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PostSubject: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptySun Nov 29, 2009 6:53 am

Basic Character Information:

Name: Sayuri Ito
-Nickname: Sayuri The Tenken (Heaven's Blade Sayuri)
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Clan: Ito

Looks:

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Sayuri is slightly smaller than the average woman her age. She is 5'2 and only weighs 95 pounds. She has blonde hair that is arranged in a spikey pony tail that is held back by a red-orange, circular fan. This fan resembles a sun. Her bright blond hair has a part on the left corner of her forehead, and she allows her hair to sweep over her face covering portions of it at times. Her eye lashes are thick and sweep to the side, complimenting her light grey eyes that give off a feeling that she is looking directly into your soul when looking directly in your eyes. Her cheekbones are located high on her face, and her lips are full, and a beautiful pink color. These features often give off the appearance that she is a model, and noone believes that she is a ninja or a killer. She also wears small diamond earrings in her ears that were given to her by her fiance. These are almost unnoticable unless you are looking for them, or the light hits them and makes them sparkle in the sunlight.

Sayuri's upper body is clothed in a white vest with no sleeves. It is tight on her body. Why she wears this when she is already teased enough about having a flat chest? noone knows. This vest is white with black trim, and curves at the bottom on both sides. This vest ends mid hip to allow the rest of her clothes to continue. Under the white vest, she wears an orange top with only one sleeve. The sleeve is over her right arm. Down the lateral portion of the sleeve are grey markings. These markings represent her status as the inheritant of the Heaven's Blade title in her family. On her other arm, her shoulder is visible, but mid bicep a sleeve is pulled over her right arm to offer full mobility, but some protection.

On her waistline, Sayuri has cerimonial crosses of the heaven's blade, connecting a long orange cloth that attaches in the back under another red-orange fan like the one in her hair. On each of these cloths is the Heaven's Blade symbol again, matching the one on her right arm. Underneath these crosses, Sayuri wears a black, braded leather belt that also holds her sheath. The last thing on her waist is a long, orange and white checkered scarf that wraps around her waist and ends with a long extention in the back. It often trails behind her as she moves. Sayuri wears baggy black pants with orange trim underneath. These pants have a circular opening on each side, revealing her hip and the strap that holds all her stuff together. To top it all off, she has thick, white sandles to pad her feet from anything on the ground.

On the right side of her leg, Sayuri has a tattooed summoning circle that is used to summon with just a small amount of blood, depending on her will it can be used to summon her summons, or it can summon her sword to her side at any time. On the back of her right hand, there is another tattooed symbol that allows Sayuri to summon shuriken and kunai quickly and throw them almost instantly.

Personality:

Sayuri is a typically strict person. She is a stickler to the rules and wont accept anyone that doesnt follow them to the letter. People often find her grumpy and aggitated, but that is just how she acts. She is alert all the time and prepared for anything. When people break the rules she gets mildly angry and typically gives them a little dicipline. She doesnt truely hurt them, but she hits them hard enough that they get the point. Some skulls are thicker than others and require a slightly harder hit than most. When she is training her genin and protecting the village, she is confident in her abilities and that shows in her walk, in how she speeds and everything she does. People often find this the most attractive time for Sayuri because it is the only time she truely shows her confidence. She is very protective of the village, and when it is in danger, she often gets very worried and trys to fight and protect it harder than her body can take.

When she is with friends, she smiles and has fun. She is a tomboy and likes to play jokes with the guys and punch and hit with the rest of them. At parties she drinks and parties like any other person. She has a really insecure feeling for her chest however. When people call her flat chested or small in that area, her face turns a bright red and she gets play angry. She knows these are jokes, but it still hurts her feelings. When this is done however, she goes into her punishment mode again, hitting them hard enough to hurt, but do no real damage other than leave a lump or bruise. She smiles and continues with parties or whatever else she is doing, but under that smile is the hint of fakeness in her playful face.

Underneath her smiles and happy face lies Sayuri's depression. She wasnt always depressed. Once those smiles and party faces were all genuine. She was dating the head of the Ito clan and they were arranged to get married. He died before they had the chance, and the sadness entered Sayuri's life. When she is alone she often lets herself cry and try to purge herself of these rotten feelings, and under every other expression that she wears is a hint of what has happened to her. She will more than likely never be completely happy again, but she will try to continue her left from when it was shattered by death.

The village became too much for her when they revealed they were the ones that had her fiance killed and Sayuri left the village in shame. She hated to swear alligance to a criminal organization because of her original ideal to follow the rules directly, but the emotional pain they caused her forced her to join akatsuki and do criminal deeds for them. Once her vendetta has been fufilled she believes that she will be able to leave them forever and settle on her own somwhere to live the rest of her life peacefully.


