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| Subject: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:25 am | |
| General InformationName: Cloud Bravehart Nickname/Alias: Holy Savior Age: 26 Gender: Male Looks: - Spoiler:
Cloud has blonde spikey hair and it is always a bushy mess.This is due to the fact that he never brushes it and tends to it, like he should.From birth, he has always had some sort of symbol on his left arm. It looks like a detailed spiral with lines separating them selves away from the spiral. Many people say it looks like the tatoo of the ANBU, so Cloud's family asked an ANBU official whether it was, and they said "I have never seen anything like it before".No one has ever been able to indicate why it is there.He has light green eyes and has a slim face.Cloud doesn't tend to smile a lot either. He always wears his tight black pants with his ninja shoes.He also wears long black gloves that go up his arm.It is always been said that a true shinobi wears vests;or at least his father thinks so.Now, Cloud likes to think himself as a true ninja everyday when he puts on his black and white vest. Which he wears a black shirt under. Though he puts on a bracer for defensive maneuvers on his right arm. Lastly, he puts on his lucky white belt for good luck.This belt was worn by his father when he attended his Academy School.It was also worn by his father's father when he attended his Academy School.They all graduated with the greatest of ease, which is why Cloud thinks it is such a lucky belt even now, though his father just thinks it is irony. Alignment: Lawfully Good Personality: Cloud is a very trusting person which is a good trait to friends.He believes that keeping secrets are being kept a secret for a reason.And its not his secret to tell in the first place so straight off the bat Cloud is not a person who will crack easily.Cloud is a very happy person in general but can be a serious one too at certain times.He’s also very sociable and is not known to be a loner. And hes also very perceptive to his surroundings including the people around him.He can tell when they are trying to hide something or aren’t in the mood etc.In his free time he likes to adventure and read about the world.Archeology has certainly interested him and he hopes to one day discover something big that will help the ninja world further its knowledge. In his alignment it is stated that he is a lawfully good person, which is true because he is generally a mature, responsible adult. Cloud was still a bit scarred when from his mother's death.For a time he would have dreams of a dark hooded figure killing his mother.All he ever saw was blood, blood, and more blood.He never has been able to get over these dreams.It was so bad that it carried on through his life and watching that hooded figure kill his mom over and over and over again really got Cloud to think alot more darker.When he finds him self killing enemies, he'll most likely end up torturing them and killing them slowly like his mother had died.He has grown a killing intent because of this. Personality Trait's: Archeology, Nature, History, Knowledge Catch Phrase: "Shall I give you despair?" Clan Information- Spoiler:
Clan Name: Kango Soujuu[Medical Manipulation]
Kekkei Genkai: This is very unique clan that obviously experts in the manipulation of Medical Chakra Manipulation.They have two sets of chakra systems that they use.One is their regular chakra system while the other is a back up chakra pool that tends to be used for their Medic Jutsus.So if they ran out of one chakra pool they would have a back up one.This KKG also allows them to times their lifespan by two because of all the Medical Chakra they store up in their bodies.Also, they can manipulate their Medical Chakra into doing many things such as upgrading regular jutsus into medical ones.
