is this?

a first draft off a newspaper for US

Nice... My only concern it that it lagged a lot when i tried to load the page, so can you pls use spoilers or something? Otherwise, i like it ^^

This is very kool, I like it. Certainly keeps people informed of whatever maybe going on this site, and such. Do you intend to make one for every day? o.o

This is outstanding! Though I don't understand the one bit about the bounty.

You also will have to add Tenju too the dead list and Shiko died a bad guy XD

You have proven good commitment to the site.

Aria, it would be weekly, not daily.

You said its a first draft, you made minor mistakes, but nothing major. Its fantastic and I'm proud of you.


EDIT: The Bounty Hunter thing is to get people to roleplay more? Possibly missing ninja? Am I correct?

Yeah it's good. My concern is with the orbituary, you make it a hella lot more readable because i struggled to determined who died and how etc.. And space the names out a bit more. But for a draft. Bravo!

-bounty hunters is to get some missing nin something to do, maybe grant a special weapon/item or so from the staff after completion.
-Well i gonna chose normal lettertype for orbituaries and space it out a little, maybe add there profile picture too--> mainly it is to have a good GOOD VS EVIL count
-Shiko was a gennin and not ranked as missing nin C...So yeah you killed a good "evil" brat
-Was more thinking in the line off every two weeks a new issue, so people with stories pm them to me if you can

This is really great Confess this will a BIG addition to the site. SO Ingoo..HA!!!

I like how my name is up there too..now ppl know I died a hero xD Told u Adam -_-

not bad at alllllll.

you spelled Peace wrong, though :PPP

you should include an "Ask Pat" Section XD.

alsooo... you should have advertisements in it. Something like the top ads on the site. Or even classified ads for spars and RP opportunities. All in all, and wonderful idea.

I like it very interesting and unique idea.

Shiko, just because you were "good" when you died, doesn't make you a hero. Todd was the hero awhhh yeahhhh

yeah, or else I would've been Green. When I died, I was "good" lol.

oh, anbu, it's "Obituaries" not "orbituaries" :PPPP

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alsooo... you should have advertisements in it. Something like the top ads on the site. Or even classified ads for spars and RP opportunities. All in all, and wonderful idea.

Ditto that!

And how come Pat gets his own section? o.O

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Because everyone asks pat! XD

jk.. I just enjoy listening to people's problems and giving them useful advice.

I know i know. Im just playing lol. Its cool ^^

But Pat should get his owns ection to be honest, where ppl could ask him off-RP questions, and another person(probably a mod or admin) should get one for in-RP questions or vice-versa; but thats jsut my opinion...

Matbe we should a section just for me Shiko. Letz callz itz Shiko Timez

Nah jk,but I like how my nae is up there!! xD

Also, with an addition. you should add a 'create it yourself' section for like outstanding pieces of artwork or like.. stories or good rps. Include something like that in it.

Yeah I like that idea too.

Ditto to Robin's idea.

So far it will look like this ( will not spoil everything to make the real first edition a bomb to our readers)

1 : Main page, will normaly consist out of articles and litle stories "17" writes in order to implement new main rpg story lines (exams,new country, ancient evil,etc...)

2,3,4: articles like in normal paper

5 : eating with a brain! (no info granted to not ruin the fun)

6: Advertisement from players to player, or in general

7: Missing nin section

8: obituaries

9: hopefully some fun riddles, crosswords,etc.. all in the theme of Us

Awwww.. I can't has "Ask Pat" ?

Yay my last char died so hopfully I'll be in the Next paper.