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PostSubject: Retsu Hazirami (Suna Jounin, Permission granted) (WiP)   Retsu Hazirami (Suna Jounin, Permission granted) (WiP) EmptySun Nov 01, 2009 8:55 pm

General Information
Name: Retsu Hazirami

Nickname/Alias: "The Wind's Whisper"

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Looks: Retsu Hazirami is very lean, coming in at only about 5'10" and 170 lbs. His face itself is very handsome, although he is a jounin rank, he hasn't seen much true battle outside of his village showing his true strengths only to the kazekage himself. His hair is dark blue, spiky and unkempt, his eyes the same dark blue matching his very unique eyes. His eyes are dark blue with a double iris giving him the image of having a spiral eye from his kekkei genkai, the rasen-me.

Hazirami wears simple clothes, although flashy. He wears all black, although unpractical for his living location, including his shirt and cargo pants. He wears a black jacket with orange stripes over his shoulders, over the top of shirt. The jacket is frayed, not from battle, but for fashion purposes. On his back are two swords that he uses occassionally in battle but very rarely since he hasn't trained them to the point of mastery quite yet though he still practices.

Spoiler:

Personality: Hazirami is very hyper in most occassions other than battle. His upbeat attitude and optimistic view on life usually leads to many people to surround him. He is somewhat perverted, but around women he tries to control himself unless he is bored. Because of his past nature he is sometimes shy around some people, but its usually hidden when he comes out of his shell. He can sometimes act stupid, but many times its just a ploy, in reality he is very smart and is usually the kind of person to have an answer for everything, even personal life problems.

During battle Hazirami's personality changes dramatically. His hyper personality is transformed into a calm, lucid behavior usually due to his naturally serious analyzing habits. Only unless his life is seriously endangered, he keeps this calm throughout a battle. Hazirami is known for playing mindgames, his specialty for getting into the heads of his opponent is renowned throughout the sand village. He'll play with an opponent, almost taking the battle as a joke until he gets serious about a fight. His battles are sometimes strung out, but usually are ended quickly.

Personality Trait's: Hazirami's personality centers around women. Although he does not consider himself a ladies man, you can usually find him around a group of women. Flirting comes naturally to him and many times he can take a conversation too far, usually resulting in disaster.

Catch Phrase: "Fight with honor only if required, but if you can avoid the fight as well, well that is honorable to."

Clan Information

Clan Name: Retsu

Kekkei Genkai: The Rasen-me is a doujutsu that gives the user dark blue eyes with a double iris similar to a spiral. The Rasen-me's ability is to see the vein's of the opponent, similar to the ability of the Byakugan in a 360 degree vision except for the blind spot in the back of the head. There are no other traits known about the Rasen-me, but it is rumored to be linked to the Sharingan and Byakugan.

Special Techniques: The Retsu clan uses its kekkei genkai in combination with specialized needles used for assassinations. Many of the techniques involve inserting needles into the veins of an opponents body causing effects on the body such as temporary paralyisis, sleep, or even death. Though the abilities that cause death are banned by the clan except in instances of assassination. The techniques are called the Forbidden Dragon Techniques because of their resemblence of fangs used to cut off the blood flow.

Clan Symbol: A blue pinwheel

Clan History: The Retsu's clan history is shrouded in mystery, very little is known of the history because its techniques are strongly guarded from shinobi outside of the clan, especially considering they're techniques used for silent assassinations of highly ranked shinobi. A few of the techniques are also banned to actual Retsu members in instances of true battle that are not assassinations, this is to prevent releasing any knowledge of the techniques to outside shinobi.


Rank Information:
Rank: Jounin
Village: Suna

Skill Information

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Wind
Sub: Earth

Special Characteristics: Hazirami trains daily, sprinting and practicing agility drills while working on attacking on moving targets giving him deceptive quickness and unnatural accuracy in his attacks which he needs for his special attacks using his needles considering he needs pinpoint accuracy to use them in battle.


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Jutsus: (Use the the following template)

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance

Name: Earth Release: Earth Flow River
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: After using the Tiger jutsu seal, the user turns the ground to mud causing a river that throws the opponent off-balance. The use of the jutsu can be considered offensive and defensive and is usually used to set up another jutsu afterwards in conjunction with the river.