Clan Symbol: A green square with a red heart in the middle
Clan History: This clan has existed before Sunagakure was even made.The founder, Ryu Bravehart, first began experimenting with Medical Chakra when he was 10.He later found uses for it beyond his belief.He could manipulate Medical Chakra how ever he wanted to.From that point on, he trained his family to manipulate Medical Chakra like he could.When he passed away the family kept on teaching generations after generations.The family had always been a noble and respectable family.That is why when they arrived in Sunagakure, they were highly favored and became a strong clan. Rank Information:- Spoiler:
Rank: Jounin Village: Sunagakure Skill Information- Spoiler:
Skill Specialty: Kenjutsu Medical
Main: Medical Sub: Kenjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Main: Fire Sub: Wind
Special Characteristics: N/A Items/Weapons:- Spoiler:
Name: Duel Katanas Appearance: Rank: C Special Abilities: N/A Origin: Cloud made these thinking that it would be cool to have a pair of katanas.This is what got him involved in Kenjutsu and he began to think of very interesting combos for katanas. Name: Wind Slicer Appearance: Rank: B Special Abilities: The sword is chakra conductive so when Cloud flows chakra through it then he can send wind waves towards the enemies. Origin: Cloud first made this when he became Chunin. He decided to step up from his regular katanas and make something a little more worth while.Thats when he made the Wind Slicer.This sword is related to the Katon Slicer. Name: Katon Slicer Appearance: Rank: B Special Abilities: The sword is chakra conductive so when Cloud flows chakra through it then he can send fire waves towards the enemies. Origin:Cloud first made this when he became Chunin. He decided to step up from his regular katanas and make something a little more worth while.Thats when he made the Katon Slicer.This sword is related to the Wind Slicer. Name: Explosion Appearance: Rank: A Special Abilities: The sword has the ability to make small explosions when ever it hits something. Origin: Cloud first made this when he became Jounin. He thought it was time to make something extremely extraordinary.And on that note he made Explosion with its ability to make small explosions when ever it hits something. Name: Buster Sword Appearance: Rank: A Special Abilities: When Cloud flows A Ranked amount of chakra into this sword it emits a strange aura around the sword that can block all C Ranked Genjutsu and below. Origin: This is definitely Cloud's most favored and powerful sword.He doesn't use it as often as he would use his other swords to prevent wear,tear, and rust. Background Information - Spoiler:
Birth/Early Childhood Arc/AS Arc Cloud was born into a high class, honorable family of ninjas. His family was born in a small village far, far away from what is known today as the 5 great shinobi villages. The first village that Cloud's family heard of was the great village of Sunagakure. They decided to depart from their small little village and be apart of something much bigger, which would also lead to better lives for their children, like Cloud. Once the family had arrived and settled down in Suna, they were highly respected by other fellow shinobi. Many years after their arrival when Cloud was only 5 years old, his mother died on a mission, and that's when Cloud decided that he would dedicate his life to becoming a great ninja, to protect the ones he cares about. He got past the death of his mother, and started to train hard. He wasn't able to channel chakra correctly, and his father wanted him to learn from the ninja academy. So then Cloud requested to learn more about the ninja world.His father thought it was good to be knowledgeable and thought about clans, academic matters, and the history of the five ninja villages. He also taught him about some of the jutsu that he might come across in the ninja world. Cloud wrote all of this down in his journal, which he kept with him at all times. Cloud then entered the academy when he was 10 years old.
Genin Arc Cloud was a highly skilled shinobi once he had graduated from the Academy at the age of eleven.Infact, he was so good at the rank of Genin that he was actually paired up with Chunin.This was a remarkable feat for him and he was very proud.The Chunin accepted him and he ended up having friends that were much older than him and also much wiser.Though he learned alot from them, that he couldn't have learned working with fellow Genin.As a shinobi he felt strong inside and knew he was on his way to being number one.
Chunin Arc After one full year of being a Genin and working with the Chunin he had entered the Chunin Exams.He passed the first part of the exam flawlessly and was praised by the exam instructor.Many of the other ninja were quite jealous.Then they moved on to the forest of death.The other ninjas were almost trying to target Cloud because they knew he was a formidable foe.When Cloud was wandering alone in the forest of death, a squad of Genin had surrounded him making it an unfair battle.Or at least someone else would've thought so.In reality Cloud knew that it was unfair for THEM because he could destroy all three of them with one attack.They all attacked at once and just before they were upon him, Cloud pulled out his Buster Sword and swung spinning around in a 360 and they all fell motionless and utterly disgraced to be defeated by one ninja.It was Cloud's lucky day as he picked up the other scroll he needed from the Genin and moved on to the tower where his third and final exam would take place.He had been the first one to arrive at the tower and waited for about two whole days for the other ninjas to get there.They were all astonished by how well he had done on the second exam.Now that the ninjas were here, they started the third exam.Cloud fought three times against some of what he considered, the weakest Genin alive.He defeated each one with the same move everytime, which was a nice blow to the head with his Buster Sword, decapitating them.On that note, he had received the rank of Chunin with great ease.Three years later the Kazekage called him down to his office and he promoted him to Jounin.
