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Nøctis Sand Genin
| Subject: Albel Noctis (awaiting approval) Sat Nov 21, 2009 5:24 pm | |
| General InformationName: Albel Noctis Nickname/Alias: Age: 14 Gender: Male Looks: Albel has a wild look to him, his hair is naturally wild on his head and the color is greyish. He eyes are dark yellow, they changed to dark red when he has been upset or about to do battle (has no special reason just a birth defect). He wears a long black leather coat with short sleeves, and on the back of the coat he has his own symbol he made for himself. His pants are black and his shoes match as well. He has black leather gloves which has his personal symbol for himself on it. He is about 5'10 and weighs 125lbs and he extremely well toned for his age with no body fat at all. Personality: Albel isnt much for conversation, he will only speak when he feels the need to say something. When he does speak however he doesnt hesitate to say what he feels let it be harsh or comforting. He doesnt have a attitude problem nor does he have a beef with the world. He was born in a loving family who cared much for his safety. He doesnt butt in anothers business unless he feels the need he must. He is a deep thinker and often would sit for long periods thinking of new tactics or things of that nature. He dislikes bullies and often times will bully the bullies themselves. He likes the calm quiet and will often find more happy for him to be alone then with a huge group of people. His only friend he will let accompany him is his comrade , Repede, his dog. He enjoys reading as well mostly about histrorical figures of the past. He likes to see what all they accomplished and learn from the mistakes of their downfall. Though his eyes, which have a heartless and cold look about them, often are serious he is always eager to here stories about others. He is kind and respectful and good friend to those who meet him. His main goal at this point in his life to make his family and clan proud, with this thought in mind he never wavers from any challenge. Clan InformationClan Name: Noctis Kekkei Genkai: The Requiem has a random affect of what it changes on the user, it could be anything from his to his skin to his or not physically shown at all. Therefore by looking at the user it is hard to tell if he has the KKG or just a birth defect. The Requiem gives the user the ability to use his chakra to manipulate himself and whats around him. By doing so By being in tuned with his/her chakra the user is able to move at superhuman speeds or move things that have been imbued with his chakra. This this KKG is not born in every member of the Noctis clan. Only a select members are born with this KKG because of that when one is born the clan takes special care of the few born with it. The KKG is passive meaning it cannot be turn on or off it always remains active. The requiem does not give any other special boost to the wielder only his ability to control his chakra on a unparalleled level. Special Qualities: -Speed increase only be activated E-D Rank ( Academy-Genin) - 10% faster than normal C-B Rank (Chunin-Jounin) - 20% faster than normal A-S Rank (Special training required) - 30% faster than normal Clan Symbol: Clan History: The Noctis clan is said to be the direct descendants of the of a man named, Regal Noctis, a man claiming to be the God of War himself. Though no proof is giving to this outstanding claim they consider themselves to be above the other clans. It is said that Regal had single handedly brought ruin to the world, wielding his KKG the Requiem. Their history says after the Regal passed on the Noctis clan secluded themselves from the world and said to have died out with its previous leader. The clan, now hidden from the world, decided to hide away from the world for fear that if discovered they would be killed. Some felt differently however, others felt that they dishonor their leader if they run away. The clan fell into discord and disbanded. While others still fearing discovery went into hiding , the others decided to reside in the Sunagakure. From there the Noctis clan thrived and become one of the top clan giving birth to many prestigious ninja. After several generations of the clan passed the newer generations knows little of its past, most having now adopted the customs of the village. Being one of the newest clans in Suna the Noctis clan have strive to prove themselves one of the best. By doing so they have not only supplied the village with security, proclaiming themselves as village officers of the law, but also breeding strong ninja all giving a good reputation to their clan. Rank Information:Rank: Genin Village: Sunagakure Skill InformationSkill Specialty: Main: Ninjutsu Sub: Kenjutsu Elemental Affinity:Main: Fire Sub:Special Characteristics: -He has chakra control that rivals that of a jounin ( due to the affects of his KKG) -He has a immunity to pain though he may be cut or blasted he does not feel pain from it ( a birth defect which though allows him to fight freely he is also at a terrible risk because he sometimes doesnt know how grave his injuries are. unless the injury is extreme being a severed arm or genjutsu) Items/Weapons:Name: Hungry Flow Appearance: Rank: C Special Abilities: Due to its abliity to take in chakra it cannot be broken so long as chakra exist in this weapon. Origin: This sword once belonged to the father of Albel and was given to him by his father upon his graduation from the academy. The blade is imbued with chakra from the user to prevent it from breaking, so long as the users has complete control of his own chakra. Jutsus: - Spoiler:
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Name: Genjutsu Kai Rank: E-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Clan Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Requiem Jump Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: After concentrating his chakra to his feet Albel is able to move at blinding speed (as if he is teleporting) to any position that is within the range of 30ft . During this time he cannot swing his blade nor weave hand signs until he has made a complete stop. Though it can be used in battle this is mostly used to for travel. (in battle it can only be used 4 times, once every other post. also the spot where albel wishes to move must be visible to his eyes)
B Rank -3 Times per battle (can be done once every other post) A Rank -5 Times per battle (can be done once every other post) S Rank -7 Times per battle (can be done twice every other post)
Name: Requiem Dance Rank: C Type: Kenjutsu Element: N/A Description: Albel, wielding is sword Hungry Flow, performs a series of slash to all opponents in range. The range is about 5ft in which any within are caught in a maelstrom of slashs. Once in it is not impossible to get out unless you are alone or you dont have a jutsu that helps with such a ordeal. The attacks tend to aim for spots where Albel can disable the opponent. After this flurry it leaves Albel tired and he cannot perform any jutsu for the next post. (once skill reaches A rank no rest is required).