Name: Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: After using the Sheep, Horse, and Dragon seals, the user turns the ground into mud and summons forth a dragon's head made of mud. The Dragon opens its mouth and begins to shoot concentrated mud projectiles at the opponent. This jutsu is mainly an offensive jutsu used as either a distraction or a direct attack.

Name: Earth Release: Rising Stone Spears
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: After using the bird seal, the user directs his earth chakra into the ground forcing up condensed mud spears from the ground skewing the opponent. The spears cannot pierce objects with a density stronger than the spears. This jutsu is an offensive and defensive (In certain cases).

Name: Domu: Earth Spear
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu (Supplimentary)
Element: Earth
Description: After using the snake seal, the user directs his earth chakra throughout his body giving it the ability to increase the density of part of or the entire body of the user to that of almost steel-like strength. This increases the power of the attacks and the defense of the user and is very useful in conjunction with taijutsu attacks.

Name: Earth Release: Earth Style Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user makes tiger seal with his left hand and an ox seal with his right and adjusts his right hand over his left to make a wall made of mud rise up from the ground to protect the user from most physical attacks. This jutsu is a defensive jutsu.

Name: Wind Release: Blade of Wind
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: After performing the correct seals the user concentrates his chakra into a almost a blade, sharper than most swords. The jutsu is said to be impossible to block because of its intangible nature and power, but it is possible to survive unless a direct hit is made. This jutsu is a very powerful offensive ninjutsu and can be used to make an attack with a normal sword even more deadly.

Name: Wind Release: Wind Cutter
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: This jutsu is used in conjunction with a sword that conducts wind chakra, it shapes the wind chakra into sharp streams of air that can be used to split wind element jutsus from hitting the user or it can be used to cut opponents from long distances away from the opponent. The abilities of this jutsu make it both a solid offensive and defensive ninjutsu.

Name: Wind Release: Wind Return
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: This jutsu is used in conjunction with swords that conduct wind chakra. The user channels wind energy into their swords and swings their swords producing wind whirlwinds used to block wind elemental jutsu and return the attack on the opponent. This jutsu can be used as a defensive and offensive counter ninjutsu.

Name: (Name of jutsu)
Rank: (E,D,C,B,A,S)
Type: (Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu)
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire)
Description: (About a paragraph describing your jutsu)
Medical use/Bastardized use: (For Medical jutsu only. Describe what qualifies this jutsu as medical. What is it's medical use or how was it bastardized from its original medical use, as in the case of poisons, etc.)

Name: (Name of jutsu)
Rank: (E,D,C,B,A,S)
Type: (Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu)
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire)
Description: (About a paragraph describing your jutsu)
Medical use/Bastardized use: (For Medical jutsu only. Describe what qualifies this jutsu as medical. What is it's medical use or how was it bastardized from its original medical use, as in the case of poisons, etc.)

Background Information

Childhood Life: Hazirami woke up violently, screaming again for the 3rd time this week. His eyes gave his face a scary look, especially in the darkness. His body was sweating and his body was shaking. He could hear his parents already rushing into the room trying to grab him and pull him down to prevent him from having another breakdown. The last time he had a breakdown he nearly destroyed the room, at only age 6 he was already versed in much of the shinobi life and it was easy for him to be a force of destruction. But these dreams, dreams that noone could explain. All Hazirami could ever remember of them is the blood, he could never tell where or why he saw blood, but it was always blood. The sight of it now scared him, but it was his destiny to carry on the family's name as a shinobi. The Retsu clan was destined to have a Kazekage in their family ranks, and Hazirami wished that it could be him. Ever since he has been training endlessly since he could even walk. Hazirami finally broke back into reality with his mother's cooing voice and her hand trying hold her screaming childs head.

"Please my child, the dream is over, your mother is here. You must calm down."

Hazirami could already feel the calming sensations that only a mother could bring at this time. He was thankful for having a mother that cared for him so much. She was beautiful, the kind of woman that every man would love to marry. She would take care of the family as a true shinobi bride would, even more so when her husband was away, she was always by his side. As a mother, she was even greater, she was the only one with the power to keep Hazirami in control. Hazirami was an only child, pampered like such as well. Although he is already forced to train hard, it is now by Hazirami's own choice, Hazirami wants to become kazekage and he was hoping he was well off on his way to becoming it.