Jounin Arc To be Continued... RP Sample:- Spoiler:
Ichigo ran down the corridor looking for a way out.The flood was right on his tail.It was going to engulf him any second now.In vain he tried performing Doton jutsus but nothing would work.He quickly turned left into a new corridor,it was simply never ending. Well apparently not because Ichigo could see dead end infront of him. 'Shit' is all he kept on repeating in his mind.He stopped at the wall and spun around. The flood had caught up to him and crashed straight into his chest. He was drowning, losing breath fast. As he let his last breath out he felt a felt a loud bump on his head.
Ichigo had fallen out of the tree he was sleeping in."Ungh.....I hate that dream..."said Ichigo to himself.Ever since his escape from Sunagakure he has had dreams where he always ends up dieing.It is because of this that he is sometimes afraid to go to sleep.He quickly gathered his things,fully knowing it was dangerous for him to stay in one spot for to long and headed towards the plain where he would train his new summon.He headed in a west ward direction.
After a long walk he reached a wide open plain.He set his bags down and immediately got to work.Ichigo grabbed a Kunai from his puch and stabbed his thumb.He rubbed the bloody thumb on a bird feather that belonged to his summon "Strawberry".Then he held the feather to the sky and his summon Strawberry popped out of the feather and swooped up elegantly doing all kinds of neat tricks in the air."Wow this is really cool...."said Ichigo to himself.
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| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:42 am | |
| Academy/Basic Jutsu- Spoiler:
Name:Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu/Academy Element: -- Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu/Academy Element: -- Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to tranform themself into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu/Academy Element: -- Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds. Kenjutsu- Spoiler:
Name: Art of the Ninja Monkey Type: Kenjutsu Rank: C-A Element: N/A Description: This style is only utilized by Cloud and Cloud only.This technique/style allows Cloud to be more faster and agile like a monkey.When Cloud goes into this style he tends to let his left hand sort of limp and let it hang around while he uses his other hand to attack.He tries to imitate a monkey while using the speed and agility that of a monkey.It makes him about a 1/2 faster and agile than a regular ninja.He usually prances around his enemy and attacks with quick but penetrable blows.
Name: Braver Type: Kenjutsu Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Cloud performs a single leaping chop that has great force and potentially kill someone.
Name: Cross Slash Type: Kenjutsu Rank: C Element: N/A Description: With several powerful slashes, Cloud can cause massive damage to an opponent.
Name: Blade Beam Type: Kenjutsu Rank: B Element: N/A Description: Waves of energy rush from Cloud's sword and collide with a single enemy.The remaining energy then splits in to smaller, weaker waves, hitting any remaining enemies.This attack is great against a large of enemies.The initial wave causes about three times as much damage as the smaller waves.
Name: Omnislash Type: Kenjutsu Rank: A Element: N/A Description: Cloud assaults his opponent with a long series of powerful sword attacks.This can be used against a single opponent or a group but either way this is an extremely powerful attack.
Name: Big Shot Type: Kenjutsu Rank: B Element: Katon Description: Cloud fires a large ball of fire from his sword which can cause massive damage to an opponent.
Name: Sled Fang Type: Kenjutsu Rank: B Element: N/A Description: Cloud charges through an opponent causing a large amount of physical damage if the hit is succesful.