Basic Clan Information:

Clan Name: Tetsumi Clan

Kekkei Genkai:

Paper Manipulation:

Member's of the Tetsumi Clan have the inate ability to completely manipulate paper. Paper manipulation, the ability to manipulate paper at will to control, move, shape, form, and harden. The ability to manipulate paper is very straight forward as it allows those to shape paper with great detail, harden and forming it to great shapes and control in large scale. This requires no handseals with a member of the clan being able to freely manipulate paper with a flick of the hand or even without any movement at all. Though this ability does take the complete concentration of the user and the more advanced the member becomes in controlling the paper, the more effortless this task becomes. While basic member's of the Tetsumi Clan use the paper to harden it into simple paper shuriken, or kunai, advanced users can fold the paper into weapons or animals that fight at their will. The clan's complete domination over the material paper means that they can demand the manipulation of any paper whether be explosive tags, scroll's or any other paper based substance, which makes this clan's ability very versatile and unique.

Advanced Heritage :

Members of this clan gain a great deal of knowledge in the arts of weaponary and sealing due to the clan's status within Konoha. The Konoha Weapon's Shop has been owned by the Tetsumi Clan for decades and with this comes the great knowledge of all weapons and traps. Clan members are trained in the arts of weaponary, traps and fuuinjutsu sealing when they are young in conjunction with their paper manipulation to form many deadly combinations. Most shinobi of this clan have mainly the same fighting style which is a collaboration of paper manipulation with weapons, traps and sealing. Also, due to the clan's ability to completely manipulate paper many clan members that wish to follow this field become very talented with chakra and have advanced chakra control, because of the sheer difficulty of their abilities. This makes performing other techniques based around chakra a breeze as their level of control is so precise and accurate.

Clan Symbol:

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Clan History:

The Tetsumi Clan is one which has had a long lasting heritage within Konoha. They are highly respected by all other clan's and the village as a whole being considered one of the noble Konohagakure clan's in line with the Hyuuga, Yamanaka, Akimichi and Nara. There status and standing within the village is high and the members of the clan carry with them a very high reputation. Shinobi from this clan are highly sort after and it is one of the main contributions that the Tetsumi Clan gives to the village. Tetsumi shinobi are renowned for being very skilled ninja as the clan itself holds a very successful training programme instide fo it's walls. The youth are trained by the clan elders and leader and taught how to manipulate paper and learn the advanced knowledge that is passed down within the clan.

The clan itself has owned and operated the Konohagakure Weapon Shop for decades and was in the past the "mail-men" for Konoha organising and interpreting all and any message that would come into and go from Konoha. The clan is a small one not on the grand scale of clan's such as the Uchiha or Hyuuga in Konoha but each and every member is valued for their ninja-prowless. Originally, the Tetsumi Clan could have been regarded as a couple of large families, but over the decades they have slowly increased in size and are becoming a major player in the Konoha clans and community.

Because they have had a large standing in the Konohan community for so long they have become very included into the community and have a great friendship with nearly all of the citizen's and clan's around Konoha, as they have to buy their weapons from somewhere. They are dedicated into making Konoha the best it can be and their loyalty to the village is second to none. Just like the Yamanaka Flower Shop, the Tetsumi Weapons Shop is one of the main buildings and long lasting facilities in town and with this it grants them not just a high social standing but a high political one in Konoha as well. The Tetsumi Clan leader is on the Konohagakure Village Council and works in conjunction with the Hokage himself.


Rank Information:

Rank: Akatsuki
Village: Konohagakure


Skill Information:

Skill Specialty: Kenjutsu/Fuuinjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Raiton
Special Characteristics:

Sayuri's Minds Eye: Being a very well trained sensory ninja, Sayuri has almost a sixth sense about chakra. She can sense chakra from very long distances( about 1 mile ), and from those distances she can tell how many people there are and even what species they are. She can even sense how powerful ninja are by their chakra. She can sense subtle changes in the direction of chakra flow and predict movement slightly. This sixth sense also has connections with her sense of smell. "Good" smelling/feeling chakra Sayuri will be attracted to, while some people have "bad" chakra that repels her from that person.