Hazirami had a feeling that there may be meaning behind his dreams, but he was too young to understand what they truly meant. His parents were scared that the meaning behind them was true, would there be death in this child's life soon, and if so who? Hazirami was already falling back to sleep, he didn't see his mother give his father that worried look of a shinobi's bride. The look telling her husband to come back safely on his mission as father smiled and promised her his best. Hazirami's father was already dressed in full attire and packed, he was planning to leave that night without his son knowing, but now it seemed too late. If his son's dreams are true, they began around the time he had recieved his mission, and now he had a bad premonition. What would be the outcome of his newest mission, success or death? His father slipped out of the window quietly, he didn't wish to re-awake his child, but his wife knew his absense would be different this time, normally she could trust him to come back, this time she needed him to.

Hazirami woke up that next morning and began to continue his life as normal. He believed his father would return home soon, he had plans to take him on a trip when he got back. They were going to go to the Sand Villages famed museum to learn about the Land of the Winds famed past. They were adding in a new clan's wing and Retsu was going to be the first display built. Its rich heritage in Sunakagure's history was finally being recognized and his father wanted his son to take part in it. Hazirami was still training constantly, his father wanted his son to be the best prodigy to ever come out of the Sand village, and he was training him in Retsu's special abilities, especially the use of the assassination needles made specifically for the Retsu clan. Outside of his house was a training yard filled with training dummies with lines drawn all over it. To most ninja's the lines would be an enigma, but any medical ninja could tell that these lines roughly sketched the vascular system of an average human being. Hazirami's target, the vein located just behind the neck. Hazirami charged toward the dummy punching the body, dropped two needles into vein's located along the bicep of each arm then latching onto the back of the dummy he reached his mouth down to the wristband located on his right wrist, pulling a needle out with his teeth and aiming his mouth straight into the back of the vein located behind the dummy's neck, inserting the ultimate Retsu killing technique, The Kiss of the Dragon, with perfect accuracy.

Meanwhile, back in his father's life he was swiftly moving in with the same quickness as his son, latching onto the back of an unknown shinobi, the accuracy was the same, the needle inserted into the back of the missing ninja's neck. The body of the missing ninja froze as he began to spit up blood, the effect of the attack causing all the blood to remain in the victim's head. Soon the ninja fell to his knees, blood spilling from his ears and eyes as well. The death was painful but quick, soon the ninja fell face first truly dead. Hazirami's father bent down picking up the headband, a crossed out image of a missing ninja from the sand village. Hazirami burnt the picture that was used as his mission objective target and began to head back to the Sand village leaving the body behind. He did not wish to have the body dragging him down, he was an S-ranked missing ninja with ties to a strong organization that would soon be hot on his trail if he didn't escape first, once he got back into the Sand village he would have full protection from the Kazekage himself. He just had to make sure he was back first.

Hazirami would have no idea of the fact that his father was moving in the same characteristics as he was, he just had no idea of the trouble he was really in. He could see his mother's worry written across her face, she knew of his father's true mission, she just wishes she could tell her son. Hazirami looked up as the sky was already beginning to dim, darkness would soon fall upon the Sand village as nighttime sprung forward to take its grasp on time. Hazirami could feel the grips of sleep taking hold as well as he began to rub his eyes unconsciously like most children do. His eyes were beginning to feel heavy and his mother could see, she grabbed a hold of his hand and began to lead him back to the house where she would make dinner and lead him to bed. Hazirami would soon be fast asleep in the deepest sleep of his life, the first night in awhile where he wouldn't have a nightmare in his sleep.

Along the rooftops outside a group of ninja were spreading out, each looked at eachother sending quick signals as they spread out further until each rooftop had a ninja atop it. Each ninja had their target, each had a family of the Retsu clan, and their revenge was about to be taken 100 fold. A quick signal signed the attack as each ninja quickly disappeared kicking in a window, their target was simple, kill everyone. Hazirami could feel his mother carrying him, she hid him in a closet in a trapdoor that was installed years ago for the protection of the head family. This time it would only protect one, Hazirami could hear the screams of his mother as the flesh was torn from her bones. All he could do was whimper in fear of his own life as he could hear the death of his mother. As quickly as it began it ended, Hazirami waited for what felt like years, he was only hidden for about 12 hours when he could hear his father walk into the room and scream as he rushed to the trapdoor knowing his wife would hide his life first. Hazirami watched as his father pulled him out, the feeling in his own body felt gone and everything was a blur. Soon Hazirami looked over his father's shoulder and saw his mother for the first time since that night and immediately he collapsed in his father's arms. He would not wake for a week, the sight of his mother's carcass putting the child into a coma.

