a finisher of mine (not complete but feel free to tell me thinks i need to improve on)

Name: Katon: shoryuken (Rising dragon fist)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description:

Shoruyken is a spiraling punch, moving in toward the opponent. The Shoryuken is invincible while the fist is rising, but completely vulnerable to counterattack when descending to make it an uppercut. First the user does the boar handsign then his or her most used hand ignites on fire not damging the user. The user has a choice of punching foward toward the opponent or using his fist as an uppercut. The user summons the chakra his palm , giving the user more strength. When the user summons the perfect amount of chakra to his fist (right or left)id fist ignites on fire which can help him block, deflect, or even counter other jutsus .When doing the uppercut he is very vulnerable. If the person was able to dodge the technique there would be no way for hero to counter the counter. Although if the uppercut was a success hero's fist will lift them up to about 7 to 13 feet. If you were not doing the uppercut and you just punched him he would fly back about 5 yards. Also if you are not doing the uppercut ,it is more less vulnerable than the uppercut.



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The Shoryuken is invincible while the fist is rising, but completely vulnerable to counterattack when descending to make it an uppercut.

Please explain this more. Why would it be invincible?

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When touching the opponent it can burn them severly if on the opponent over 5 seconds.

When saying that the punch will cause burns when touching the skin of the opponent for over 5 seconds you do realise the length of a single post (which is a short amount of time - seconds). When punching an opponent you dont really leave your fist on the opponent, that is more of a palm attack.

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