Name: Blood Fang Type: Kenjutsu Rank: B Element: Katon Description: Cloud charges through an opponent causing a large amount of physical damage if the hit is succesful.Though this time Cloud envelopes his sword in fire.
Name: Boost Jump Type: Kenjutsu Rank: B Element: N/A Description: Cloud vaults into the air and crashes down on a single opponents head.
Name: Hyper jump Type: Kenjutsu Rank: A Element: Katon Description: Cloud leaps into the air and drives his weapon deep in to the ground causing an explosion with in 10 meters to occur and is used to damage a large group of enemies. Medical/Clan Jutsus- Spoiler:
Name: Kango Soujuu[Medical Manipulation] Rank: D Type: Medical/KKG Element: Medic Description: This is a technique used solely by the members of the Kango Soujuu clan.This technique allows a clan member to manipulate Medical Chakra how ever they can and want to.They use this technique mostly to heal though when they are not using it for other things.
Name: Chakra Needles Rank: C-B Type: Medical/KKG Element: Medic Description: This is a technique used solely by the members of the Kango Soujuu clan.This technique allows a clan member to make needles made out of chakra in his/her stomach that they shoot from their mouth.
Name: Poison Infliction Rank: B-A Type: Medical/KKG Element: Medic Description: This is a technique used solely by the members of the Kango Soujuu clan.This technique allows a clan member to change their Medical Chakra into a poisonous state for one post though this does not affect themselves.Once this is done they can blow the poisonous chakra through their mouths and infect opponents with poison.
Name: Healing Spray Stage I Rank: C Type: Medical/KKG Element: Medic Description: This is a technique used solely by the members of the Kango Soujuu clan.This technique allows a clan member to gather some of their Medical Chakra in their mouth and then blow it outwards like a spray to heal either their allies or themselves.It can heal medium cuts and small injuries.This gas like spray heals when it makes physical contact with its target.Though it takes a good two post to be healed.
Name: Healing Spray Stage II Rank: B Type: Medical/KKG Element: Medic Description: This is a technique used solely by the members of the Kango Soujuu clan.This technique allows a clan member to gather some of their Medical Chakra in their mouth and then blow it outwards like a spray to heal either their allies or themselves.Though, unlike Stage I, they can gather more chakra in their mouth and blow out a bigger spray.It can heal large cuts and medium injuries.This gas like spray heals when it makes physical contact with its target.Though it takes a good three posts to be healed.
Name:Chakra no Ito - Chakra Threads - Type:C Element:N/A Rank:C Description:Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu is a special Ninjutsu techinque used by the Leaf ninja Yoroi. After activitating the technique, Yoroi's hand will glow with chakra. When he touches his palm on his opponents body, he can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases his advantage over his opponent.
Name:Chakra no Mesu - Chakra Scalpel - Type:Medic Element:N/A Rank:B Description:Chakra no Mesu is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood veseels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.
Name:Chikatsu Saisei no Jutsu - Healing Resuscitation Regeneration - Type:Medic Element:N/A Rank:A Description:Chikatsu Saisei is an advanced medical Ninjutsu technique. The technique allows the medical ninja to use the hair of the one injured as a medium to reconstruct damaged body tissue. The extent of the damage will control how difficult and long the procedure is. The injured person will be placed in the center of a square marked with rites for the procedure. One medical ninja will sit at each corner to provide precise chakra control to help in the cell conversion process. Another medical ninja will sit at the lead to guide the process.
Name:Shousen Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique - Type:Medic Element:N/A Rank:A Description:Shousen Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the ninja is highly skilled, they are able to heal more critical injuries. Highly skilled medical-Nins such as Tsunade can use their techniques to perform surgeries that otherwise would not be possible.
Name:Shujutsushitsu No jutsu - Surgical Ninjutsu - Type:Medic Element:N/A Rank:C Description:The user uses healing chakra to preform medical needs on or off the battle feild. Can Pertain to, but is not limited to Eye Surgery or loss of limb Surgery.