Academy Student Arc: Hazirami smiled as his target was hit accurately, each shuriken hitting a deadly strike zone. He was already able to throw 3-4 shuriken at once and was far ahead of the rest of his class. Coping with the loss of his mother had given him a lot of time to release his anger through training. Of course he was never sure he was truly over the pain of losing her. His new goal in life was not only to become the kazekage one day, but to exact revenge upon the men who slaughtered his family. Many were surprised how well Hazirami progressed with his depression issues, yet none of them knew the true goal upon his mind. After he had woken from his coma, many people immediately surrounded him trying to make him feel as comfortable as possible with the adjustment to his new life. Hazirami was his mother's child, and Hazirami looked to her more for support than he did his father, although Hazirami had taken a new perspective on life. Hazirami looked up to his father, yet his father was never the same after that night. He blamed himself even though he knew the blame was more upon the kazekage for allowing such a tragedy to occur under his watch. He should've never given that mission out and too this day, the kazekage was careful about each mission handed out.

Hazirami was finishing up with his school day, much of it was mundane, easy for the prodigy of the Retsu clan. The only child left in the clan was of course going to be the prodigy, but the idea that the child was so far ahead of all the other students was amazing in itself. The teachers were considering moving him on earlier to advance him to the genin level, but they wanted him to have a full childhood. They wanted to prevent any chance that he would let the events take over his life. A revenger was never a good lifestyle, especially for a kid Hazirami's age. Hazirami looked around, the students around him were having trouble aiming, their form was sloppy, he could see many kids watching him closely, studying his movements and trying to accomidate to them. Hazirami grabbed his jacket and began to walk out of the training area, one of his teachers taking notice who began to follow him.

"Very good job out there today Hazirami, you're advancing very well. Do you need help with anything else because it isn't time to leave the training area yet."

Hazirami stopped, he was tired, his eyes were baggy from lack of sleep. The night before he was up all night training trying to control some sort of hidden anger deep inside, but he really couldn't let the adults know. He would usually sneak out to the outskirts of town and practice on trees, or run for hours until he felt comfortable to return home and sleep. Yesterday was one of his worst days in awhile. Hazirami looked up at the teacher, his eyes were sharp and blue, but it was easy to sense that the student was tired.

"Um, I was actually wondering if you could let me out of school early today, my dad wants me home. I know, this is like the third time this week, but its important."

The instructor's face was almost clueless as he heard what the student said, he looked forward thinking deeply. He seemed to be a new teacher, only a chuunin, he merely took the job so that he would have something to do, and have a reason to stay off the battlefield. Hazirami only knew this because he had met with the man's children before, the job would keep the father off the battlefield and food on the table. Hazirami didn't really feel pity for the man's cowardice, but he didn't see anything wrong with it, it was better to not put the kid through the same situation that he himself had gone through. Although the teacher seemed to realize the situation, maybe it was what took place in his mind as he looked back to Hazirami again and smiled somewhat awkwardly before motioning for Hazirami to leave.

Hazirami left the school without question, he had something on his mind, the way his father had been acting recently, he was beginning to worry and he was starting to leave school more often to check up on him. Daily his father would retreat into seclusion and not return for hours at a time. When he'd come back he would seem tired and drained of energy. Hazirami began to walk up to the house, as he did he looked towards the bushes where he immediately dashed trying to keep out of site. His father did not like him leaving school, especially to come spy on him. Hazirami sat in the bushes and began to watch the front door, he was beginning to notice a routine in his father's movements. Almost on time, Hazirami watched as his father left the front door, looking both ways before walking down the steps and beginning to walk towards Hazirami into the woods, simply walking past the bush his son was hidden in, not suspecting that he was being watched.