Exceptional Speed and Flexibility: Sayuri, being a swordswoman, has taken her body to the max physical condition to practice her art. Her fighting style does not rely on strength and power, so her focus was completely on speed and flexibility. She is great at curving her body at perfect angles to dodge attacks and give her the exact position to deliver a deadly attack. Her speed is far beyond what would be expected at her rank. She can move her arms and legs at intense speeds that would require most other ninja to use shunshin to keep up. [Note that this is not as fast as Shunshin. About half of shunshin speed]


[Explained how this occured in history]
Chakra Control: Sayuri was trained by a Seven swordsman of the mist and by a heaven's blade of the Ito clan. The Swordsman of the Mist was a ninja with exceptional charka control. He taught her almost everything he knew, allowing her to inherit his style of fighting to add in with her own personal style. She can control her chakra almost as well as a medical ninja, but was never trained in the medical arts, making her use the least amount of chakra possible for each jutsu she uses. [Explained more by the Quick Draw Style]

Styles:

[Permission from Jace to use]

Name: Quick Draw • Douten Hayai
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: S
Element: None.
Description: Quick Draw style is one created and utilized by the Mist Swordsmen; Shuhei Toukai. In retrospect, Quick Draw is a mere advanced form of the Body Flicker Technique but broken down to a style, made up of a series of moves. This style can only occur when the user has complete control of their chakra. Only those with expert chakra control may hope to even try this. By moving a great majority of ones chakra to their arm (either let or right) and compressing it to just the points of the arms, one is able to move said limb with blinding speed. In the long run, this style is a breakdown of the body flicker. Each movement is extremely quick. When using this technique, one draws their blade, strikes and either continues to strike or sheath their weapon. Constant concentration and control of chakra is required for this style. Shuhei is only capable of using this few times during battle. Quite like Body Flicker. Using this style in a manner of repetition not only causes extreme fatigue but requires a amount of time for rest. Once the style is used, the ability of speed can be used for three posts, although after these posts one post is required for rest. During this time, speed and agility is weakened and shortened.

[Personal Style]

Name:Hiten Mitsurugi Ryuu • Flying Heaven's Honorable Sword Flow
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: S
Element: N/A
Description:Hiten Mitsurugi is also known as "the ultrasonic sword skill". This technique requires very skilled chakra control in the feet and legs giving the user exceptional speed. This rate of chakra is kept up at all times during the battle and can be draining on the user if the battle persists too long. This style also teaches the swordwielder to read the emotions of the opponent, giving them a much higher chance to be able to block, dodge, or counter many attacks made by opponents. People without emotions will have an advantage over people that do against this style. This style of swordfighting is meant to use speed and power to quickly overcome an opponent before they can react using its Shinsoku or "God-like speed".


Weapons:

Name: Garandou Doukasayou - Void Assimilation
Appearance:
[In the character appearance]

Garandou Doukasayou is a katana like any other in appearance. It has a long, slender blade that is edged on one side and flat on the other. Its guard is part of the handle and it sticks out, resembling two red hooks. The handle itself is red and has an intricate pattern carved into it. This sword is engraved with the Ito clan signature symbol, showing that it is one of the weapons passed down through that family. The sword also radiates a light red aura that can be seen if one is looking directly at the blade. Finally, on the handle there is a small sealing circle carved into it.

Rank: S
Special Abilities:

Garandou Doukasayou has two main abilities. The first ability is possibly the more powerful of the two. Every time the blade of Garandou Doukasayou comes within 1 foot of any of the opponent's body, it absorbs 2% of their entire chakra supply. This effect is activated by the wielders chakra flow in the body. They must will it to happen. However, when this effect is activated, Everyone but the wielder of the blade that is within range is affected the same way, friend and foe.

The second ability of this sword is strictly for defense. It is able to project the chakra of the wielder in a circle around the blade and also in a solid form, allowing it to form a protective shield able to take explosive force of 5 explosive tags, or 2 B ranked jutsu. This ability is less powerful than the first, but it helps in its own ways.

The last helpful ability of this sword was not part of its creation. Once it was given to Sayuri she inscribed the seal into the hilt of the sword. This seal allows Sayuri to touch the seal and activate it. Once activated the seal allows Sayuri to do a D or lower ranked jutsu without any hand seals. This ability cannot be used more than 5 times per topic.
Origin:

This sword was created as a practice weapon for the far more powerful sword of the Ito clan. It does not have the same abilities, but it was formed of the same compunds of elements, giving it the same feel of useing the clan's greatest weapon. When being created, the forger of the Ito clan took a special chakra absorbant Steel alloy and added a few trace metals for strength and flexibility so the sword would not break easily. When they finished making the metals, they formed a dye that shaped the sword in a katana-like fashion, but also gave it the perfect angles to form the circle that forms the shield. The metal was poured and hardened. Once the sword was created it was used by the successor to the Ito clan for years before becomming the head of the Ito clan and taking their true sword.

