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Brock Sand Jounin
| Subject: Poison Gas Cloud Bombs [Puppet Kaze] [Finished] Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:20 pm | |
| Name: Poison Gas Cloud Bombs Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: - Description: The puppet will launch poison gas cloud bombs from his mouth at a target, enveloping them in a poison gas cloud. In battle, Kaze fires around 2 - 5 poison has cloud bombs from his mouth which was stored in his body. Once fired, Isato can just leave the poison to clear away to see what has happened. Or in my character application for Kaze, he can fire senbon from his left arm into the poison gas cloud improving chances of hitting the target which may make them breathe in the poison. Or to make sure a target might not escape the poison gas cloud, Kaze can fire a net from his right arm into the poison gas cloud, hopefully catching the target, but chances are of catching the target in the net, are extremely slim, since of the size of the poison gas cloud. For example, the area of the poison gas cloud from 5 bombs would be maybe 5 - 10 metres across both ways, and the net is maybe 1 - 2 metres in area, this is only an example, the measurements are not correct. Firing the net is the right arm. Poison can make a person extremely ill if not treated in say . . . 3 days or earlier perhaps.
Link: Adam has granted me NO training for one jutsu. This is the jutsu.
Last edited by Rasen Shuriken on Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:01 pm; edited 3 times in total | |
| | | Adam The Fourth Hokage
| Subject: Re: Poison Gas Cloud Bombs [Puppet Kaze] [Finished] Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:33 pm | |
| Increase the description, two lines won't cut it. | |
| | | Brock Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Poison Gas Cloud Bombs [Puppet Kaze] [Finished] Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:39 pm | |
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| | | Adam The Fourth Hokage
| Subject: Re: Poison Gas Cloud Bombs [Puppet Kaze] [Finished] Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:42 pm | |
| Sounds more like a smoke bomb than a poison bomb, considering your doing it to blind the opponent not to poison them, you might wanna change that? | |
| | | Brock Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Poison Gas Cloud Bombs [Puppet Kaze] [Finished] Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:47 pm | |
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| | | Adam The Fourth Hokage
| Subject: Re: Poison Gas Cloud Bombs [Puppet Kaze] [Finished] Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:50 pm | |
| The net bit is a bit much, being that you couldn't even see where you were shooting, if you fired say four poison bombs, that a large cloud of poison, therefore if you fired a net in there, not being able to see in there, the chances of hitting the opponent would be slim, so saying 100% is highly over exaggerated. Then secondly you say somebody would die if they weren't treated in a few days, change it to say they could become extremely ill if not treated in a few days, not death. | |
| | | Brock Sand Jounin
| Subject: Re: Poison Gas Cloud Bombs [Puppet Kaze] [Finished] Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:01 pm | |
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| | | Adam The Fourth Hokage
| Subject: Re: Poison Gas Cloud Bombs [Puppet Kaze] [Finished] Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:10 pm | |
| Approved and added to your puppet. | |
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