Kaguya Kimimaro returns!

Hy,
I was played with this on another forum and was knowed as death itself.I was one of the most powerful missing-nins.I was the one who bringed death till orochimaru appeared.He teached me oanother way to use my powers, and slowly I beggined to stop killing so much peoples.I,ve killed much anbu, and even 3 kage.I've maked the sound five in order to help me to do my missions from orochimaru.But soon 2 of the sound five were killed by me when they dissapointed me in an inportat mission.Then i became a sound shinobi...But all those are gone and Kimimaro returns in Kirigankure as a new genin....the story beggins here.

Well, I guess that sounds nice, I'd like to see this forum, because if you were "death itself" I know a few people who would be Gods there.

Anyway, welcome to the site.

if this sounds nice why you rejected my caracter?

On that forum i was on top 10 strongest ninjas but that forum is no longer playeble.Every ninja from that top 10 was a name like this.my was death because i uses bone(that make me the death skeletal).I was on 5th place.

I didn't reject the character. I do not have that kind of power. However, The rules state that 8. - Do not attempt to create a Canon Character. We do not allow them here. Think of this forum as an alternate dimension seperate from the world of the series.

You are allowed to have a Kaguya, but not Kimimaro. You copied and pasted all his infromation, as well.

And I highly doubt you'll be 5th place here.

Frankly, the fact that you made that statement with improper punctuation, spelling errors, numbers in place of words, and incorrect tenses is a very poor sign. I can't really imagine a site that would place someone of your level at 5th of anything, but you have gained my attention, do you have a link to your former site?

Also, your signature has a spelling error in it. Revere is spelled as I just spelled it, not how you did.

5th best academy student maybe.

lol BUUUURRRRRN!!!!

*gets in Kimimaro face*
Burn

no? I was 5th place of the missing nin But i played much on that forum.But is no need to start with kimimaro with all this skills althroug.I could develop these skills in time.

Kaguya Kimimaro wrote:

no? I was 5th place of the missing nin But i played much on that forum.But is no need to start with kimimaro with all this skills althroug.I could develop these skills in time.

Once again, I'll have to inquire, how many Missing Ninja were there? Were there only five? Like I asked, and like everybody is dying to have, do you have a link to this site so that we can look at it and see whether or not you're telling the truth. Otherwise we're forced to assume you're just lying about it and trying to impress us with non-existent accomplishments.

At your level of English...
"Site Link or GTFO"

the site is no loger playeble.It redirects you on a diferent thing.Why you think i leaved that place? But i will give you the link to see yourself: www.narutoninja-rpg.com
An were 35 missing nins if you wanted to know. Not everyone there could get the rank of missing nin.You needed to be skilled there to become a missing nin.

Kaguya Kimimaro wrote:

Hy,
I was played with this on another forum and was knowed as death itself.I was one of the most powerful missing-nins.I was the one who bringed death till orochimaru appeared.He teached me oanother way to use my powers, and slowly I beggined to stop killing so much peoples.I,ve killed much anbu, and even 3 kage.I've maked the sound five in order to help me to do my missions from orochimaru.But soon 2 of the sound five were killed by me when they dissapointed me in an inportat mission.Then i became a sound shinobi...But all those are gone and Kimimaro returns in Kirigankure as a new genin....the story beggins here.

Hi, (1)
I played (2) on another forum and was known (3) as death itself. (4) I was one of the most powerful missing-ninja (5). (6) I was the one who brought (7) death until ( Orochimaru (9) appeared. (10) He taught (11) me another (12) way to use my powers. (13) (14) (15) Slowly I began (16) to stop killing so many (17) people (18). (19) I've (20) killed many (21) ANBU (22) (23) and even three (24) Kage (24). (25) I (27) made (26) The Sound Five (27) in order to help me (28) do my missions from Orochimaru (28). (29) (30) Soon two (31) of the Sound Five (32) were killed (33) ((34) By me (35)) when they disappointed (39) me during (36) an important (38) mission. (37) Then I (38) became a Sound (39) shinobi. (40) (41) All those are gone and Kimimaro has (42) returned (43) to (44) in Kirigakure (45) as a new Genin (46). (47) The (48) story begins (49) here.