Not far into the woods into a small opening of trees along a river, a crossing for wildlife. Hazirami finally watched as his dad stopped in front of the river as two figures popped up from the water, slowly animating as they rose from the water until they were finally standing atop it. Hazirami watched as his father kneeled with his hands held together in prayer almost for his life. Hazirami whimpered as he heard the men yelling together about debt, and forced himself to hold back a scream as his father was killed right before his eyes. One of the figures finally pulled a sword and without even seeing the man's sword move, he saw as his fathers head dropped to the ground, the thud landing sickly upon the grass causing Hazirami to flinch. The last member of his family, now murdered by two more suspiscious men, unknown to Hazirami. Hazirami didn't have any idea what to do as he saw the figures disappear, he quickly ducked down, thinking of running to his father, but quickly decided his life was more important, his decision even quicker as he turned and ran. Not stopping until his body finally collapsed at the Kazekage's doorsteps, unable to handle the stress and relieve the message to his father on time.

RP Sample: This RP Sample is the opening post to one of my older RPs I used to run called Meeting of Lions, I'll also provide a fighting sample from a battle posted on Bleach Reborn.

Opening Post for Meeting of Lions:

The year is 216 of the Third Age of men. The world is Terrorized by an evil man, Terabithea
Angar..

Since the Second age, the precise date is lost, Angar's evil reign began. During the years, people
roared for a change. Several uproars occurred, but were easily turned away.

Somewhere at the end of the Second Age, Two brave warriors stood up against Terabithea
Angar. These two inspired the whole nation, causing one of the largest uproars ever. These two
people were able to evolve, and develop themselves into legendary warriors. The legendary
Paladin, Lorus, and his companion, the Dark Knight, Garin.

They managed to break into Angar's fortress, in vain. Despite the fact that they managed to
wound Angar severely, they were killed. It is said that their souls were brought into a deep sleep,
waiting in the legendary swords they wielded. Angar, fearing the power of the swords, had them
removed from his castle, hidden in the same location, yet protected by the strongest of magic,
magic that could only be broken by the "Lions."

After their death, those who once defied the ruler, succumbed back to their routine, grasping that
faint whisper of hope which these two gave, leaving the world in peril again.

Now, in Third Age of Men, Terabithea Angar rules much of the world, leading many of the
mythical creatures, including most of the dragon-kin race. All hope seems lost for the rebellion,
those creatures that are willing to follow them are doubtful and frightened. But during the New
Age, it seems time for a rebellion.
__________________________________________________ ___

Barot grabbed another book off the shelf, it was dusty and the title was worn, almost unreadable. He began to mumble under his breath as he tried to decipher the title, blowing away some of the dust on the cover, grumbling even more as some of the dust got on his face and armor. Finally the title was barely there, the silver lining of the words just visible, and the brown leather binding falling apart.

“Noble Families of the Second Age of Man.”

Barot was beginning to talk out loud as his eyes gleamed, looking for knowledge as he opened the cover, looking at the worn out words on the pages, the penmanship wasn’t the greatest making the words even harder to read. He began searching through the book, looking for a family crest that may match his own. He felt a cold draft as he looked around, muttering about how the castle was so horribly built. As he reached the last page, he sighed, he peaked his eye through the vacant hole that the book had filled up before, he began to look around trying to see if anyone was around as he lightly whistled, outside he could hear a flutter of very large wings and a couple of gasps from the bystanders below. Barot smiled as he placed the book back in the hole on the shelf, looking over at a window that was now the center of attention in the library. Barot began to dart towards the window, diving though it onto a large golden body beneath him.

“Do you always have to be so brash?”

Barot smiled as he looked at the golden eyes of the dragon, looking back along his long body. Barot rubbed his hands along the golden scales on the back of the dragon, still always amazed by the power and motion he felt as the beast flapped its wings. Barot’s loud and cheerful voice carried even down to the courtyards below.

“Well, explain to me why the idiot architects decided to build a library in the tower of a castle?”

“So they could keep idiots like you away.”

Barot laughed as he kicked the side of the dragon signaling for it to fly. The air outside was cold, as the dragon flew, Barot could feel the cold bite of the wind seeking through his armor and causing his hair to stand up. Barot began fidgeting with his armor, trying to tighten it to no avail. He could understand the difficulty of working atop a large flying dragon as he began to sigh.