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| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:10 am | |
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| | | Ichi-Kun C ranked Missing-Ninja
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:12 am | |
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| | | Travis Akatsuki
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:39 am | |
| No elements at AS.
Remove all jutsu except for Transformation, Replacement, and Escaping. | |
| | | ¶Wïnged Šërãphïm¶ Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:54 am | |
| Edited and got rid of all basic jutsu but those three | |
| | | Travis Akatsuki
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Thu Dec 03, 2009 8:11 am | |
| Remove all Kenjutsu and Clan Techs, your to LEARN jutsu in the Academy. | |
| | | ¶Wïnged Šërãphïm¶ Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Thu Dec 03, 2009 8:15 am | |
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| | | Ichi-Kun C ranked Missing-Ninja
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Fri Dec 04, 2009 3:51 am | |
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| | | Travis Akatsuki
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Fri Dec 04, 2009 4:20 am | |
| Has your clan been approved? | |
| | | Fαταl Aττrαcτioη ♥ Leaf Genin
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:57 pm | |
| I can't really disagree with this application, as most of it is self explainitory. But before I approve, I would like another mod's opinion. | |
| | | Todd Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:19 am | |
| Given S-rank permission from Adam on your second account? Hmm.... | |
| | | ¶Wïnged Šërãphïm¶ Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:58 am | |
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| | | Travis Akatsuki
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Mon Dec 07, 2009 7:10 am | |
| Which would be A rank I believe. | |
| | | ¶Wïnged Šërãphïm¶ Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Mon Dec 07, 2009 7:47 am | |
| Im sorry i though Jounin was S Ranked lol
took out everything reffering to S Ranked so this is ready for approval | |
| | | ¶Wïnged Šërãphïm¶ Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Tue Dec 08, 2009 3:48 am | |
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| | | Travis Akatsuki
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Tue Dec 08, 2009 4:01 am | |
| Wait, you applied for AS and were approved for that, I don't see you requesting to be Jounin, I want Adam's post here to clarify it. | |
| | | ¶Wïnged Šërãphïm¶ Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Tue Dec 08, 2009 4:08 am | |
| holy jesus christ T.T I pmed Adam if I could make a jounin and he replyed with "Permission Granted" I took the character that I was making at the time which was Academy Student and updated him to Jounin. Im tired of waiting T.T your approval will be my christmas gist | |
| | | Todd Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Tue Dec 08, 2009 4:39 am | |
| -Bulk up your personality, either increase the paragraphs or make a third the same size
- SC- Intense speed? how much faster are you than the average jounin, a comparison would be good. | |
| | | ¶Wïnged Šërãphïm¶ Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:17 am | |
| 1)Didn't feel like editing the speed and explaining it so I got rid of it 2)Added another paragraph to the personality THIS APP IS DEFINITELY READ FOR APPROVAL NOW | |
| | | Senkou Akatsuki Leader
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:29 am | |
| I need better descriptions on almost all of your Kenjutsu
Sword : Buster, how can a sword block genjutsu. If you give a good enough explanation I MIGHT allow it. | |
| | | ¶Wïnged Šërãphïm¶ Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:47 am | |
| Because its special ;D
Cloud's chakra flows into the sword and it emits an aura around the sword and it can block any genjutsu below the rank which is A so he can block genjutsus B and below.
And what do you mean describe them better? There pretty much right to the point ... can you really describe kenjutsu? lol | |
| | | Senkou Akatsuki Leader
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:51 am | |
| Ight,
You need to explain the first one better. The different art form. That most certainly can be described better. In fact it should be about as long as KKG description as it is a whole new style. The others I suppose are fine.
Im going to have to deny the genjutsu blocking ability unless you dumb it down to being able to block C rank and below. B rank is to high. | |
| | | Senkou Akatsuki Leader
| Subject: Re: Cloud Bravehart ~Finished With Adam's Permission~ Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:03 am | |
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