[Fire Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Endan - Fireball Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.
Kenjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Backstep Cutter Rank: D Type: Kenjutsu Elelment: None Description: Albel awaits for his enemy to attack head on then he evades backward whiel delivering a swift slash from his blade. Depending on how fast the opponent is charging the damage can be moderate to fatal.
Name: Persistent Threat Rank: D Type:Kenjutsu Element: N/A Description: Albel takes a knee seeming fatigued then delivers a swift upward slash that cuts the middle of the enemy (not strong enough to cut the enemy into complete half)
Name: Quick Draw Rank: D Type: Kenjutsu Element: N/A Description: Albel pulls out his sword and lowers his stance, then he unsheaths his sword while slashing in a semi circle like swing all in from of him. This is mostly be used as a counter tactic. Background Information - Spoiler:
Birth - Genin Albel Noctis was born in Sunagakure to a loving mother and doting father. They thought the world of their one and only son, for they weer told that his mother would be unable to give birth to a child. And yet here he was a miracle child. His mother named him Albel after her father who had passed on many years before Albel's birth. His mother and father, Aezra and Grey, had wanted their son to grow up a happy boy , but as years passed they saw he had potential. Since his birth he showed signs, being born with his eyes open as if he wanted to scan his surroundings being wary of those around him. At age 11 his prowess only increased until his father thought it best if his son went to Ninja Academy. He had only spent a year in academy before he was able to graduate, on that day his father gave him a pet dog, named Repede. The dog itself was a dark blue and white color and kept a bone in its mouth as if it was a pipe. Albel was happy with his gift though he didnt show it. Upon his return home he was greeted by his clan and family it seems the clan had heard about his accolade, though everyone was shocked and happy Albel wasnt affected at all. He didnt mind his rank or his standing, he cared little for such things. He only wanted to make his parents proud of him and from the looks of it he had done so. He celebrated with his family a bit longer until he tired of all the fuss over him and went outside. The moon was full and the gentle breeze from the wind comforted him. He sat down and noticed his pet coming from behind him. He rubbed the dogs head and gave a half smile "Well, Repede, we have a entire world in front of us, what say we see whats out there". The dog growled with approval and sat down. This would be the first day of the rest of his life , he thought to himself. Genin Test It had been 3 years since he had become a genin, time and time again Albel challenged himself with missions, giving himself personal goals to accomplish so that he would always have to work harder. With his companion , Repede, beside him they successfully completed every mission given to him whether it big or small. Albel jumped at every chance he could have to leave the village just to see the outside world and all its wonders. More than once his curiosity cost him nearly his life and the eye of his faithful friend they never back down. He had just returned from a mission when was approached by a member from his clan. "Albel you have to coem with me quick." he stated. "What is wrong"? he asked. "NO time to explain just hurry"/ he said as he rushed off with Albel behind him. He arrived at a open field and stopped. "Where are you taking me" he demanded. The boy snickered and vanished in a puff of smoke. Repede growled as his fur on his neck stood up. He had been fooled and from the looks of it, it was by a intruder. Out of the smoke stepped a man about 6 ft tall and well built he had a Rain headband on. "Do you have proper regulation to be here"he asked. He felt dumb it was obvious he didnt but he was dumbfounded to think a enemy would target him of all people. "I know who you are or rather who you belong to" the ninja said. Albel had no idea what this guy was talking about but he couldnt let him get away. Unfortunately though he was nearly out of chakra after comming from his last mission, and Repede wouldnt be much help either due to his slight injury he suffered earlier. This wasnt looking good he couldnt call for help this ninja would kill him before he got a peep out. He had to play this smart. "What do you mean you know who I belong to" he asked still trying to think of a plan. The ninja smiled "You are a relic of the Noctis clan the so called descendants of the Sage of Six Paths" he said. Albel was clueless to this he had know i dea who the clan descended from and really didnt care , but he had to play this out just right. "How did you know" he said