“Hey Kif, any news on the family crest yet?”

“None.”

Barot began to fidget with his sword even more as he began to wonder about who he was. He looked over the side of Kif’br, down at the courtyard where he could see all the bustling people of the Paladin fortress. His eyes drifted to and over the walls guarding the large bustling metropolis. Again, his mind began to wander, wondering what news there was of the Black Knights and Terabithea Angar. He was more curious about the most recent plans for the Rebellion, when he heard of them, he thought they were too farfetched to believe, but the idea of finding the “Swords of Legend” seem to be fiction. Barot unsheathed his sword, running the thumb of his right hand along the blade. Kif’br realizing that the sword was unsheathed looked back, his body fidgeting a bit.

“Do you have to have that thing out while you’re on my back?”

“What’s the problem? You and me have already began to work with spears and lances, I’m most skilled with swords, be prepared to learn to handle those as well.”

Kif’br realized that his learning to ride with a sword user was more than just about his master being most skilled with them, he had overheard the rumors as well flying around about the “Swords of Legend.” Kif’br looked down his eyes spotting a clearing in the woods where they used to always train, the dragon landing softly on a patch of clear dirt, allowing Barot to slip off and face the dragon.

“You going to stay and train?”

Kif’br shook his head began to flap his wings as Barot mumbled something about laziness, already beginning to hack his sword into a large tree, causing deep indents, where the sap oozed out slowly, where he knew it would crystalize the next day. His power with the sword was far weaker than most, and he knew it, he’d pull the sword out each time and swing again, all in hopes of strengthening his blows. After awhile, he felt his arms beginning to get sore as he sat back against the tree which now had a large gash going about half-way though the tree. Barot found it surprising that the tree was still standing and able to support his weight as he sat against it, nodding off a bit into his sleep.



Fighting Sample:

Daisuke smiled as his attack hit, he knew it wasn't a hard hit and it wouldn't do too much damage, he was looking more for the pyschological affect. How would his opponent know when he would actually take the battle seriously? He watched as his opponent spin around, the slight fear that showed in Koujetsu's eyes for the split second enticed Daisuke to want to battle more and toy with his mouth before he attacked him like a cat. The counterattack, a wild swing with his opponent's zanpaktou was easy to block with his own side as he pulled his sword back to smack Koujetsu's sword away. He watched as the maelstorm attack was sent at him again, much more powerful than before. It was harder to block but it was all he could do since he didn't wish to dodge it, he held his hand out and built up his reiatsu into a ball before the maelstrom struck him it collided with the ball cause the damage to split again, hitting the sides of his body, this time leaving a nice cut on Daisuke's face. Shallow, but the point got through that the attack had power to it and was damaging if left unprotected. Daisuke looked around after the dust had cleared, he couldn't see Koujetsu, but his ability to hide his reiatsu was very good, not perfect, but good enough to fool other shinigami of a lower rank. He couldn't find his exact location, but the general area to where Koujetsu was obvious, but there was no reason to reveal this to the vizard now, Daisuke sat back and acted as if he had no idea where he was.

"You obviously did something to be banished from the Soul Society, the Soul Society isn't unforgiving of most laws broken or I would've been removed from the Gotei 13 a long time ago. You speak as if you had your honor removed from you by the Soul Society, only you can have your honor removed."

Daisuke smiled and looked around the area trying to play foolish, it was obvious he was playing a game. He didn't love to fight just to fight, but he loved to fight those who would produce a challenge, and Koujetsu was enough of a challenge to give him a good time. He looked down at his sword and saw a drop of blood dangling from the tip about to fall, he watched as it dripped on the ground beneath him and immediately thought of the inscription on his sword, his honor was about to be achieved from the battle he was about to commence.

"I'm sure you're feeling the effects of my blade, your breathing is slowed from an attack to the chest, the icy feeling on your lungs and your heart beat slowed. You stamina slowed and your body tired. I'm sure you're going to try and avoid any attack to vital organs again, its risky to take any attack there, but my zanpaktou is special. It freezes upon intact, and slows down the body leaving it almost immobile. I could kill you with one attack, or toy with you for my pleasure, which do you think I'm attempting to do in this battle? Show your face and defend your honor or flee like a coward and never show your face in the Soul Society again."
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