Just short of 50 errors in the wording, spelling, tense, format, etc. of your introductory statement and thats not even 200 words, I don't think that's skill.

hahahahahahaha, I was there and it was a stat site. They did have some rp there, but what they did was horrid. I mean, I rped there when I was a Noob, and that was years ago. Oh, that makes me laugh.

No, it actually is 50 errors Y, you forgot 'I was played'

Don't you guys think you're being a little - what's the word I'm looking for? Oh yeah - rude?

Ulkira wrote:

Don't you guys think you're being a little - what's the word I'm looking for? Oh yeah - rude?

No.

People making introduction topics in which they make claims of greatness and then expect not to be called out on their blatant lack of greatness seems rude though.

It seems the site he has posted, is back. Wanna go and mess it up? HAHA!

Not particularly. When someone claims to be really good and obviously falls up short of the standard they have set for themselves, they bring any and all criticism received upon themselves. People should not make such bold statements with out first checking out the quality of work upon the site as a whole because not all sites have the same standard, (I rped on that site as well,) and that sites standard is far below this sites. Sorry dude, you may have been king there, but here, its back to the academy with you.

BUURRNED AGAIN!!!!! Dizzamn son! You just got served ..... ok i am done now lol

Original

Hy,
I was played with this on another forum and was knowed as death itself.I was one of the most powerful missing-nins.I was the one who bringed death till orochimaru appeared.He teached me oanother way to use my powers, and slowly I beggined to stop killing so much peoples.I,ve killed much anbu, and even 3 kage.I've maked the sound five in order to help me to do my missions from orochimaru.But soon 2 of the sound five were killed by me when they dissapointed me in an inportat mission.Then i became a sound shinobi...But all those are gone and Kimimaro returns in Kirigankure as a new genin....the story beggins here.

My way

Hi (1),
I (2) played (3) (4) on another forum and was known (5) as death itself. (6) I was one of the most powerful missing-ninjas (7). ( I was the one who brought (9) death till (10) Orochimaru appeared.He (11) taught me (12) another way to use my powers. (13) (14) (15) Slowly I (16) began to stop killing so (17) many (18) people. (19) (20) I've killed (21) many (22) ANBU, and even (24) three (25) Kage. (26) I've (27) made (28) The (29) Sound (30) Five in order to help me (31) do my missions from (32) Orochimaru. (33) (34) (35) Soon (36) two of the (38) Sound (39) Five (40) was killed by me when they (41) disappointing me in an (42) important mission. (43) Then (44) I became a (45) Sound (46) Shinobi. (47) (48) (49) All those are gone and Kimimaro (50) has (51) returned (52) to Kirigankure as a new genin (53). (54) (55) The story (56) begins here.

Y's way

Hi, (1)
I played (2) on another forum and was known (3) as death itself. (4) I was one of the most powerful missing-ninja (5). (6) I was the one who brought (7) death until (Cool Orochimaru (9) appeared. (10) He taught (11) me another (12) way to use my powers. (13) (14) (15) Slowly I began (16) to stop killing so many (17) people (18). (19) I've (20) killed many (21) ANBU (22) (23) and even three (24) Kage (24). (25) I (27) made (26) The Sound Five (27) in order to help me (28) do my missions from Orochimaru (28). (29) (30) Soon two (31) of the Sound Five (32) were killed (33) ((34) By me (35)) when they disappointed (39) me during (36) an important (38) mission. (37) Then I (38) became a Sound (39) shinobi. (40) (41) All those are gone and Kimimaro has (42) returned (43) to (44) in Kirigakure (45) as a new Genin (46). (47) The (48) story begins (49) here.




56 errors? Even a 11 year old kid (me) can beat you. Still, welcome to the site and learn the methods of RPing here!

It seems this boy was a liar as well. There is no Kimimaro on that site, nor is there the people he said their were. I think he was trying to get ahead, and make us think he was amazing. Good thing, he isn't.

Come on guys, leave the poor boy alone.

We are trying to attract new members, not scare them away *looks at hage* xD

Welcome to the site Kimimaro! I am sure you will have a great time here, and your RP skills will improve as well, making you an even more formidible fighter...

he said he was death skeletal, and there was none
and the was no kimimaro