Shadow Toad Clan

(I have already a clan when I was approved,I'd this to be my new Clan)

Clan Name: Shadow Toads

Kekkei Genkai:

The Shadow Toad bloodline is a group of people who can command all kind of toads and use them into any situations. In Uchiha,they are growing on releasing fireballs while toads and the clan members has the unique ability to split oil at their exact age.A member of a clan is able to learn a transformation called Toad Warrior Form that transforms their eyes into toad's eyes that an extend their knowledge to field of jutsu they used to know. The user will be surrounded by natural energy whenever they are in this form extending their ranges and power.
Just like other animal summon,toad an talk to people and has a forehead protector as a sign of loyalty to the village.

Toad Warrior Form: This is a powerful transformation of user's chakra and their abilities same as their eyes that turns into toad eyes. The is a very unique form which clan members learned from their toad elders changing their eyes into toad's eyes. This form extends user's ninjutsu and taijutsu knowledge and increases their chakra amount . When in this form,user can have natural toad abilities that becomes an extension of their body increasing their reach of attacks. The user to able to sense and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from long distances, and notice changes in an individual's chakra. The ability of sensing chakra extends to being able to track fast-moving objects before finally giving some amount of predictive capabilities to the user by just sensing chakra.
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Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Toad Spiral Grinder
Rank: C
Description: A member of the clan creates a powerful spinning ball of chakra with a size of an orange fruit. The ball is able to grind anything it contact with and pushes them back making a minor damage which can stun a opponent. The jutsu is easy to dodge so it requires a high speed.

Name: Name: Toad Oil Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu,Kekkei Genkai
Element: None
Description: The user spits oil from their mouth onto a target. Rather than needing to be near a source of oil, it seems that the user keeps a supply of the oil inside their stomach. When needed, the oil can then be brought up into the user's mouth and shot out under pressure. The jutsu has been combined with several other elements in order to create new techniques, including wind, fire, and both.

Name: Toad Flat - Shadow Manipulation Technique
Type: B-rank, Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
The Toad Flat Shadow Control Technique allows Jiraiya to merge with the shadow of a subdued foe, similar to the Shadow Imitation Technique of the Nara Clan. User can then fully control the victim from within their shadow, allowing him to more easily infiltrate foreign territories. If he has to use his other jutsu, he must emerge from the shadow. Once he fully emerges, the hold over his victim is broken and they regain control of their body.

Name: Toad Spiral Bomb Grinder
Rank: B-A
Description: A larger and stronger version of Toad Spiral Grinder but this version can create a major damage by its powerful grinding ability and when it sucesfully grinds the opponent,it will come to a explosion. Same as the Toad Spiral Grinder,it it easy to dodge so it needs full speed.

Name: Wild Lion's Mane Technique
Type: B-rank, Offensive, Supplementary, All ranges
This technique uses chakra to temporarily enhance the head's metabolism and manipulate the hair that grows longer as a result of this. There is also chakra flowing through the lengthened hair, making its hardness comparable to that of steel wire. By thickly bundling the hair, its strength is further increased, also increasing its destructive power.

Name: Summoning: Toad Mouth Bind
Type: A-rank, Offensive, All ranges
After forming the necessary hand seals, this jutsu encloses the surrounding area with the esophagus of a great, fire-breathing toad . Jiraiya can then control the esophagus, causing it to expand, contract, or grow in whatever direction he wishes.

Name: Summoning: Toad Shop technique
Rank: C
This technique summons a Shop Toad. This toad has the ability to transform into a large store. The target is then lured inside, for example with the promise of cheap drinks. Once the target has entered the store, the toad changes back into its original small form, trapping the target inside the toad's stomach.