After generations, the sword was given to Sayuri by her fiance, the successor to the Ito clan before they were massacred by an organization of missing ninja who wanted supplies. She now uses this sword and keeps the more powerful sword at her home in hiding. She has not used the more powerful sword because she is scared of its power. Perhaps when she masters the art of the sword fully, she will take up the Ito Clan's true legacy.

[She possesses this sword but cannot use it]

Name: Kagami Senkou - Mirror Flash
Appearance:

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Izumi is holding this katana in her hands. It is a long black katana. Its guard is black with gold trim, and the handle is black with gold diamonds down the side of it. The blade is long and thin, shining when exposed to light. Its a very beautifully made katana. The sheath is blade with multiple gold peices on it to hold the cloth that holds it to Izumi's body. It has gold trim down the sheath and on the tip. The sheath also has greyish gold markings completely down both sides.

Rank: S
Special Abilities: Kagami Senkou is a very powerful blade created by only the most skilled of blacksmiths. First and foremost, Kagami Senkou is a chakra sensitive blade. The chakra nature of the user can be channeled through the blade, or normal chakra can be channeled through it to increase its striking range. This makes the blade able to use elemental jutsu and elemental styles. Second, Kagami Senkou's sheath was created from the wood of a special tree. Like the chakra trees that make the paper used to find out the nature of ninja, this tree was fed chakra from an early age. It has gained the ability to channel chakra through it in a chainsaw like motion outward from the bottom of the sheath. This motion can be so fast that it doubles or triples the quickness of a sword draw, making it much faster than the eye can see. The final power of Kagami Senkou is, when chakra is run through the blade, reguardless of the amount, it creates mirror images of its blade. Meaning, as the blade moves through the air, while in Izumi's hand, mulitiple apparitions of the blade form where it was and is going. This makes the angle of attack very hard to locate. Even the fabled sharingan eye fails to be able to predict the movements of this sword because of the random chakra flow in all directions.Even the greatest of ninja and swordsmen can be fooled by Kagami Senkou.

Origin: For 200 years there has been a family hidden in the wilderness near the star village. Their family origin has been shrouded in bloody conflict and mystery. The family said to be the makers of the most powerful weapons in the known world. Many have hunted far and wide for the elusive family, but very few have succeeded. Within the ones that are sucessful, even fewer are chosen to wield one of their legendary blades.

This master family decided to create a very powerful sword for any swordsman that focused on pure speed and the ability to end the fight in one swing. They the best ore from the mines near where they lived. He forced chakra through the ore day in and day out, forcing it to develop chakra channeling powers. It could focus a jutsu on teh tip of the blade and slice threw entire cliff facings full of rock like butter. He still wasnt done. He wanted this blade to be unbeatable. Just channeling chakra wasnt good enough, he wanted it to fool even the greatest of eyes. He wanted the blade to be absolutely ubeatable. He created a tool forged with his own chakra to polish and sharpen the blade. Through this work with the tool the blade gained an even greater power. The power of Illusion. By running normal chakra through the blade, Illusion images that fool even the fabled sharingan were created. 8 images of the blade and the arm attack at 8 seperate and different angles, making the blade an almost unstoppable killing machine.

To finish his monstrocity, the man needed to create a sheath that could match the power of the blade. He took a tree that had been fed chakra from an early age and carved the sheath. He angled and smoothed the chakra to flow threw the outside of the sheath into the tip, then burst from the mouth tripling the speed of a sword draw. With his work almost completed he gave thought to a name. Only one seemed fitting to the illusions and speed of the sword. Kagami Senkou.


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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptySun Nov 29, 2009 6:55 am

Jutsus:

Clan Jutsu:

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General Jutsu:

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Special Summoning Jutsu:

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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptySun Nov 29, 2009 6:56 am

Kenjutsu:

Basic Kenjutsu:

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Hiten Mitsurugi Ryuu Kenjutsu:

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Douten Hayai Kenjutsu:

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Fuuinjutsu:

Normal Seals:

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Traps:

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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptySun Nov 29, 2009 6:57 am

* Reserved For Learned Jutsu *
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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptySun Nov 29, 2009 6:59 am

RP Sample:

Rp Sample:

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Hitomi stayed in her chair and listened to Cirrus. Her sharingan studied his moves and noticed no lies in his voice. She knew that masters of their own bodies could fool a lie detector such as herself, but most people couldnt and she felt oddly familiar with the man. She decided to give him the chance to explain himself and perhaps join the village. He started his long, inspiring speech by talking about his travels. He traveled far and wide, seeing people in dispare in places that he went. He spoke of Akatsuki and their apprentices. He spoke of other organizations like the one that assassinated the previous hokage. Hitomi was very interested in this specific topic, but she decided to be polite and let him continue with his speaking.

