Summoning: Komodo Dragon (Approved by Washi)

Name: Komodo

Nickname: N/A

Gender: Male

Species: Komodo Dragon

Rank: C

Looks:



Personality: Komodo is, to put it frankly, a loyal robot. He accepts whatever order Kazuto gives without questions, trusting him completely. He is Kazuto first friend, the first person that Kazuto ever trusted. He doesn't mind killing people, nor does he mind deceiving others (except Kazuto). In short, he is the perfect match for Kazuto, having a personality almost identical to his master's. Komodo looks forward to fighting, but he doesn't just charge in blindly. He will ifrst wiat ofr Kazuto's orders; if he has none, he will fight in his own way, ruthlessly and with mercy.

Age: 16 (Human Years)

History: One day, after a long walk, Kazuto had come home to find his mother and father discussing something. He paid no attention to them, but made his way to his room. As he passed his parents, his father gave in to whatever his mother had been saying. Telling Kazuto to take a seat, he went to his lcoset where he kept his souveniors from his ninaj career. Opening the closet, Kazuto's father took out a scroll and placed it on the table in front of Kazuto. He explained to him that it was a summoning contract, for summoning Komodo dragons. Kazuto took the scroll and thanked his father. His father explained to him what he had to do to sign the pact with the dragons, and told him how to summon one once he had done so. A little while later, Kazuto took the scroll and signed his name in it with his blood, and the followed his father's instructions for summoning the Komodo dragons. The first Komodo dragon Kazuto summoned was Komodo.

Jutsu:

Name: Kawarami no Jutsu - Substitution Technique
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarami no Jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Tongue Whip
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Komodo can extend his tongue two times his body lenght. The tongue can be used to whip people as well as bind them.

Name: Poisoned Bite
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Once he is within range of the target, Komodo will sink his teeth into the target's flesh, injecting the poison in his mouth into the target's bloodstream. The poison will aim for the target's nervous system. 2 posts after the bite, the target's speed and reflexes will be reduced to half as their co-ordination is ruined.

Name: Scale Armor
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Komodo's scales are hard and strong enough to protect him against kunai and shuriken, as well as normal blade attacks (this does not apply to blades enhanced with Fuuton chakra). He is also resistant to Taijutsu attacks of C-Rank and below. The armor does not, however, protect him from Ninjutsu attacks.

Done.

https://ultimateshinobi.rpg-board.net/jutsu-applications-f5/summoning-template-please-use-t147.htm

I'm guessing this summon is C-ranked, as you're a genin, so put in the rank for it.

C ranked summons are only allowed 2 C-ranked jutsu and 2 D or E ranked jutsu (thus a total of 4 jutsu).

Edited.

All of it is alright, although I want a second mod/admin's opinion on the poison bite jutsu before I approve. I know that real Komodo Dragon's are poisonous, just thinking that the poison is a bit too effective for a C-ranked jutsu.

.:Bump:.

Quote :

Name: Poisoned Bite
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Once he is within range of the target, Komodo will sink his teeth into the target's flesh, injecting the poison in his mouth into the target's bloodstream. The poison will aim for the target's nervous system. In the first post after the bite, the target's speed and reflexes will be reduced to half as their co-ordination is ruined. In the second post, the target's limb will start to go numb, and at the end of the second post, the target's limbs will be completely paralysed. At the end of the third post, the target's brain activity will decrease, and they will then fall unconscious.

Hmm...I agree with Washi this technique is quite powerful for a C-ranked technique. I suggest as it is only C-rank to get rid of the stages of the poison, perhaps only have stage one.
(Btw Komodo Dragons don't have a poisonious bite it is a special bacteria ^^)

Ok, only reflexes and co-ordination is attacked. That fine?

And I always thought the bacteria in their mouth had a poisonous effect in the body.

Komodo dragons actually are poisonous as they are part of the hypothetical clade of Toxifera - and in 2009, researchers found venom glands. Although poison is a bad term for it, they are venomous and all venoms are safe when ingested but not all poisons are. They are of course, more famous for the septic pathogens that live in their mouth.

Anyhow, all this is pretty much irrevelant, what matters is the balancing.

I believe that it should two posts for the effects to occur. Venom or bacteria will not affect somebody in such a short timeframe, and two posts can represent a very short amount of time anyway.

So edit it to 2 posts and I'll approve.

Edited.

[Approved]