Name: Hiding in a Toad Technique
Type: C-rank, Supplementary
Required: Joutora Diving Toad
The frog is able to dive up to a hundred meters in fresh water, making it especially useful for infiltrating enemy camps that are surrounded by a river or a lake. The stomach of the frog also has a special barrier that obstructs chakra, protecting the user from detection-type ninjutsu

Name: Frog Conversion Technique
Type: C-rank, Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
By touching the forehead of his target, User is able to turn them into a frog. This technique does not actually turn a target into a toad, but captures the target inside the toad. The technique is called Frog Conversion Technique to scare and confuse the opponent's allies.

Name: Fighting Style: Toad's Wrath
Rank: Clan's Basic skill
Element: None
Description: The jutsu is a fighting style used exclusively by those who have posses Toad Warrior Form. User's chakra used during Toad Warrior Form activates the body in various ways, enhancing the user's speed, strength and durability. In this jutsu,the user is surrounded and encapsulated an aura of natural energy. This aura of the jutsu acts as an extension of their body that can be used to extend the range for 1 meter, reach and force of his physical attacks. In such a state the Nin is exponentially more dangerous at close quarters. Thanks to the enhanced speed and unseen reach his normal attacks become far harder to avoid , with strikes that you could formally dodge now finding their mark. The strikes made byhim also inflict considerably more damage, often breaking bone or causing internal damage.
Post Limit: 3 posts
Cooldown: 1 post
C-Rank: Only be used once in a battle.
B-Rank: Only be used twice a battle.
A-Rank: Used thrice a battle.
S-Rank: Used Five times a battle.

History: On the early days, a guy named Hachima which is a toad-lover made a house for his pets. He treat them as his family and train them to be strong. For loving the toads,Hachima made many powerful toad techniques that has been known to all nations and used to destroy evil. Because of his goodness,he was called by the King Toad and named him Warrior Of Toads. On many years,he married a beautiful lady named Shina. They have a son named Hotohuri. But on 3rd ninja wars,Hotohuri was sent to the village for safety. After many years,Hotohuri has been named Kenzaki,a person who's not going to stop until he became a HOkage!

Everything seems fine except the last which is overpowered as it stands. Most battles dont last very long and if eash time you activate it, it last 5 posts at higher levels you could be using constantly. Please reduce the number of posts it last and number of times it can be used

Also the extension element about it missing should be changed to suggest it projects further then it looks making it harder to dodge and judge hits by hit. I can imagine it could become problematic if you claim to hit everytime you miss. Just because it might increase you strike range doesnt guarrantee it will hit

Edited! Dont worry bout the effect because it will only last a few period of time.

The extension aspect needs still to be changed. It still implys that you hit even when you miss better by far to say that it makes it hard for an enmy to evade his punches and that attacks that might seem to skim by will most like hit

EDited! I change the range to 1 meter.

Punches that a Sage throws that seemed to have missed actually hit them. Whenever a punch physically connects or not makes no difference, and one punch can cripple and completely hit an opponent.

The first bit needs changing to say: Punches that sage throws often hit when they appear at first to miss.

The second needs to be reworded to make more sense

how bout this?

What do you mean by Completely Hit? If you mean the attacks are unavoidable then its OP

Edited! No.. they are not inavoidable. All things inside 1 meter away from the user will be hit.

Kenzaki Uzumaki wrote:

Edited! No.. they are not inavoidable. All things inside 1 meter away from the user will be hit.

Well I am not sure how that we be the case if say your were fighting someone faster then you. There is no such thing as auto hit in US even if its restricted to 1 m.

So do you have a suggestion? 1m is a short range and the wrath lasts on a few post.

Replace:

Whenever a punch physically connects or not makes no difference, and one punch can cripple and completely hit an opponent inside the range of 1 meter around the user's body.

With:

In such a state the Nin is exponentially more dangerous at close quarters. Thanks to the enhanced speed and unseen reach his normal attacks become far harder to avoid, with strikes that you could formally dodge now finding their mark. The strikes made by him also inflict considerably more damage, often breaking bone or causing internal damage.

Fixed! I did what you said..

Approved