Her patients was rewarded when he hit her with a shocker. He spoke of being an ANBU before the days Hitomi was an ANBU. This revelation sent Hitomi's mind spinning. He knew she was part of the ANBU black ops before she became Hokage. He must have been a higher ranking official to have information of ANBU possibilities. There were no records of this man or why he was leaving. The possibilities gave Hitomi a headache. She felt as though she was missing some important information, but couldnt even begin to grasp what that information was. She gave up on this notion and returned to complete attention.

She listened as he spoke about the other Kages and villages then moved on to speakinf of the village stability. The hatred the enemy felt for our temporary peace was overwhelming. She was still intent on his speech when he spoke of her own Mangekyou Sharingan. Some people had information on Uchiha, but few had the information on the Mangekyou. Even fewer knew about her own Mangekyou. The only explaination that she could come up with for this one was that he had a special ability or sense of his own that allowed him to know somthing about this. Other than interrogating her boyfriend or one of the council members. Finishing his speech, he offered what seemed to be a hand of friendship and help when Konoha needed it most.

Hitomi smiled and started her response in a polite tone. " From your speech, I have gained little insight into your persona, but what I have gotten piques my interest. You have to have been a member of this village from before and a high ranking member at that, but then again, you have no records and I dont remember your face, even with my sharingan. Your knowlege about ANBU is easier explained than your knowlege of my sharingan. Il give you the benefit of thinking you didnt interrogate any of my ninja or do anything sketchy to anyone. Everything you have said interests me in ways i wouldnt have thought could ever have come to my door today. You say you want to rejoin the village, and that may be possible. First you would need to do somthing that proves your allegance to us without a doubt, and take an aptatude test in front of one of my council members. I know this may be a hassle, but for Konoha, it must be done before I can add you to our ranks." Hitomi finished and offered him a chance to air his opinion on ideas of allegance. She wouldnt mind him joining the village, but trusting just anyone that walked through the door would be a foolish mistake.

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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptySun Nov 29, 2009 7:32 am

History:
History:

~ Birth and ~

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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptySun Nov 29, 2009 11:39 am

No elemental jutsu without ninjutsu speciality.

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Name: Trap Seal - Kekkei Genkai Sacrifice
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: S
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu must be formed on a sheet of paper before use.
The paper spits into four and makes their way 100 ft in four directions, making a 100 sq ft box where the jutsu takes effect. This justsu seals the kekkei genkai abilities of everyone in the box ally or enemy and prevents their use. If one of the peices of paper are destroyed then the jutsu is canceled.
And I'm gonna have to flat out deny this, you cannot nullify Kekkei Genkai's.
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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 1:54 am

since when was that a rule? I kept them all below the rank rule >.> i dont see why you couldnt do your elemental jutsu if they are C ranked.

second. Alright, deleted.
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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 2:23 am

W/e i removed the elemental ones.
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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 6:21 am

Lol dont copy and paste the clan put it in the character app format please ^^

Plus you can add the Tetsumi clan justu under your clan jutsu section.

Trap Seal- Walls of Jerico + Trap Seal- Body Swap I think are more both A-ranked than S. Please change.

Also if there was reference to the tetsumi clan in your name it would be better, like Sayuri Tetsumi Ito. But if you are completely against it and want to keep your old name thats fine, its just better for reference to the clan that way with jutsu etc.
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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 7:56 am

For a 22 year old Akatsuki, were gona need a lot more history on her. Add more arcs.
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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptyMon Nov 30, 2009 1:17 pm

I'm gonna be honest, almost everyone of the Trap Fuuinjutsu seals are godmodded and/or overpowered. Some are going to need slight editing.
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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptyTue Dec 01, 2009 3:49 am

@ Todd, sure il do all of that.

@ senkou, >.> lemme write it first. That old one really doesnt even come with this character's clan. Im gonna write a brand new one.

@ Adam, How are they god mod? the person in the topic must post walking into one of my traps. Its not like i can make them walk into them. Though dodgeing some of them without prior knowlege would be metagamming, but if they need editing, please direct me how they need it.
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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptyTue Dec 01, 2009 3:51 am

Fallen, jsut dont put that you are in akatsuki yet, you will become a member via Rp
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PostSubject: Re: Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki]   Sayuri Ito [New Akatsuki] EmptyTue Dec 01, 2009 3:58 am

Yes sir Very Happy
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