astonished. The ninja pulled out a kunai " It wont matter soon I will kill you and send a message to that entire clan of your". Albel had no idea how his death woul dbe a message , but he had no intention on dying here. Albel and Repede glanced at one another they had been in a similar situation before and Repede lost his eye from it. Albel gave a slight nod and Repede growled they knew what the consequence would be, if this didnt work and it wont be just another eye. The ninja charge at Albel, his killing intent thick in his eyes. Predictable, Albel thought this guy wasnt to smart charging head first. He waited until the ninja's got closer and let Repede jump at the mans arm. Repede sunk his teeth into the mans flesh and yanked as if to pull it off. The ninja trying to get Repede off him took his eyes off Albel, a fatal mistake. Albel gripped his sword and swung it right at the ninjas neck. He felt the sword cut through flesh then in a instant nothing. The ninja had vanished in a cloud of smoke, Repede seemed to be confused as well as he looked around. "Pass" a voiced said behind him. Albel turned to see his father and a Proctor. "Excuse me," Albel said still wondering what the hell is going on. "You were being tested son, though a bit reckless, but you did well" his father said. Albel was still in disbelief, he had just got home from a mission and he had to go through this. "So all that was fake", he asked. His father nodded and grinned. "Great what a complete and utter waste of my time. I thank you father now if you excuse me" he was about to walk off when the proctor stopped him. "Albel Noctis, i have graded your performance and i must say you did well for a genin. You used your wits to carefully prepare for a attack and counter it."he said. "Your point sir", Albel asked. The proctor wrote something on a sheet of paper as he spoke obviously not affected by Albel's disrespectful tone "You did well I will report this to the to the Kazekage you have been approved and allowed to retain your rank". Albel didnt care much but he did see this as a chance for more mission that would let him travel further away from village. The proctor told him his appointment would be tomorrow and he should take the time to rest. Albel graciously accepted and headed him with Repede at his side, his father had left with the proctor. This day was a full one indeed, he would be happy to get some much needed rest. RP Sample:- Spoiler:
The wind is blowing and the rain is falling harder than usually,but none of it matters to Gau finally his search over. The man before him was not like any he has faced,but he must have his answers he had to know why. The man in front of him gave a crooked smile and shrugged his shoulders." You sure have gotten big son, the last time i saw you all you did was cry." Gau face flushed red "This isnt a joke Gaullo why did you leave me behind why did you leave your only son alone" he yelled. The father laughed loudly making Gau even more angry "I left because I didnt want you i assumed you weer that smart to figure that out" Gau gripped his blade tightly and bite his lip. "See look your about to cry already" the father laughed. This was to much for him to bear he thought this man would be more compassionate but he cares nothing for him. Gau raised his blade,"Then we have nothing more to say father, you are a missing-nin and i will turn you in" He said staring at Gaullo. "And if i resist" Gaullo said jerking his brow. Gau charged in using one hand to weave hand signs "He can most likely counter all my jutsu so i must brings this to a taijutsu fight" he thought. Gaullo did a hand sign of his own and several dark javelins. the javelins flew at Gau with tremendous speed he dodge server but 1 hit its mark. As the Javelin struck him he sent out a giant dark vortex , with him close behind it. Gaullo covered his face and took the hit. Gau grinned and followed up with a swing from his blade at Gaullo neck. Gaullo eyes widened as he fell slowly to the ground. "Its finally over" gau thought. Sudden he felt a sharp pain in his head he closes his eyes and then opened to find himself on the ground. "Wha...Whats goin on" he said as he tried to move his arms. He father stood at the same spot. "And here i thought you were smart and then you jumped head first into my genjutsu" Gaullo said. Gaullo walked over to Gau and stood over him" i could kill you now but wheer is the fun in that" he laughed. Gau anger boiled inside of him his father was right i should have known better it was all to easy. "Not impressed at all your as weak as the day i left you" he said walking off. Gau tried to stand but the genjutsu had him paralyzed. After Gaullo was completely gone from sight did the genjutsu wear off. Gau sat up and closed his eyes."This tells me one thing I need to get stronger much stronger" he said as he got up and limped away.
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| | | Nøctis Sand Genin
| Subject: Re: Albel Noctis (awaiting approval) Wed Nov 25, 2009 10:54 am | |
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| | | Todd Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Albel Noctis (awaiting approval) Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:21 pm | |
| Firstly have you been given permission for chuunin rank from adam? Currently only suna genin is open. - Please state a description of your clan. The word "Requiem" does not mean anything and doesn't give us the slightest indication of what your KKG ability actually is? A decent and detailed description is need please. - Quote :
- The Noctis clan is said to be the direct descendants of the Sage of the Six Paths. Though no proof is giving to this outstanding claim they consider themselves to be above the other clans. Their history says after the Sage of the Six Paths passed on the Noctis clan secluded themselves from the world and said to have died out with its previous leader.
Sage of the Six Paths is a no no. Please remove that from your history as they do not 'officially' exist on this site. I suggest making a substitute for that. | |
| | | Nøctis Sand Genin
| Subject: Re: Albel Noctis (awaiting approval) Wed Nov 25, 2009 8:13 pm | |
| -everything fixed- whats next? | |
| | | Fαταl Aττrαcτioη ♥ Leaf Genin
| Subject: Re: Albel Noctis (awaiting approval) Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:22 pm | |
| - I believe a bit of your grammar was messed up a bit when you were retyping your clan, so if you would, please fix that, so that I may understand everything clearly.
- Increase the rank of your weapon to C rank, since you have claimed it is imbued with chakra to prevent it from breaking.
- Regarding your clan technique, 'Requiem Jump', I suggest that you either add more defects, or decrease the amount of times it can be used.
- I'm also not so sure about how much speed effects a rank of a technique on this site, but I'm going to ask that because your 'Quick Draw' technique is so fast that the opponent won't be able to see that sword being drawn, that you increase the rank to C. | |
| | | Nøctis Sand Genin
| Subject: Re: Albel Noctis (awaiting approval) Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:35 am | |
| i am not sure what you meant by my grammer i think my clan history reads quite clear maybe your not reading correctly ^^. also i have decreased the number of times i can use requiem jump. thought i think because i have to wait every other post to use it again and also that i cant make any attack while doing makes it fairly crippled enough. sooo yea.... -everything has been adjusted- | |
| | | Todd Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Albel Noctis (awaiting approval) Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:07 am | |
| - Quote :
- -He is able to weave hand signs with 1 hand.
This is something that a genin is not capable of please remove. - Quote :
- -He has a immunity to pain though he may be cut or blasted he does not feel pain from it.
Why is this possible, you do not have a medical background plus your KKG does not give you any ability in this area?? - And no where is your history or personality do it indicate or express that Albel is a genius with a large IQ, this is something that is hard to describe and if i am going to allow it on the app it will have to be better explained. Is he a smart strategist? jutsu expert? book-smart? good with building/hands? there are many types and you will have to limit it down. | |
| | | Nøctis Sand Genin
| Subject: Re: Albel Noctis (awaiting approval) Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:32 am | |
| got rid or the genius bit and the 1 hand weave . also i explained his immunity to pain if that doesnt fly then i will drop that too. but its not un heard of for a genin to weave hand signs with 1 hand if he was trained to do so, therefore i dont completely agree with that statemet concerning it -edited- | |
| | | Todd Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Albel Noctis (awaiting approval) Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:48 am | |
| - Well i don't see many genin with the ability to cast one handed signs, it is usually something classed for many chuunin, jounin +.
- And note that your immunity to pain is cut basic cuts and bruises not all pain. If you were hit by a large higher ranked tech you would feel the pain so please class it with rank. Also you are not immune to genjutsu based pain (please make a note of that ^^) | |
| | | Nøctis Sand Genin
| Subject: Re: Albel Noctis (awaiting approval) Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:52 am | |
| well my character isnt a normal genin as his history states i didnt think me weaving hand signs with a single hand wouldnt be to outrages and also the pain thing is a curse not a plus i wanted to give him a vulnerability that will try to make him stay on his toes. and yes only physical injuries is what he is immune to not genjutsu. but fair enough if ur idea will get me approved i will go for that -edited- i worded it better | |
| | | Todd Leaf ANBU
| Subject: Re: Albel Noctis (awaiting approval) Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:58 am | |
| Lol well trust me even if you history states it you wont be getting single hand seals from me as i dont think you deserve it via skill level, and especially at genin levelled character.
Being immune to pain as a vulnerablilty? lmao...I can think of better vulnerabilities than that, but it is fine just as long as it is regulated to just minor injuries.
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